高三英语作文训练之人物描写

人物介绍：
1). 属于记叙文体裁 2). 基本类型：记人，叙事，写景 3). 常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友， 老师，父母，名人等等
4). 记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙 5). 注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，不 拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。 6). 常见段落结构：主题句－发展句－结论句
人物介绍解题步骤：
2. In order to earn enough money to meet his needs, he worked as….and later he switched the job into an official in the government.
3. Einstein was honored as the greatest scientist in the 20th century.
10. Einstein is 20C/20 century greatest scientist. He was died at April 18th,1955, he was 76.
Einstein was the 20th century’s greatest scientist/…the greatest scientist of the 20th century.
1. Einstein was borned in German on 1879, March 14th.
Einstein was born in Germany on March 14th,1879/on 14th march, 1879 2. He was so shy to go to school. He was too shy to go to school/so shy that he didn’t like school/ Because of / Due to/ Owing to his shyness, he didn’t enjoy school. 3. At his age of 17, he went to Sweden/Swiss to study. At the age of 17/when he was 17, he went to Switzerland to study/for further study. 4. To earn money enough, he has worked as/ had worked as a
1918年，他已经世界闻名。1921年，他获得诺贝尔物理奖，并 被邀请到许多国家作演讲。他最喜欢的是科学，人权，和平 和进步。爱因斯坦是20世纪最伟大的科学家。他于1955年四 月十八日逝世，终年76岁。
要点分析：
1. 名人介绍，采用第三人称
2. 将提供的信息整合
3. 以一般过去时态为主。
表达误区：
on /at 1905 receive doctor’s degree/ a doctorial degree/a doctorate
6. From 1905-1915, he began his searching work on physics, these work lead to his new discovers on physics.
teacher ,then worked in government office. To earn money enough to continue his study, he worked as a teacher and then worked in a government office. 5. He recieved a doctor degree/ bachelor degree/ master degree
内容： 爱因斯坦于1879年三月十四日生于德国。他小时候喜欢 问很多问题。他喜欢数学和科学，但是他比较害羞，不太喜 欢学校。17岁到瑞士学习。为了赚足够的钱，他当过教师， 后来在政府部门工作。1905年他获得博士学位。1905－1915 年，他开始研究工作，这些研究导致了他在物理方面的许多 新发现。
8. He was a shy boy, and he didn’t think that school was a lovely place. (312 郑彦琳）
9. Most of the these discoveries made a big difference to the world and became the basic theories of some other new inventions.(312 吴 玉纯）
6. He died on…which was really a big loss to the world and the world of science.(302吴维乐）
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Sample writing:
Einstein was born in Germany on March 14th,1879. When he was a young boy, he used to ask a lot of questions. He liked maths and science, but he was a shy person and did not enjoy school very much. When Einstein was 17, he went to Switzerland to study. To earn enough money to continue his studies, Einstein worked first as a teacher and then worked in a government office. He received a doctor’s degree in 1905. from 1905-1915, he began his research and studies, which led to his discoveries in physics. In 1981, Einstein was known across the world. He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 and was invited to many countries to give lectures. What he cared about most was science, human rights, peace and progress. Einstein was the 20th century’s greatest scientist . He died on April 18th,1955, at the age of 76.
He died on April 18th,1955, at the age of 76/when he was 76
He passed away on….
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1. When a child, he was curious about the world and raised so many questions.
9. What he liked most is science, man-rights, peace and development. What he liked most was …human rights…and progress/ What he cared about most was …./ His favorites were …/What he favored was …/ What he was most interested in was…/ He devoted his whole life to science…which he was most interested in
From 1905-1915(In the next decade), he began his research work in physics, which led to his many new discoveries in physics. / … He began to do some research and these researches led him to many discoveries in physics.
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4. Though he died, he has left a rich legacy for all of us, which should be treasured forever. (302 姜宇轩）
5. Owing to his great discoveries, the 20th century saw a series of changes in the world of science. Therefore, he was considered to be the greatest scientist in the…