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(完整版)如何回复审稿人意见(ResponsetoReviews)
Dear Editor,We have studied the valuable comments from you, the assistant editor and reviewers carefully, and tried our best to revise the manuscript. The point to point responds to the reviewer’s comments are listed as following:Responds to the rev iewer’s comments:Reviewer 1Comment 1: in page 3, line 40, we fed rats..." changed to rats were fed with... Response: According to the reviewer’s comment, we have corrected the sentence. Furthermore, we have had the manuscript polished with a professional assistance in writing.Comment 2:page 25. The style of reference 40 is not right (using initials for the first names). Since this paper has been published, the volume and page Nos should be provided.Response: Thank you for your careful work. We have added the volume and page numbers for reference 40.Reviewer 2Comment: I would like to thank the authors for their efforts in addressing the criticisms with additional experiments. The one criticism that they did not address was relating to energy expenditure as the reason that the animals on the low calcium diet gained more weight. While I understand that performing this experiment will not affect the conclusion of this manuscript, I do believe that this point could be discussed in the Discussion section.Response: Thank you for your valuable advice. Based on the previous revision, we further address the relationship between low calcium diet and energy expenditure in the section of discussion according to your thoughtful comments.Reviewer 3Comment 1: In the text you often write: “As previously described”. Unless that paper is from your lab or one of the method paper co-authors is on the present MS this is not quite proper since the statement infers method development from your lab. There are numerous instances like that in the methods section; these should all be changed “according to those described by…..”Response: We are sorry for this language mistake. We have carefully corrected this phrase throughout the manuscript according to your comment.Comment 2: There are still some wording, sentence structure and grammatical issues even in this basically well put together MS. For example, while authors may have been excited about the data you cannot start a sentence with “Excitedly” in line 418 or “Whatever” in line 395.Response: Thank you very much to point out the sentence structure and grammatical issues in our manuscript. According to the comments from you and the editors, we polished the manuscript with a professional assistance in writing, conscientiously.Comment 3:In my view a big omission in this work is ignoring the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues. For example all animals consumed the same amount of feed but we had extra fat storage in the low Ca diet groups. So where did the extra energy go? Zemel et al (citation 34) in similar work indicate that increased thermogenesis on the high Ca diet explains the dissipation of dietary energy. Further even though Zemel et al (#34) indicated lipogenesis was enhanced in the low Ca diets that was in 2000 and you should have monitored expression of FAS and UCP either as mRNA abundance or actual FAS/UCP changes via proteomics or blotting techniques. In any case these controls are missing here and not emphasized in the MS. Casual reading of this paper would lead to the conclusion that the dietary Ca effect on fat deposition is strictly a function of increased or decreased lipolysis. While lipolysis appears to be a major player, lipogenesis and thermogenesis cannot be ignored for completeness. In Fig 8 you also show a decline in cAMP for the low Ca diet. Well beta agonists or cAMP enhancers regulate transcription of adipose and liver FAS (in rats (J Biol Chem 271:2307, 1996) and recently with large animal models (Hausman et al J Animal Science 87:1218, 2009 and Halsey et al J Animal Science 89: 1011, 2011). In additioncAMP levels could have been monitored. I really do not like the last sentence in the Abstract line 47-50 where you state that “low calcium diet-induced increase in fat mass was due to enhanced lipogenesis mediated by an upregulated CaSR signaling pathway” Your results here show no such thing, this is a completely false statement based on data herein. Correct. You show that high Ca diets enhance lipolysis and low Ca diets are antilipolytic. You did not monitor lipid anabolism here at all. See also line 255-257 and lines 333-335 of your MS. Response: Thank you for your valuable and thoughtful comments. As you suggested that the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues should be monitored. We really agree with your viewpoints. In the present study, we did find that low calcium diet increased the mRNA level of fatty acid synthase (FAS) in white adipose tissue. Furthermore, the FAS mRNA level were also increased in adipocytes after treatment with 1,25-(OH)2D3in in-vitro experiments. However, the increased FAS mRNA levels were not affected by preventing either the nuclear vitamin D receptor (nVDR) or calcium-sensing receptor (CaSR), suggesting that FAS might not be involved in the CaSR pathway. In addition, we thought that FAS played its role in fatty acid synthesis mainly in liver previously. Besides, the manuscript was required to restrict number of total words and our previous focus was on the antilolytic role of CaSR in the process of fat accumulation. So we ignored to provide the data of FAS mRNA levels in the submitted manuscript. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the mRNA levels according to your helpful suggestion.We have reported the effects of dietary calcium on UCP2 mRNA levels in adipose tissue and UCP3 in skeletal muscle in our previous studies (1, 2). Thus, we believed that low calcium diet led to decreased thermogenesis in the present study. It was a pity that we did not measure the rat core temperature in those studies. The UCP2 mRNA levels in adipocytes were observed to be decreased after treatment of 1,25-(OH)2D3. This effect was prevented by using nVDR CaSR gene silencing but not by CaSR gene knockdown, suggesting that UCP2 was not involved in CaSR pathways. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the UCP2 results.Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. We are very sorry for our fault statement in the abstract. We have corrected it in the new manuscript.Comment 4: A point that does not emerge well from the discussion is how low Ca intakes result in higher intracellular [Ca] concentrations and really the effects on fatdeposition in the cells in many ways are due to an increased intracellular Ca level mediated via CaSR expression increases and the effect of VitD3 on nVDR show in Fig 8. The authors must remind readers that Ca levels in the blood are under hormonal regulation (Calcitonin, PTH and VitD3). Thus when diets low in Ca are consumed and blood Ca decline, PTH and VitD3 are called upon to mobilize bone Ca to replenish the blood Ca. Then coupled with an increase in CaSR more Ca actually is found in AT despite the fact that many would think the AT Ca level should decline. The reason is that tissue/circulating Ca levels are not diet depended but regulated. The vast bone stores of Ca will provide ample Ca here especially during a study of this length. While authors address these issues maybe could be presented in a less complicated discussion.Response:Thank you for your instructive suggestions. We are sorry for not describing the effect of low calcium diet on intracellular calcium concentrations mediated by CaSR, as well as the impact of hormone regulation on serum calcium levels clearly. According to your helpful advice, we have rewritten these two parts in the section of discussion. Thank you again.Comment 5: Not all citations are in JN styleResponse: We have careful recheck and corrected the style of the citations according to the requirement of JN.Comment 6: Abstract conclusion differs from lines 255-257 and 333-335; WHY? Response: Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. The conclusion from lines 255-257 is about the effect of low calcium diet on serum levels of free fatty acids (FFAs) and lipids. We considered FFA and glycerol as indicators of TG hydrolysis in adipose tissue. The low calcium diet caused decreased serum FFA and glycerol levels without influencing lipoprotein lipase (LPL) activity, so we thought the lipolytic effect of adipose tissue to be suppressed by low calcium diet. The conclusion from lines 333-335 was about the effect of 1,25-(OH)2D3 whose levels were increased under low calcium conditions on lipolysis. We used the glycerol level as the indicator of TG hydrolysis in adipocytes. Both the in vivo and in vitro experiments showed low calcium status caused an antilipolytic effect.Comment 7: Line 150-153. The qRT-PCR methodology is not at all understandable as you cite a Texas A&M published paper. This is completely insufficient with the newly established standards on gene expression via qRT-PCR. There is no mention of efficiencies of amplifications in these data nor how the use of the reference gene was established etc. I think Pfaffl and Bustin have recently written an article on this; please totally revise 150-153 in line with what you did and applying the new standards.Response: Thank you very much. Because the JN restricts the number of total words of manuscript, we cited the Texas A&M published paper. In the newly submitted manuscript, we describe the detailed protocols in our lab.Comment 8:Line 179 on Not clear as in sentences talk about different AT cell sources etc..revise.Response: We are sorry for not addressing the adipose tissue cell sources clearly. We have rewritten the methods.Comment 9: Any previous documentable work with siRNA?Response: Yes, we have documentable work with siRNA in our research team. The results were published in the journal of Biochem Biophys Res Commun (3).Comment 10: Line 214.. Cultured primary rat adipocytes and SW872 adipocytes ……Response: Thank you very much. According to your comment, we have had the manuscript polished and corrected the mistakes.。
Responses to the comments
Dear Reviewers:I want to express my very deep appreciation,and the appreciation of all of us,to the referees great efforts and suggestions for our manuscript.They are valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper,as well as the important guiding to our researches.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The following is a point-to-point response to the reviewers’comments and responses are in black. The modification marked in red in revised version.------------------------------Responses to Reviewer#2Review Comments:In this paper,the authors propose an extended state observer based dual-loop controller to control rigid spacecraft attitude with consideration of inertia uncertainties, assigned velocity and control constraints through sliding mode algorithm.This problem is interesting.However,there are some doubts and typos in this present paper as follows:[1]In Sections1and3,the authors say“external state observer”should be“extended state observer”,please check and revise it.Response:The phrase"external state observer"has been changed to"extended state observer"in our revised paper.[2]In Eq.(1),what does the⨯ωstand for?Response:The operator⨯ωand⨯q denote the skew-symmetric matrices,which is given in equation(3).[3]According to Eqs.(5)and(10),there exist some mistakes in the Fig.1,please double check it. Response:Thanks for your suggestion;we have corrected the mistake in the Fig.1.[4]After Eq.(10),the authors say“…the estimation of angular velocityωδ…”,which is unreasonable description based on Eq.(5).Response:Right you are!We have taken your advice,the phrase"…the estimation of angular velocityωδ…"has been changed to"…the estimation of angular velocity errorωδ…"in our revised paper.[5]In the Abstract,the authors say that the dual-loop controller is designed using the sliding mode method,but in Section3.2,the authors discuss the virtual control laws.I just wonder the control method is sliding mode control or not in this paper,please give an explanation.Response:The control law is designed based on a two-loop structure in which the outer-loop control law implements by sliding mode control technique.The outer loop controller is designed to track the attitude command and generate limited virtual angular velocity command for the inner loop,and the inner loop controller is designed to track the command of outer loop in the presence of uncertainties and control constraints.[6]In numerical simulations section,the simulation results should give more detailed description, because the response time of CBS is better than CDL in Fig.1,whether is to say that the meaning of this work is questionable?Response:Thanks for your suggestion;we have given more description for the simulation results in numerical simulations section.Although the response time for CBS is smaller in Fig.2,the angular velocity is beyond the range of angular velocity limitation for CBS control law in Fig.3, and the angular velocity for CDL is kept within the limitation.This work is motivated by constrained adaptive backstepping method,and seeks to reduce the influence of correlation between the rings and keep the states within the limitations.[7]The contribution of this work is unclear in Section1.Please highlight it.Response:Thanks for your suggestion;I have taken your advice.We have rewritten the contribution of this works in Section1.------------------------------Responses to Reviewer#2Review Comments:[1]The authors should check wrong words:the followings are just examples.p4.L2.:to accomplish the attitude rotational as fast...rotational-->rotational motion?p7.L4.:the attitude manueve-->the attitude maneuver?Response:We are very sorry for our incorrect writing,thanks for pointing out our mistake;we have corrected the wrong words in our revised paper.[2]Dual-loop control techniques are very common to control rigid body motions.It can not be a major contribution of the authors.Response:Thank you very much for your great efforts on our manuscript.It is true that the dual-loop control techniques are widely used to control rigid body motions,and dual-loop control technique is not a contribution of us.In this study,the main contribution of us is proposing a constrained dual-loop attitude control scheme,which combines command filtered approach and extended state observer,for rigid spacecraft under the actuator limitations and angular velocity pared with the constrained adaptive backstepping control method,the constrained dual-loop control design reduces the influence of correlation between the rings and keeps the states within the limitations.[3]In simulation,The frequency of environmental disturbance may not be realistic.The authors have presented some fluctuating response for CBS method for Low actuator bandwidth.But the unrealistic frequency of disturbance may yield such fluctuating response.Sometimes,such scenarios may be misleading.So it is necessary to modify the model of disturbance.Response:Thanks for your thoughtful comments.Since the frequency of the environmental disturbance is not realistic,we have modified the model of disturbance.It is true that the frequency of disturbance may led to the fluctuating response,however,in this study,the environmental disturbance torque is very small,it has less effect on the fluctuating response,which can be seen from Figs.2-6.Extensive simulations were also done using different disturbance inputs,such as remove the disturbance,these results show that the fluctuating response still exist for CBS method under Low actuator bandwidth situation.Thence,the possibility of the unrealistic disturbance frequency may led such fluctuating response can be excluded.In each of the simulation case,the controller parameters setting unchanged,therefore, we attribute the fluctuating response for CBS method to low actuator bandwidth.------------------------------Responses to Reviewer#4Review Comments:The innovation of the paper is well emphasized;the organization of the paper is good,but the state of the art and the comparison with other papers'results are not consistent enough.I consider that the paper can be accepted for publication only after revision(see below).Suggestions for the paper improving:1.The state of the art must be improved;more papers dealing with the subject of this work must be discussed,analyzed and their weaknesses presented.2.The most important drawback of the paper is the lack of a comparison between the results obtained in this paper and the results obtained in other papers.A serious comparison must be included in the paper.Response:Thanks for your analysis and suggestions.We have taken your advice,and more papers, which dealing with the subject of this work,have added for section1in our revised paper.So far,to the best of authors’knowledge,only a few papers[14,15,16]research the problem of attitude control under the constraints on angular velocity and control input.The control input saturation cannot be achieved due to the design of Barrier Lyapunov function in[14](Refer to Remark3in[13]).Considering the angular velocity and control input constraints,a nonlinear quaternion feedback control logic is proposed for the spacecraft eigenaxis rotations in[15]and a constrained optimal PID(Proportional-Integral-Derivative)-like controller is presented in[16], however,both of them require that the nominal off-diagonal terms of the inertia matrix are zeros, and none of them consider the model uncertainties.Extensive comparison simulation for the controller in[15]were also done with the nominal off-diagonal terms of the inertia matrix are zeros,however,the convergence time for[15]is much longer than the convergence time for the proposed controller,which is not suitable for comparison on a single graph.The constrained adaptive backstepping method[19]is widely used in aircraft control with the constraints on the control variables and the virtual control states.However,it does not guarantee the intermediate states in the range of constraints.In this note,we seek to reduce the influence of correlation between the rings and keep the states within the limitations.Sincerely yours,学术资源大全新上线欢迎各位青椒访问学习所有资源免费下载有疑问可在反馈至留言板网址☞(学术资源大全首字母即为网址域名)。
如何正确回复审稿人:标准的Response to reviewer
如何正确回复审稿人:标准的Response to reviewer在审稿意见回来之后,如何写一份标准的Response to reviewer!这篇Response to reviewer是投稿到International Journal of Pharmaceutics杂志,给审稿人写的回复意见,内容仅供参考!第1部分:对审稿人进行称呼;第2部分:总述对文稿的修改情况(一般如果文稿进行润色了,最好在这里提及一下),以及夸夸审稿人(夸夸他的意见或者建议很好,对稿件的提升很大,千万不要和审稿人顶,不是干这个事情的时候),对稿件的期待;第3部分:(标明)1#审稿人;第4部分:1#审稿人的第一个问题(将审稿人的问题复制进来即可,排版好);第5部分:1#审稿人的第一个问题的回复意见(谨慎认真,不可敷衍了事);第6部分:2#或者其他审稿人第7部分:感谢语(可自由发挥)第8部分:通讯作者名称,日期,机构等信息。
011)正确的心态成就正确的回复在回复审稿人意见之前,先庆祝一下你的研究论文已经走到同行评审这一步了吧~还要对百忙之中抽出时间来审阅你论文的审稿人们怀一颗感恩的心!2)在回复审稿人之前,先修改稿件当你准备好以专业、客观的方式处理审稿人的意见时,先和你的共同作者们讨论一下评审意见的内容,共同商量决定要接受哪些修改,反对哪些修改。
修改完论文之后再开始给审稿人写回复。
3)回复细节首先,感谢审稿人花时间审阅你的稿件。
然后,表明你已经解决了他们提出的所有问题。
回应审稿人的意见并不意味着你全部按照审稿人建议的修改。
而是意味着:这些建议你认真考虑过后,有的做了修改,有的没有修改但是会解释原因。
列出所有审稿人的意见以及你对每条意见的回复。
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Response to Reviewer Comments
1.Dear Prof. XXXX,Thank you very much for your letter and the comments from the referees about our paper submitted to XXXX (MS Number XXXX).We have checked the manuscript and revised it according to the comments. We submit here the revised manuscript as well as a list of changes.If you have any question about this paper, please don’t hesitate to let me know.Sincerely yours,Dr. XXXXResponse to Reviewer 1:Thanks for your comments on our paper. We have revised our paper according to your comments:1. XXXXXXX2. XXXXXXX2.Dear Professor ***,Re: An *** Rotating Rigid-flexible Coupled System (No.: JSV-D-06-***)by ***Many thanks for your email of 24 Jun 2006, regarding the revision and advice of the above paper in JSV. Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive. We have learned much from it.After carefully studying the reviewer’ comments and your advice, we have made corresponding changes to the paper. Our response of the comments is enclosed.If you need any other information, please contact me immediately by email. My email account is ***, and Tel.is ***, and Fax is +***.Yours sincerely,Detailed response to reviewer’s comments and Asian Editor’s adviceOverall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive. We have learned much from it. Although the reviewer’s comments are generally positive, we have carefully proofread the manuscript and edit it as following.(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)Besides the above changes, we have corrected some expression errors.Thank you very much for the excellent and professional revision of our manuscript.3.The manuscript is revised submission (×××-××××) with new line and page numbers in the text, some grammar and spelling errors had also been corrected. Furthermore, the relevant regulations had been made in the original manuscript according to the comments of reviewers, and the major revised portions were marked in red bold. We also responded point by point to each reviewer comments as listed below, along with a clear indication of the location of the revision.Hope these will make it more acceptable for publication.List of Major Changes:1).........2).........3).........Response to Reviewers:1).........2).........3).........Response to Reviewer XXWe very much appreciate the careful reading of our manuscript and valuable suggestions of the reviewer. We have carefully considered the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. The comments can be summarized as follows:1) XX2) XXDetailed responses1) XX2) XX4.Dear editor XXWe have received the comments on our manuscript entitled “XX” by XX. According to t he comments of the reviewers, we have revised our manuscript. The revised manuscript and the detailed responses to the comments of the one reviewer are attached.Sincerely yours,XX5.Response to Reviewer AReviewer A very kindly contacted me directly, and revealed himself to be Professor Dr. Hans-Georg Geissler of the University of Leipzig. I wrote him a general response to both reviews in January 2000, followed by these responses to specific points, both his own, and those of the other reviewer .Response to Specific PointsWhat follows is a brief and cursory discussion of the various issues raised by yourself and the other reviewer. If you should revise your judgment of the validity of the theory, these points will be addressed at greater length in a new version of the paper that I would resubmit to Psychological Review.Response to Specific Points- Reviewer A:In part (1) of your critique the major complaint is that no theory is presented, which was discussed above. You continue "Regrettably, not much attention is drawn to specificdifferences between the chosen examples that would be necessary to pinpoint specificities of perception more precisely", and "if perceptual systems, as suggested, hler (Kindeed act on the basis of HR, there must be many more specific constraints involved to ensure special `veridicality' properties of the perceptual outcome", and "the difficult analytic problems of concrete modeling of perception are not even touched". The model as presented is not a model of vision or audition or any other particular modality, but is a general model to confront the alternative neural receptive field paradigm, although examples from visual perception are used to exemplify the principles discussed. The more specific visual model was submitted elsewhere, in the Orientational Harmonic model, where I showed how harmonic resonance accounts for specific visual illusory effects. As discussed above, the attempt here is to propose a general principle of neurocomputation, rather than a specific model of visual, auditory, or any other specific sensory modality. Again, what I am proposing is a paradigm rather than a theory, i.e. an alternative principle of neurocomputation with specific and unique properties, as an alternative to the neuron doctrine paradigm of the spatial receptive field. If this paper is eventually accepted for publication, then I will resubmit my papers on visual illusory phenomena, referring to this paper to justify the use of the unconventional harmonic resonance mechanism.In part (2) (a) of your critique you say "it is not clarified whether the postulated properties of Gestalts actually follow from this definition or partly derive from additional constraints." and "I doubt that any of the reviewed examples for HR can treat just the case of hler: (1961, p. 7) "Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague." Wolfgang Kthe dog cited to demonstrate `emergence'. For this a hierarchy relation is needed." The principle of emergence in Gestalt theory is a very difficult concept to express in unambiguous terms, and the dog picture was presented to illustrate this rather elusive concept with a concrete example. I do not suggest that HR as proposed in this paper can address the dog picture as such, since this is specifically a visual problem, and the HR model as presented is not a visual model. Rather, I propose that the feature detection paradigm cannot in principle handle this kind of ambiguity, because the local features do not individually contain the information necessary to distinguish significant from insignificant edges. The solution of the HR approach to visual ambiguity is explained in the paper in the section on "Recognition by Reification" (p. 15-17) in which I propose that recognition is not simply a matter of the identification of features in the input, i.e. by the "lighting up" of a higher level feature node, but it involves a simultaneous abstraction and reification, in which the higher level feature node reifies its particular pattern back at the input level, modulated by the exact pattern of the input. I appeal to the reader to see the reified form of the dog as perceived edges and surfaces that are not present in the input stimulus, as evidence for this reification in perception, which appears at the same time that the recognition occurs. The remarkable property of this reification is that the dog appears not as an image of a canonical, or prototypical dog, but as a dog percept that is warped to the exact posture and configuration allowed by the input, as observed in the subjective experience of the dog picture. This explanation is subject to your criticism in your general comments, that "the author demonstrates more insight than explicitly stated in assumptions and drawn conclusions". I canonly say that, in Kuhn's words, sometimes it is only personal and inarticulate aesthetic considerations that can be used to make the case.In the words of Wolfgang K?hler: (1961, p. 7)"Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague."Wolfgang K?hler (K?hler 1923 p. 64)"Natural sciences continually advance explanatory hyptotheses, which cannot be verified by direct observation at the time when they are formed nor for a long time thereafter. Of such a kind were Ampere's theory of magnetism, the kinetic theory of gases, the electronic theory, the hypothesis of atomic disinte gra……….., Ph.D. ProfessorLaboratory of Plant Nutrition andEcological Environment Research,Huazhong Agricultural University,Wuhan, 430070, P.R.ChinaE-mail: .....................Jun 10, 2009RE: HAZMAT-D-09-00655Dear Editor,We would like to thank the editor for giving us a chance to resubmit the paper, and also thank the reviewers for giving us constructive suggestions which would help us both in English and in depth to improve the quality of the paper. Here we submit a ne w version of our manuscript with the title “………………………”, which has been modified according to the reviewers’ suggestions. Efforts were also made to correct the mistakes and improve the English of the manuscript. We mark all the changes in red in the revised manuscript.Sincerely yours,……………….., Ph.D. Professor------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The following is a point-to-point response to the two reviewers’ comments.Reviewer #1:General comments:Reviewer #1: The paper presents an interesting experimental investigation to assess the photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene plastic with goethite under UV irradiation. The research work is clearly presented but the conclusions, the introduction and other parts of the paper relate the results obtained with unjustified claims about the impact of the work. In addition, the background information provided in the introduction part needs significant enrichment. In particular: Answer: Thank you for the comments on the paper. We have revised the manuscript as suggested since we consider that some sentences or descriptions in the Conclusion part are not so accurate based on the results.Page 3, line 46: recycling is not available…Even though a large amount of agricultural plastic waste in burnt or buried in the fields, some quantities of specific categories of good quality agricultural plastic waste are recycled in several countries while research efforts and projects are in progress to improve the corresponding percentage. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.Answer:Yes. Your opinions inspired us and we revised the manuscript accordingly. In the revised paper, the sentence “Recycling is not available for economy,” was changed to “In order to reduce costs, the thickness of application agriculture films in some regions in China is less than 0.005 mm result in diffcult to recycle, And because the process of recycling is expensive and time-consuming, only a small percentage of the agricultural plastic waste is currently recycled at the end of cultivation in China [4]”(Page 3 line 49-52).Page 3, line 76: biodegradable and photodegradable….There are developments in the area of biodegradable materials that indicate the opposite. Concerning photodegradable materials, they are not considered to represent a solution as they have not been proven to be biodegradable. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.Answer: Thank you for reminding us the improper description on the study. We have the improper parts revised accordingly and hope that this new manuscript will be convincing ( Page 3 line 52-55).Page 4, line 65: find an eco-friendly….The best eco-friendly disposal for agricultural plastic waste is recycling and fornon-recyclable materials, energy recovery. Degrading materials produced from fossil sources is not an eco-friendly disposal! The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that some of the descriptions in the previous copy were really not so accurate and a little bit arbitrary due to our poor English level and the study on recent literature. After consulting more references, we therefore revised paper to be more reasonable and convincing.Page 4, line 66: to carbon dioxide and water….Conversion of fossil oil based materials into carbon dioxide and water is much worse than converting renewable-based materials into carbon dioxide and waterAnswer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate, due to our poor study on recent literature. The sentence “it is very important to find an eco-friendly disposal of plastic waste where they degrade to carbon dioxide and water under the sunlight irradiation without producing toxic byproducts.” has been deleted.Page 6, line 112: volatile products….Define the products.Answer: We have defined the volatile products in Page 6 line 124-125.Page 9, line 185: eco-friendly disposal….The claims of the authors that this technique is an eco-friendly one are not justified. The conclusions and other parts of the paper need to be rewritten and limit the scope of the presented research work to the technical objectives without deriving unjustified general conclusions and claims about the impact of this work.Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate. The sentence “The development of this kind of composite polymer can lead to an eco-friendly disposal of polymer wastes.” was changed to “The present paper intends to study goethite as photocatalytst for degradating plastic. Further attention could be focused on the application of the technique.” (Page 9 line 192-194).Reviewer #3:1. Title and abstract should indicate that the work has been done with PE-Goethite composite film.Answer: Your suggestion is greatly appreciated. We agree and therefore change the title to: Solid-phase photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene–goethite composite film under UV-light irradiation.2. Please revise the first paragraph of 'Introduction'. It is difficult to understand. In general, the language of the paper should be revisited.Answer: The Introduction part has been rewritten both in contents and in English. We particularly revised some sentences since they are not correct or so confusing.3. Materials and methods - Details of the chemicals to be furnishedAnswer: The r eviewer and editor’s s uggestions have been adopted and the details of the chemicals has been shown in Page 4 line 79-83.4. Characterization are required for PE (Molecular weight, grade) and Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM-EDS and XRD)Answer: The revie wer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the characterization for PE has been shown in Page 4 line 79. The Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM and XRD) has been reported by Liao et al. (2007), We clarify that in the revised manuscript in Page 5 line 91-93.5. A schematic diagram of the experimental set up to be givenAnswer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Fig. 1 in the present paper. The original Fig. 1. was changed to Fig. 2 and Fig. 3.6. Results - A rate equation should be proposed from the time-weight data Answer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the rate equation a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Table. 1in the present paper.7. A few data are required to show the influence of process parameters such as goethite loading, intensity of UV radiation.Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the influence of goethite loading has been shown in Fig. 2 in the present paper. And the influence of intensity of UV radiation has been shown in Fig. 3 in the present paper. The original Fig. 2 was changed to Fig. 4 and The original Fig. 3 was changed to Fig. 5 in the present paper.8. Until other intermediates are isolated, upto Eqn.(7) (line 162) is sufficient. Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and We changed the Eqns as recommended. Eqs. (8)-(12) are deleted and Eqn.(7) was change to “–(CH2CH2)–+ .OH →degradationproducts” (Page 9 line 184).9. Figure 3 and 4: 3 pairs are required, namely (i) Only PE film before and after irradiation, (ii) PE-Goethite film (0.4wt %) - before and after irradiation (iii)PE-Goethite film (1.0 wt %) - before and after irradiation.Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the original Fig. 3 and 4 was changed to Fig .5 in the present paper.10. Point 3 above is also applicable for SEM photographs. Please rearrange and clearly mark the difference between the films before and after irradiation for both SEM and FTIR results.Answer: Thank the reviewer and editor’s for the comments. During the revision of the paper, we did a supplementary experiment got some new SEM photographs, whichhas been shown in Fig. 4 in the present paper. And The FTIR results has been rearranged in Fig.5 in the present paper, respectively.11. It should be clearly mentioned in the conclusion that the degradation was more when goethite loading and intensity of light both were moreAnswer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the conclusions has been changed in Page 9 line 192-198.。
如何回复审稿人意见(Response to Reviews)3
Dear Reviewers,Thank you for your thoughtful, helpful, and most kind review of manuscript 2006/036. Your comments and suggestions have been incorporated as appropriate into the revised draft. Specific revisions are noted below.Reviewer Comment Authors’ ResponseReviewer #1More detail on the method of interviewing participants should be added. Table 1 has been added that specifically notes methods of data collection, instruments used if applicable and any special information related to timing of interviews.Addition of a legend for Table 3 (nowTable 4) would be helpful.This has been added.Elaboration of the implications of the study for health care providers and patients. More implications have been added; however, this is early research, and the full extent of the implications is not completely known at this time.Addition of more specific directionsfor future research.These have been added in the conclusions section, Reviewer #2Make an explicit statement that the approach is somewhat atheoretical and data driven. This has been added under data analysis, as well as in the abstract.Potential problem of implying that clusters may enhance identification of AMI for the lay public and professionals related to fact that only persons with diagnosed AMI were studied. We agree that all presentations for AMI may not be represented in this study. We have noted that as a limitation. Assessing the symptoms of persons who have not been diagnosed, however, would be very challenging if not impossible. Hopefully, once we identify some of the clusters, they will lead us to presentations of persons who do not get diagnosed for a variety of different reasons.The results of this study must be considered provisional hypothesis and in need of subsequent support in independent and ideally prospective samples. We agree and plan to do this. We have noted that more study leading to validation of these findings is needed.Some of the data analysis could be presented more clearly. We hope that this revision presents the steps in data analysis more clearly.Methodological limitations:1. More about source studies. Table 2 has been added with more detailed information on the source studies. This includes year of publication (if applicable), inclusion criteria, etc. In addition, a statement was added in the text stating that all data were collected after 1990. Most studies used ECG and serum markers for subject identification, and this is indicated. Subjects with NSTEMI were included. All source studies that have been published are included inthe reference list.2. Questions on all symptoms in all studies. Not all symptoms were assessed in all studies. This is a limitation of secondary data analysis. The specific number of persons assessed for each symptom is noted in Table 3, and this is noted in the text.3. Reorder symptoms in Table 2 inorder of occurrence.This has been done.4. Weak justification for choosing5 rather than6 clusters. This has been addressed in the text. Thank you for pointing out the Loken reference. We agree that the BIC is a conservative approach to assessing model fit and have noted this in the manuscript. However, Loken also states that the best method for assessing fit remains controversial. Therefore, we used all of the statistics available and related them to form our conclusion. We hope that we have stated this point clearly.5. Footnoting of abbreviations inTable 3 (now Table 4) and moreexplanatory caption.This has been added, thank you for the suggestion.Add a table summarizing symptoms for each cluster. Thank you for this excellent suggestion. Table 6 has been added.Strengths and Limitations1. Statement related togeneralizability of findings.This statement has been removed.2. Limitation related to sample only consisting of cases of confirmed AMI. A statement has been added related to this limitation. Also the inclusion criteria (troponin/CK-MB) for the source studies have been added in Table 6.Study by Ryan and Zerwic in background. This study assessed perceptions of AMI symptoms, not actual AMI symptoms that were experienced. The point of the study was to examine whether persons were able to identify symptom clusters. We did not add more details of the results of this study because we do not think that they really compare to the present analysis.Editorial suggestions. These have been corrected. Thank you for pickingthem up.Thank you again for your kind and thoughtful comments. We hope that the revision addresses your concerns.。
Detailed Response to Reviewers-检测控制
Reviewer #1: Comments to the authors:?The paper addresses the Fuzzy-Adaptive method for uncertain nonlinear systems. The idea proposed by authors is of interest. However, the authors must also take into consideration the ?following remarks:本文添加了对于非线性系统的模糊自适应方法,作者提出的该思想是有意义的,但是作者需将如下的备注考虑在内:1- In all Sigma (summations), this is better that the authors change the main sigma subscript variable for avoiding from confusing with other subscripts. for example in definitions after the ?equ. (1).? ?1.在所有的求和 中,如果作者把主要变量的下标进行修改,以避免其与其他下标混淆,其效果将会更好,比如在定义的例题之后,或者方程(1).已经重新统一下标2- The variable "B_i" in equation (2) did not defined before or after the equation.? ?2.在方程(2)前后,作者并没有就该方程中的变量B i进行定义根据后面的要求,此段已经删除3- I think that the variable u_i(t) is correct instead u(t) in equ. (2).? ? 3.我认为变量代替方程(2)中的u(t)而写作u i(t)是正确的根据后面的要求,此段已经删除4- The results of substitution (3) in (1) or equation (4) is not correct, I think that "{" and "}" are ?used incorrectly in equ. (1).? ?4. 在方程(1)或(4)中用来(3)替代是不正确的,我想其中的{" and "}指的是?其在方程(1)中也被不正确的引用了根据后面的要求,此段已经删5- The results of equ. (4) Should be presented in more details for clearness to readers.? ?5.方程(4)中的结果应该为读者提供更多清晰的细节根据后面的要求,此段已经删除6- The variable f^_l and f^_r (or regression equation) should be defined before or after the ?equation (7).? ?6.回归方程里的变量f^_l和f^_r应该在方程(7)前后予以定义已经重新编排符号,重新定义7- After equ. (7), this is better that the definition x^(n)_r transferred to before equation (8) (after ?other definitions).? ?7.在方程(7)之后,在转移到方程(8)之前把x^(n)_r进行定义将会更好(之后或者其他定义)已经重新编排符号,重新定义8- The variable g^_l and g^_r (or regression equation) should be defined before or after the ?equation (9).? ?8. 回归方程里的变量g^_l和g^_r应该在方程(9)前后予以定义已经重新编排符号,重新定义9- In the equation (12) the subscript "i" should be start from 1 instead 2.? ?9.在方程(12)中,下标i应该从1开始而非2已经修改10- The simulation example is good but not enough for showing all characteristics of proposed ?methods. As we know when control gain (g(X)) is constant, the system is less sensitive and the ?control is simpler in proposed nonlinear system.? ?10.仿真实例的提供是好的,但并不能反映所有的论文中提供的方法的特性,众所周知,但我们的控制增益是常数的时候,系统较不敏感,其控制较提供的非线性系统较为简单本文通过对生物模型环状脑动脉问题的仿真,与Type-1 T-S系统比较,Type-2 T-S系统只需选择较少的规则数,隶属度函数的选择无需严格的条件,就能达到更好效果,优越性明显。
最完全的投稿经历
最完全的投稿经历(从投稿到接受),希望对您有用(转载)一直感激在小木虫获得的帮助和资源。
也思忖着为小木虫做点什么。
值第三篇SCI论文将要出版之际,特将其中一篇从投稿到接受的所有细节列出与各位分享。
投的杂志是Polymer (SCI Journal, 2006 IF=2.77),但我觉得所有的杂志都是大同小异。
希望对投稿的虫子有一定的参考价值。
2007/3/4 Submit the manuscript through the online EES (/jpol/)//Cover letter//Dear Editor,Here enclosed is a completely new manuscript entitled "xxxxx", which we wish to be considered. None of the material in the paper has been published or is under consideration for publication elsewhere.In this manusc ript, …………. We believe that this new paper may be also of particular interest to the readers of your journal.Correspondence about the paper should be directed to xx at the following address, phone and fax number, and e-mail address:XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXThanks very much for your attention to our paper.Sincerely yours,The authors******************************************2007/3/4 received a letter ?from jpol@//Submission Confirmation for Polymer//PolymerTitle:Authors:Article Type: Regular ArticleDear, Your submission entitled "xxxxx" has been received by Polymer. You may check on the progress of your paper by logging on to the Elsevier Editorial System as an author. 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Sincerely yours,The authors2007/6/30 received a letter from jpol@//Your PDF has been built and requires approval?//PolymerDear,The PDF for your submission, "xxxxx", is ready for viewing.Please login to the Elsevier Editorial System as an Author to view and approve the PDF of your submission .url: /jpol/Your username is:Your password is:Your submission must be approved in order to complete the submission process and send the manuscript to the Polymer editorial office. Please view the submission before approving it, to be certain that it is free of any errors. 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Responding to Reviewers’ Comments
Responding to Reviewers’Comments on Submitted ArticlesPeter Cummings,MD,MPH;Frederick P.Rivara,MD,MPHFew authors receive any training in how to respond to the comments of editors and re-viewers,although some advice on this topic has been published.1-3In this article,we present our suggestions.The letter from the editor generally comes in one of 4flavors.First,a manuscript may be accepted without any changes.If this happens to you,count yourself lucky;such an editorial response is rare.In our expe-rience,this has happened only once for each of us.Second,the manuscript may be accepted with suggestions for minor re-visions.Again,count your blessings,quickly make the suggested changes (if you can),and return the revised manuscript;hopefully the paper will be accepted.Dif-ficulties typically arise with the next 2cat-egories of response:outright rejection and provisional rejection with the opportu-nity to make major revisions.DEALING WITH REJECTION Getting a letter of outright rejection is pain-ful.We have been there many times.Suc-cessful researchers have to develop a thick hide regarding rejection;do not take it per-sonally.Rejection may not even reflect badly on your manuscript.It just means that for stated or unstated reasons,the edi-tors decided that your paper was not what they wanted.Editors strive to publish ar-ticles that make important new contribu-tions.In some instances,you may be the victim of bad timing;the journal might have just published or accepted a study very similar to yours.You should read any suggestions that you receive.If they can be used to im-prove your manuscript,by all means,makethose changes.If you still feel that your work deserves publication,send it to an-other journal.Do this quickly;delay wastes time,and some papers will eventually grow stale as the data become less relevant.An editor reviewing a manuscript in 2002may be less enthusiastic if all of the data were collected prior to 1996.You presumably did the work in the first place because you thought that it had value.Getting pub-lished requires fortitude about pushing your work.One of us wrote a paper that was rejected by 8journals but was finally published in a ninth.Should you appeal the editor’s deci-sion?We know of colleagues who have done this and prevailed.We have not done this ourselves,however,and suspect that urging the editors of most journals to re-consider is a low-yield strategy.RESPONDING WHEN MAJOR REVISIONS ARE REQUESTED The most common route to final publica-tion is to get a letter from the editor that rejects (or provisionally accepts)the cur-rent version of your paper but offers reconsideration after major revision and a response to reviewer comments.A let-ter like this gets your foot in the door.Now you need to plan a strategy for revising your paper and gaining full acceptance.We suggest that you carefully read all of the comments from reviewers and the editor.Some of these may be critical,and others may even seem ignorant or wrong.Allow yourself a couple of days to grind your teeth and grumble.After you shed any initial irritation,try a second,From the Harborview Injury Prevention and Research Center (Drs Cummings and Rivara),the Department of Epidemiology,School of Public Health and Community Medicine (Drs Cummings and Rivara),and the Department of Pediatrics,School of Medicine (Dr Rivara),University of Washington,Seattle.more dispassionate reading.Then set about crafting a response that is polite,thoughtful,clear,and detailed.It is a good idea to respond promptly.If you let many months go by,the editor will forget what was in your origi-nal manuscript,and you may give the impression that you are not interested in your own work.Be polite.You may be tempted to say that the re-viewer was an ignoramus,but this is not likely to get your paper accepted or to create the impression that you are a thoughtful scientist.Avoid a defensive or confronta-tional tone;you are not in a political debate.The goal is to glean helpful information from the comments,adopt any useful suggestions to improve the paper,and calmly explain your point of view when you disagree.There is no limit on the length of your response.If it takes you10pages to cover each point and explain all of the changes,the editors are willing to read a letter that long.Go through the reviewers’comments in an or-derly,outlined manner.In response to each comment, cut and paste into the letter any substantive changes made to the manuscript.Although this letter of response may be long,you actually ease the editors’job by putting ev-erything they need into one orderly document.Imagine that you have comments from both the edi-tor and reviewers A and B.In your manuscript you wrote,“Study subjects ranged in age from0to10years;27% were0to2years,and41%were2to6years.”Reviewer A wrote,“The description of the age distribution of study subjects was unclear.Were2-year-olds in the first group or the second group?And the2groups add up to only 68%.”Obviously,you meant that68%of the subjects were in the2youngest age categories and that32%were in the oldest group.However,the reviewer was correct in noting the vagueness of your age boundaries.You might respond with something like this:Reviewer A:4.The reviewer was concerned about the lack of clarity in our description of the age distribution of study subjects in the first paragraph of the“Results”section.The reviewer is correct,and we appreciate the chance to make ourselves clearer.We have revised the paper as follows:“Twenty-seven percent of study subjects were younger than2 years,41%were2to5years,and32%were6to10years.”By numbering your responses,first giving the re-viewer’s comment and then giving your answer,you make it easy for the editors and reviewers to follow the details of your response.By restating what you believe was the concern of the reviewer,you force yourself to think care-fully about what the reviewer wrote.This can some-times be illuminating,both for yourself and for the edi-tors.By giving the actual manuscript changes in the response letter,the editor can follow what you have done without searching for the changes in the revised manu-script.Notice that the previous response is polite and ex-presses gratitude.Reviewers are not paid,and they have other things to do in addition to reviewing manuscripts. If they offer you ways to improve your paper,thank them. Even though the hypothetical manuscript’s original word-ing is nearly as clear as the revision,the response con-veys the sense that you are happy to adopt reasonable suggestions.Some journals ask that you highlight changes on one copy of the returned manuscript.This can be done us-ing your word-processing software or by highlighting the changes with a marker.This procedure often creates a long manuscript that is hard to read,and fails to clearly juxtapose the reviewers’comments with your changes. Detailing the responses in a cover letter makes the whole process easier.Change and modify where it makes sense.You are not required to make every suggested change,but you do need to address all of the comments.If you reject a suggestion,the editor will want a good reason.Respond-ing at length to the reviewer and editor about their con-cerns without making changes in the manuscript may be appropriate for some comments.Rejecting a suggestion just because you prefer it your way is not good enough. For example,if a reviewer says that Figure2should be cut and the information placed in a table,you should do this even if you think that the use of a figure is clearer or more dramatic.Reviewers do not always agree with each other,and then you must make a choice.Decide which suggestion seems more valid,note your change in your response let-ter to that reviewer,and note in your response to the other reviewer that you received conflicting advice and made what you hope is the best choice.When you feel that your analytic method or choice of wording is superior to that suggested by the reviewer, lay out your argument.Remember,it is your name that will go on the article.If a letter to the editor criticizes something in your study,it will not be an acceptable de-fense to say that what you wrote or did was suggested by an anonymous reviewer.In the end,you will have to take responsibility for your work.Bear in mind that even a carefully crafted response letter and extensively revised manuscript may not be ac-cepted.Although the journal is giving you a second chance,the editors are under no obligation to publish the revised paper.If the ultimate decision is rejection, take heart that the journal was interested enough to re-view2versions of your work.The revised version will usually be an improvement,and you can quickly sub-mit elsewhere.CUTTING TEXTMost journals,including Archives of Pediatrics&Adoles-cent Medicine,state the typical length for manuscripts in their instructions to authors.It is not uncommon for the editor to note that whereas your manuscript is4000words, a length of3000words is more suitable from the jour-nal’s point of view.You may receive such advice with ei-ther an invitation to resubmit or an acceptance that asks for minor changes.You should follow this advice;the edi-tor is trying to balance priorities and believes that your pa-per can be shorter.If you want a final acceptance,you will have to trim.Cutting text with acceptance in sight does not need to be painful.Often you can find entire sen-tences that can go,or even a paragraph.Then start look-ing at each word within a sentence.We have had to do this many times with our own work.One of us had a paper accepted by a major jour-nal.Although the original draft was4000words,we knew that the journal would not accept this length,so we trimmed it to2500.To our dismay,the editors said that they would accept the paper if it were cut to1500words! At first this seemed impossible,but the final version was compressed to1650words and was actually a better paper.Sometimes there is a conflict between reviewer sug-gestions and the need to trim the manuscript.If the edi-tor tells you to cut1000words and a reviewer asks for a new analysis or discussion that might add500words,your best option may be to offer to do what the reviewer sug-gested but point out that you did not follow the sugges-tion in the interest of saving space.THE ROLE OF REVIEWSAs authors,we sometimes succumb to the feeling that reviewer comments are simply a barrier that we must breach to get our obviously brilliant work published. As editors,however,we appreciate that reviewers are donating their time to improve our manuscripts.A care-ful review is usually our last defense against a faulty analy-sis,incorrect reasoning,or muddled language.Review-ers read our papers with a fresh eye and offer us the chance to improve our work;we,not the reviewers,will get the credit for those improvements.Although responding to reviews may be burdensome,the chore is usually well worth the effort.Corresponding author:Peter Cummings,MD,MPH,Har-borview Injury Prevention and Research Center,325Ninth Ave,Box359960,Seattle,WA98104-2499(e-mail: peterc@).1.Huth EJ.Writing and Publishing in Medicine.3rd ed.Baltimore,Md:LippincottWilliams&Wilkins;1999.2.Browner WS.Publishing and Presenting Clinical Research.Baltimore,Md:Lip-pincott Williams&Wilkins;1999.3.Samet JM.Dear author:advice from a retiring editor.Am J Epidemiol.1999;150:433-436.2001Domestic Violence and Child Abuse Sourcebook,edited by Helene Henderson,Detroit,Mich,Omnigraphics Inc,2001.Cool Parents,Drug-Free Kids:A Family Survival Guide,by Robert H.Coombs,PhD,Boston,Mass,Allyn and Bacon,2002.Introduction to Podopediatrics,edited by Peter Thomson,BSc,DpodM,MChS and Russel G.Volpe,DPM,Edinburgh,Scot-land,Churchill Livingstone,2001.On Call Pediatrics,2nd ed,by David A.Lewis,MD,FAAP,FACC,and James J.Nocton,MD,FAAP,Philadelphia,Pa,WB Saunders Co,2001.Early Diagnosis and Interventional Therapy in Cerebral Palsy:An Interdisciplinary Age-Focused Approach,3rd ed,edited by Alfred L.Scherzer,New York,NY,Marcel Dekker Inc,2001.You and Leukemia:A Day at a Time,2nd ed,by Lynn S.Baker,MD,Philadelphia,Pa,WB Saunders Co,2002.Parenting Well When You’re Depressed:A Complete Resource for Maintaining a Healthy Family,by Joanne Nicholson,PhD, Alexis D.Henry,ScD,Jonathan C.Clayfield,MA,and Susan M.Phillips,Oakland,Calif,New Harbinger Publications,2001.。
Response to reviewers
Dear Editor,We are so appreciated for your letter on our manuscript (NANO-D-13-00099), entitled a new function of graphene oxide emerge: inactivating phytopathogenic bacterium Xanthomonas oryzae pv.oryzae. We are also extremely greatful to the reviewer s’ comments on our manuscript and carefully considered every comment, and made cautious revision accordingly. Based on their suggestions, we have answered the questions in detail one by one. If you have any other questions about this paper, I would quite appreciate it if you could let me know them in the earliest possible time. Most sincerely,Heyou HanJuly 12, 2012Additive listTo reviewer #1:Comment 1: Authors need to show the reduction property between GO and rgo through TEM and Raman spectroscopy.Answer: Thanks for your very thoughtful suggestion. We have showed and discussed the characteristic of GO and rGO through TEM and Raman spectroscopy. The image of TEM and Raman spectroscopy are combined to the UV and FT-IR spectra of GO and rGO, which is named Fig. 2 in the revised manuscript.Comment 2: Always the bacterail growth need to show in log.Answer: Thanks for your very thoughtful suggestion. The bacterial growth has been changed and showed in log.To reviewer #2:Comment 1:Graphene sheets may wrap cells causing cell death. The authors may also consider this mechanism in their discussion part.Lateral Dimension Dependent Antibacterial Activity of Graphene Oxide Sheets, Langmuir, 2012, 28, 12364−12372Answer: Thanks very much for your suggestion. I am sorry that I did not discuss the antibacterial mechanism clearly. We have read the reference carefully which you suggested me and rethink our results. The suggested mechanism have considered in the Results and Discussions part, referring to the following literatures: “Liu SB, Hu M, Zeng TH, Wu R, Jiang RR, Wei J, Wang L, Kong J, Chen Y (2012) Lateral dimension dependent antibacterial activity of graphene oxide sheets. Langmuir 28: 12364−12372” and “Liu SB, Zeng TH, Hofmann M, Burcombe E, Wei J, Jiang RR, Kong J, Chen Y (2011) Antibacterial activity of graphite, graphite oxide, graphene oxide, and reduced graphene oxide: membrane and oxidative stress. ACS Nano 5:6971–6980”.这块你就写已经把讨论放在修改手稿中Comment 2: Figure 6 is very difficult to read. The authors may consider adjusting the contract of different colors.Answer:Thank you for your comments. We have adjusted the contrast of differentcolors in Figure 6 of original manuscript to make the different colors in the image have a sharp contrast. We think the modification can make the picture read as clearly as possible.To reviewer #4:Comment 1: The English should be improved to make the description more clear and concise. Some sentences are incomplete and some type mistakes exist in the manuscript. An incomplete sentence example: "A drop of with a final concentration of 10 uM was added...(page 6, line 22)".Answer:Thank you for your comments. The manuscript has been thoroughly checked and revised the mistakes with the help of a native speaker and an English teacher.Comment 2: The last paragraph in the Introdution looks more like an Abstract because it mainly describes the experiment methods and the results other than the aims and the importance of the research. Additionally, the last two paragraphs in the Results and Discussions have no close relations with experimetal data. They are general description, and it is better to combine them into the Introduction or the Conclusition.Answer: Thanks for your very thoughtful suggestion. We have revised the section of introduction and the conclusion in the manuscript. The last two paragraphs in the Results and Discussions were reorganized and combine them into the Introduction or the Conclusition.Comment 3: It is difficult for me to understand why rGO possessed higher oxidative capacity than GO (page 13 and Figure 9a) because rGO is reduced from GO by a reducing agent. 这块你理解透了没?他问为什么RGO比GO具有强的氧化性。
如何回复审稿人意见(Response-to-Reviews)
Dear Editor,We have studied the valuable comments from you, the assistant editor and reviewers carefully, and tried our best to revise the manuscript. The point to point responds to the reviewer’s comments are listed as following:Responds to the rev iewer’s comments:Reviewer 1Comment 1: in page 3, line 40, we fed rats..." changed to rats were fed with... Response: According to the reviewer’s comment, we have corrected the sentence. Furthermore, we have had the manuscript polished with a professional assistance in writing.Comment 2:page 25. The style of reference 40 is not right (using initials for the first names). Since this paper has been published, the volume and page Nos should be provided.Response: Thank you for your careful work. We have added the volume and page numbers for reference 40.Reviewer 2Comment: I would like to thank the authors for their efforts in addressing the criticisms with additional experiments. The one criticism that they did not address was relating to energy expenditure as the reason that the animals on the low calcium diet gained more weight. While I understand that performing this experiment will not affect the conclusion of this manuscript, I do believe that this point could be discussed in the Discussion section.Response: Thank you for your valuable advice. Based on the previous revision, we further address the relationship between low calcium diet and energy expenditure in the section of discussion according to your thoughtful comments.Reviewer 3Comment 1: In the text you often write: “As previously described”. Unless that paper is from your lab or one of the method paper co-authors is on the present MS this is not quite proper since the statement infers method development from your lab. There are numerous instances like that in the methods section; these should all be changed “according to those described by…..”Response: We are sorry for this language mistake. We have carefully corrected this phrase throughout the manuscript according to your comment.Comment 2: There are still some wording, sentence structure and grammatical issues even in this basically well put together MS. For example, while authors may have been excited about the data you cannot start a sentence with “Excitedly” in line 418 or “Whatever” in line 395.Response: Thank you very much to point out the sentence structure and grammatical issues in our manuscript. According to the comments from you and the editors, we polished the manuscript with a professional assistance in writing, conscientiously.Comment 3:In my view a big omission in this work is ignoring the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues. For example all animals consumed the same amount of feed but we had extra fat storage in the low Ca diet groups. So where did the extra energy go? Zemel et al (citation 34) in similar work indicate that increased thermogenesis on the high Ca diet explains the dissipation of dietary energy. Further even though Zemel et al (#34) indicated lipogenesis was enhanced in the low Ca diets that was in 2000 and you should have monitored expression of FAS and UCP either as mRNA abundance or actual FAS/UCP changes via proteomics or blotting techniques. In any case these controls are missing here and not emphasized in the MS. Casual reading of this paper would lead to the conclusion that the dietary Ca effect on fat deposition is strictly a function of increased or decreased lipolysis. While lipolysis appears to be a major player, lipogenesis and thermogenesis cannot be ignored for completeness. In Fig 8 you also show a decline in cAMP for the low Ca diet. Well beta agonists or cAMP enhancers regulate transcription of adipose and liver FAS (in rats (J Biol Chem 271:2307, 1996) and recently with large animal models (Hausman et al J Animal Science 87:1218, 2009 and Halsey et al J Animal Science 89: 1011, 2011). In additioncAMP levels could have been monitored. I really do not like the last sentence in the Abstract line 47-50 where you state that “low calcium diet-induced increase in fat mass was due to enhanced lipogenesis mediated by an upregulated CaSR signaling pathway” Your results here show no such thing, this is a completely false statement based on data herein. Correct. You show that high Ca diets enhance lipolysis and low Ca diets are antilipolytic. You did not monitor lipid anabolism here at all. See also line 255-257 and lines 333-335 of your MS. Response: Thank you for your valuable and thoughtful comments. As you suggested that the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues should be monitored. We really agree with your viewpoints. In the present study, we did find that low calcium diet increased the mRNA level of fatty acid synthase (FAS) in white adipose tissue. Furthermore, the FAS mRNA level were also increased in adipocytes after treatment with 1,25-(OH)2D3in in-vitro experiments. However, the increased FAS mRNA levels were not affected by preventing either the nuclear vitamin D receptor (nVDR) or calcium-sensing receptor (CaSR), suggesting that FAS might not be involved in the CaSR pathway. In addition, we thought that FAS played its role in fatty acid synthesis mainly in liver previously. Besides, the manuscript was required to restrict number of total words and our previous focus was on the antilolytic role of CaSR in the process of fat accumulation. So we ignored to provide the data of FAS mRNA levels in the submitted manuscript. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the mRNA levels according to your helpful suggestion.We have reported the effects of dietary calcium on UCP2 mRNA levels in adipose tissue and UCP3 in skeletal muscle in our previous studies (1, 2). Thus, we believed that low calcium diet led to decreased thermogenesis in the present study. It was a pity that we did not measure the rat core temperature in those studies. The UCP2 mRNA levels in adipocytes were observed to be decreased after treatment of 1,25-(OH)2D3. This effect was prevented by using nVDR CaSR gene silencing but not by CaSR gene knockdown, suggesting that UCP2 was not involved in CaSR pathways. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the UCP2 results.Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. We are very sorry for our fault statement in the abstract. We have corrected it in the new manuscript.Comment 4: A point that does not emerge well from the discussion is how low Ca intakes result in higher intracellular [Ca] concentrations and really the effects on fatdeposition in the cells in many ways are due to an increased intracellular Ca level mediated via CaSR expression increases and the effect of VitD3 on nVDR show in Fig 8. The authors must remind readers that Ca levels in the blood are under hormonal regulation (Calcitonin, PTH and VitD3). Thus when diets low in Ca are consumed and blood Ca decline, PTH and VitD3 are called upon to mobilize bone Ca to replenish the blood Ca. Then coupled with an increase in CaSR more Ca actually is found in AT despite the fact that many would think the AT Ca level should decline. The reason is that tissue/circulating Ca levels are not diet depended but regulated. The vast bone stores of Ca will provide ample Ca here especially during a study of this length. While authors address these issues maybe could be presented in a less complicated discussion.Response:Thank you for your instructive suggestions. We are sorry for not describing the effect of low calcium diet on intracellular calcium concentrations mediated by CaSR, as well as the impact of hormone regulation on serum calcium levels clearly. According to your helpful advice, we have rewritten these two parts in the section of discussion. Thank you again.Comment 5: Not all citations are in JN styleResponse: We have careful recheck and corrected the style of the citations according to the requirement of JN.Comment 6: Abstract conclusion differs from lines 255-257 and 333-335; WHY? Response: Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. The conclusion from lines 255-257 is about the effect of low calcium diet on serum levels of free fatty acids (FFAs) and lipids. We considered FFA and glycerol as indicators of TG hydrolysis in adipose tissue. The low calcium diet caused decreased serum FFA and glycerol levels without influencing lipoprotein lipase (LPL) activity, so we thought the lipolytic effect of adipose tissue to be suppressed by low calcium diet. The conclusion from lines 333-335 was about the effect of 1,25-(OH)2D3 whose levels were increased under low calcium conditions on lipolysis. We used the glycerol level as the indicator of TG hydrolysis in adipocytes. Both the in vivo and in vitro experiments showed low calcium status caused an antilipolytic effect.Comment 7: Line 150-153. The qRT-PCR methodology is not at all understandable as you cite a Texas A&M published paper. This is completely insufficient with the newly established standards on gene expression via qRT-PCR. There is no mention of efficiencies of amplifications in these data nor how the use of the reference gene was established etc. I think Pfaffl and Bustin have recently written an article on this; please totally revise 150-153 in line with what you did and applying the new standards.Response: Thank you very much. Because the JN restricts the number of total words of manuscript, we cited the Texas A&M published paper. In the newly submitted manuscript, we describe the detailed protocols in our lab.Comment 8:Line 179 on Not clear as in sentences talk about different AT cell sources etc..revise.Response: We are sorry for not addressing the adipose tissue cell sources clearly. We have rewritten the methods.Comment 9: Any previous documentable work with siRNA?Response: Yes, we have documentable work with siRNA in our research team. The results were published in the journal of Biochem Biophys Res Commun (3).Comment 10: Line 214.. Cultured primary rat adipocytes and SW872 adipocytes ……Response: Thank you very much. According to your comment, we have had the manuscript polished and corrected the mistakes.。
pubmed的文章类型review -回复
pubmed的文章类型review -回复题目:[Pubmed的文章类型Review]摘要:在科学研究中,Pubmed是一个被广泛使用的数据库,它在全球范围内收录了大量的生物医学文献。
为了更好地利用这一强大资源,本文将详细解释不同类型的文章在Pubmed中的意义和特点,包括综述性文章、系统综述和Meta分析以及荟萃分析。
一、综述性文章(Review Articles)综述性文章是在特定领域进行过广泛调查和研究的作者总结相关文献的文档。
这种类型的文章旨在提供一个对该领域的深入了解,帮助研究人员理解该领域的最新进展和趋势。
综述性文章不同于原始研究论文,它们不依赖于实验数据,而是聚焦于已有文献的分析和总结。
综述性文章对于那些希望了解领域最新动态或有志于从事该领域研究的人来说是一种必不可少的资源。
在Pubmed中搜索综述性文章时,可以在“文章类型”中选择“Review”进行专门限定。
二、系统综述和Meta分析(Systematic Reviews and Meta-analysis)系统综述是一种结构化的摘要分析文章,旨在总结关于特定问题的各种研究中得出的证据。
相对于传统综述性文章,系统综述更注重方法的创新和系统性的研究设计。
系统综述的关键是有明确的研究目标和标准,将多个独立研究的结果进行比较、分析和合并。
这种类型的文章可以帮助提供权威的结论和指导,对于制定政策和指导临床实践非常重要。
而在系统综述的基础上,借助Meta分析的方法可以对研究结果进行统计分析和综合,进一步增强证据的可信度和信息的权威性。
系统综述和Meta分析是为团队研究和证据导向的医学提供支持的关键方法。
三、荟萃分析(Cochrane Reviews)荟萃分析是基于Cochrane合作组织的严格方法和高质量标准,对特定主题领域的研究进行综合和分析的一种形式。
荟萃分析强调可靠的证据来源,通过拟议的方法和标准,筛选、纳入和合并各种研究的结果,以评估干预措施的效果。
JBI_Critical_Appraisal-Checklist_for_Systematic_Reviews
The Joanna Briggs InstituteIntroductionThe Joanna Briggs Institute (JBI) is an international, membership based research and development organization within the Faculty of Health Sciences at the University of Adelaide. The Institute specializes in promoting and supporting evidence-based healthcare by providing access to resources for professionals in nursing, midwifery, medicine, and allied health. With over 80 collaborating centres and entities, servicing over 90 countries, the Institute is a recognized global leader in evidence-based healthcare.JBI Systematic ReviewsThe core of evidence synthesis is the systematic review of literature of a particular intervention, condition or issue. The systematic review is essentially an analysis of the available literature (that is, evidence) and a judgment of the effectiveness or otherwise of a practice, involving a series of complex steps. The JBI takes a particular view on what counts as evidence and the methods utilized to synthesize those different types of evidence. In line with this broader view of evidence, the Institute has developed theories, methodologies and rigorous processes for the critical appraisal and synthesis of these diverse forms of evidence in order to aid in clinical decision-making in health care. There now exists JBI guidance for conducting reviews of effectiveness research, qualitative research, prevalence/incidence, etiology/risk, economic evaluations, text/opinion, diagnostic test accuracy, mixed-methods, umbrella reviews and scoping reviews. Further information regarding JBI systematic reviews can be found in the JBI Reviewer’s Manual on our website.JBI Critical Appraisal ToolsAll systematic reviews incorporate a process of critique or appraisal of the research evidence. The purpose of this appraisal is to assess the methodological quality of a study and to determine the extent to which a study has addressed the possibility of bias in its design, conduct and analysis. All papers selected for inclusion in the systematic review (that is –those that meet the inclusion criteria described in the protocol) need to be subjected to rigorous appraisal by two critical appraisers. The results of this appraisal can then be used to inform synthesis and interpretation of the results of the study. JBI Critical appraisal tools have been developed by the JBI and collaborators and approved by the JBI Scientific Committee following extensive peer review. Although designed for use in systematic reviews, JBI critical appraisal tools can also be used when creating Critically Appraised Topics (CAT), in journal clubs and as an educational tool.JBI Critical Appraisal Checklist for Systematic Reviewsand Research SynthesesReviewer DateAuthor Year Record NumberYes No UnclearNot applicable1.Is the review question clearly and explicitly stated? □□□□2.Were the inclusion criteria appropriate for the reviewquestion? □□□□3.Was the search strategy appropriate? □□□□4.Were the sources and resources used to search forstudies adequate? □□□□5.Were the criteria for appraising studies appropriate? □□□□6.Was critical appraisal conducted by two or morereviewers independently? □□□□7.Were there methods to minimize errors in dataextraction? □□□□8.Were the methods used to combine studies appropriate? □□□□9.Was the likelihood of publication bias assessed? □□□□10.Were recommendations for policy and/or practicesupported by the reported data? □□□□11.Were the specific directives for new researchappropriate? □□□□ Overall appraisal: Include □Exclude □Seek further info □Comments (Including reason for exclusion)JBI Critical Appraisal Checklist for Systematic Reviewsand Research SynthesesHow to cite:Aromataris, E., Fernandez, R., Godfrey, C., Holly, C., Kahlil, H. & Tungpunkom, P. Summarizing systematic reviews: methodological development, conduct and reporting of an Umbrella review approach Int J Evid Based Healthc. 2015,13(3):132-40.When conducting an umbrella review using the JBI method, the critical appraisal instrument for Systematic Reviews should be used.The primary and secondary reviewer should discuss each item in the appraisal instrument for each study included in their review. In particular, discussions should focus on what is considered acceptable to the aims of the review in terms of the specific study characteristics. When appraising systematic reviews this discussion may include issues such as what represents an adequate search strategy or appropriate methods of synthesis. The reviewers should be clear on what constitutes acceptable levels of information to allocate a positive appraisal compared with a negative, or response of “unclear”. This discussion should ideally take place before the reviewers independently conduct the appraisal.Within umbrella reviews, quantitative or qualitative systematic reviews may be incorporated, as well as meta-analyses of existing research. There are 11 questions to guide the appraisal of systematic reviews or meta-analyses. Each question should be answered as “yes”, “no”, or “unclear”. Not applicable “NA” is also provided as an option and may be appropriate in rare instances.1. Is the review question clearly and explicitly stated?The review question is an essential step in the systematic review process. A well-articulated question defines the scope of the review and aids in the development of the search strategy to locate the relevant evidence. An explicitly stated question, formulated around its PICO (Population, Intervention, Comparator, Outcome) elements aids both the review team in the conduct of the review and the reader in determining if they review has achieved its objectives.Ideally the review question should be articulated in a published protocol; however this will not always be the case with many reviews that are located.2.Were the inclusion criteria appropriate for the review question?The inclusion criteria should be identifiable from, and match the review question. The necessary elements of the PICO should be explicit and clearly defined. The inclusion criteria should be detailed and the included reviews should clearly be eligible when matched against the stated inclusion criteria. Appraisers of meta-analyses will find that inclusion criteria may include criteria around the ability to conduct statistical analyses which would not be the norm for a systematic review. The types of included studies should be relevant to the review question, for example, an umbrella review aiming to summarize a range of effective non-pharmacological interventions for aggressive behaviors amongst elderly patients with dementia will limit itself to including systematic reviews and meta-analyses that synthesize quantitative studies assessing the various interventions; qualitative or economic reviews would not be included.3.Was the search strategy appropriate?A systematic review should provide evidence of the search strategy that has been used tolocate the evidence. This may be found in the methods section of the review report in some cases, or as an appendix that may be provided as supplementary information to the review publication. A systematic review should present a clear search strategy that addresses each of the identifiable PICO components of the review question. Some reviews may also provide a description of the approach to searching and how the terms that were ultimately used were derived, though due to limits on word counts in journals this may be more the norm in online only publications. There should be evidence of logical and relevant keywords and terms and also evidence that Subject Headings and Indexing terms have been used in the conduct of the search. Limits on the search should also be considered and their potential impact; for example, if a date limit was used, was this appropriate and/or justified? If only English language studies were included, will such a language bias have an impact on the review? The response to these considerations will depend, in part, on the review question.4.Were the sources and resources used to search for studies adequate?A syst ematic review should attempt to identify “all” the available evidence and as such thereshould be evidence of a comprehensive search strategy. Multiple electronic databases should be searched including major bibliographic citation databases such as MEDLINE and CINAHL.Ideally, other databases that are relevant to the review question should also be searched, for example, a systematic review with a question about a physical therapy intervention should also look to search the PEDro database, whilst a review focusing on an educational intervention should also search the ERIC. Reviews of effectiveness should aim to search trial registries. A comprehensive search is the ideal way to minimize publication bias, as a result, a well conducted systematic review should also attempt to search for grey literature, or “unpublished” studies; this may involve searching websites relevant to the review question, or thesis repositories.5.Were the criteria for appraising studies appropriate?The systematic review should present a clear statement that critical appraisal was conducted and provide the details of the items that were used to assess the included studies. This may be presented in the methods of the review, as an appendix of supplementary information, or as a reference to a source that can be located. The tools or instruments used should be appropriate for the review question asked and the type of research conducted. For example, a systematic review of effectiveness should present a tool or instrument that addresses aspects of validity for experimental studies and randomized controlled trials such as randomization and blinding – if the review includes observational research to answer the same question a different tool would be more appropriate. Similarly, a review assessing diagnostic test accuracy may refer to the recognized QUADAS1 tool.6.Was critical appraisal conducted by two or more reviewers independently?Critical appraisal or some similar assessment of the quality of the literature included in a systematic review is essential. A key characteristic to minimize bias or systematic error in the conduct of a systematic review is to have the critical appraisal of the included studies completed independently and in duplicate by members of the review team. The systematic review should present a clear statement that critical appraisal was conducted by at least two reviewers working independently from each other and conferring where necessary to reach decision regarding study quality and eligibility on the basis of quality.7.Were there methods to minimize errors in data extraction?Efforts made by review authors during data extraction can also minimize bias or systematic errors in the conduct of a systematic review. Strategies to minimize bias may include conducting all data extraction in duplicate and independently, using specific tools or instruments to guide data extraction and some evidence of piloting or training around their use.8.Were the methods used to combine studies appropriate?A synthesis of the evidence is a key feature of a systematic review. The synthesis that ispresented should be appropriate for the review question and the stated type of systematic review and evidence it refers to. If a meta-analysis has been conducted this needs to be reviewed carefully. Was it appropriate to combine the studies? Have the reviewers assessed heterogeneity statistically and provided some explanation for heterogeneity that may be present? Often, where heterogeneous studies are included in the systematic review, narrative synthesis will be an appropriate method for presenting the results of multiple studies. If a qualitative review, are the methods that have been used to synthesize findings congruent with the stated methodology of the review? Is there adequate descriptive and explanatory information to support the final synthesized findings that have been constructed from the findings sourced from the original research?9.Was the likelihood of publication bias assessed?As mentioned, a comprehensive search strategy is the best means by which a review author may alleviate the impact of publication bias on the results of the review. Reviews may also present statistical tests such as Egger’s test or funnel plots to also assess the potential presence of publication bias and its potential impact on the results of the review. This question will not be applicable to systematic reviews of qualitative evidence.10.Were recommendations for policy and/or practice supported by the reported data?Whilst the first nine (9) questions specifically look to identify potential bias in the conduct of a systematic review, the final questions are more indictors of review quality rather than validity.Ideally a review should present recommendations for policy and practice. Where these recommendations are made there should be a clear link to the results of the review. Is there evidence that the strength of the findings and the quality of the research been considered in the formulation of review recommendations?11.Were the specific directives for new research appropriate?The systematic review process is recognized for its ability to identify where gaps in the research, or knowledge base, around a particular topic exist. Most systematic review authors will provide some indication, often in the discussion section of the report, of where future research direction should lie. Where evidence is scarce or sample sizes that support overall estimates of effect are small and effect estimates are imprecise, repeating similar research to those identified by the review may be necessary and appropriate. In other instances, the case for new research questions to investigate the topic may be warranted.References1.P Whiting, AWS Rutjes, JB Reitsma, PMM Bossuyt, J Kleijnen. The development of QUADAS:a tool for the quality assessment of studies of diagnostic accuracy included in systematicreviews BMC Medical Research Methodology 2003, 3:25 doi:10.1186/1471-2288-3-25。
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1.2.3.Dear Prof. XXXX,4.5.Thank you very much for your letter and the comments from the referees aboutour paper submitted to XXXX (MS Number XXXX).6.We have checked the manuscript and revised it according to the comments. We submithere the revised manuscript as well as a list of changes.7.If you have any question about this paper, please don’t hesitate to let meknow.8.9.Sincerely yours,10.11.Dr. XXXX12.13.Response to Reviewer 1:14.Thanks for your comments on our paper. We have revised our paper according toyour comments:15.1. XXXXXXX16.2. XXXXXXX17.18.19.20.2.21.22.Dear Professor ***,23.24.Re: An *** Rotating Rigid-flexible Coupled System (No.: JSV-D-06-***)25.26.by ***27.28.Many thanks for your email of 24 Jun 2006, regarding the revision and adviceof the above paper in JSV. Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive. 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We also responded point by point to each reviewer comments as listed below, along with a clear indication of the location of the revision.56.Hope these will make it more acceptable for publication.57.58.List of Major Changes:59.1).........60.2).........61.3).........62.63.Response to Reviewers:64.1).........65.2).........66.3).........67.68.Response to Reviewer XX69.70.We very much appreciate the careful reading of our manuscript and valuablesuggestions of the reviewer. We have carefully considered the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. The comments can be summarized as follows:71.72.1) XX73.2) XX74.75.Detailed responses76.77.1) XX78.2) XX79.80.81.82.4.83.84.Dear editor XX85.86.We have received the comments on our manuscript entitled “XX” by XX. Accordingto the comments of the reviewers, we have revised our manuscript. The revisedmanuscript and the detailed responses to the comments of the one reviewer are attached.87.88.Sincerely yours,89.90.XX91.92.93.94.5.95.96.Response to Reviewer A97.98.Reviewer A very kindly contacted me directly, and revealed himself to beProfessor Dr. Hans-Georg Geissler of the University of Leipzig. I wrote him a general response to both reviews in January 2000, followed by these responses to specific points, both his own, and those of the other reviewer .99.100.Response to Specific Points101.102.What follows is a brief and cursory discussion of the various issues raised by yourself and the other reviewer. If you should revise your judgment of the validity of the theory, these points will be addressed at greater length in a new version of the paper that I would resubmit to Psychological Review. 103.104.Response to Specific Points- Reviewer A:105.106.In part (1) of your critique the major complaint is that no theory is presented, which was discussed above. You continue "Regrettably, not much attention is drawn to specific differences between the chosen examples that would be necessary to pinpoint specificities of perception more precisely", and "if perceptual systems, as suggested, hler (Kindeed act on the basis of HR, there must be many more specific constraints involved to ensure special `veridicality' properties of the perceptual outcome", and "the difficult analytic problems of concrete modeling of perception are not even touched". The model as presented is not a model of vision or audition or any other particular modality, but isa general model to confront the alternative neural receptive field paradigm,although examples from visual perception are used to exemplify the principles discussed. The more specific visual model was submitted elsewhere, in the Orientational Harmonic model, where I showed how harmonic resonance accounts for specific visual illusory effects. As discussed above, the attempt here is to propose a general principle of neurocomputation, rather than a specific model of visual, auditory, or any other specific sensory modality. Again, what I am proposing is a paradigm rather than a theory, . an alternative principle of neurocomputation with specific and unique properties, as an alternative to the neuron doctrine paradigm of the spatial receptive field. If this paper is eventually accepted for publication, then I will resubmit my papers on visual illusory phenomena, referring to this paper to justify the use of the unconventional harmonic resonance mechanism.107.108.In part (2) (a) of your critique you say "it is not clarified whether the postulated properties of Gestalts actually follow from this definition or partly derive from additional constraints." and "I doubt that any of the reviewed examples for HR can treat just the case of hler: (1961, p. 7) "Human experiencein the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague." Wolfgang Kthe dog cited to demonstrate `emergence'. For this a hierarchy relation is needed." The principle of emergence in Gestalt theory is a very difficult concept to express in unambiguous terms, and the dog picture was presented to illustrate this rather elusive concept with a concrete example. I do not suggest that HR as proposed in this paper can address the dog picture as such, since this is specifically a visual problem, and the HR model as presented is not a visual model. Rather, I propose that the feature detection paradigm cannot in principle handle this kind of ambiguity, because the local features do not individually contain the information necessary to distinguish significant from insignificant edges. The solution of the HR approach to visual ambiguity is explained in the paper in the section on "Recognition by Reification" (p. 15-17) in which I propose that recognition is not simply a matter of the identification of features in the input, . by the "lighting up" of a higher level feature node, but it involves a simultaneous abstraction and reification, in which the higher level feature node reifies its particular pattern back at the input level, modulated by the exact pattern of the input. I appeal to the reader to see the reified form of the dog as perceived edges and surfaces that are not present in the input stimulus, as evidence for this reification in perception, which appears at the same time that the recognition occurs. The remarkable property of this reification is that the dog appears not as an image of a canonical, or prototypical dog, but as a dog percept that is warped to the exact posture and configuration allowed by the input, as observed in the subjective experience of the dog picture. This explanation is subject to your criticism in your general comments, that "the author demonstrates more insight than explicitly stated in assumptions and drawn conclusions". Ican only say that, in Kuhn's words, sometimes it is only personal and inarticulate aesthetic considerations that can be used to make the case.109.In the words of Wolfgang Khler: (1961, p. 7)110.111."Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague."112.Wolfgang Khler (Khler 1923 p. 64)113.114."Natural sciences continually advance explanatory hyptotheses, which cannot be verified by direct observation at the time when they are formed nor for a long time thereafter. Of such a kind were Ampere's theory of magnetism, the kinetic theory of gases, the electronic theory, the hypothesis of atomic disinte gra……….., . ProfessorLaboratory of Plant Nutrition andEcological Environment Research,Huazhong Agricultural University,Wuhan, 430070,E-mail: .....................Jun 10, 2009RE: HAZMAT-D-09-00655Dear Editor,We would like to thank the editor for giving us a chance to resubmit the paper, and also thank the reviewers for giving us constructive suggestions which would help us both in English and in depth to improve the quality of the paper. Here we submit a new version of our manuscript with the title “………………………”, which has been modified according to the reviewers’ suggestions. Efforts were also made to correct the mistakes and improve the English of the manuscript. We mark all the changes in red in the revised manuscript.Sincerely yours,……………….., . Professor-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The following is a point-to-point response to the two reviewers’ comments.Reviewer #1:General comments:Reviewer #1: The paper presents an interesting experimental investigation to assess the photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene plastic with goethite under UV irradiation. The research work is clearly presented but the conclusions, the introduction and other parts of the paper relate the results obtained with unjustified claims about the impact of the work.In addition, the background information provided in the introduction part needs significant enrichment. In particular:Answer: Thank you for the comments on the paper. We have revised the manuscript as suggested since we consider that some sentences or descriptions in the Conclusion part are not so accurate based on the results.Page 3, line 46: recycling is not available…Even though a large amount of agricultural plastic waste in burnt or buried in the fields, some quantities of specific categories of good quality agricultural plastic waste are recycled in several countries while research efforts and projects are in progress to improve the corresponding percentage. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.Answer:Yes. Your opinions inspired us and we revised the manuscript accordingly. In the revised paper, the sentence “Recycling is not available for economy,” was changed to “In order to reduce costs, the thickness of application agriculture films in some regions in China is less than mm result in diffcult to recycle, And because the process of recycling is expensive and time-consuming, only a small percentage of the agricultural plastic waste is currently recycled at the end of cultivation in China [4]”(Page 3 line 49-52).Page 3, line 76: biodegradable and photod egradable….There are developments in the area of biodegradable materials that indicate the opposite. Concerning photodegradable materials, they are not considered to represent a solution as they have not been proven to bebiodegradable. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.Answer: Thank you for reminding us the improper description on the study. We have the improper parts revised accordingly and hope that this new manuscript will be convincing ( Page 3 line 52-55).Page 4, line 65: find an eco-friendly….The best eco-friendly disposal for agricultural plastic waste is recycling and for non-recyclable materials, energy recovery. Degrading materials produced from fossil sources is not an eco-friendly disposal! The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature. Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that some of the descriptions in the previous copy were really not so accurate and a little bit arbitrary due to our poor English level and the study on recent literature. After consulting more references, we therefore revised paper to be more reasonable and convincing.Page 4, line 66: to carbon dioxide and water….Conversion of fossil oil based materials into carbon dioxide and water is much worse than converting renewable-based materials into carbon dioxide and waterAnswer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate, due to our poor study on recent literature. The sentence “it is very important to find an eco-friendly disposal of plastic waste where they degrade to carbon dioxide and water under the sunlight irradiation without producing toxic byproducts.” has been deleted.Page 6, line 112: volatile products….Define the products.Answer: We have defined the volatile products in Page 6 line 124-125.Page 9, line 185: eco-friendly disposal….The claims of the authors that this technique is an eco-friendly one are not justified. The conclusions and other parts of the paper need to be rewritten and limit the scope of the presented research work to the technical objectives without deriving unjustified general conclusions and claims about the impact of this work.Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate. The sentence “The development of this kind of composite polymer can lead to an eco-friendly disposal of polymer wastes.”was changed to “The present paper intends to study goethite as photocatalytst for degradating plastic. Further attention could be focused on the application of the technique.” (Page 9 line 192-194).Reviewer #3:1. Title and abstract should indicate that the work has been done with PE-Goethite composite film.Answer: Your suggestion is greatly appreciated. We agree and therefore change the title to: Solid-phase photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene–goethite composite film under UV-light irradiation.2. Please revise the first paragraph of 'Introduction'. It is difficult to understand. In general, the language of the paper should be revisited.Answer: The Introduction part has been rewritten both in contents and in English. We particularly revised some sentences since they are not correct or so confusing.3. Materials and methods - Details of the chemicals to be furnished Answer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the details of the chemicals has been shown in Page 4 line 79-83.4. Characterization are required for PE (Molecular weight, grade) and Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM-EDS and XRD) Answer: The re viewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the characterization for PE has been shown in Page 4 line 79. The Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM and XRD) has been reported by Liao et al. (2007), We clarify that in the revised manuscript in Page 5 line 91-93.5. A schematic diagram of the experimental set up to be given Answer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Fig. 1 in the present paper. The original Fig. 1. was changed to Fig. 2 and Fig. 3.6. Results - A rate equation should be proposed from the time-weight data Answer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestion s have been adopted and the rate equation a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Table. 1in the present paper.7. A few data are required to show the influence of process parameters such as goethite loading, intensity of UV radiation.A nswer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the influence of goethite loading has been shown in Fig. 2 in the present paper. And the influence of intensity of UV radiation has been shown in Fig. 3 in the present paper. The original Fig. 2 was changed to Fig. 4 and The original Fig. 3 was changed to Fig. 5 in the present paper.8. Until other intermediates are isolated, upto Eqn.(7) (line 162) is sufficient.Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and We changed the Eqns as recommended. Eqs. (8)-(12) are deleted and Eqn.(7)was change to “–(CH2CH2)– + .OH → degradationproducts” (Page 9 line184).9. Figure 3 and 4: 3 pairs are required, namely (i) Only PE film before and after irradiation, (ii) PE-Goethite film %) - before and after irradiation (iii) PE-Goethite film wt %) - before and after irradiation. Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the original Fig. 3 and 4 was changed to Fig .5 in the present paper.10. Point 3 above is also applicable for SEM photographs. Please rearrange and clearly mark the difference between the films before and after irradiation for both SEM and FTIR results.Answer: Thank the reviewer and editor’s for the comments. During the revision of the paper, we did a supplementary experiment got some new SEM photographs, which has been shown in Fig. 4 in the present paper. And The FTIR results has been rearranged in in the present paper, respectively.11. It should be clearly mentioned in the conclusion that the degradation was more when goethite loading and intensity of light both were more Answer: The r eviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the conclusions has been changed in Page 9 line 192-198.。
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Response to Reviewer CommentsWe thank both the reviewers for their thoughtful/useful comments and suggestions. Their comments have improved the manuscript effectively. We have included almost all of their suggestions and below we present a point-by-point response to their comments.Reviewer AGeneral Comments1. Comment on assumptions of linear regression, using a linear regression as opposed to other nonlinear models like artificial neural network, nonlinear regression etc..?We have checked the distribution of the predictors, and we can report that they are all Normally distributed (figure not shown), so is the Thailand summer monsoon rainfall. Thus, the key assumption of Normal distribution for Linear Regression is satisfied. Neural network and nonlinear regression models require large sample sizes. While the sample size in this research is relatively small for LOCFIT it does not suffer to the same extent as other nonlinear models. Furthermore, LOCFIT, being “local” in nature has the capability to capture any feature (linear or nonlinear) present in the data.We found strong linear correlation between the summer rainfall and its predictors (Table 1). Hence, Linear Regression model was used as a benchmark – besides, it is one of the most popular methods in practice.2. Why CCA type models were not considered as a benchmark..We thank the reviewer for pointing the two references on CCA, which we have included in the narrative.CCA type models are better suited for predicting a dependent field (i.e. rainfall at several stations) from field(s) of independent variables (e.g., Tropical SST, SLP etc.). In this paper we are predicting a single time series (i.e. the Thailand summer rainfall index) hence regression based models, such as the ones used here are apt.3. Issue of non-stationarity….We agree, that if the relationship between the Thailand summer rainfall and ENSO and other Indo-Pacific predictors changes in time then new predictors have to be identified. As shown, this relationship is seen only in the post-1980 period hence the forecasting models have some success in this period.4. Comment on the Ensemble generation...We appreciate the reviewers point about multiple sources of uncertainty. This is beyond the scope of this research. In the approaches proposed here, model uncertainty is captured.If the predictors capture the physical relationship with the rainfall then the system uncertainty too will be captured. While the ensembles are generated using some form of Monte Carlo, but they are ensembles, nonetheless. We wish to clarify that the statistical models used in this work for ensemble prediction should be distinguished from the ensemble techniques adopted using general circulation models (GCMs).5. Predictor – rainfall relationshi p…As can be seen from (Figures 1,2) and Table 1 the large-scale climate (i.e, tropical ocean-atmospheric variables) and Thailand summer rainfall show relationship only in the post-1980 period. This epochal behavior of the relationship is explained by shifts in the ENSO features explained in detail in our paper (Singhrattna, et al., 2004). Because we devoted that paper entirely in explaining the decadal/inter-decadal variability of Thailand rainfall, we focused this paper purely on developing tools for forecasting the Thailand summer rainfall.Minor CommentsModify the title to “Seasonal forecasting of Thailand Summer Monsoon Rainfall”We like the suggestion and have modified the title accordingly.Provide Key WordsKey words have been provided at the end of the abstractTable 1: How does the change in correlation between SOI and summer rainfall from -0.44 for MJJ SOI to 0.45 JJA SOI affect the role of SOI as a predictor.It is a typo and we apologize for the same. The SOI and rainfall correlation forMJJ is +0.44 and not -0.44 (as shown in the Table). We have corrected this.Furthermore, SOI did not enter into the final set of predictors so in that sense itdid not impact the forecasts presented.Instead of providing a website for IOD, which some readers may not be familiar with, why not provide the basic information such as equation and the data type and domain used to compute IOD? On the other hand, is IOD that useful as a predictor, given Figure 1 shows that the correlation between MAM IOD and ASO rainfall decreased monotonically since 1960s?IOD index is computed as SST anomaly difference between Eastern and Western tropical Indian Ocean. The details of the dataset, regions, the physical ignificance, etc. are described in detail in the Saji et al. (1999) paper, which we have referred.Our aim here, as a first step, was to compute the correlation between Thailandsummer rainfall and all the standard tropical Indo-Pacific indices. Furthermore, as the reviewer noted, the IOD index was not a useful predictor in the final set ofpredictors that were selected. In fact, the SST index that was used as a predictorcovers part of the IOD region.We have added a couple of sentences on the IOD at the end of Section 2.For LOCFIT, what order of polynomial equations was used in the seasonal prediction of the summer rainfall of Thailand? Why not represent a polynomial equation and state what orders were mostly used?We used only local …linear‟ polynomials. We have mentioned this at the end ofModel Evaluation Section. Typically, local linear or quadratic works best – ofcourse, the polynomial order can also be selected using the GCV criteria. In thisresearch, given the small sample size we fixed the order of the polynomial to be 1(i.e. linear) – but the neighborhood size (alpha) was obtained objectively using theGCV criteria. The equation for the GCV criteria is now given. The “local” aspect of the method is what provides the rich capability to capture any arbitraryfunctional form exhibited by the data.Table 4: why the non-exceedance probabilities for 1987 were all 0%This means that all the ensembles from the methods, especially LOCFIT andLinear regression are well to the right of the observed (i.e. all the ensemblemembers exceed the lower threshold) . This means that the non-exceedanceprobability is zero. Note that these are forecasts issued on April 1st and hence,likely to be of lesser skill, as can be seen in Figure 5b.Some color plots shown in Figure 2 are too small to be readable. Enlarge the plots. In contrast, Figure3 can be reduced.We have re-generated all the figures eliminating the above mentionedshortcomings.Figures 6& 7: Labels should be provided to the pdfs plotted. The authors explained that 700mm (90th percentile) is chosen to represent wet conditions. In this arbitrarily chosen, given that it is only a 10-year return period flood? I presume the light dotted curve represents the climatology pdf in Page 17? What is a climatological pdf? Please explain.As mentioned above, we have re-generated the figures. The figure captionsexplain the figures better. Now, it is the dashed line which represents theclimatological PDF and the solid line is that from the ensembles. The dotted lineis the actually observed value. Climatology PDF is one that is computed on all of the historical data. We have clarified this in above mentioned section.Most equations should be re-typedWe have re-typed the equations and made the symbols consistent, throughout the paper.There are typos appearing randomly in the paper.We have checked for typos/grammatical errors carefully and have eliminated allof them.Reviewer BGeneral Comments1. Labeling throughout paper needs to be consistent (sometimes “LOCFIT” sometimes “Normal K-NN”)This was the case, especially in the figures. We have now made this consistent- i.e., referring only to LOCFIT2. Much information is presented doubly ( in tables and figures) – there is potential to reduce somewhat here. Also, as detailed below, the authors can fold SST and SAT into a single predictor that will be better to apply than the two they currently show.We fully agree with the reviewer‟s suggestion and as a result we have removed Tables 2 and 3 since the information provided here is also available through Figures 4 and 5, respectively. However, we retained Table 1 and Figure 1. Table 1 shows the correlation between all the indices and Thailand summer rainfall for all the seasons (including the summer season). While in Figure 1, we only show moving window correlation of four indices for just one season.We agree that SST and SAT index can be folded into a single predictor. In fact, in the final set of predictors in the forecast models only SST is included – this is due to the fact that both these indices have significant information in common.Specific Comments1. Mid p. 3: The authors refer to the lack of literature regarding specifically the monsoon over Thailand, ……. Currently GAME is only mentioned as a sourc e of some of the data sets used in the study.We do recognize that the Thailand monsoon is part of a larger Austral-Asian monsoon system. However, the variability of Thailand summer rainfall is unique. Besides, the predictability and the large body of understanding of the Austral-Asian monsoon system are not of much help if it cannot be specifically used to forecast the Thailand rainfall. Inour paper we demonstrate for the first time the potential for predicting Thailand summer rainfall.We are thankful to the GEWEX/GAME effort for the data and have mentioned the same in the acknowledgments. We are aware of the GEWEX/GAME efforts to forecast flows in the Chao Phraya basin of Thailand. However, all of these efforts involve (a) short term flow forecast (i.e. days to weeks) and, (b) using watershed models. None of the efforts, to our knowledge (looking at the publications on the GAME website) have focused on forecasting seasonal Thailand rainfall or streamflows. We do refer to two key papers (Jha et al., 1997 and 1998) on the hydrologic predictions in the Chao Phraya basin.2. Sec 2, data set 1: There should be a map of the locations of the rainfall stations used in the statistical regressions.Map showing the location of all the stations was provided in our Singhrattna et al. (2004) paper and also in Singhrattna (2003). We do agree with the reviewer‟s suggestion. So as not to increase the number of figures we have provided the latitude and longitude of the three stations used to obtain the Thailand summer rainfall and temperature (SAT) index.3. Data set 2: Were monthly means used?Yes4. Sec 2: a limited list of data sets are given, without discussion of why these were chosen over others (e.g., why not use GPCP or CRU gridded rainfall?). What determined the choice of these data?Since we had observed station data, we feel it is likely to be better than GPCP or CRU which are gridded data. Furthermore, the observed rainfall is highly correlated to GPCP data (over 0.7 in the Chao Phraya region), as we showed in Singhrattna et al. (2004, Figure 2) and Singhrattna (2003). Thus, the results in our paper will be insensitive to the above choice of the data sets.5. Sec 3: Kanae et al. (200; J. Hydromet.)…….., that other sources of trends such as land use change or global warming may make this a non-stationary process, and thus degrade their linear statistical relationships?We thank the reviewer for the references, some of which we were not aware of. We have included the two relevant references at the end section 3.1. As the reviewer mentions, all the studies in the references mentioned are in the general South Asian region but not necessarily over Thailand and are from limited modeling studies. We do agree that land cover changes can degrade linear relationships between the Thailand summer rainfall and ocean-atmospheric features. But there isn‟t enough land-cover related data to quantify this effect. We are working on a just funded grant to precisely investigate this issue.6. Table 1: why is there a big sign change in the MJJ relationship with SOI?Reviewer A too pointed this out. This is a typo and we have fixed it. The SOI and rainfall correlation for MJJ is +0.44 and not -0.44 (as shown in the Table).7. Fig 1: Interesting – how does this compare with the relationships found in other decadal ENSO-monsoon studies (e.g., Miyakoda et al., 2003; J. Meteor. Soc Japan)?It is interesting and there are some similarities – we have included this reference.8. Sec 3.2: Over the subtropics and tropics, essentially SAT=SST (similarity in Figs 2a and 2c). Also, the SAT from the NCEP reanalysis is dubious over land…. This would reduce SST and SAT to simply “surface temperature” and reduce the number of figures. We agree with the reviewer that SAT from the NCEP reanalysis can be dubious over land and consequently, we have removed Figure 2(a). In fact, we used the observed land temperatures from the three stations as the SAT predictor index – as such Figure 2(a) is redundant. We also agree that CRU and CAMS could be used to better investigate the land temperature relationship – especially, over the larger Eurasian region.9. Sec 3.3 There is an inconsistency here. The authors show that the relationships to monsoon rainfall are not constant over long periods, … Is it really a viable operational prediction methodology?We submit (and hopefully have demonstrated) that the proposed approaches, especially the nonparametric methods will serve as an effective tool for Thailand rainfall. We agree with the reviewer about the non-stationary aspect of the predictor – rainfall relationship. This is something that we are seeing in other parts of the globe and will have to contend with. To guard against this, we suggest checking the predictor-rainfall relationship periodically and if relationships have weakened and new predictors will have to be identified.Understanding the decadal variability of the rainfall and the seasonal prediction are two clear and separate goals that could be related or may be not. The former, we address in great detail in Singhrattna et al., (2004) and Singhrattna (2003).10. Why are the errors (for ensembling) not generated and added separately for each predictor, but instead added to the mean estimate?We are not clear about the reviewer‟s que stion. We assume the reviewer meant to say …fo r each method‟. If so, then the errors generated for a given model are …specific‟ to that model and are a result of the error formulation in that model – hence, errors from one model cannot be added to the mean forecast of another.11. Sec 4.2, 1st para: All this description is very elementary – is it necessary for such a paper?We feel that the 1st para provides continuity with the Linear regression discussed in the preceding section. Furthermore, it is a short para and does not add to the length of the paper.12. Sec 5, para 1: Cross validation ensures the inability to forecast extremes. In this sense, it unduly penalizes the method.Yes. But this is the best way to estimate the predictive capability of the methods. We would also add that cross-validation does not lead to inability in forecasting extremes –because the methods (LOCFIT and Linear regression) fit polynomials and hence, can extrapolate. In fact, the ability to forecast extremes will depend largely on the ability of the predictors to provide useful information on the extremes.13. p. 16: Two sections numbered “5”. Exac tly how many cases in the training set (state earlier than p. 17)?We have corrected the section numbering (Reviewer A too mentioned this).Since we have a very small sample size (i.e., 22 values, 1980 – 2001) we evaluated the model skills in a cross-validated mode. In that, a value is dropped and the model fit to the rest of the data and the dropped value is predicted. So, all the skills shown in the paper are cross-validated skills. This we describe in section 5 (“model evaluation”).14. Table 2: Please report the significances for r.We think the reviewer meant Table 1 where we show the correlation ( r ) between Thailand summer monsoon rainfall and the large-scale climate indices. The 95% significant level is +/- 0.41. We have mentioned this in the Table caption.15. How can the skills of linear regression and LOCFIT be compared? On what basis are they called “similar”?The skill measures used (correlation, LLH and RPSS) are model independent. These measures capture the ability of the model to capture various distributional properties. Hence, it is valid to compare the models on these measures.We mention that the linear regr ession and LOCFIT exhibit “similar” skills from Figure 4 where the skills from the two models are generally close for the most part. However, for the extreme years (Figure 5) the nonparametric models do much better.16. Fig 5 & Table 3: There is a big disparity in skill between wet and dry years. Dry year skill is poor, suggesting the cause is not reflected in SST or SLP, but something else. Please discuss this disparity.There is reduction in skill in the dry years relative to wet years – but not by a large magnitude as the reviewer suggests. The disparity could be due to differences in ENSO flavor or nonlinearity in the ENSO teleconnection. We are not sure at this point.17. Fig 6 & 7: It is very difficult to read the dotted line and labels.We have re-generated the figures clearing up this difficulty. The dashed curve is the climatological PDF, the solid line is that from the ensembles and the dotted line is the observed value.18. Table 4 and mid p. 18: In each set of 3 extremes, one forecast is a bust. The 1-out-3 failure rate is the kind that can jeopardize governments!We agree. Further investigation is required to sort this out. Our paper offers a first step in this direction.。
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怎么让顾客好评英语作文Title: Strategies for Earning Positive Customer Reviews。
In today's competitive business environment, garnering positive customer reviews is crucial for success. Not only do good reviews enhance a company's reputation, but theyalso serve as powerful marketing tools. Here are some effective strategies to ensure that your customers leave glowing reviews:1. Provide Exceptional Customer Service: Thecornerstone of earning positive reviews lies in delivering exceptional customer service. Train your staff to be friendly, attentive, and responsive to customers' needs. Make sure they are knowledgeable about your products or services and capable of resolving any issues promptly and courteously.2. Exceed Expectations: Go above and beyond what is expected to delight your customers. Surprise them withunexpected perks, personalized recommendations, or small gestures of appreciation. By exceeding their expectations, you create memorable experiences that are more likely to result in positive reviews.3. Solicit Feedback: Actively seek feedback from your customers to understand their experiences better. Encourage them to share their thoughts through surveys, comment cards, or online review platforms. Use this feedback to identify areas for improvement and address any concerns promptly.4. Make It Easy to Leave Reviews: Streamline the review process by making it as simple as possible for customers to leave feedback. Provide clear instructions and multiple channels for submitting reviews, such as on your website, social media platforms, or review websites like Yelp or Google My Business.5. Incentivize Reviews: Offer incentives to customers who leave reviews, such as discounts on future purchases, exclusive offers, or entry into a giveaway. However, ensure that your incentivization practices comply with relevantlaws and regulations and maintain the integrity of the review process.6. Respond to Reviews: Show that you value customer feedback by responding promptly and professionally to both positive and negative reviews. Thank customers for their positive feedback and address any concerns or issues raised in negative reviews. This demonstrates your commitment to customer satisfaction and can help mitigate the impact of negative feedback.7. Showcase Positive Reviews: Highlight positive reviews on your website, social media pages, or marketing materials. Potential customers are more likely to trust the opinions of their peers, so showcasing positive reviews can help build credibility and encourage others to do business with you.8. Consistently Deliver Quality: Ultimately, the key to earning positive reviews is to consistently deliver high-quality products or services. Focus on maintaining high standards in every aspect of your business operations, fromproduct design and development to sales and customer support.By implementing these strategies consistently, you can create a culture of excellence that not only earns you positive reviews but also fosters long-term customerloyalty and satisfaction. Remember, every interaction with a customer is an opportunity to leave a lasting impression, so make it count!。
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comAug. 1st, 2009RE: HAZMAT-D—09-00655R1Dear Editor,We thank the reviewers and editor for the time in closely viewing our manuscript. We would like to thank the reviewers for giving us constructive suggestions which would help us both in English and in depth to improve the quality of the paper. Here we submit a new version,which has been modified according to the reviewers’ suggestions。
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如何写好Response to review——发表SCI文章实战发表文章有不少步骤,走走停停,有时候会因为得到审稿人的赏识和认可开心不已,当然也会因为意见尖锐,无法修改而苦恼不已,下面我总结了一些例子,看看如何回答 review report 里面的问题,所有内容均是自己文章投稿的真实过程,希望对大家有所帮助。
1. 关于 Cover letter整理了一份一般的格式,大体都是这样,呵呵Dear EditorDr. Yinon Rudich Nov. 25, 2009JGRManuscript Number: 2009JD013023,“Gross primary production estimation from MODIS data with vegetation index and photosynthetically absorbed radiation in maize”Enclosed is the revised ve rsion of the paper entitled “Remote estimation of gross primary production in maize, coniferous forest and grassland using MODIS images”. We appreciated the thorough reviews provide by the journal and the positive response of both two reviewers that found the research of this manuscript is suitable for JGR. Below is our response to their comments resulting in a number of clarifications.RegardsDr. Chaoyang Wu2. 关于 Response 细节最根本的一个要求是事实就是,有什么说什么,不要企图遮遮掩掩,也不要回避,对意见一般先要礼节性的感谢或者同意,然后再做出修改。
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Responses to reviewer 1The title was revised to be "Quality evaluation of Flos lonicerae through a simultaneous determination of seven saponins by HPLC with ELSD" according to the recommendation of reviewer #1.rmation about the purity, stability of the reference compounds was added intothe text. Please see p. 5, line4-6 from the bottom.2.The reproducibility was re-validated and was added in the text. Please see p7, line1-6 from the bottom.3.We could not understand what the question 3 mean, but we think that therecoveries should be counted by the following formula: recovery (%) = (amount found –original amount)/ amount spiked ×100%.4.On p.9, line 7 from the bottom, the calculation mistake was corrected.5.We are sorry that we used an improper word “sensitive” to comment theestablished HPLC-ELSD method. So we revised our description in text, please see p.9, line 5-6 from the bottom.6.We agree that strictly speaking, recovery testing should be done for each sample.In present study, only one sample was used to test the recovery, the reasons are: 1) all five samples analyzed are derived from the buds of Lonicera species, that is to say, the matrix of the analytes are very similar with each other; 2) all these samples were pretreated with the same manner (the same extracting solvent---methanol, the same extracted procedures, etc.); 3) all these samples contain similar constituents, especially the hederagenin type saponins. So we used L. macranthoides as a representative of all samples for the recovery testing.7.We apologized for the incorrect writing of the author’s names in reference [14]and [15]. On p.12, the citations had been checked.Responses to reviewer 2Scientific content:1.According to the suggestion of reviewer 2, quantification of compound 2 in L.hypoglauca was revised as marked in Table 4. We agree that some novel techniques such as LC-MS are effective tools for the on-line confirmation of peak identity. As there was no LC-MS apparatus in hand when we did this experiment, the conventional methods for confirming the identity of each peak were used: 1) comparing their retention time with that of each reference compound resolved under the same chromatographic conditions with a series of mobile phases; 2) comparing the relative peak area of each peak before and after spiking the reference compounds. Anyway we appreciate the suggestion using HPLC-MS technique for more sensitive and accurate determination of Flos Lonicera.2.We accept the reviewer’s comments that the statement “rapid clarification of theb otanical origin” is not appropriate, so the sentence had been revised in the text,please see p.10, line 1-7 from the bottom. As we have not any data yet on suitability of the method for quality control of other medicinal plants containing hederagenin type saponins, the last sentence in Conclusion Section “In addition, this newly developed method is very suitable for the quality control or screening of hederagenin type saponins in those medicinal plants which also contain hederagenin type saponins as major bioactive components, such as Hedera spp.”was deleted.3.It is our mistake of confusing the meaning of the terms “repeatability”and“reproducibility”, additional experiments was done for the reproducibility validation, and the data were summarized in table 2.4.Generally the ELSD follows an exponential response. According to ourexperiences and knowledge, for some compounds, the ELSD also follows a linear response in a certain test range of concentrations, as shown in our previous works (Song-Lin Li, et al. J. Chromatogr. A 2001; 909: 207-214; Hui-Jun Li, et al. J.Chromatogr. A 2003; 1008: 167-72) and other works (e.g. Torsten Gunnarsson, etal. J. Chromatogr. B 1998; 705:243-249)Manuscript:1.The method for LOD and LOQ determination were added in text, please see p.7,line 5-7, and the unit of LOD and LOQ were revised as μg in Table 1.2.In sample preparation Section, the detailed sample preparation procedure wasprovided, please see p.8, line 10-13. Information about the type of ELSD instrument was added on p. 6, line 4-5. The SD values were added in Table 4.3.We tried our best to check language and grammar editing of the text. Somesimilar expressions and sentences changed.4.The incorrect botanical name was replaced by L. macranthoides through thewhole text.5.On p.5. line 1-5, more information about the samples origin were added.6.In our previous work (J. Chrom. A, 1008, 2003, 167-172), the temperature of drifttube was optimized at 90°C for the determination of iridoids. As the polarity of saponins are higher than that of iridoids, more water was used in the mobile phase for the separation of saponins, therefore the temperature for saponins determination was optimized from 95°C to 110°C, and 106°C was found as the optimal temperature of drift tube for saponins determination under the present chromatographic conditions.7.On p.13, the legends for Figure 2 were revised. Legends for tables were alsorevised.8.In discussion section, the comparison of both Lonicera methods (for iridoids andsaponins) were briefly discussed, as marked in red on p.10, lin 1-6 from the bottom and p.11, line 6-9 from the bottom.。