SAT RUN-ON SENTENCE 不完整句子
SAT文法总结
零点SAT文法总结1.single在表达“只,仅仅”的时候,往往使用否定结构(not a single)。
2.SAT改进句子(IS)中,正确答案不能改变原句句意。
同时实意词(名词/动词/形容词/副词)不能随意省略,添加或者替换。
3.SAT不喜欢“something is why+从句.”的结构。
4.SAT不喜欢“名词/代词+doing/having done/being done”的结构。
●5.being在SAT文法中98%是错的。
(必错情况:①being+n②being+adj③as being+n/adj/V.ing)放在句首有可能正确,要慎选。
●6.动词不定式(to do)不能做谓语。
7.在所有名词性从句中,只有宾语从句的that可以省略。
(慎用,另说不能省)8.and和also不能连用。
Also置于句末必错。
9.and优于as well as。
10.whereas(conj.然而,鉴于,反之)是连词,前面不应该有分号。
11.yet做连词,连接两个具有意义的句子,也可不做连词。
12.在SAT中,当对一本书,一幅画或某件艺术作品的内容进行解释时,倾向于使用定语从句的主要动词用一般现在时。
13.在SAT中主动语态优于被动语态,除了固定搭配中的被动语态。
(当report,believe,claim,estimate,find,know,assume动作发出者是人时,该条不适用。
)直接表达比间接更为简洁。
E.g. there be < it is.●14.where本身就是介词加which的简化,所以where前不可加介词。
15.having done只能放在句首表原因(doing可以放在句末表示解释或者结果),一旦看到having done不在句首可以认为是错的。
●16.动词优于动名词,动名词优于名词。
●17.not only,but also中also可忽略,可不必与but紧连,不可置于句末(平行结构)。
run-on sentence的用法
run-on sentence的用法Run-on sentence(长句)是指两个或多个独立的句子没有适当的标点或连接词来连接,从而形成一个过长、难以理解的句子。
这样的句子通常会影响读者对文本的理解,因为它们包含了过多的信息,使得整个句子显得混乱。
以下是一个例子:错误的run-on sentence:"I woke up late this morning I didn't hear the alarm, I rushed to get ready but missed my bus, now I'm going to be late for work."在这个例子中,三个独立的句子没有适当的分隔,而是被逗号连接,形成了一个run-on sentence。
修正这个句子的方法之一是使用适当的标点或连接词来将这些独立的句子分隔开:修正后的句子:"I woke up late this morning. I didn't hear the alarm, so I rushed to get ready, but I missed my bus. Now I'm going to be late for work."或者可以使用分号:修正后的句子:"I woke up late this morning; I didn't hear the alarm. I rushed to get ready but missed my bus; now I'm going to be late for work."修正后,每个独立的句子都被适当地分隔开来,使得整个句子更加清晰易读。
在写作中,要注意避免使用过长的run-on sentence,而是通过适当的标点和连接词来组织句子,使得文本更加流畅和易于理解。
run--on_sentence_and_sentence_fragment
Ex.× Security set off the alarm and evacuated the building. Next, closeet off the alarm, evacuated the building, and closed all the entrances.
YOUR LOGO
No.1
Tom likes playing basketball.
He is not good at football.
No.2
Tom likes playing basketball,he is not good at football.
You are a young people. You are immature forever .
YOUR LOGO
You are a young people,you are immature forever .
A sentence in which two independent clauses are run together (or "fused") without an appropriateconjunction or mark of punctuation between them. In prescriptive grammar, fused sentences (also known as run-on sentences) are generally treated as errors.
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" . . . I hate people that have always their poor story to tell everybody has their own troubles that poor Nancy Blake died a month ago of acute pneumonia well I didn't know her so well as all that she was Text 1 Floeys friend more than mine . . ."
run-on sentences
Two complete sentences joined by a connecting adverb are punctuated incorrectly. Chinese meaning:(用连接副词连接两个完整的句子
是标点的错误。) e.g. It is too far to walk to school, moreover, it is snowing. It is too far to walk to school moreover it is snowing.
Take some sentences as example: • e.g.: Obviously, the problem of greenhouse effect is one of the biggest problems that had many big conferences between countries to discussed it today, the movie is just magnifying the effect of this problem in order to lead the reason of this clime disaster more believable.
e.g. It is too far to walk to school it is snowing.
Two or more complete sentence are joined by commas. Chinese meaning:(两个或两个以上完整句子用逗
号连接) e.g. It is too far to walk to school, it is snowing.
A sentence in which two or more independent clauses are not properly joined by any punctuation or conjunction. Chinese meaning: (一个句子有两个或两个以上的
Unit 4 Run-on sentence
Unit 4 Run-on Sentence (串句)I. A run-on sentence incorrectly runs together two complete sentences without a conjunction or punctuation.* Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears hasty judgments are often wrong.* I took lots of vitamin C, I still came down with the flu.II. Principal ways to correct a run-on sentence:1. Write two separate sentences by using a period and a capital letter.* Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears. Hasty judgments are often wrong.* I took lots of vitamin C. I still came down with the flu.2. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction.* Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears, and hasty judgments are often wrong.* I took lots of vitamin C, but I still came down with the flu.3. Use a semicolon.* Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears; hasty judgments are often wrong.* I took lots of vitamin C; I still came down with the flu.4. Use a semicolon and connecting adverbs.* Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears; therefore, hasty judgments are often wrong.* I took lots of vitamin C; however, I still came down with the flu.A list of common adverbial conjunctions:however, nevertheless, on the other hand, instead, meanwhile, otherwise, indeed, in addition, also, moreover, furthermore, thus, as a result, consequently, therefore, accordingly5. Make one of the clauses subordinate.* Because human nature is seldom as simple as it appears, hasty judgments are often wrong.* Although I took lots of vitamin C, I still came down with the flu.Exercises:1.I bought a used car this past summer from a friend of mine it needed several repairs.2.I don’t mind cooking, in fact, I enjoy it.3.The sky was cloudless the sun was shining brightly.4.She wanted to go the party she was not invited to.5.It was dark and rainy she didn’t come.6.We finally found a satisfactory place, it was breezy but quiet.7.I was coming home, I met a former schoolmate of mine.8.The food was fine except for the cake, I didn’t like it.9.It rained all week parts of the highway were flooded.10.I’m not going to eat in the school cafeteria any more the price of food is too high.。
SAT语法习题
General IntroductionType 1: Sentence Containing Errors in Grammar or UsageBecause Lucy was furious, she speaks loudly.A. she speaksB. and speakingC. and she spokeD. as she spokeE. she spokeTips: A basic rule of English grammar is that the tense of the verbs in a sentence must remain logically consistent.Type 2: Sentences Containing Errors in Style or ExpressionGreat enjoyment was experienced by me at the wedding of my sister.A. Great enjoyment was experienced by me at the wedding of my sisterB. The experience of my sister’s wedding was greatly enjoyedC. Being at my sister’s wedding was an experience of great enjoymentD. I greatly enjoyed my sister’s weddingE. A greatly enjoyable experience for me was the wedding of my sisterTips: When the original and all the choices are grammatically correct, you must analyze the writing style. Effective writing should be clear, brief and bold.Type 3: Sentences Containing Errors in Standard English UsageCape Canaveral was renamed Cape Kennedy shortly after JFK was assassinated, its original name was given back to it ten years later.A. was assassinated, its original name was given back to it ten years laterB. was assassinated and it got back its original name ten years laterC. was assassinated; its original name was restored ten years laterD. was assassinated, it was restored to its original name ten years laterE. was assassinated; however, with the restoration of its original name it ten years laterTips▪The underlined test of the original sentence has three problems. The first is punctuation. A comma improperly separates two individual sentences. To avoid this so-called comma splice, use the following three methods:1. a semicolon2. a period and a capital letter for the second sentence3. keep the comma and add an appropriate conjunction (and, but, or, nor, for, yet, or so)▪The second problem is wordiness.(冗长的,冗赘的) --- too many words▪The third problem is awkwardness.(笨拙的,累赘的)---sound ungraceful▪The best answer will be the most graceful and effectively expressed sentence.❖平行结构是指两个或以上的句法和功能相似的部分,通过使用并列连词或词组将它们完美地连接起来,共同作为整个句子的一部分。
run-on sentence and sentence fragments
(1)逗号错误(comma splice):
使用逗号但没有并列连词将两个独立分句写 在一个句子里。 Form: Independent clause, independent clause. e.g: The old man listened with a puzzled expression, he held an unlit cigar in his delicate fingers.
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• 5.把其中的一个变成从句 When Tom put a match to the papers, the pile burst into flames. • 6.把其中的一个分句变成词组 Tom having put a match to the papers, the pile burst into flames.
sentence fragments
1、定义:
sentence fragments:句子碎片,不完整句 一般是指某句子看上去样子像个句子, 但它从语法上讲并不是一个句子,是 模仿真的句子的假句子。
2、识别:
一个完整的句子最基本的要素就是主语(a subject) +动词(a verb)+完整意思(a complete thought) 1)观察句子是否有主语(subject); 2)观察句子是否有谓语(verb); 3)观察句子开头是否用从属连词 (subordinating conjunction)或关系代词 (relative pronoun)来保证句子意思完整。
ex: (a) I opened the door. Expecting to see my brother standing on the porch. 正确:I opened the door, expecting to see my brother standing on the porch. (b) With a sudden loud bang and a shower of multicolored sparks. The mixture exploded. 正确:With a sudden loud bang and a shower of multicolored sparks, the mixture exploded.
英语考试作文-GRE写作扣分常见原因分析之不规范句式run
英语考试作文GRE写作扣分常见原因分析之不规范句式run很多同学在写GRE作文时,都会出现Run-on sentence的问题,并因此丢失不少分数。
作为一种在写作中比较常见的错误,犯错的原因往往并不是考生不了解语法,而只是不经意间顺手为之所造成的。
如何发现并应对好写作中出现的run-on sentence?下面就由来为大家做详细讲解。
什么是run-on sentence?写了有什么危害?首先,从字面意思上来讲,run-on sentence就是指一句句子中出现2个或者以上的独立从句却没有使用正确的标点符号或者连词进行连接的句子。
英文释义:A run-on is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.)。
例如:There are many students go abroad. 从中文直译来看,句子本身没有问题,即:有许多学生出国留学。
‘有’这个词在中文里做语气助词,而直译到英文中却转变为‘there are’,形成了两套动词体系。
写出这种句子,对于GRE考试的作文评分影响较大。
由于评分机制的原因,GRE作文除了对文章整体结构和论述立意等方面有所要求,在最基本的语法方面也会单独打分,而可以说是基础错误的run-on sentence,一旦被批改老师发现,往往就会使其产生考生英语基本功不过关,英文水平较差的印象,对作文的整体评分都会造成负面影响,可能导致语法方面直接扣除0.5到1分。
GRE写作中为何会出现run-on sentence?探究这一错误的原因,主要还是考生对英文写作的句式分割概念不清,中文句子分割常常是从意义出发,只要意思没有表达完毕,可以一句连一句地持续写下去,直至内容结束。
run-ons
RUN-ON SENTENCESProblemA run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses are not joined correctly. An independent clause is a group of words that can stand alone as a sentence, as in, The dog runs. Your writing may be confusing or unclear if independent clauses are joined incorrectly.There are two types of run-on sentences: fused sentences and comma splices.A fused sentence occurs when independent clauses run together with no marks of punctuation or coordinating conjunctions to separate them.Fused sentence: My professor read my paper she said it was excellent.independent clause independent clauseA comma splice occurs when two or more independent clauses are joined only by a comma.Comma splice:My cat meowed angrily, I knew she wanted food.independent clause independent clauseSolutionREVISE RUN-ON SENTENCES in one of four ways:•Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction (and, but, yet, so, or, nor, for). When you join two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction, place a comma before the coordinating conjunction.Run-on: My professor read my paper she said it was excellent.Correction: My professor read my paper, and she said it was excellent.•Use a semicolon (or, in some cases, a colon or a dash). You can use a semicolon alone or with a transitional expression (e.g., however, at any rate, in contrast, as a result, etc.).Run-on: My cat meowed angrily, I knew she wanted food.Correction: My cat meowed angrily; I knew she wanted food.Correction with a transitional expression:My cat meowed angrily; therefore, I knew she wanted food.•Separate the independent clauses into sentences. This is an especially good technique when one of the independent clauses is very long.Run-on: It seemed to Wanda that her daughter had more than enough crayons, they were strewn across the bedroom floor and some of them werebroken, and, worse still, someone had used the stub of a red crayon tomark a sinister smiley face on the wall.Correction: It seemed to Wanda that her daughter had more than enough crayons.They were strewn across the bedroom floor, and some of them werebroken. Worse still, someone had used the stub of a red crayon to marka sinister smiley face on the wall.•Restructure the sentence by subordinating one of the clauses. You can subordinate a clause if one of the independent clauses seems less important than the other. Here are a few examples in which one of the clauses has been subordinated (indicated here byunderlining). Note that a subordinated clause is no longer independent—it cannot stand on its own as a sentence.Run-on: The largest tree by volume in the world is the General ShermanSequoia, it is a little over 52,500 cubic feet.Correction: The largest tree by volume in the world is the General ShermanSequoia, which is a little over 52,500 cubic feet.Run-on: Toni Morrison is a professor at Princeton University, she wrote the novel The Bluest Eye.Correction: Toni Morrison, a professor at Princeton University, wrote The Bluest Eye.Run-on: I told my roommate I would be late, she still locked me out.Correction: Although I told my roommate I would be late, she still locked me out.Run-on: I told the children I would read to them they said they wanted to sit by me so they could look at the pictures.Correction: When I told the children I would read to them, they said they wanted to sit by me so they could look at the pictures.。
sentence用法和短语
sentence用法和短语回答如下:一、"sentence"的用法:1. 表示句子:Sentence is a grammatical unit consisting of one or more words that express a complete thought.(句子是由一个或多个单词组成的语法单位,能够表达完整思想。
)- Example: "The cat is on the mat."(猫在垫子上。
)2. 表示判决:Sentence can also refer to a punishment or penalty imposed by a court upon a person convicted of a crime.("Sentence"也可以指由法院对犯罪被判有罪的人施加的惩罚或刑罚。
)- Example: "The judge sentenced the defendant to five years in prison."(法官判处被告五年徒刑。
)二、短语(Phrases):1. make sentence(造句):to express a phrase or sentence in words or writing(用词或写作来表达一个短语或句子)。
- Example: "She asked the students to make sentences using new vocabulary words."(她要求学生们用新词汇造句。
)2. run-on sentence(长句,连续的长句):a sentence that lacks proper punctuation or conjunctions, making it difficult to read or understand(因缺乏适当的标点符号或连接词而难以阅读或理解的句子)。
SAT语法改写句子题详解-2012
SAT语法之“改写句子题(Improving Sentences)”Criterion of effective English sentences:grammatically correctclear and precise (as opposed to vague and ambiguous)concise and idiomatic (as opposed to wordy and awkward)常见考点汇总一、语法错误类1.粘连句(run-on sentences)两个单句合并为一个并列复合句(compound sentence)的方式有:①“逗号+连词”连接,如and/but/yet/so/for等,表示并列或顺承、转折、结果、原因等关系;②“分号”连接,表示并列关系,且两个分句相对独立,相比“, and”连接的分句关系要松散一些;③“冒号”连接,表示后一个分句是对前一个分句的解释说明。
若两个单句以although, if, because, so that, in order that, when, where, who, whose, which/that等关系连词或关系代词连接,则构成相应的主从复合句(complex sentence)。
若两个SVO/SCP单句间没有标点,或仅以逗号连接,则构成粘连句。
例1:By the time she was twenty-one, Jane Austen had begun writing a novel which she initially titled First Impressions and which she later called Pride and Prejudice, this is a book that many fans consider her best work.(A) this is a book that many fans consider her best work(B) since many fans consider this her best work(C) the best work that many fans considered it to be(D) a book that many fans consider her best work(E) it is considered by many fans as her best work【特别注意】:副词不能连接两个句子。
Runon连续句错误
Fused Sentences
Definition: In fused sentences, two or more independent clauses “run together” with no punctuation.
Common conjunctive adverbs: again, also, besides, consequently, further, furthermore, hence, however, indeed, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, otherwise, similarly, then, therefore, thus
Independent Clause
Independent Clause
Independent Clause
Comma Splices
Definition: In comma splices, two or more independent clauses are joined by a comma only.
Conjunctive Adverb Comma Splice
Rule: When joining independent clauses, the conjunctive adverb is preceded by a semi-colon and followed by a comma.
Example of Error: The boy ate his dinner, however, his sister played quietly in the corner. Correction: The boy ate his dinner; however, his sister played quietly in the corner.
句子技巧-002 run-on sentence
Run-on sentenceA run-on sentence contains two or more independent clauses not connected by the correct conjunction or punctuation.There are two kinds of run-on sentences. The fused sentence is when there is no punctuation and no coordinating conjunction between independent clauses. The comma splice is when independent clauses are joined by a comma and without a coordinating conjunction.For example,Fused: The old man listened with a puzzled expression he held an unlit cigar in his delicate fingers.Comma splice: The old man listened with a puzzled expression, he held an unlit cigar in his delicate fingers.Revised: The old man listened with a puzzled expression as he held an unlit cigar in his delicate fingers.Fused sentence: The Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat he could get up and do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.Comma splice: The Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat he could get up, do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.Run-on sentences can be corrected in four ways:1. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet).The Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat, he could get up and do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.2. Use a semicolon (or a colon or a dash).The Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat; he could get up and do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.3. Make the clauses into separate sentences.The Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat. He could get up and do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.4. Make of the clauses dependentWhen the Daily Telegraph thundered on to his front doormat, he could get up and do the crossword over the pot of tea that served as his breakfast.ExerciseCorrect the following run-on sentences in the way that you think is most effective.1. The author’s argument is clear she states it on the first page.2. We saw her last night at the library she didn’t see us.3. I didn’t understand the lecturer’s point I asked her to repeat it.4. Dances with Wolves is extremely long, it is never boring.5. Dad washed the dishes, Mom wouldn’t have to.6. Last week, we drove to Philadelphia, on the way, we had two flat tires.7. We are glad Tom is home, we’ve missed him.8. Jen’s favorite subject is English, she doesn’t always have time to read everything she needs to.9. In the summer, ants are attracted to water; they will often enter a house through the dishwasher.10. Human beings have managed to adapt to any environment they can survive in Arctic wasteland, tropical jungles, and barren deserts.。
Run-on Sentences
Run-on Sentences: Fused Sentences and Comma Splices Run-on sentences occur when independent clauses are not joined properly. There are two types of run-on sentence: the fused sentence and the comma splice. ►Fused sentences occur when there is no punctuation and no coordinating conjunction between two independent clauses. The snow needs to be shovelled get going on it right away. ►Comma splices occur when two independent clauses are joined with a comma that is not followed by a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet). The snow needs to be shovelled, get going on it right away. Run-on sentences can be revised in one of four ways: ►Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to join the dependent clauses. The snow needs to be shovelled, so get going on it right away. ►Use a semicolon to join the dependent clauses The snow needs to be shovelled; get going on it right away. ►Turn each independent clause into a separate sentence. The snow needs to be shovelled. Get going on it right away. ►Turn one of the independent clauses into a dependent clause. Since the snow needs to be shovelled, get going on it right away. Practice Exercise Revise the following sentences to eliminate fused sentences or comma splices.1. Many North American cars cost less than foreign cars however, foreign cars get better mileage. 2. Traffic jams in major cities have gotten out of hand car pools should be mandatory. 3. Three-dimensional television movies have recently become popular, 3-D glasses can be purchased at most convenience stores. 4. The restaurant looks tacky to me, all the tablecloths are made of plastic. 5. We’ve spent all our money, therefore; we won’t be dining out tonight. 6. The abacus is an ancient computational device, in skilful hands, it can calculate sums as quickly as most modern gadgets. 7. The woman’s skills are perfect for the new position we intend to promote her. 8. The team lost seven games in a row, consequently, the coach was fired. 9. Here is the chief administrator, he will solve our problems. 10. He phoned his fiancée repeatedly but she refused to return his calls. 11. I have good ideas I can’t put them into a sentence. 12. The elephant quit the circus he was tired of working for peanuts. Answers Several possible answers are included here. 1. Many North American cars cost less than foreign cars, but foreign cars get better mileage. Many North American cars cost less than foreign cars; however, foreign cars get better mileage. Although many North American cars cost less than foreign cars, foreign cars get better mileage. Many North American cars cost less than foreign cars. Foreign cars get better mileage. 2. Traffic jams in major cities have gotten out of hand, so car pool should be made mandatory. Traffic jams in major cities have gotten out of hand; car pools should be made mandatory. Because traffic jams in major cities have gotten out of hand, car pools should be made mandatory.Traffic jams in major cites have gotten out of hand. Car pools should be made mandatory. 3. Three-dimensional television movies have recently become popular, and 3-D glasses can be purchased at most convenience stores. Three-dimensional television movies have recently become popular; 3-D glasses can be purchased at most convenience stores. Because three-dimensional television movies have recently become popular, 3-D glasses can be purchased at most convenience stores. Three-dimensional television movies have recently become popular. 3-D glasses can be purchased at most convenience stores. 4. The restaurant looks tacky to me, for all the tablecloths are made of plastic. The restaurant looks tacky to me; all the tablecloths are made of plastic. The restaurant looks tacky to me because all the tablecloths are made of plastic. The restaurant looks tacky to me. All the tablecloths are made of plastic. 5. We’ve spent all our money, so we won’t be dining out tonight. We’ve spent all our money; therefore, we won’t be dining out tonight. Because we’ve spent all our money, we won’t be dining out tonight. We’ve spent all our money. We won’t be dining out tonight. 6. The abacus is an ancient computation device, but in skilful hands, it can calculate sums as quickly as most modern gadgets. The abacus is an ancient computation device; however, in skilful hands, it can calculate sums as quickly as most modern gadgets. Although the abacus is an ancient computation device, in skilful hands it can calculate sums as quickly as most modern gadgets. The abacus is a modern computation device. In skilful hands it can calculate sums as quickly as most modern gadgets. 7. The woman’s skills are perfect for the new position, so we intend to promote her. The woman’s skills are perfect for the new position; therefore, we intend to promote her. Because the woman’s skills are perfect for the new position, we intend to promote her. The woman’s skills are perfect for the new position. We intend to promote her. 8. The team lost seven games in a row, and the coach was fired as a consequence. The team lost seven games in a row; consequently, the coach was fired. Because the team lost seven games in a row, the coach was fired. The team lost seven games in a row. The coach was fired as a consequence. 9. Here is the chief administrator, and he will solve our problems. Here is the chief administrator; he will solve our problems. Here is the chief administrator who will solve our problems.Here is the chief administrator. He will solve our problems. 10. He phoned his fiancée repeatedly, but she refused to return his calls. He phoned his fiancée repeatedly; she refused to return his calls. Although he phoned his fiancée repeatedly, she refused to return his calls. He phoned his fiancée repeatedly. She refused to return his calls. 11. I have good ideas, yet I can’t put them into a sentence. I have good ideas; however, I can’t put them into a sentence. Although I have good ideas, I can’t put them into a sentence. I have good ideas. I can’t put them into a sentence. 12. The elephant quit the circus, for he was tired of working for peanuts. The elephant quit the circus; he was tired of working for peanuts. The elephant quit the circus because he was tired of working for peanuts. The elephant quit the circus. He was tired of working for peanuts.。
SAT语法ImprovingSentences部分详解
SAT 语法 Improving Sentences 部分详解1.简洁原则because比 because of,aware of,considering;主动 >被动;直接 >间接;动词 >名词。
例: Anita liked to watch television, of which she found the scienceprograms especially fascinating.(A)television, of which she found the science programs especially fascinating(B)television; she found the science programs especially fascinating(C)television, and it was especially the science programs that were of fascination(D)television; the fascination of the science programs especially(E)television, especially fascinating to her were the programs2.run on 句型SVO,SVO两个句子相连: SVO,conj SVO 或者 SVO; SVO副词和介词不能连接两个句子: SVO, adv SVO 或者 SVO, prep SVOadv:①以 ly 结尾的词;②词根判断法;③ however, thus, hence, then, also, even 练习: SVO, thus SVO.SVO, however SVO.SVO, but SVO.SVO, although SVO.SVO; therefore SVO.SVO; but SVO.SVO; although SVO.例:Since some (A)people are convinced that (B) dowsing, a method of finding underground water with a Y-shaped stick, is effective, but others condemn the procedure as (C)mere superstition (D). No error(E)(P602.24)1, Many students work after school and on weekends, consequently they do not have much time for doing their homework.A, weekends, consequently they do not haveB, weekends, they do not haveC, weekends, as a consequence they do not haveD, weekends, therefore they do not haveE, weekends; consequently, they do not have2.Even the play’ s most minor characters work together with extraordinary skill,their interplay creates a moving theatrical experience.A, their interplay creates a moving theatrical experience.B, a moving theatrical experience is created by their interplayC, and their interplay creates a moving theatrical experience.D, and a moving theatrical experience being the creation of their interplayE, with their interplay they create a moving theatrical experience.3.逻辑主语 Logic subjectdoing/done ··, SVO.adj./adv.,SVO4. having,being自杀词:在句子中充当时态的组成部分。
Run-On-Sentence讲课稿
Repairing Run-On Sentence
• We can replace the comma with a semicolon.
– Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night; however, they are probably wrong.
由有关有销钉混合段的图3可知,物料粒子充 满全流道沿着螺杆转动方向向前运动,混合情 况明显优于无销钉混合段,在6.3s以前,物料 粒子运动的速度与无销钉混合段中粒子运动速 度几乎一致,从8.4s以后,有销钉混合段内物 料粒子的运动速度明显小于无销钉混合段, 21.0s粒子才到达混合段出口.
Direct translation leads to a run-on sentence
Better translation with run-on sentence repaired
We know from Figure 3 that material particles fill the flow channel and move forward along the screw. The mixing efficiency in the mixing section with pins is clearly better than that with no pin. The material particle velocity in the mixing section with pins is almost the same as that with no pin before 6.3 s, but the velocity with pins is lower than that with no pin after 8.4 s. It takes the material particles 21.0 s to reach the exit of the mixing section with pins.