【中考英语突破】最新中考英语作文(书面表达)专题 (6)难忘的经历及感受
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How's it going？
Yours， Li Hua
【审题思路】 1．根据所给提示，可知本文用第一人称。 2．要求写的是自己帮助他人的事情及自己对这件事情的感受。 3．事情是过去发生的，因此以一般过去时为主。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
活动时间、 地点和人物
1．活动时间(last Sunday) 2．活动地点(in the neighborhood of our school) 3．活动参加人员(with my classmates)
2 典例分析
假如你是李华。请给你的加拿大笔友 Eric 写一封 80 词左右的邮件，介
绍你和同班同学的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：
时间
上周日
地点
学校附近的街区
活动内容
上午：打扫街道，帮助老人做家务 下午：给小朋友们讲故事
感受
帮助别人是快乐的
参考词汇：志愿者活动：volunteer work 街区：neighborhood 打扫 街道：clean the street 做家务：do housework 讲故事：tell stories 帮助 他人：help others Dear Eric，
That day，I was busy but very happy.I think helping others can bring
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happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.
Yours，
Li Hua
3 聚焦中考
A(2018·昆明) A small thing 提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经 历过的小事。 要求： 1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
2．I think helping others can bring happiness to others，and it can also bring happiness to ourselves.(用 not only…but also…改写句子)
I think helping others can bring happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.
【优秀范文】 Dear Eric，
How's it going？You want to know what I've done these days.Now let me tell you.
Last Sunday，I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood of our school with my classmates.In the morning，we cleaned the streets.And then we went to the old people's home and helped the old people there do housework.In the afternoon，we told stories to the kids in the children's home.
英语 第三部分 中考题型实战篇
中考题型六 书面表达
1 考情分析
话题(六) 难忘的经历及感受
分析云南近 6 年真题可知，针对“难忘的经历与感受”这一话题，云南 中考具体考査如下：2019 云南省卷“A Weekend to Remember”，2019 昆明 “On my parent's birthday”，2018 昆明“A small thing”；2017 云南省卷“A Special Day”；2017 昆明 A“One day in my childhood”和 2015 昆明“The good old days”。
活动形式 感受
1．上午：打扫街道，帮助老人做家务(cleaned the streets；helped the old people there do housework) 2．下午：给小朋友们讲故事(told stories to the kids) 帮助别人是快乐的(helping others can bring happiness to…)
A Weekend to Remember It was a bright and sunny weekend.I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake.Half an hour passed but we got no fish.I became impatient and wanted to give up. “Just wait patiently，son.Nothing in the world is easy to get，” My father encouraged me. I sat patiently to fish with my father.Finally，I got a beautiful big fish.A sense of success and happiness came to me. I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so important.
分析全国近 3 年中考真题可知，对于此话题通常有以下命题角度： 1．描述自己的亲身经历与感受，如：2019 宁波，2019 青岛、2019 桂 林、2019 重庆 B、2019 咸宁、2018 台州、2018 长沙、2018 荆门、2017 北 京； 2．描述他人的经历以及对自己的影响及感受，如 2019 河南、2017 海 南。
Wei Hua asked me some questions about study.I will bring him my notebooks tomorrow and I am ready to answer his questions at any time.I hope Wei Hua can be better soon.
【标准范文】 Dear Eric，
How's it going？You want to know the things I've done these days.Now let me tell you.
Last Sunday，I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood of our school with my classmates.In the morning，we cleaned the streets.And then we went to the old people's home and helped the old people there do housework.In the afternoon，we told stories to the kids in the children's home.
I like helping others.Helping others makes me happy and helping others is helping myself，too.
B(2019·云南) A Weekend to Remember 提示：请以“A Weekend to Remember”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述 一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟。 要求： 1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
That day，I was busy but very happy.I think helping others can bring happiness to others，and it can also bring happiness to ourselves.
Yours， Li Hua
【句子升格】 1．You want to know the things I've done these days.(用 what 引导的宾 语从句改写句子) You want to know what I've done these days.
A small thing
My classmate Wei Hua had a high fever last week.He had to be in hospital.So I tried my best to help him.
Yesterday was Saturday.My classmates and I went to visit him together.We met at the school gate at 9：00 in the morning.Then we went to the hospital by bus.I thought we should get him some flowers，because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.What's more，
Yours， Li Hua
【审题思路】 1．根据所给提示，可知本文用第一人称。 2．要求写的是自己帮助他人的事情及自己对这件事情的感受。 3．事情是过去发生的，因此以一般过去时为主。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
活动时间、 地点和人物
1．活动时间(last Sunday) 2．活动地点(in the neighborhood of our school) 3．活动参加人员(with my classmates)
2 典例分析
假如你是李华。请给你的加拿大笔友 Eric 写一封 80 词左右的邮件，介
绍你和同班同学的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：
时间
上周日
地点
学校附近的街区
活动内容
上午：打扫街道，帮助老人做家务 下午：给小朋友们讲故事
感受
帮助别人是快乐的
参考词汇：志愿者活动：volunteer work 街区：neighborhood 打扫 街道：clean the street 做家务：do housework 讲故事：tell stories 帮助 他人：help others Dear Eric，
That day，I was busy but very happy.I think helping others can bring
wk.baidu.com
happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.
Yours，
Li Hua
3 聚焦中考
A(2018·昆明) A small thing 提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经 历过的小事。 要求： 1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
2．I think helping others can bring happiness to others，and it can also bring happiness to ourselves.(用 not only…but also…改写句子)
I think helping others can bring happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.
【优秀范文】 Dear Eric，
How's it going？You want to know what I've done these days.Now let me tell you.
Last Sunday，I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood of our school with my classmates.In the morning，we cleaned the streets.And then we went to the old people's home and helped the old people there do housework.In the afternoon，we told stories to the kids in the children's home.
英语 第三部分 中考题型实战篇
中考题型六 书面表达
1 考情分析
话题(六) 难忘的经历及感受
分析云南近 6 年真题可知，针对“难忘的经历与感受”这一话题，云南 中考具体考査如下：2019 云南省卷“A Weekend to Remember”，2019 昆明 “On my parent's birthday”，2018 昆明“A small thing”；2017 云南省卷“A Special Day”；2017 昆明 A“One day in my childhood”和 2015 昆明“The good old days”。
活动形式 感受
1．上午：打扫街道，帮助老人做家务(cleaned the streets；helped the old people there do housework) 2．下午：给小朋友们讲故事(told stories to the kids) 帮助别人是快乐的(helping others can bring happiness to…)
A Weekend to Remember It was a bright and sunny weekend.I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake.Half an hour passed but we got no fish.I became impatient and wanted to give up. “Just wait patiently，son.Nothing in the world is easy to get，” My father encouraged me. I sat patiently to fish with my father.Finally，I got a beautiful big fish.A sense of success and happiness came to me. I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so important.
分析全国近 3 年中考真题可知，对于此话题通常有以下命题角度： 1．描述自己的亲身经历与感受，如：2019 宁波，2019 青岛、2019 桂 林、2019 重庆 B、2019 咸宁、2018 台州、2018 长沙、2018 荆门、2017 北 京； 2．描述他人的经历以及对自己的影响及感受，如 2019 河南、2017 海 南。
Wei Hua asked me some questions about study.I will bring him my notebooks tomorrow and I am ready to answer his questions at any time.I hope Wei Hua can be better soon.
【标准范文】 Dear Eric，
How's it going？You want to know the things I've done these days.Now let me tell you.
Last Sunday，I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood of our school with my classmates.In the morning，we cleaned the streets.And then we went to the old people's home and helped the old people there do housework.In the afternoon，we told stories to the kids in the children's home.
I like helping others.Helping others makes me happy and helping others is helping myself，too.
B(2019·云南) A Weekend to Remember 提示：请以“A Weekend to Remember”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述 一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟。 要求： 1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
That day，I was busy but very happy.I think helping others can bring happiness to others，and it can also bring happiness to ourselves.
Yours， Li Hua
【句子升格】 1．You want to know the things I've done these days.(用 what 引导的宾 语从句改写句子) You want to know what I've done these days.
A small thing
My classmate Wei Hua had a high fever last week.He had to be in hospital.So I tried my best to help him.
Yesterday was Saturday.My classmates and I went to visit him together.We met at the school gate at 9：00 in the morning.Then we went to the hospital by bus.I thought we should get him some flowers，because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.What's more，