雅思(写作)模拟试卷240(题后含答案及解析)

雅思（写作）模拟试卷240(题后含答案及解析) 题型有：1. WRITING TASK 1 2. WRITING TASK 2
WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
1．You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2016. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
正确答案：The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female adults learning different evening courses at an adult training centre in 2016, and the pie chart provides details about the proportion of students by age groups.Based on the bar chart, language was the most popular subject among women, with twice as many females (40) as males (20) learning this course. This was true of drama, attended by 20 women and 10 men. Around 25 men chose painting, while 30 women studied the same subject By contrast, sculpture was the only subject where male learners outnumbered females (10 versus 5).According to the pie chart, the given courses were dominantly attended by people aged 50 or over, accounting for 42%. This was followed by 40-49s at around a quarter. The percentage for 30-39s and 20-29s was similar, representing 16% and 11% respectively. Learners under 20 constituted only 5%.Overall, more women than men attended the courses at the centre, and most of the participants were elderly people over 50 years old.
解析：题目属于组合图形，通常来说，组合图形每个图为一个段落。

本文柱形图介绍某学习中心四个科目男女学员的人数对比，因为该柱形图没有出现时间的变化，所以大致可以按照学员数量从多到少来介绍。

饼图说明了各年龄段学员的比例，也是按照比例从大到小的顺序来写。

无论是柱形图还是饼图，在介绍过程中要适当地对比和类比数据，使表达更加清晰。

注意题目所给的时间为2016年，所以时态要用一般过去时。

按照以上思路，文章结构安排如下：1．开头段：改写题目。

2．介绍柱形图，由于数据较少，可以一一列出。

3．介绍饼图：按从大到小的顺序介绍。

4．结论段，总结文章的主要特征：该中心在所给的四个科目中女性学员多于男性学员，而且多数学员年龄在50岁或以上。

WRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
2．The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
正确答案：There is no doubt that the internet has revolutionised communication and information-sharing in the same way that the telegraph and the television did
before. However, societies have had to cope with unanticipated new problems, including crimes which traditional laws are powerless to prevent.To begin with, the global scale of the internet means that national laws are no longer adequate to control what happens online. Take restrictions on legal reporting, for example. In some countries, the media is prohibited from revealing details of a defendant’s past in case this prejudices a fair trial. However, such restrictions are no longer enforceable now that information may be freely published in other countries and accessed by all. The only solution here, it seems, is to adopt global standards. Since the internet traverses national borders, the flow of information can only be controlled if all nations agree on what can and cannot be shared.Another problem concerns anonymity, as internet users can easily conceal their identity and even impersonate others. Many crimes such as identity theft result from the ease with which criminals can operate anonymously online. Some have proposed a system of online identification, similar to a passport, which would allow all internet users to be verified and traced. I believe this idea should be explored further, though there are clearly concerns about the security of those who use the internet to protest against oppressive regimes.In conclusion, the only long-term solution to the problem of internet crime is greater international cooperation. Since the problem is global in scale, the solution must also be international. A new agency of the United Nations should be created to tackle the problems described above.
解析：本例的类型可归结为“problem＆solution”类命题。

此类型的关键要注意“问题”和“解决方案”要和题目相关，构想的“问题”越具体，越细致越好，如果“问题”过于空泛，“解决方案”就不好写，且也不好想事例。

“解决方案”不必要原创、有创新性的，甚至不一定是可行的。

另外，建议相应的解决方法可在提出问题后直接给出，这样在语篇的连贯上较好处理。

当然，考生在主体段上，也可选用一段谈“问题”，一段谈“解决方案”的行文模式。

但采用这种模式的话，要注意“解决方案”要切实与之前提到“问题”相关。