【金牌教程】 第2讲 第8节 投稿 日记 便条 书评 影评-新高考英语二轮专题复习冲刺

第八节投稿·日记·便条·书评/影评类型十六投稿
Dear ××(收稿人)，
I know ________ (活动内容) on your school English newspaper. The protection of national and folk cultures ________ (观点总括). I have a strong desire to share my personal viewpoints on it.
In my opinion, ________ (看法一). To begin with, ________ (看法二). What's more, ________ (看法三)．
In a word, it is high time for us to ________ (表达期待)．
Yours sincerely，
××(投稿人)
【开头常用句式】
1．An article in the newspaper caught my attention.
报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意。

2．I want to talk about “How Social Media affect People's live”in your column.
我想在你的专栏里谈谈“社交媒体如何影响人们的生活”。

【主体段落常用句式】
3．My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home
conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。

4．Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。

5．Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。

6．Not only does playing table tennis build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.
打乒乓球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。

7．As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。

8．In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us during this bitter but sweet year.
总之，在这苦乐参半的一年里，适当的饮食、规律的锻炼和积极的态度对我们是有益的。

【结尾常用句式】
9．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。

10．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。

(2022·辽宁省实验中学高考考前模拟)假如你是李华，你校的英文报正在举办主题为“How can we reduce garbage pollution？”的征文活动。

请用英文写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：
1．介绍垃圾污染的现状；
2．提出减少垃圾污染的措施；
3．发起呼吁。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
At present, a considerable amount of garbage is produced every day.
The problem of garbage pollution is getting so serious that many cities around the world are now being surrounded by garbage. To solve the problem, first, we should economize on resources so as to reduce the amount of garbage. Second, we should sort the garbage properly so that they can be treated easily and differently. Third, reusable garbage should be recycled as much as possible.
In my opinion, it is everyone's responsibility to reduce garbage pollution. Only with our joint efforts can we live in a better environment.
类型十七日记
________ (日期)________ (天气)
Today we took part in ________ (事件)．
In the morning, we went to ________ (出发地点), talking and laughing all the way. As soon as we arrived, ______________ (活动内容一). Then, _______________ (活动内容二). After that, ________________ (活动内容三)．Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because we have learned that ________ (活动感想)．
【开头常用句式】
1．April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.
4月12日很难忘，因为我们班那天有过一次有意义的经历。

2．Today's activity is so memorable that I can't help writing it down.
今天的活动令人难忘，我忍不住写下来。

【主体段落常用句式】
3．At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”．
在班会上，我们的老师告诉我们这个节目的主题为“工作是最美的”。

4．Upon/On arrival, we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits with respect.
到达时，我们向老人敬献鲜花和水果。

5．We walked along the path, enjoying the glow of the rising sun.
我们沿着小路行走，欣赏着旭日的辉光。

6．About half an hour later, the driver returned with the camera and you could imagine the wide smile spreading across Tim's face.
半小时后，司机带着相机回来，你可以想象得到蒂姆脸上露出的笑容。

7．Being concerned about it, my classmates and I had a heated discussion on how
to solve the problem.
因为担心，我和同学就如何解决问题进行了热烈的讨论。

8．Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.
看到成排的树木，我们有一种成就感。

【结尾常用句式】
9．What a nice day! I will treasure it at the bottom of my heart.
多么美好的一天！我会把它珍藏在内心深处。

10．Through the meaningful activity, we all agree that science plays an important role in our life.
通过这次有意义的活动，我们都认为科学在我们的生活中起着重要作用。

根据表格中的提示内容写一篇日记。

地点北戴河
交通方式乘校车
出发时间上午7：30
到达时间上午9：30
活动内容
上午：在海滩上玩游戏；游泳；在饭店吃午饭下午：沿海边步行去北戴河；照相；玩得很开心
返回时间下午5：00
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
July 5th, Saturdayfine
Today we had a short trip to Beidaihe.
We set out in the bus at seven thirty am. The weather was pleasant and every one of us was excited. After two hours' ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our activities as soon as we got off the bus. We played games on the sands and swam in the sea happily. After that, we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon we walked along the beach to Beidaihe. Many photos were taken there.
We enjoyed ourselves very much. It was five o'clock when we returned safely.
类型十八便条
Dear ××(收信人)，
I would like to know if I could ask for __________ (说明留言原因)．
Because ________ (详述具体原因), so I have to ask for one day leaving. I'm afraid ________ (表示遗憾/歉意)．
I am looking forward to ________ (期待批准)．
××(写信人) 【开头常用句式】
1．I called you just now, but I couldn't get through to you. So I have to leave a note to you.
我刚才打电话给你，但是打不通。

所以我留下这张便条给你。

2．To celebrate Teachers' Day, I bought you a bunch of flowers for you, but you are not at home.
为了庆祝教师节，我给您买了一束鲜花，但您不在家。

【主体段落常用句式】
3．Tomorrow's class will be put off to 2 pm this Saturday.
明天的课将推迟到本周六下午两点。

4．This morning I received a telephone call from my dentist, urging me to come to his practice for immediate treatment of my teeth.
今天早上我接到我牙医的电话，催促我去他的诊所，立即治疗我的牙齿。

5．Concerning my workload, I think a one-day leave this Wednesday may be the best solution, as Wednesday is not as busy as the other weekdays.
考虑到我的工作量，我认为周三请一天假是最好的解决办法，因为周三没有其他工作日那么忙。

6．We are to gather at the school gate and start off at 7：00. Don't be late.
我们在学校门口集合，七点出发。

别迟到了。

7．I'm going to the library, and won't be back until about 3：00 pm.
我要去图书馆，直到下午3点才回来。

8．Moreover, I left my notebook in your schoolbag by mistake the day before yesterday.
而且，我前天不小心把笔记本忘在你书包里了。

【结尾常用句式】
9．I promise I will do my best to make up for the missed lessons.
我保证，我会尽最大的努力去补上错过的课程。

10．I shall be much obliged if I can get your permission.
如果能得到您的许可，我将不胜感激。

假如你叫李华，你的外教William夫妇对京剧很感兴趣。

你正好有两张明天晚上梅兰芳剧院的戏票，那是一场由著名演员演出的京剧，很值得观看。

你打算送给他们，但是不巧他们外出。

请你写个便条，顺便告诉他们：
1．你已经读了他们推荐给你的两本英文书，很有趣；
2．你因忙于准备考试，不能一起去欣赏京剧了。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
Dear Mr and Mrs William，
I learnt that you are interested in Peking Opera. I've come to give you two tickets for tomorrow evening's Peking Opera performance in Mei Lanfang Theater. It's a pity that you happened to be out. I have to leave the tickets with this note.
The opera will be put on by some famous players and it is well worth seeing. By the way, I've read the two English books you recommended to me. They are very interesting. This week, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to pass the exams. So I can't go to the theater together with you.
I hope you will have a good time.
Yours，
Li Hua 类型十九书评/影评
The film/book, ________ (书/电影名), is adapted from the same book/written by ________ (作者), for which he won the ________ (奖项)．
It centers on the life and ________ (人物、时间、地点). It pictures ________ (主人翁的奋斗历程). Seeing the film/Reading the book, you will be greatly affected by ________ (体现出来的精神).
That's why I think it's worth seeing/reading.
【开头常用句式】
1．This is a wonderful example of world cinema, using the animal to tell a story.
这是世界电影的一个很好的例子，用动物来讲述一个故事。

2．The film, which was made by Tarry, is about how dream can guide you on the road to success.
该电影由塔里导演，是关于梦想如何指导你走上成功之路的故事。

【主体段落常用句式】
3．This writing, to some extent, expresses the author's view on growth.
本书在一定程度上表达了作者对于成长的看法。

4．My favourite part of the film is where the people in the small town are saved from danger.
我最喜欢的部分是小镇的人们从危险中被救出来。

5．The film, adapted by the novel of the same name, describes the difficulties and
the positive attitude he adopts in response.
这部电影改编自同名小说，描述了他遇到的困难以及他采取的积极态度。

6．Needless to say, it has won a lot of likes and thrums-ups on the Internet.
不用说，它在网上赢得了很多赞誉。

7．The Ordinary World, written by Lu Yao, the author, narrated the drastic change happened in the country and town in China, which I believe it was absolutely an unordinary event in the world.
路遥写的《平凡的世界》叙述了中国乡村和城镇发生的巨大变化，我相信这绝对是世界上一件不平凡的事。

8．It occurred to me that we have to have perseverance for work, firmness for dream and optimistic spirit for life.
这让我想到，我们要坚持不懈地工作，有坚定的梦想，并用乐观的精神去生活。

【结尾常用句式】
9．It's rare that a film has such an influence on me.
很少有电影对我产生这样(深刻)的影响。

10．I recommend the book/movie to anyone who is now depressed and needs encouragement.
我向所有现在感到失落和需要鼓励的人推荐这本书/部电影。

假定你是李华，你寒假阅读了英国作家Daniel Defoe的英文原版Robinson Crusoe(《鲁滨逊漂流记》)，请你用英语写一篇书评。

内容包括：
1．作者和作品的主要信息；
2．该书的大致内容；
3．你对本书的评价。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：遭遇海难shipwreck
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[精彩范文]
In this winter holiday, I read a book named Robinson Crusoe. It struck me very much. I learned a lot from this book.
This is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, published in 1719. It is one of the most popular adventure novels in all literature. It is the story of Robinson Crusoe, an Englishman who is shipwrecked in a lonely tropical island, where he later lived for thirty years alone. Although Robinson Crusoe got into trouble, he was optimistic. In the end, he was saved and back to his hometown.
I admire Robinson Crusoe's independence and optimism. What I learn from the book is that I should be optimistic and seek for the methods to settle problems. Next time, you might as well try this book.
1．在我成长的路上，有很多人在我遇到困难的时候关心我，帮助我。

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参考翻译：On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I'm in trouble.
2．直到那时我才意识到，我们的老师是多么爱我们，我们在多么温暖的一个大家庭里。

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参考翻译：Only then did I realize that how much our teacher loved us and how warm a big family we were in.
3．昨天我们没有上课，而是去参观国家博物馆。

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参考翻译：Yesterday we went to visit the National Museum instead of having classes.
4．如果你方便的话，我们下周末一起去公园放风筝好吗？
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参考翻译：Shall we fly kites next weekend in the park together if it's convenient to you?
5．这部电影反映了中国近几年的发展和成就，从而深受全国观众的喜爱。

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参考翻译：The film, reflecting China's development and achievements in recent years, has been loved by audiences throughout the country.
专题限时练(十六)
[1]投稿
(时间：15分钟)
(2022·安徽省合肥市高三第一次教学质量检测)上周，你和同学们参加了学校一年一度的运动会。

请你写篇英语文章向《英语园地》杂志投稿，题目自拟，内容包括：
1．运动会简介；
2．你参加的项目和表现；
3．个人感受。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
An Unforgettable Sports Meeting
Last Friday, our school held an annual sports meeting. There were some events in
the sports meeting, such as high jump, long jump, running race and so on.
I like running, so I took part in a 5,000-meter race. Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous at first. At the sound of the starting signal, all the runners began to run like the wind. I tried my best to keep up with them. Finally, with strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line, which made me so happy.
Tired as I was, I felt very excited. I believe that as long as we spare no effort to do something, we are more likely to succeed.
[2]日记
(时间：15分钟) 假设你是李华，今天是星期五，你们带外国学生体验中国茶文化。

请你就此事写一篇日记，日记内容应包含以下要点：
1．带外国学生去学校茶室体验茶文化；
2．介绍茶艺，外国学生尝试，最后合影留念；
3．你的想法。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
FridaySunny
To help some international students better understand Chinese tea culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced tea culture and its history. Then I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. They were
so amazed in tea culture that they couldn't help taking pictures from time to time.Next came the moment when they had a try themselves. In the end, we took a group picture.
How unforgettable a day! I was proud to spread Chinese culture to people throughout the world.
[3]便条
(时间：15分钟) 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。

今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson写一张便条，内容包括：
1．外出购物；
2．替房东还书；
3．Tracy来电话留言：
(1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消；
(2)此事已告知Susan；
(3)尽快回电。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mrs Wilson，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear Mrs Wilson，
I'm going out shopping, and won't be back until about 5：00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours，
Li Hua
[4]书评
(时间：15分钟) 假如你是李华，正在参加“每个月读一本好书，写一篇书评”活动。

上个月你读了英文原版《卖火柴的小女孩》(The Little Match Girl)，请你写一篇书评。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
The Little Match Girl is a short story by Andersen. I just finished reading it last month.
On a Christmas Eve, the little match girl was selling matches dressed in rags. Striking the matches five times, she saw beautiful visions. But as the matches burnt out, her visions disappeared. At last, the little match girl was discovered dead in the cold corner, wearing a soft and sweet smile.
This story, though sad, is excellent. It brings me back to the time spent with my Grandmother reading to me. Plus, compared to the coldness of the society in the book, I feel blessed to live in a country of love, where people help each other when disasters strike, like the outbreak of COVID－19.
[5]影评
(时间：15分钟) 最近你校举办英文电影节，鼓励学生们通过观看英文电影来学习英语。

假定你观看了电影《夏洛特的网》(Charlotte's Web)，请你根据以下内容写一篇影评。

要点如下：
1．电影改编自E.B．White的书，是一部关于友谊和磨难的电影；
2．小猪Wilbur即将变成圣诞节大餐，蜘蛛Charlotte用自己的网巧妙织成字，救下了好朋友Wilbur，自己却死去了；
3．你对这部电影的评价。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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[精彩范文]
Charlotte's Web is a wonderful movie, adapted from the novel by E．B．White. It tells a story about friendship and suffering.
The film is about how the spider Charlotte helped his friend Wilbur, a kind－hearted pig, through the Christmas. It was said that Wilbur would be killed on Christmas for dinner. Therefore, Charlotte weaved the net with words only to avoid farmers to kill Wilbur. With efforts of Charlotte and other animals, Wilbur safely spent his first winter and achieved his dream to see the first snow of his life. However, Charlotte died.
Pure and true friendship is shown between the animals and the beautiful village scenery in the film is quite appealing. I recommend you to watch it and enjoy the movie!。