作文

高考英语作文全方位指导
第一部分：单项训练
1.翻译下列常用谚语
1）教育与学习类：
1.知识就是力量。

_______________________________________________________________ 2.玉不琢不成器。

_______________________________________________________________ 3.学无坦途。

_______________________________________________________________ 4.天才不过是勤奋而已。

_______________________________________________________________ 5.问得多，学得多。

_______________________________________________________________ 6.及时一针省得将来九针。

_______________________________________________________________ 7.岁月不待人。

_______________________________________________________________ 8.活到老学到老。

_______________________________________________________________ 9.滴水穿石。

_______________________________________________________________ 10.万事皆通，一无所知。

_______________________________________________________________ 2）工作与生活类
1.服务他人的生活才有意义。

_______________________________________________________________ 2.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

_______________________________________________________________ 3.事业是人生的第一需要。

_______________________________________________________________ 4.健康是最大的财富。

_______________________________________________________________ 5.一天一个苹果，不要求医问药。

_______________________________________________________________ 6.良药苦口利于病。

_______________________________________________________________ 7.人生并非康庄大道。

_______________________________________________________________ 8.入乡随俗。

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9.量体裁衣；量入为出。

_______________________________________________________________ 10.五十步笑百步。

_______________________________________________________________ 11.谎言站不住。

_______________________________________________________________ 12.贪小便宜吃大亏。

_______________________________________________________________ 13.做人诚信为本。

_______________________________________________________________ 3）友情与爱情类
1.患难之交真朋友。

_______________________________________________________________ 2.情人眼里出西施。

_______________________________________________________________ 3.爱屋及乌。

_______________________________________________________________ 4.爱情不分贫富贵贱。

_______________________________________________________________ 5.真正的爱情永葆青春。

_______________________________________________________________ 6.滥交朋友者无朋友。

_______________________________________________________________ 7.益友难得。

_______________________________________________________________ 4）理想与现实类
1.世上无难事，只怕有心人。

_______________________________________________________________ 2.下决心成功的人已成功了一半。

_______________________________________________________________ 3.伟大的理想造就伟大的人物。

_______________________________________________________________ 4. 除非亲自尝试，否则你永远不知道你能够做什么
_______________________________________________________________ 5.人生应该树立目标，否则你的精力会白白浪费。

_______________________________________________________________ 6.有志者事竟成。

_______________________________________________________________ 7.不劳则无获。

_______________________________________________________________ 5）逆境与人生类
1.吃一堑长一智。

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2.逆境出人才。

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3.烈火验真金，艰难磨意志。

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4.凡事不可半途而废。

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5.逆水行舟，不进则退。

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6.否极泰来。

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7.欲速则不达。

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8.条条大道通罗马。

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9.谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好。

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2.连贯性训练
A.用已提供的短语填空
1. to my joy, generally speaking, at first, nevertheless, in the end, in a word, now that
1)____________, it is not so cold in February.
2) Smoking costs us much money and it can easily cause a big fire. ___________, smoking can do us much harm.
3) ____________, my son passed the exam with a very high mark.
4) There was no news; ____________, she went on hoping.
5) ____________, I thought it difficult to learn English, but in the end I changed my mind.
6) The flowers will soon start to bloom ____________ winter is gone and the weather is beginning to get warmer.
2. furthermore , for fear that，otherwise，so that，no matter，in spite of
1) New models are put on every year ___________ consumers will keep buying.
2) I read the chapter several times ___________ I might not able to pass the exam.
3) It is still a good idea to know how to type. ___________ the many technological advances in
typewriters and word processors, a skilled operators remains indispensable.
4) A fire must have a readily available supply of oxygen. ___________ it will stop burning.
5) I like to keep the windows open at night ___________ how cold it gets.
6) Florider is famous for its tourist attractions. Its coastline offers excellent white sand beaches.
___________, it has warm, sunny weather.
B.语篇填空
1.finally, then, at first, after that
I had a bad cold last week. 1 , I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. 2
I began to cough. 3 , I had a fever and felt weak. 4 , I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.
2. and , but, finally, immediately, now, at first, one day, then, so,
The naughty boy in the story ―The Boy Who Cried Wolf‖ has grown up. 1 he works as a weatherman in his village. 2 he studied the weather carefully 3 found that a storm was coming. 4 , he told all the villagers to prepare for the bad weather, 5 no one believed him. 6 , the weather was fine, 7 the villagers said that the young man was lying again. ____8____the weather suddenly changed 9 a storm wind came. All the villagers tried to save the crops 10 it was too late. 11 , the storm ruined all the crops.
3. A: second, B: also, C: another reason is that, D: for example, E: moreover, F: however, G: on the other hand, H: first, I: one reason is that, J: the best choice
There are three major airports near Washington, D.C, but the traveler to Washington should be careful about which one to choose. 1 , Baltimore-Washington International Airport, located near the city of Baltimore, is a good airport. 2 , it is not the best choice for a traveler who wants to visit Washington. 3 it is relatively far from the city of Washington itself. 4 , a passenger bus trip between Baltimore and Washington is expensive. Dulles International Airport is a slightly better choice, since it is located closer to the city. 5 , if a traveler arrives in the early evening, he or she will encounter rush-hour traffic, which is not a good way to begin a trip to the city. 6 may be Washington-Reagan National Airport. There are two reasons for this. 7 ,this airport is the closest to the city. 8 it is located on the Metro train system, which is a convenient method of transportation.
4.first, what’s worse, in my opinion, besides, now
___1___ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise.
Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. ____2_____, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.
___3____, to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency.
____4_____, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. ____5_____ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.
3.高级句型结构训练
A,续写句子
例子：before she became a teacher
造句：she was a worker before she became a teacher.
1. although the weather was perfect
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2.when they would begin to recycle cans and bottles
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3. after we finished writing our term papers
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4. since he was eighteen years ago
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5. while we took a swim
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6. because the job offered a good salary
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7. unless you finish your homework
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B.按要求进行句型转换
1.I didn’t realize the mistake until I grow up.(强调划线部分）
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2.We can make our country stronger and stronger in this way.（倒装句）
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3.That we love peace is known to all.（变为it引导的形式主语）
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4.Though our country is rich, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.（将从句倒装）
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5.You should try to find a better way. Then you will make greater progress.(改为祈使句)
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6. We should take some measures. That is necessary.(改为It is +adj….结构)
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7. I was busy working. At that time, my uncle came.(用when连接两个分句)
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8. Just when the performances was over, we left the theatre.(用the moment连接两个分句)
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9. Your performance was wonderful. I was deeply impressed.(用so…that…连接句子)
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10. The technology is developing quickly. We can live longer in the future.(用with结构连接句子) __________________________________________________________
11. He won the game. We are very surprised. (用what引导的主语从句)
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12. He didn’t realize that he had wasted much time playing computer games until he failed in the exam.(用倒装句)
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13. I haven’t time, so I will not attend your party.(用虚拟语气句)
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14. We didn’t drive in turn, so you got so tired.(用虚拟语气句)
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C.用定语从句组合句子
1. Kunming is a beautiful city. There flowers and grass can be seen everywhere.
2. I will never forget the day. On that day I met you for the first time at the airport.
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3. He couldn’t go to college because his grades were too low.
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4. Environment protection is becoming more and more urgent. One example of it is the serious air pollution.
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5. Farmers once were looked down upon. Those days are gone.
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6. I know that student. His article has been published.
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7. I am very grateful for Tom. He often helps me gladly.
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8. Edison invented the light bulb. It is known to all.
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9. The river is now seriously polluted. There were once many trees along its banks.
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D.用非谓语动词结构组合句子
1. He had won the game. All of them sang and danced all night.
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2. When the medicine is taken on time, the medicine is effective.
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3. The little is dressed in red. She looked pretty.
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4. The flowers smelled nice. They attracted many visitors.
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5. All those came to the party last night. They are my friends.
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6. The money was needed for the sick child. It was soon collected.
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7. The young man is talking with the children. He is a famous singer.
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8. He was known as a famous expert. He received many invitations.
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9. If we given a little more time, we will do better.
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10. I didn’t know what to do. I had to ask my parents for advice.
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11. He had failed in the exam. He didn’t play computer games any more.
12. Because I haven’t finished my work, I have to stay at home.
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13. There was no bus. So he had to walk home.
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14. If time permits, I will go shopping this afternoon.
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15. He cried suddenly. Tears rolled down his cheeks.
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第二部分：体裁训练
一、说明文
说明文是对某事物的特征、功能、结构、本质、用途、原理、来源等进行客观和具体的阐述。

目的在于提供知识、表明观点。

说明文的说明对象可以是具体的客观事件、人物、自然环境，也可以是某些抽象的东西，比如原理、概念、定律、思想等。

近年来，高考英语表达中对说明文的考察有递增趋势，如2008年湖南卷为介绍某个人物，四川卷要求考生说明如何保护环境，广东卷要求考生介绍奥运比赛项目——射击等。

同时对说明文的考察主要融合在应用文体中，如写信，写发言稿等等。

因此，考生务必加以重视。

注意说明文的以下三个语言特点：
1)时态相对较为统一：多用一般现在时；
2)以主动语态、陈述句式为主，为了表达的灵活也可以选用其他表达形式；
3)恰当地使用过渡词语充分体现时间顺序、空间顺序及逻辑顺序
这一部分将分为三类：介绍人物、介绍地点、描述图表。

一、介绍人物
【写作指导】
1.介绍人物常用短语有：
work hard at…
do sth with great determination and perseverance（毅力）
be strict in sth./with sb.
have a …way of doing sth
try one’s best to do sth.
devote one self to…
win a prize/the first prize in …competition
be good at… /do well in…
make rapid progress in …
go through hardship/overcome many difficulties
have a gift/ talent for…
2 评价人物常用短语：
one of the best/ most important …
set a good example for…
a model teacher/worker
be respected by everyone
speak/ think highly of…
be honored as (an excellent athlete)
His hard work brought him great success.
… is the pride of …
make great contributions to…
be famous/known as
remember sb forever
【真题体验】
1. （2008，湖南卷）请从下列任务中选择你 最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。

要求很具所给信息做适当发挥，且需包括一下三部分内容：
1. 对该任务的简单介绍；
2. 喜欢该任务的理由；
3. 从该任务身上得到的启示。

Thomas Edison Helen Keller William Shakespeare
inventor; creative; diligent; full of wisdom Ordinary but great woman; disabled, optimistic; eager to learn Writer;
talented; imaginative;
man of all ages
―Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.‖
―…if I have the power of sight for three days.‖
―Life is a stage …‖
【学生习作】
Thomas Edison, a famous American scientist and inventor, had more than 1000 inventions, ①(-2分)one of them is bulb, which changed the world so greatly that the lights in America （-2分）②was turned off for three minutes in memory of him at his death.
I admire him because he made so much contribution to the world. Though not blessed with much gift and （-1分）③even thinking to be foolish in teachers ’ eyes, he never discouraged himself by difficulties in life, which instead motivated him to pursue his dream. His creativity and diligence made him full of wisdom and paved the way for his final success.
（-2分）④Just as he put it, genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. The key to success is not to ask what others can do for me, but to ask what I can do and how I can do it for my others. （得分档次：第四档，18分）
【习作评析】
1.总体评价：本篇文章要点齐全，连贯性比较好，如though, but 等词的使用。

文章还使用了不
少高级句型，如定语从句，让步状语从句，还有各种动词短语等。

但美中不足的是出现了一些句型错误，扣分就不可避免。

2. 误点点拨：①处them改为which, 此处为非限制性定语从句。

②处去掉turned。

turn off为短暂性动词短语，在此处不合句意。

③处将thinking改为thought,此处应为被动语态。

④处去掉it，此处as引导非限制性定语从句。

【范文】
Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname ―the Wizard of Meio Park‖. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying, ―genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration‖. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
【即学即练】
1.假如你们班这期的黑板报需要一篇关于德国作曲家贝多芬（Ludwig van Beethoven）的生平的文章，请根据以下表格写一篇人物简介：
人物：Beethoven 生平事迹出生日期、地点1770年12月诞生于德国波恩（Bonn）；
童年时期自幼跟从父亲学音乐。

很早就显露了音乐才能，八岁开始登台演出；
成年后18岁时母亲去世，开始担负抚养两个弟弟的责任；
在事业获得巨大成功的同时深受耳聋折磨；
1827年死去；
作品一生完成了一百多部作品，其中有交响乐9部，至今还影响着人们。

要求：1.字数150左右 2. 参考词汇交响乐：symphony 作曲家：composer 作品：masterpiece 3. 不可照译，可以适当扩展
二介绍地点
1.介绍地点，有四项基本要求：一是抓住此处所的基本特征；二是要遵循一定的顺序，使文章条理清楚，中心突出；三是要运用恰当的方法进行说明；最后是语言要做到准确无误。

我们常用的方法有列数字、做比较、打比方、举例子、引资料等。

遣词造句不可过分渲染或模棱两可，要简洁、明白。

尤其要注意方位词的准确运用。

2. 学习并牢记下面的短语和句型
表空间顺序
in front of, in the front of, at the back of, on the right（left）side，close to , next to, opposite, across, inside, outside, in （to）the south / east / west / north, on one side …, on the other side（of）
表方位
1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room. （on the right of, in the front of, near the window, ）
2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. （On the right of the room,）
3. Next to it is a bed. （In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of ）
4. They are opposite the door. （on the left / right of the room.）
5. The office building is in the east of the campus. （in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of, ）
6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.
描述国家，城市等
7. China is located in Asia. （be situated…be surrounded by, lie to the east of ）
8. It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.
9. The population of this city is 100,000.
描述路线
10. When you come out of …（get to …reach…）
11. Cross the street（river）（keep walking along…walk down…）
12. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. （the second traffic lights, the first crossing, ）
13. Take the first turning on your left. （take the path which crosses the river.））
14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.
15. You’ll see（find）it
【例题体验】
假如你是李明，你正在陕西省会西安旅游。

你的朋友Peter发来email, 让你介绍一下当地情况。

请根据下表所提供的要点作出回复，并希望他也能来此旅游。

基本情况 1.历史悠久，华夏文明的发源地，号称“自然历史博物馆”；
2.四面临山傍水，风景优美。

重要名胜古迹 1.秦始皇兵马俑（世界第八大奇迹）；
2.周边的华山（五岳之一）, 渭河，秦岭山脉等；
3.……
注意：1.词数150左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不记入总词数）。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：秦始皇兵马俑Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses 起源地origin 文明civilization 【学生习作】
Dear Peter,
I am very glad to tell you about my trip in Xian, the capital city of Shanxi province. Its beautiful scenery is really a feast to your eyes and its long history has impressed me so much. （-2分）①It is no denying that Xian is the origin of Chinese civilization. Maybe 'the eighth major miracle of the world' alone, Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses, is enough to explain why it enjoys the title of‘Natural History Museum’, （-2分）②not mention others numerous historical sites, such as Famen Temple and the City Wall of the Ming Dynasty and so on. Furthermore, Qinling Mountains stands to the south and the Weihe River lies to the north. It is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills. Mountain Huashan in particular makes me love it at the first sight with its breath-taking cliffs and unique characteristics. No wonder that it is regarded as one of the five best-known mountains in China.
Xian is really worth your visiting. I look forward to your coming.（得分档次：第四档，21分）Yours,
Liming
【习作评析】
1.总体评价：结构完整，思路清晰，短文字里行间反映了描写地点类说明文的基本格式和要求。

文章分为两部分来介绍西安，即第二句中所说的风景和历史古迹，条理很清楚。

短文运用了不少高级句型和短语，如：a feast to your eyes，at the first sight，no wonder that, be regarded as,分词短语结构等等使文章语言地道而丰富。

要注意的是固定句型要记牢。

2.误点点拨：①处It改为There, There is no denying..., 固定句型，“不可否认……”。

②处not mention改为not to mention, 固定句型，“不用提”。

3.画龙点睛：第二段的倒数第三、四句比较松散，可改为with结构的句型：Furthermore, with Qinling Mountains to the south and the Weihe River to the north, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills.
【范文】
Dear Peter,
I am very glad to tell you about my trip in Xian, the capital city of Shanxi province. What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history. First, as is known to the world, Xian has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization. The cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites, help Xian enjoy the title of‘Natural History Museum’. Just take Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses for example. It is praised as‘the eighth major miracle of the world’. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills, for example, to the north of the city stands the Qinling Mountains and to the north lies the Weihe River. I have also climbed Mountain Huashan, one of the five best-known mountains in China, which is famous for its breath-taking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
It is really worth your visiting. I look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liming
【即学即练】
2.假如你是王林，你正在黄山度假。

黄山美丽的风景深深吸引着你，请根据以下要点写一封email 给你的朋友李军，描述自己的所见。

1. 黄山占地250平方公里，其中154平方公里是风景点；
2. 黄山七十二峰，最高峰莲花峰吸引了无数游客来攀登，迎客松成为好客的象征；
3. 黄山以奇松、怪石、云海、温泉而闻名于世；
4. ……
注意：1.词数150左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不记入总词数）。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：莲花峰Lotus Flower Peak 温泉hot spring 好客的hospitable
Dear Lijun,
This is my first time to visit Mountain Huangshan. __________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ If possible, I advise you to experience its unique beauty by yourself.
Yours,
Wanglin
三描述图表
【写作指导】
高考中的图表作文要求考生在对图表中相关数据进行仔细说明、分析、比较的基础上，归纳出数据的增减变量，从而总结出图表所反映的主题、意向、趋势和潜在含义，继而从中推导出合乎逻辑的结论和看法。

考生可从以下三个方面着手：
1.开门见山地点明该该图表所反映的主题。

经常使用的词汇有：table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show, represent等。

2.分析数据见的主要差异及趋势，可采用分类式或对比式，并阐明理由。

1) 写好图表作文的关键是记住一些常用的词和短语。

例如：
描述图表变化趋势的词语：
上升：increase/ rise/ go up/ shoot up；下降：decrease/ reduce/ come down/ decline/ drop/ fall；快：quickly/ rapidly/ sharply/ dramatically；慢：slowly/ gradually/ slightly；持续不变：level off/ remain steady/ remain unchanged
常用句型：在表格描述中常用as-clause。

如：As is shown in…；As can be seen from…。

表达比较与对比法常用句式与词语：
There are a lot of similarities between …and…；…is similar to…；similarly, likewise, in comparison, just like;
The difference between …and …lies in…；on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand 分析原因的词语：
lead to, result in, cause, be responsible for, account for, contribute to
表示一段时间始末的词组：
between 1986 and 1990; during/over the period from 1986 to 1990…
2) 重点要突出：在行文过程中要注意，不要盲目地引用过多的或全部的表格上数据，不要做毫无目的、没有主次的数据的堆砌。

除了可以直接引用有代表性的关键数字外，应该有目的地进行简单的计算，指出增减的百分比、倍数或绝对数字来。

3.归纳总结或发表看法。

常用短语和句型: in a word, in short, It’s clear from the chart that…，We can draw the conclusion that …，We can learn/know that…等。

4.图表作文的写作模板
As is shown in the table (or in the picture), ___________ dropped from ___________ in 1994 to ___________ in 1996___________ According to the figures given in the table, ___________ has great increased (or decreased) in the past … years (or decades), reaching ___________ in 1996. From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline (or rise) in … It is clear that …
There are at least two good reasons for ___________ For one thing, ___________. Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in ___________.For another thing, ___________ is due to the fact that ___________. In addition, ___________ is responsible for ___________.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ___________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
As far as I am concerned, ___________. So my conclusion is that ___________. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
【真题体验】
（请根据对某校2004-2007年这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论，词数150左右。

【学生习作】
With the development of the Internet, nowadays many students own QQs. According to the chart, in 2004, only 20% of the students had QQs, but in 2005, 40% had QQs. In 2006, about 50% of them owned QQs, and in 2007, 60% of them had QQs.
So there is no doubt that QQ has been very popular among middle school students. There are many reasons for that. First,（-2分）①they are very convenient to communicate with each other. Second, they can entertain（-1分）②them through QQ,（-2分）③such as they can play games, enjoy music and even watch TV. QQ’s functions are becoming more and more. As a result, it has even provided the latest news especially entertainment, so they needn’t read newspapers. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and then it can serve its purpose beautifully. （得分档次：第四档，18分）
【习作评析】
1.总体评价：本文是一篇叙议结合的短文，要点基本齐全。

作者首先简要描述了变化，并在
第二段就QQ流行的原因做了说明，最后提出建议。

此外，本文作者合理使用了一些关联词和过度词语，使文章前后连贯，内容紧凑，过渡自然，提高了文章的得分档次。

但是由于第一段过于单调，减去2分，加上出现一些明显的词语用法错误，使得文章失分不少。

2.误点点拨：①改为it’s convenient for them, convenient的主语不可为人。

②them改为themselves。

③改为for example。

注意后面应加上逗号，such as后面不能接句子。

画龙点睛：文章的第一段由于数据的堆砌使得句式单调，如40% have QQs.可改为the rate doubled。

可将In 2006, about 50% of them owned QQs, and in 2007, 60% of them had QQs. 整合为一句，Likewise, it rose from about 50% in 2006 to 60% in 2007. 这样修改使句子更加简洁，避免了重复。

【范文】
As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased in the past four years from 2004 to 2007. Back in 2004, only 20% of them have QQs; one year later, the rate becomes twice larger; compared with about 50% in 2006, the rate in 2007 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.
In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. What’s more, QQ has
gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only so can it serve its purpose beautifully.
【即学即练】
3.下面表格是某地区居民近10年的消费变化，请根据要求写一篇文章，要求要求描述变化并得出结论，词数150左右。

1998 2000 2003 2007 Food , drink and clothing
40% 35% 30% 25% Transport and recreation
10% 15% 20% 25% Education and housing
30% 35% 38% 40% others
20% 15% 12% 10%
二、议论文
1.议论文亦称说理文、论说文，是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。

论点、论据、和论证是不可缺少的三要素。

2. 议论文的语言特点：
1) 时态的使用相对比较广泛，根据行文的需要可以使用任何时态;
2) 主动语态、陈述句式为主，被动语态和虚拟语气在议论文中也经常使用;
3) 恰当地使用过渡词语和一些固定句型。

3. 议论文常用的逻辑联系词语包括：in my opinion, personally, for the sake of, clearly, obviously, surely, undoubtedly, hence, moreover, besides, in addition, what’s more, additionally, furthermore, first(ly), to begin with, second (ly), last(ly), first of all, most important of all, on the other hand, worse still, on the contrary, as a result / consequence, consequently , generally speaking, last but not the least(最后但并不是最不重要的一点; 最后的一项要点是) in short, all in all, in conclusion, in brief 等。

4.议论文不同类型模板：
1).不同观点列举型（选择型）：
There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目 . But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. Some people think that 观点一. In their views, there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一 . Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二 .
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二 . In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一 . On the other hand, 原因二 . Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二 .
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二 . It is not only because ____ , but also because . The more , the more ./ On when we … can we do__________.
2).权衡利弊型：
Year
Item。