高中英语Module2FantasyLiteratureSectionⅤWriting__续写幻想故事教案含解析外研版选修6

Section ⅤWriting——续写幻想故事

[文体指导]

本写作要求续写幻想故事。幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性。在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。写幻想故事时，要展开丰富的想象，适当构思情节，并把故事情节写得生动有趣，同时要合乎逻辑。此外，续写文章时，要注意续写内容和原文的衔接。续写部分必须忠实于原文的中心、内容与形式。

本写作的人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。全文一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，交代故事的背景；第二部分叙述故事的发展和高潮；第三部分为故事的结局。

[亮点句式]

1．The ring suddenly began to speak, which made the brave young man very amazed.

2．It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.

3．Just then, something strange happened.

4．Eventually, he found the girl, on whom the witch put a spell.

5．While walking in space, we enjoyed weight loss and the beauty of the night sky.

6．In addition, it can do all the housework on my instruction.

7．In 2146, we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds.

8．They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life.

[写作任务]

某英文报社Fantasy Stories栏目正面向中学生举办征文大赛。请你根据所给故事的开头，用英语写一篇文章应征。

注意：

1．词数100左右(文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；

2．想象合理，行文连贯，故事完整。

A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead.If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness.Put me on and I will help you.”

[审题谋篇]

Ⅰ.对接模块词汇

1．invisible 看不见的

2．magical 魔法的；不可思议的

3．swiftly 快地，迅速地

4．marry 结婚，娶，嫁

5．without hesitation 毫不犹豫

6．put a spell on 用咒符镇住

7．look around for 四处寻找

Ⅱ.巧用模块句式、语法

(一)完成句子

1．使他感到惊奇的是，一戴上戒指，他就成为了一个别人看不见的人。

Much to his surprise, on having the ring on, he became an invisible man.

2．非常容易就进入了城堡，他发现女孩子在黑屋里，巫师给她施了魔咒。

Entering the castle easily, he spotted the girl in a dark room, on whom the witch had put a spell.

3．得知了女孩子不能动，除非有人能摧毁巫师的魔杖，解除咒语。

Having learned that the girl couldn't move unless someone destroyed the witch's magical wand to remove the spell.

4．……这个年轻人四处寻找魔杖，发现它躺在一个金盒子里。

...the young man looked around for the wand, and he found it lying in a golden box.

5．他迅速摧毁了魔杖，解除了女孩子身上的魔咒，并释放了她。

He ruined the wand swiftly, removing the spell on the girl and setting her free．

(二)句式升级

6．用the moment引导的状语从句改写句1

Much to his surprise, the moment he had the ring on, he became an invisible man.

7．用after引导的状语从句改写句3

After he learned that the girl couldn't move unless someone destroyed the witch's magical wand to remove the spell.

[妙笔成篇]

【参考范文】

A young man was walking through...

Without hesitation, the young man put the ring on his finger.Much to his surprise, the moment he had the ring on, he became an invisible man.Entering the castle easily, he spotted the girl in a dark room, on whom the witch had put a spell.After he learned that the girl couldn't move unless someone destroyed the witch's magical wand to remove the spell, the young man looked around for the wand, and he discovered it lying in a golden box.He ruined the wand swiftly, removing the spell on the girl and setting her free.Afterwards, the young man, together with the girl, defeated the witch.

The young man, marrying the girl, led a sweet life here after.