考研英语写作 何凯文版

考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表

第二段---解释寓意

第三段---给出评论

第一段：

第一句

1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。

描述图画注意：

第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。

第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。

第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。

模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）

第二句----总结

①The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but

only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial

meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看

穿其肤浅的含义。

②The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to

lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实

目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着

什么。

第二段

第一句----观点的提出

(1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the

重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said ,

is this phenomenon more obvious .

(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social

phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that

有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not

only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has

witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and

opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the

same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的

十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但

同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country

other than china , it has been said m is this problem more

serous . ）

万能观点：

①图画主题的重要性

Nothing can be compared with···

···is not only necessary , but also indispensable ···

···remains to be an integral part in···

②图画主题的有害性

Nothing is more harmful or damaging.

···is not only harmful , but also damaging.

···in large measure detrimental.

第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视）

(1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题 .

(2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题 .

give priority to···优先考虑···

attach attention to···对··注意

emphasize the importance of···强调···的重要性

stress the fundamental role of···强调···的根本作用

第三句---对主题进行展开（3-4句）

By doing so , 十一个角度平行展开···（也可用科学论据法或举例法）

(一)、十一个万能理由（角度）

物质回报：

①主题 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food

but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles.

②The industrious and insightful people will never fail to

profits from (benefit from) doing 主题.

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