2022年北京市中考英语作文

2022年北京中考英语作文（一）（介绍礼仪）
题目①
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。

他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。

请你用英语回复一封信件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。

提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：What do we do when we meet people for the first time?
How do we behave properly at table?
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese social manners.
①When we meet people for the first time, we say hello to each other and sometimes we shakes hands but sometimes we don’t. ②Besides, we often give a simple self-introduction and have a small talk (寒暄，闲聊) politely.
③As for (至于) table manners, we usually have meals slowly and talk in a low voice in order not to disturb others. ④By the way (顺便说一下), when we do not use the chopsticks, we put them down on the table. ⑤It is rude to put them into the dishes.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
92 words 讲解：
1.不同层次之间最好用上表示分隔的词或者词组，例如：First, Second, Besides, What is more, By the way……
层次清晰不是重要，而是必要。

很多同学居然连段都不分，我表示佩服，我只知道有些阅卷老师是不会单独花时间去查你的内容有没有跑题的，稍一犹豫，直接降档打分。

2.④和⑤这两句话最初写为By the way, when we do not use the chopsticks, we put them down on the table
instead of putting them into the dishes. 但考虑到所写的两个段落都是长句和中句，还没有短句，因此拆一为二，把这个长句变为两个短句。

2022年北京中考英语作文（二）（提升效率）
题目②
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。

假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。

提示词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题：How do you increase your efficiency (效率)?
What have you achieved?
High efficiency is important for a busy student.①In my daily life, I usually make a good plan and put different tasks into a timetable so that I can make good use of time. ②Besides, when I am doing work, I try my best to focus my attention on (集中注意力) it.
③What have I achieved through this way?④Generally speaking, I am always one of those who finish homework first and have spare time to play or to do what we like. ⑤It brings so much fun.
80 words
讲解：
1.第一段写了两点，第一点用了一个长句，第二点用了一个中句，中间用了Besides分层，基本算是“一
详一略横向展开”。

2.第二段的结构是“主题句直切主题+一详”，主题句使用反问句是比较狡猾的方式，最容易做到“问什
么答什么，句式字眼要直接”。

3.⑤这样的短句其实很显示水平。