热点02 手机-2020中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文

热点02 手机

手机无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：手机。

【预测题目】

（一）

随着社会的发展，人们的生活似乎离不开手机，但是手机占据人们的生活带来一个重要的问题，人与人之间交流少了，亲情、友情应该如何维系？请谈谈你的建议。

要点所示

1. 在现代社会中，手机的发明改变着社会，手机起着重要的作。

2. 手机让人们的联系更加容易，让地球变小了。

3. 但过去人们常常交谈，而现在却是交流少了，玩手机的多了。

4. 有些学生用手机玩游戏，浪费许多时间，严重影响学习。

5. 你的建议。（至少两条）

可用词汇：

手机：cell phone 智能手机：smart phone

要求：

1.词数：80词左右。

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。

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One possible version

With the development of IT information industry ,there has been a.dramatic rise in cell phone,which are now essential to millions of people. But everything has two sides.

On one hand,cell phones contribute a lot to daily life. firstly,cell phones enable people to easily and quickly communicate with one another whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the multifunction of cell phones

that help us survive those boring moments.

On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face skills may decline.

From my perspective, any new invention has its drawbacks,but such negative aspects cannot always diminish its popularity. I strongly suggest that we use cell phones moderately and appropriately to make them more beneficial.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙述清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

（二）

根据下面几点提示，写一篇不少于80字的文章。

1.手机发明于1973年

2.手机用于和别人交流（communicate with sb）

3.青少年们能不能使用手机，

4.使用手机的利与弊

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The mobile phone was invented in 1973. Nowadays more and more people use mobile phones. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. This is the advantage of the phone. On the other hand, the ringing sound affects others, meanwhile it does great harm to our health. So we should use mobile phones in proper way.

But should the middle school students take their mobile phones to school? I think the answer is “no”. Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study. It may make the students being lazy, they may do bad in their study.

【解析】

这篇短文要求我们根据提示写出手机的优势和劣势，还要写出自己的观点关于中学生是不是应该往学校带手机。我们在写作时要注意：1. 注意时态，要用一般现在时。2. 要把提示内容全部写进去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要单一。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求写出了手机的优势和劣势以及作者的观点，观点准确，内容完整。2.本文句式不单一，有it做形式主语的句子：It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. 有定于从句：Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study.