家庭环境与教育-五年高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累
近五年(2015-2019)高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累话题四:家庭环境与教育
话题04 家庭环境与教育话题解读家庭教育和教育类是在高考作文考试中比较常见的,与社会类和环境类并称为作文话题三剑客,同学们在复习的时候,命题者可能会围绕这三类话题:1 教育的功能中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?对于社会角度,学生们可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活这几个方面来写。
2 学校的科目应当由谁选择比如说:政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?还有一种是让你分析学习各类科目的重要性。
比如:要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?3 什么样的教学方式最好一般会考到的话题有:私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?现在还出现一种考题就是:远程教育的利弊,同学们可以关注一下。
4 学费应该谁来付这些话题都有一个共同的特征,就是题目中往往会说:高等教育只对学生自己有好处,因此学生应当为高等教育买单。
同学们在进行写作时,可以先反驳这种理由,再交代学生自己支付学费的后果。
5 学生需要参加社会实践吗当代大学生对于课外活动的态度?学生要不要参加无偿社会劳动?毕业后需要去农村锻炼吗?要不要从小远离父母居住?在这类题目中,学生可以阐述一下现在大学生对于参加社会实践的态度,并说明参加社会实践的好处。
6 家庭教育与学校教育遇到这一类的题目,同学们可以写一下家庭教育与学校教育各自的优缺点。
另外,家庭教育中还会出现这样的题目:穷人家的孩子是否早当家?要不要把孩子趁早送到学校去?老师对儿童的智力和社会发展所起的作用大于家长吗?教育类话题答题技巧首先审题,看清题目要你表达的是什么内容。
对于个人观点类题目:第一段:开头段,开门见山,阐述题目背景并引出自己的观点。
第二段:第一个分论点,正面举例论证你的观点。
五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文详解及写作素材积累:话题05人生感悟
五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文详解及写作素材积累:话题05 人生感悟人生感悟类话题是常考热门话题之一,包括从日常生活方生的事情当中感悟的道理,考生可以把这些重点话题多练练。
命题者可能从以下一些角度命题:1.幸福幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是……。
2.感恩对父母心存感恩,因为他们给予我生命,让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩,因为他们给了我教诲,让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩,因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩,因为社会给了我智慧和力量。
自从国家实施义务教育以来,书本免费,食宿免费,而且还有贫困助学金等。
面对这些,我们应该心存感恩,感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。
让我们永远记住:感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!3. 过程比结果更重要安静地享受过程远比匆忙地寻求结果更智慧,更受人推崇。
除此之外,对结果毫无耐心也不值得提倡,因为它会使人们行动鲁莽,注重结果,破坏期待。
4. 行动的力量行动越多,积累的经验、技能越多,距离终点越近。
梦想引导行动,行动实现梦想。
5. 努力创造机会努力创造机会总是必要的,也是值得的。
尤其是在这个竞争激烈的社会。
等到机会从天而降很大程度上会导致过一种枯燥而没有成就的生活。
一、话题常用单词1.impact影响2.affection喜爱3. ambition 决心4. assessment评价5. campaign活动6. abolish废除7. acquire获取8. allocate分配9. appeal to吸引10. accommodate供给, 调节11. arise出现12.assume假设13.attain获得, 得到14. blossom开花15.boom兴旺16. achievement 成就17. adaptation适应18. adventure冒险19. association联系20. barrier障碍21.willpower/persistence毅力22.withstand challenges经得住挑战23.aggressive有进取心的24.energetic精力充沛的25.striving spirit进取精神26.open-mindednes心胸开阔27.widen one’s knowledge增长见识28.innovation创新29.self-confidence自信心30.ambition雄心壮志31. be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安 /紧张/孤独32.be pleased with对……感到高兴。
2016年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累(解析版)
2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume ) .给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format ) .注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】该题虽然也是文字提示,属于书信体应用文写作,但它同往年的命题形式大不相同.写作要点没有单独罗列出来,而是包含在题目要求中,这对考生审题和构思提出了较大的挑战,这是前所未有的创新.经过认真审题,我们可以确定本文的写作要点有:(1 )简单介绍自己、解释缘由;(2 )说明写信的目的- -修改文字和格式;(3 )提示所附材料在哪里;(4 )表示感谢.试题的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情,题目要求明确、清晰,开放性很强,给考生留下了很大的自主发挥的空间.【总分值范文】Dear Ms Jenkins,In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part -time job in a foreign capital company.I havealready finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don ,t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I ,mwriting you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And I ,d be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua2.2021年新课标全国卷II假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club )将举办国际中学摄影展.请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品.信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool .注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】本文属于半开放作文.要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信,建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展.文章要使用第|一人称和一般现在时为主的时态.要点:1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展,主题为环境保护;2.展览时间6月15日,持续三周;3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣,也恰好有环保方面的图片,希望对方能够参加本次展览.4.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool .在写作时,注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用;同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语,尤其注意不要出现中国式英语,恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性.【总分值范文】Dear Peter,Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua3.2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】题目要求写一封抱歉信,李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob抱歉,文章应使用第|一人称和一般现在时进行写作.写作内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因;另约时间.注意使用连接词,使作文内容连贯.【总分值范文】Dear Bob,I ,m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afterno on. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we ,ll have more time to read and select books. If it ,s convenient for you, let ,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua4.2021年浙江卷"Planning is good ,but doing is better〞是一句英国名言.请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文. 要求如下:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾.注意:1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数):2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否那么按作弊行为认定.Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】本文为一篇开放式作文.题目给出标题和提纲.结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将方案付诸实施的重要性.围绕这个主旨去写,不能跑题.提纲局部还要求三个方面:1.简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾.这就确定了作文的结构框架.在主旨和结构确定下来后,还要注意文章应用第|一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时.写作时发挥自己的想象,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来 .注意要主次清楚、详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁,同时应选用适宜的连接词或过渡词,使文章自然连贯.最||后要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.【总分值范文】Planning Is Good,But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津.一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动 .现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢迎会上致辞.请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿.(1)回忆双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);(2)谈谈收获或感想;(3)表达祝愿与期望.注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Dear friends,How time flies!Thank you.【写作思路】这是一篇发言稿 ,要点都已经给出 ,关键在于要点要全面涵盖 ,不能有遗漏和省略 .但是要点只是提纲 ,考生还要在此根底上增加细节 ,不要逐字逐句翻译 ,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序 ,运用适宜的连接词连接全文 ,同时选择高级||的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采 .审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时 ,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言 ,运用适宜的语法规那么和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来 .难点在于选择词汇和句型 ,可以灵活运用高级||词汇和固定短语准确表述 .还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来 ,这样文章显得更连贯 .【总分值范文】Dear friends,How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all have benefited from.Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.Thank you.6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华.你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物.请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1. 该人物是谁;2. 该人物的主要奉献;3. 该人物对你的影响.注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】题材新颖,要求介绍中国历史人物,内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的奉献和对你的影响.不少于50词,使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第|一人称和第三人称进行写作.题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作,对于应用文格式的要求并不高,但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高.本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物,但是谈及人物的奉献和对自己的影响时,考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍,故难度较去年明显提升.【总分值范文】Dear Jim,Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!Yours,Li Hua第二节假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华.你班同学参加了学校的"地球日〞系列活动.请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以"Actions for a Greener Earth〞为题,给校刊"英语角〞写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程.注意:词数不少于60 .提示词:地球日Earth Day____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】话题比较常规,整体难度适中. "地球日〞系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容,考生并不陌生.内容主要包括:公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等 .题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序,以"Actions for a Greener Earth〞为题,给校刊"英语角〞写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程.词数不少于60词,参考词汇必须使用.使用一般过去时和第|一人称进行写作.【总分值范文】Actions for a Greener EarthA week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greene r earth.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.7.2021年四川卷某中学生英文报正举办"The Season I Like Best〞的征文活动.请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 你最||喜欢的季节;2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如:气候、景色、活动、感受…… ) .注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 题目已为你写好;3. 行文连贯,语篇完整;4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【总分值范文】The Season I Like BestEach of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons; my favourite season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and hear the singing of small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I ,m so excited about the spring. Thank you, spring!8.2021年江苏卷请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章.In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on -line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the "Most Beautiful Teacher"and the "Cutest Baby".Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer"competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers , daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法.【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高.首||先考生要以30字概述短文内容.接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据.文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态.要点:1.概述:网络投票越来越流行,几乎人人都参与了网络投票,在给人们带来好处的同时,有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票.2.支持:网络投票和生活密切相关,我们应该积极参与.理由及依据:(1 )它是一种社会生活的方式;网络投票方便容易,不受时间和地点的束缚,同时网络投票的反响迅速可靠;(2 )虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰,但如果有更好的参与规那么,网络投票会更加标准合理.3.反对:网络投票会给人带来负面影响:(1 )人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉;(2 )网络投票结果并不客观;(3 )网络投票可能会被成心利用.建议考生在写作概述时,语言简练不拖沓.【总分值范文】Possible version one:On -line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on - line voting.(150 words) Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are some what puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, peoplemay feel forced when asked to do things that they don ,t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social -networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words) 2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:1.词数100左右 .2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇:住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如:表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如:plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等;用了一些过渡词如:First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然;用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如:I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "A friend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言标准;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if youwant to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如:would like to do;help sb do sth;not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如:What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句;That is why I recommend another category of books:这里why引导的表语从句;I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部:一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that...";如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游;2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往;3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意:1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【写作指导】应用文写作包括书信,通知和演讲稿,书信是较为常考的类型.2021年北京(高|考)英语考查的为书信中的抱歉信,学生在写抱歉信时障碍比较小,但如何写出高分作文是难点.写应用文时应保证以下内容:表达歉意Please accept my heartfelt apology.解释原因the reason why I …is that…提出建议I would appreciate it if you can allow me to …结尾Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused.考生在写作中一定要注意到格式标准、语气合理,交际感强烈,否那么分数很可能会在12分以下,应用文书写不需要过长的句子,句子长度控制在两行以内,应注意行文流畅,感情真挚,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart, I am indeed sorry for the trouble ,使用schedule, postpone等升级||单词难度,但注意不要通篇难词.另外需要提醒的是,书信应有称呼,有结尾,假设开头结尾已给出,需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍,否那么扣相应分数.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I'm sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.。
2017年高考满分作文-五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累(解析版)
2021年(高|考)总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语.请你写封邮件告知下次上课的方案.内容包括:(1 )时间和地点;(3 )课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史.注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容(属学校生活、语言学习范畴) .与往年相比最||大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化,这符合2021年英语(高|考)大纲提出的:在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观,重视语言应用,回归了英语作为语言功能的本质.因此,掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要.文体:书信体,一种常见的告知信,相对简单.人物关系:朋友问候语及开头语:How are you? / How is everything going?/ How are things with you? /I am writing to you about…./ I am writing to tell you something about….写信目的:告知上课时间,内容及课前准备结束语如:Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.个人发挥,适当增加相关细节语言分析话题词激活学校生活:take part in, attend, activity, knowledge语言学习:acquire, advises sb. to do sth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累.运用高级||句式:如:since引导的状语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句 .【总分值范文】Dear Leslie ,Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonde rful poems.Best wishes.Yours ,Li Hua【解析】随着时代的开展,电子邮件越来越受广阔中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉.考生成文时应注意:1. 要点要齐全:(1 )时间和地点;(2 )内容:学习唐诗;(3 )课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史.2. 时态:以一般现在时为主;3. 人称:第二人称为主;4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.5. 适当使用一些高级||句型和词汇以提高作文档次.2.2021年新课标全国卷II假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper -cutting )艺术展.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展.写作情境设置真实,任务要求符合学生能力水平,自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper-cutting)的内容,能够引导学生在使用外语了解世|界的同时,注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果,运用中国元素讲中国故事,增强文化自信.该写作贴近学生生活,学生有话可说.考生成文时应注意:1. 结构采用三段成文:第|一段自我介绍并引出话题;第二段具体交代活动时间、地点;第三段较为详细地交代展览内容.2. 时态:以一般将来时和一般现在时为主.3. 人称:第|一人称.4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.5. 适当使用一些高级||词汇和句型以提高作文档次. 【总分值范文】Dear Henry ,You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. M aybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua3.2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华.你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员.请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】该篇书面表达是书信类文体,但是与体育有关,要求考生按照所给提示进行写作,可增加细节以使行文连贯.在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点:1. 确定文章的结构:书信的开头、正文和结尾.2. 确定文章的要点:写信的目的;表示感谢.3. 确定文章的布局.4. 确定文章的时态,在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时.5. 正确使用较高级||词汇和多种句式,如定语从句,状语从句,主语从句等.6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯.【总分值范文】Dear Eric,If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua4.2021年浙江卷假定你是李华,方案组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加.内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】本试题是一篇半开放的作文,写作文体是电子邮件,写一封邀请信给Chris .要点提示中只列出了大概内容,包括3点(参加者,时间、地点和活动) ,具体细节需要考生自己发挥.邀请信一般分为以下几局部:首||先,要列出写信的目的,并发出诚挚邀请;其次,要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明,什么时间,什么地点,做什么事情等;最||后,要再次表示邀请,希望对方参加.【一句多译】①My intention to write this letter is to tell you an outgoing that we will make these days.②Our destination is Siming Mountain, where we will have a climb together with the local people we will hold a picnic party.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you t hat there will be an outgoing for us these days.I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have aclimb. What ,s more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.5.2021年天津卷假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系.近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件.(1 )简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2 )告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3 )希望她有时机重访天津.注意:(1 )词数不少于100;(2 )可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3 )开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,I ,m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin 【思路分析】这是一封邮件,要点都已经给出,关键在于要点要全面,不能有遗漏和省略.但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此根底上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用适宜的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级||的词汇和语法工程让文章更有文采.审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用适宜的语法规那么和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来.难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级||词汇和固定短语准确表述.还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯.【总分值范文】Dear Mrs. Green,I ,m so glad to hear from you.While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, I ,ve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I ,ve been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I ,m interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparati ons beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.By the way, it ,s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:"长江之行〞或者"泰山之旅〞.Jim来信希望你能给些建议.请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿.注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Dear Jim,_____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua【总分值范文】本文为提纲类作文.首||先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.最||后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯.本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构,三段式,其中第|一段写你所建议的路线,第二局部是本文的主体,要阐述你所建议的路线的原因,好让他们有很好的掌握,最||后一段,提出你的祝愿.写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系.根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级||词汇和高级||句子为文章增色添彩.【答案】Dear Jim,I ,m happy to receive your letter and know you ,re coming to China.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次清楚,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级||句子.表语从句的使用:That ,s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级||词汇的使用:highly recommended .连接词的合理使用:Personally ,moreover .第二节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序 ,写一篇英文周记 ,记录毕业前夕你们制作以 "感恩母校〞为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程 .注意:词数不少于60 .提示词:视频 video(请务必讲作文写在答题卡指定区域内)_____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】本文属于看图说话类作文 .首||先要读懂图片隐含的信息,本文有四幅图,而且要求是按先后顺序,所以一定要注意顺序的问题;其次,根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到,然后分别写出每幅图的主题句,也就是说把文章主体局部的大纲要列好,最||后结合自己的看法,写出相应的总结和感受.写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序,巧用连接词,巧妙衔接,合理安排.【总分值范文】Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.7.2021年江苏卷请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box -office income )的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章.Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang: Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua: Whatever. We ,ve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journeyto the West…Each sounds great!Li Jiang: Yeah! And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua: And the high -tech!...Li Jiang: Perfect! Let ,s get some food first. We only have 20 minutesleft.One Day in 2021. At Home.Son: Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother: Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It ,s convenient with our new and faster network Son: But it feels good in a cinema.Mother: And the price… We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son: Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother: But still we cannot get the money ,s worth. Some films are just boring…【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由.【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.【思路分析】此题考查任务型读写.此类作文对考生的能力要求极高.首||先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容.接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法,并谈谈自己对票房走向的看法.作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主.要点:1. 概述:中国电影票房在2021 -2021年间呈现不断增长的趋势,但是2021年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢.2. 分析原因:票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关,人们有了多余的钱,才可能消费、娱乐;另一方面,电影的制作技术日臻成熟,许多优质的电影不断上映;再者,互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用.3. 看法和理由:票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落.只要给出恰当的理由,对票房看涨或是看落皆可.写30词的概述时,语言要简练、不拖沓.遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯,尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型.同时注意语句的连贯性.【总分值范文】Possible version one:The box -office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2021 to over 40 billion in 2021. However, that increase slowed down in 2021.China ,s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box -office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.(150 words)Possible version two:As is indicated in the graph, the box -office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2021 to 2021, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2021.However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.(150 words)2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意:100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇:住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如:表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如:plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等;用了一些过渡词如:First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然;用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如:I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "A friend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言标准;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如:would like to do;help sb do sth;not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如:What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句;That is why I recommend another category of books:这里why引导的表语从句;I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部:一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that...";如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游;2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往;3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意:1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________。
英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累:话题04 家庭环境与教育
家庭教育和教育类是在高考作文考试中比较常见的,与社会类和环境类并称为作文话题三剑客,同学们在复习的时候,命题者可能会围绕这三类话题:1 教育的功能中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?对于社会角度,学生们可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活这几个方面来写。
2 学校的科目应当由谁选择比如说:政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?还有一种是让你分析学习各类科目的重要性。
比如:要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?3 什么样的教学方式最好一般会考到的话题有:私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?现在还出现一种考题就是:远程教育的利弊,同学们可以关注一下。
4 学费应该谁来付这些话题都有一个共同的特征,就是题目中往往会说:高等教育只对学生自己有好处,因此学生应当为高等教育买单。
同学们在进行写作时,可以先反驳这种理由,再交代学生自己支付学费的后果。
5 学生需要参加社会实践吗当代大学生对于课外活动的态度?学生要不要参加无偿社会劳动?毕业后需要去农村锻炼吗?要不要从小远离父母居住?在这类题目中,学生可以阐述一下现在大学生对于参加社会实践的态度,并说明参加社会实践的好处。
6 家庭教育与学校教育遇到这一类的题目,同学们可以写一下家庭教育与学校教育各自的优缺点。
另外,家庭教育中还会出现这样的题目:穷人家的孩子是否早当家?要不要把孩子趁早送到学校去?老师对儿童的智力和社会发展所起的作用大于家长吗?教育类话题答题技巧首先审题,看清题目要你表达的是什么内容。
对于个人观点类题目:第一段:开头段,开门见山,阐述题目背景并引出自己的观点。
第二段:第一个分论点,正面举例论证你的观点。
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文English: Family education and the growth environment play a crucial role in shaping an individual's character, values, and overall development. The family serves as the first school for children, where they learn essential life skills, values, and behaviors from their parents or caregivers. Children raised in a nurturing and supportive family environment are more likely to develop positive traits such as empathy, resilience, and self-confidence. Additionally, the quality of family relationships and communication within the household can greatly influence a child's emotional well-being and mental health. Furthermore, the growth environment, which encompasses factors such as socio-economic status, access to resources, and community support, can also impact a child's development. Children who grow up in safe, stable, and stimulating environments tend to perform better academically, socially, and emotionally. Therefore, it is crucial for parents and caregivers to provide a loving, encouraging, and enriching environment that fosters the holistic development of their children.中文翻译: 家庭教育和成长环境对塑造个人品格、价值观和整体发展起着至关重要的作用。
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文English:The importance of family education and the growth environment cannot be overstated. Children learn and develop their core values, beliefs, and behaviors from the interactions and guidance provided by their family. A positive and supportive family environment fosters a sense of security, love, and belonging, which are crucial for a child's emotional and psychological well-being. Effective family education also equips children with essential life skills, social etiquette, and moral principles that shape their character and future choices. Moreover, the family serves as the first socializing agent for children, teaching them about relationships, communication, and problem-solving, which are essential for their future success and happiness. Therefore, the impact of family education and the growth environment on a child's development and future prospects cannot be overlooked.Translated content:家庭教育和成长环境的重要性不言而喻。
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文
家庭教育和成长环境很重要英语作文Family Education and Growth Environment are CrucialGrowing up in a nurturing and supportive environment is a fundamental aspect of an individual's development. The family unit plays a pivotal role in shaping a person's personality, values, and overall well-being. Family education, which encompasses the guidance, teachings, and experiences provided by parents or guardians, is a crucial factor in determining the trajectory of a person's life. Similarly, the growth environment, which includes the physical, social, and emotional surroundings in which an individual is raised, also significantly impacts their development.One of the primary ways in which family education influences a person's growth is through the transmission of values and beliefs. Parents or guardians serve as role models, imparting their own perspectives, morals, and principles to their children. These foundational values often become the guiding principles that individuals adopt and carry with them throughout their lives. For instance, a child raised in a family that emphasizes the importance of education, hard work, and ethical behavior is more likely to internalize and demonstrate these qualities as they mature.Moreover, family education plays a crucial role in the development of an individual's emotional and social intelligence. The emotional support, nurturing, and guidance provided by family members can greatly impact a person's ability to navigate interpersonal relationships, manage their emotions, and develop empathy. Children who grow up in a household where their feelings are acknowledged, validated, and addressed are more likely to develop healthy emotional coping mechanisms and the ability to form meaningful connections with others.The growth environment, which encompasses the physical, social, and cultural contexts in which a person is raised, also significantly influences their development. The physical environment, such as the safety, cleanliness, and resources available in the home, can impact a child's physical well-being, cognitive development, and sense of security. Similarly, the social environment, which includes the relationships, networks, and communities that a person is exposed to, can shape their social skills, sense of belonging, and opportunities for growth.Furthermore, the cultural and societal influences present in a person's growth environment can also play a pivotal role in their development. An individual's exposure to diverse perspectives, traditions, and belief systems can foster a greater appreciation fordiversity, critical thinking, and adaptability. Conversely, a growth environment that is limited in its cultural diversity or reinforces rigid, limited worldviews may inhibit an individual's ability to navigate an increasingly globalized and interconnected world.It is important to note that the influence of family education and growth environment is not limited to childhood and adolescence. These factors continue to shape an individual's personal and professional development throughout their life. The values, emotional skills, and adaptability cultivated in the formative years often serve as the foundation for an individual's ability to navigate challenges, make informed decisions, and thrive in various aspects of their life.In conclusion, family education and growth environment are crucial elements in shaping an individual's development. The guidance, support, and cultural influences provided by the family unit and the broader environment in which a person is raised can profoundly impact their values, emotional intelligence, social skills, and overall well-being. Recognizing the significance of these factors and striving to create nurturing, diverse, and enriching environments for individuals to grow and thrive is essential for fostering the development of well-rounded, adaptable, and successful members of society.。
家庭环境对个人成长的影响作文素材
家庭环境对个人成长的影响作文素材英文回答:The family environment plays a crucial role in shaping an individual's growth and development. It provides the foundation for a person's values, beliefs, and behaviors. Growing up in a supportive and nurturing family can have a positive impact on a person's overall well-being and success.Firstly, a loving and caring family environment fosters a sense of security and belonging. When individuals feel loved and accepted by their family members, they develop a strong sense of self-worth and confidence. This enables them to navigate through life's challenges and setbacks with resilience and determination. For example, I grew upin a family where my parents always encouraged and supported me in pursuing my dreams. This has instilled in me a belief in my abilities and the motivation to overcome obstacles.Secondly, the family environment influences an individual's values and beliefs. Parents serve as role models and transmit their values and beliefs to their children. For instance, if parents prioritize education and hard work, their children are likely to adopt the same values and strive for academic excellence. On the other hand, if parents prioritize material possessions andinstant gratification, their children may develop a materialistic mindset. Therefore, the family environment plays a significant role in shaping an individual's moral compass and guiding their decision-making process.Furthermore, the family environment also impacts an individual's interpersonal skills and relationships. Growing up in a supportive and communicative family helps individuals develop effective communication skills and the ability to build healthy relationships. For example, if parents encourage open and honest communication within the family, their children are more likely to develop good communication habits and have successful relationships with others. On the contrary, if a family lacks communicationand emotional support, individuals may struggle with expressing their feelings and forming meaningful connections with others.In addition, the family environment influences an individual's attitude towards success and failure. A family that celebrates achievements and supports growth fosters a growth mindset in its members. This mindset encourages individuals to embrace challenges, learn from failures, and strive for continuous improvement. On the other hand, a family that emphasizes perfection and discourages risk-taking may hinder an individual's personal growth and limit their potential. Therefore, the family environment plays a crucial role in shaping an individual's resilience, perseverance, and attitude towards success and failure.To sum up, the family environment has a profound impact on an individual's growth and development. It shapes their values, beliefs, behaviors, and interpersonal skills. Growing up in a supportive and nurturing family provides individuals with a strong foundation for success and well-being. Conversely, a negative family environment can hinderan individual's personal growth and limit their potential. Therefore, it is essential to cultivate a positive and loving family environment to ensure the holistic development of individuals.中文回答:家庭环境对个人的成长和发展起着至关重要的作用。
家庭环保的英语作文带翻译
Title: Embracing Green Living at HomeAs a high school student deeply concerned about the environment, I have always been an advocate for ecofriendly practices, especially within the comfort of my home. The concept of a green home is not just about aesthetics its about making conscious choices that reduce our carbon footprint and promote sustainability. Heres how my family and I have embraced green living.Water ConservationWater is a precious resource, and conserving it is a priority in our household. We have installed lowflow showerheads and faucets, which not only save water but also reduce our utility bills. Additionally, we use a rainwater harvesting system to collect and store rainwater for gardening purposes, ensuring that we make the most of natural resources.Energy EfficiencyOur home is equipped with energyefficient appliances and LED lighting, which consume less power and last longer. We also make a point to switch off lights and unplug electronics when theyre not in use to prevent energy wastage. Moreover, weve invested in solar panels, harnessing the power of the sun to reduce our reliance on nonrenewable energy sources.Waste ReductionReducing waste is another significant aspect of our green lifestyle. We practice the 3Rs: Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. We minimize the use of singleuse plastics and opt for reusable bags, bottles, and containers. Ourkitchen is wellstocked with compost bins, turning food waste into nutrientrich compost for our garden.Sustainable TransportationTransportation contributes significantly to greenhouse gas emissions. To combat this, we encourage walking, biking, or using public transport whenever possible. For longer distances, we carpool or use electric vehicles, significantly cutting down our carbon emissions.Green SpacesCreating green spaces within our home is another way we contribute to the environment. We have a small garden where we grow our herbs and vegetables, reducing the need for transportation and packaging of these products. The plants also help purify the air and provide a serene environment.Education and AwarenessLastly, we believe in the power of education and awareness. We regularly share tips and ideas on social media and within our community to inspire others to adopt green practices. We also participate in local environmental initiatives and workshops to stay informed and involved.In conclusion, embracing green living at home is not just about individual actions but also about contributing to a larger movement towards a sustainable future. It requires a bit of effort and commitment, but the benefits to our planet and our health are immeasurable. By making small changes in our daily routines, we can collectively make a significant impacton the environment.翻译:标题:在家拥抱绿色生活作为一名深切关心环境的高中生,我一直是环保实践的倡导者,尤其是在我家的舒适环境中。
家庭环境和睦英文作文高中
家庭环境和睦英文作文高中对于我来说,家庭环境和睦是非常重要的。
在我的家庭中,我们总是互相支持和理解对方,这让我感到非常幸运。
英文:For me, a harmonious family environment is very important. In my family, we always support and understand each other, and I feel very fortunate for that.我们家庭的和睦环境让我感到非常舒适和安心。
举个例子,每当我有困难或者遇到挫折的时候,我总是可以找到家人来帮助我度过难关。
他们会给我建议,鼓励我,甚至帮我解决问题。
这种支持和理解让我觉得无论发生什么事情,我都不会孤单。
中文:The harmonious environment in our family makes me feel very comfortable and at ease. For example, whenever I have difficulties or encounter setbacks, I can always turn to myfamily for help. They give me advice, encourage me, and even help me solve the problem. This support and understanding make me feel that no matter what happens, I am not alone.另外,我们家庭中也有一些传统的习惯和活动,比如每周末我们会一起去公园散步,或者一起做一顿丰盛的晚餐。
这些活动不仅增进了我们之间的感情,也让我们有机会放松身心,忘记工作和学习的压力。
中文:In addition, there are also some traditional customs and activities in our family, such as going for a walk in the park together every weekend, or making a sumptuous dinner together. These activities not only enhance our relationship, but also give us the opportunity to relax and forget about the pressure of work and study.总的来说,我觉得家庭的和睦环境对每个人都非常重要。
家庭环境的英语作文
家庭环境的英语作文英文回答:Family is the foundation of our lives. It shapes who we are as individuals and provides us with the support and love we need to thrive. A healthy family environment is essential for children's physical, emotional, and intellectual development. It is a place where children feel safe, loved, and respected.There are many factors that contribute to a healthy family environment. Some of the most important include:Positive parenting: Parents who are warm, supportive, and involved in their children's lives create a positive family environment. They set clear expectations for their children and provide them with the guidance and discipline they need to succeed.Strong communication: Families that communicate openlyand honestly have strong relationships. Children feel comfortable talking to their parents about their feelings, thoughts, and experiences. Parents listen to their children and take their opinions seriously.Respect: All members of the family should respect each other's opinions, beliefs, and values. This creates a sense of equality and belonging.Cooperation: Families that work together to solve problems and achieve goals are more likely to be successful. Children learn the importance of cooperation and teamwork.Love: Love is the most important ingredient in a healthy family environment. Children need to feel loved and accepted by their parents and siblings. Love provides a sense of security and belonging.A healthy family environment is essential forchildren's development. It provides them with thefoundation they need to succeed in school, work, and life.中文回答:家庭是我们生活的基础。
高考英语作文家庭教育篇
Growing up, I was always surrounded by the warmth of family and the guidance of my parents. The influence of family education has been a cornerstone in shaping who I am today, and its something I cherish deeply. This essay is a reflection on the role of family education in my life and how it has molded my character and aspirations.From a young age, my parents instilled in me the importance of education. They believed that knowledge was the key to unlocking a better future. Every evening, our home was filled with the sound of pages turning as we all sat together, reading or doing homework. This routine was not just about learning facts and figures, but also about cultivating a love for learning that has stayed with me throughout my academic journey.One of the most significant lessons I learned from my family was the value of hard work and perseverance. My parents, both hardworking individuals, would often share stories of their own struggles and how they overcame them. These stories were not just tales of triumph but also served as a reminder that success is not handed to anyone on a silver platter. It has to be earned through dedication and consistent effort.In addition to academic pursuits, my family also emphasized the importance of moral values. Honesty, respect, and kindness were not just words but principles that were expected to be reflected in my actions. When I made mistakes, instead of harsh punishments, I was given the opportunity to understand the consequences of my actions and learn from them. This approach taught me to take responsibility for my actions and to be accountable for my decisions.The support and encouragement from my family have been instrumental in building my selfconfidence. Whenever I faced challenges or setbacks, they were always there to remind me of my strengths and to motivate me to keep pushing forward. Their belief in me has given me the courage to take risks and to pursue my dreams without fear of failure.Moreover, my family has also taught me the importance of empathy and compassion. They encouraged me to be considerate of others feelings and to help those in need. This has not only made me a more caring individual but has also broadened my perspective on life, helping me to understand and appreciate the diversity of human experiences.In conclusion, the role of family education in my life has been profound. It has not only equipped me with the knowledge and skills necessary for academic success but has also shaped my character and values. The lessons I have learned from my family about hard work, responsibility, selfconfidence, and compassion will continue to guide me as I navigate through life. As I prepare to face the challenges of the future, I am grateful for the strong foundation that my family has provided me.。
家庭保护环境英文作文
家庭保护环境英文作文English:Protecting the environment starts at home with small, mindful actions that collectively make a significant impact. One key way families can contribute is by reducing waste through practices like recycling and composting. By segregating recyclables from regular trash and composting organic waste, households can minimize their environmental footprint. Another crucial aspect is conserving energy. Turning off lights and electronics when not in use, using energy-efficient appliances, and optimizing heating and cooling systems all help in reducing energy consumption. Moreover, choosing sustainable products and adopting eco-friendly habits such as reducing water usage and opting for reusable items like cloth bags and water bottles also play a vital role. Educating family members, especially children, about the importance of environmental stewardship fosters a culture of responsibility and awareness. Simple activities like gardening together, visiting nature reserves, and discussing environmental issues empower families to connect with nature and inspire them to take meaningful actions to protect it.中文翻译:保护环境从家庭做起,通过一些小的、富有意识的行动,共同产生重要影响。
描写我家庭环境和周边环境的英语作文
描写我家庭环境和周边环境的英语作文My Family and Surrounding EnvironmentI am fortunate to be a part of a close-knit family that resides in a serene and beautiful neighborhood. Our home is a haven of warmth, love, and laughter, creating an atmosphere that fosters growth, understanding, and togetherness.Home Sweet HomeOur house is a modest yet cozy two-story building, painted in a soothing cream color with green shutters. It is surrounded by a well-kept garden, where colorful flowers and lush greenery add a touch of nature's beauty. The entrance leads to a spacious living room, adorned with comfortable sofas, a wooden coffee table, and a large bookshelf filled with a variety of books. The walls are adorned with family photos, reminding us of the precious moments we have shared.The kitchen is the heart of our home, where my mother prepares delicious meals, and we gather around the table to enjoy them. It is equipped with modern appliances and has a warm, inviting ambiance. The dining area features a large window that overlooks the garden, allowing natural light to flood in during meal times.My parents' bedroom is located on the first floor, along with a guest room and a bathroom. The second floor consists of two bedrooms, one of which is mine, and another bathroom. Each room has its unique decor,reflecting the personalities of its occupants.The NeighborhoodOur neighborhood is a peaceful and friendly community. Most of the residents have known each other for years, creating a strong sense of camaraderie. The streets are lined with trees, providing shade during hot summer days, and the lawns are well-manicured, adding to the overall aesthetic appeal.A short walk from our home is a beautiful park, where families often gather for picnics, sports, or simply to enjoy a leisurely stroll. The park features a playground, a basketball court, and a small lake where ducks and geese can be spotted. It is a favorite spot for my siblings and me to play with our friends.earby, there is a shopping center that caters to our daily needs. It includes a grocery store, a bakery, a pharmacy, and a few small shops. The local school is also within walking distance, making it convenient for children to commute.ConclusionMy family and the surrounding environment have played a significant role in shaping my upbringing. The love and support within our home, combined with the friendly neighborhood, have provided me with a sense of security, allowing me to grow and thrive. I feel truly blessed to be a part of such a wonderful community.。
高考英语作文家庭教育心得
Growing up, I was always under the impression that my familys approach to education was somewhat unconventional. It wasnt until I reached high school and started reflecting on my experiences that I realized the profound impact it had on my personal development and academic success. This essay is a heartfelt account of my journey through the unique landscape of family education.From a young age, my parents instilled in me the importance of selfdirected learning. They believed that education should not be confined to the four walls of a classroom but should be an integral part of life. This philosophy was evident in the way they encouraged me to explore my interests beyond the standard curriculum. Whether it was learning to play the guitar, delving into the world of robotics, or reading books on history, science, and literature, my parents were always supportive.One of the most significant aspects of my familys educational approach was the emphasis on critical thinking. My parents never simply told me what to think instead, they posed questions and encouraged me to form my own opinions. This was particularly evident during family discussions, where we would debate various topics, from current events to philosophical questions. These conversations were not just about exchanging ideas they were about learning how to analyze information, consider different perspectives, and articulate my thoughts clearly.Another key element of my familys educational philosophy was the importance of resilience. My parents never shielded me from failure rather, they used it as a teaching moment. When I faced setbacks, whether inacademics or extracurricular activities, they would remind me that failure is a natural part of the learning process. They taught me to view challenges as opportunities for growth, which has been invaluable in my academic journey.The support and encouragement I received from my family extended beyond the intellectual realm. They recognized the importance of emotional wellbeing in the educational process. My parents were always attentive to my emotional state, providing a safe space for me to express my feelings and concerns. This emotional support was crucial in helping me navigate the pressures of high school and maintain a healthy balance between my academic and personal life.Moreover, my familys educational approach was characterized by a strong emphasis on social responsibility. They believed that education should not only equip individuals with knowledge and skills but also instill a sense of duty towards society. This was reflected in our familys involvement in community service projects and our discussions about social issues. Through these experiences, I learned the importance of empathy, compassion, and the role I could play in making a positive impact on the world.In conclusion, my familys approach to education has been a pivotal force in shaping who I am today. The values of selfdirected learning, critical thinking, resilience, emotional support, and social responsibility have not only contributed to my academic achievements but have also prepared me for the challenges and opportunities that lie ahead. As I reflect on my highschool years, I am deeply grateful for the unique educational journey my family has provided, one that has nurtured my growth into a wellrounded individual ready to embrace the future.。
家庭环保英文作文
家庭环保英文作文英文:Growing up, my family has always been conscious about the environment and the impact we have on it. We have always made efforts to reduce our carbon footprint and live a more sustainable lifestyle. One of the ways we do this is by recycling. We have separate bins for different types of recyclables, such as paper, plastic, and glass. This not only reduces the amount of waste we send to landfills, but also conserves natural resources.Another way we practice environmental protection at home is by conserving water and electricity. We make sure to turn off lights and appliances when not in use, and we have installed low-flow faucets and showerheads to reduce water usage. These small changes may seem insignificant, but they add up to make a big difference in the long run.In addition to these daily habits, we also make aneffort to use eco-friendly products in our home. We use biodegradable cleaning products and opt for reusable items like cloth napkins and shopping bags. By choosing sustainable products, we are supporting companies that prioritize environmental responsibility.Furthermore, we have also made changes to our diet to be more environmentally friendly. We try to eat locally sourced and organic foods as much as possible, and we have reduced our meat consumption in favor of plant-based meals. This not only reduces our carbon footprint, but also supports sustainable farming practices.Overall, my family's commitment to environmental protection has become a way of life for us. It's not about being perfect, but about making small, conscious choices every day that contribute to a healthier planet for future generations.中文:在我成长的过程中,我的家庭一直都很注重环保和我们对环境的影响。
家庭环保的英语作文带翻译
家庭环保的英语作文带翻译Title: Promoting Environmental Protection in the Family。
In today's world, environmental protection has becomean increasingly pressing issue. As individuals, we musttake responsibility for preserving our planet for future generations. While large-scale efforts are essential, change often starts at home. Therefore, promoting environmental protection within the family is paramount. In this essay, we will explore various ways families can contribute to environmental conservation and discuss their significance.First and foremost, one of the most effective ways families can promote environmental protection is byadopting sustainable practices in their daily lives. This includes reducing energy consumption, conserving water, and minimizing waste generation. Simple actions such as turning off lights when leaving a room, taking shorter showers, and recycling household items can collectively make asignificant impact on the environment. By instilling these habits in family members from a young age, parents play a crucial role in shaping environmentally conscious individuals.Furthermore, families can actively participate in environmental initiatives within their communities. This may involve joining local cleanup events, volunteering for tree planting projects, or supporting eco-friendly businesses. By engaging in these activities together, families not only contribute to tangible environmental improvements but also foster a sense of camaraderie and shared responsibility.Education also plays a vital role in promoting environmental awareness within the family. Parents can educate their children about the importance of biodiversity, the effects of pollution, and the significance of conservation efforts. By involving children in discussions about environmental issues and encouraging them to ask questions, parents help cultivate a deep understanding and appreciation for nature.Moreover, families can incorporate eco-friendlypractices into their leisure activities. Instead of driving long distances for vacations, they can opt for closer destinations or explore nature reserves within their region. Additionally, activities such as hiking, camping, and birdwatching not only provide opportunities for family bonding but also foster a deeper connection with thenatural world.In addition to individual actions, families can also advocate for environmental policies and support organizations dedicated to conservation efforts. By participating in environmental campaigns, signing petitions, and contacting elected representatives, families can collectively voice their concerns and demand action on pressing environmental issues.Overall, promoting environmental protection within the family is essential for building a sustainable future. By adopting eco-friendly practices, participating in community initiatives, educating family members, incorporatingenvironmental values into leisure activities, andadvocating for change, families can make a meaningful contribution to preserving the planet for generations to come.中文翻译:标题,在家庭中推广环境保护。
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家庭教育和教育类是在高考作文考试中比较常见的,与社会类和环境类并称为作文话题三剑客,同学们在复习的时候,命题者可能会围绕这三类话题:1 教育的功能中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?对于社会角度,学生们可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活这几个方面来写。
2 学校的科目应当由谁选择比如说:政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?还有一种是让你分析学习各类科目的重要性。
比如:要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?3 什么样的教学方式最好一般会考到的话题有:私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?现在还出现一种考题就是:远程教育的利弊,同学们可以关注一下。
4 学费应该谁来付这些话题都有一个共同的特征,就是题目中往往会说:高等教育只对学生自己有好处,因此学生应当为高等教育买单。
同学们在进行写作时,可以先反驳这种理由,再交代学生自己支付学费的后果。
5 学生需要参加社会实践吗当代大学生对于课外活动的态度?学生要不要参加无偿社会劳动?毕业后需要去农村锻炼吗?要不要从小远离父母居住?在这类题目中,学生可以阐述一下现在大学生对于参加社会实践的态度,并说明参加社会实践的好处。
6 家庭教育与学校教育遇到这一类的题目,同学们可以写一下家庭教育与学校教育各自的优缺点。
另外,家庭教育中还会出现这样的题目:穷人家的孩子是否早当家?要不要把孩子趁早送到学校去?老师对儿童的智力和社会发展所起的作用大于家长吗?教育类话题答题技巧首先审题,看清题目要你表达的是什么内容。
对于个人观点类题目:第一段:开头段,开门见山,阐述题目背景并引出自己的观点。
第二段:第一个分论点,正面举例论证你的观点。
第三段:第二个分论点,可依然正面举例论证,也可反面论证你的观点。
第四段:自然结尾,重申主题。
对于题目给出观点的题目:第一段:一般题目中会给出两个观点,学生可以先说明题目中观点各自阐述的内容,并分析观点冲突的原因。
第二段:论证第一个观点的合理性,与其不合理性。
第三段:论证第二个观点的合理性与不合理性。
第四段:结尾,并引出个人观点。
一、话题常用单词1.parenting/upbringing家长对孩子的教育2.schooling学校对学生的教育3.awareness意识4.cultivate=develop=nurture=foster培养5.creative有创造力的6.physical身体的7.psychological心理的8.peer同龄人9.motivation动力10.motivated有动力的11.adapt to适应12.discipline纪律13.stimulating令人思维活跃的14.mental development智力发展15.physical development身体发展16.promote促进17.attend school上学18.innate先天就具有的19.help students to sharpen their skills帮助学生提高某种技能20.social sciences社会科学二、话题常用短语1. adapt oneself to the development of使自己适应…的发展2. scope of knowledge知识面3. instill high moral values灌输高尚的道德观4. lighten / relieve / ease the burden of减轻…的负担5. comprehensive knowledge渊博的知识6. enrich the teaching method丰富教育手段7. impart / inculcate knowledge 传授知识8.receive education接受教育9. schooling upbringing学校教育10.parenting vocational education家庭教育11.long-distance education远程教育12. narrow down the gap between…缩小…的差距13. down-to-earth / practical切合实际的14. enjoy equal rights享有平等权利15. solid professional working experience扎实的职业工作经验16. exchange experience交流经验17. undertake the obligations 承担责任18. offer a chance of education提供教育机会19. vocational guidance职业指导20. vocational training职业训练21. face up to possible pressure and competition勇敢面对可能的压力和竞争22. Exam-oriented Education应试教育23.Quality-oriented Education (Quality Education) 素质教育三、参考语句话题常用句型1.Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
2. No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.没有人能否认:教育是人生最重要的一方面。
3. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
4. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
5. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
6. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。
7. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.从这几年我搜集的信息来看,这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。
8. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.现在,人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业的时候教给学生所有的知识。
9. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.当前高校和研究机构关于教育问题存在着大量争论。
其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。
10. This issue has caused wide public concern.这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。
11. As for me, I'm in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:...就我而言,我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点,有以下原因:……12. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.即使最优秀的毕业生,要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。
13. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作机会或提升的机会。
14. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.对于大学生或高中生打工这一现象,校园里进行着广泛的争论。
15. By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通过做一份和专业相关的工作,学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力,而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。