2020版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十一短文改错
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(70)
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（70）短文改错此题要求改正短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用（划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day I happen to find a chatting room on 1．my QQ，where people were chatting with English．I tried 2．to chat with some of them．To my surprised， I found 3．the oral English of some junior students were better 4．than me．I asked them for advice and they told me 5．to practise more on QQ．But every day after that I 6．spent one hour practise my oral English on QQ．7．Day by day I learned from many useful words and 8．expressions．With time going by， I found that I could 9．even communicate some college students freely．10．写作假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。
2020年高考英语二轮复习短文改错--代词附答案
第六讲代词一、改正下列句子中的唯一错误：1.31% of the students think it ridiculous. You argue that it does no good to helping people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English.【答案】You改为They【解析】根据上句中的"31% of the students"可知，该句陈述的是这些学生的观点，故该句主语用“They”，指代上句中的"31%of the students"。
2. Therefore, my fingers suddenly lost control of the chopsticks while he was picking up a piece of chicken.【答案】he改为I【解析】根据该句中的”my”并结合前文内容可知，该处陈述的是”我”的行为和动作，故用I3. At around 8:30, on the morning of February 8th, I found a lost suitcase near the exit of Heathrow Airport. I had no choice but to hand them in to the information center.【答案】them改为it【解析】此处表示我别无选择，只能把它交给信息中心。
此处用it指代前面提到的a lost suitcase,故把them 改成it4 . This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration .【答案】myself改为me【解析】动词helped的主语是visit,与其宾语所指不同，不能用反身代词5. As is known to us that knowledge starts with practice.【答案】As改为It【解析】题干的结构是”...is+过去分词+that...”，根据固定句型"It+be+过去分词+that..."可判断此处that引导的从句是真正的主语，应用It作形式主语。
2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练：短文改错(1)及参考答案
2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练10-短文改错（1）1、During the Men’s 800-metre Race of our school’s sports meeting, Li Hua from Senior 2 soon got well ahead the others and finally ranking first. The crowd were shouting to him while Li Hua fell to the ground and got injury. Many people came to his assistance. A teacher gave her first aid，while some kindly students passed water and a towel to him. In not time，Li Hua recovered. When interview, Li Hua expressed his thanks to everyone，saying，“Injured as I am, I can feel the warm from you. ” He was delighted to make the contributions to his class.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.3、Dear Tom,I am delightful to share my dream university with you. In common with many other teenagers，my dream university is Tsinghua University, which is one of the best university in China.There’re several reasons why I’d like study there. First，it has excellent teaching staff or advanced equipment, which will allow me to make progress quickly.Seconds it is well known for their positive academic atmosphere, when students work hard to meet new challenges. Besides, I still clearly remembered being taken there when I was a little boy. The beautiful campus impressed me deep then.Enter Tsinghua University is no easy thing, but I’m convinced that my dream will come true as long as I make up great efforts.What about your dream university?Yours，Li Hua4、 I am the shared bike. I'd like to be on the street to serve for people. They can ride me just via mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle(车座) and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful "treatment". Now, you help as well as the whole society's attention is what we need most. We are designed help people who are stuck in the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules.5、 The other day, I was on my way back home from school when I found a little boy cried on the road I stopped and asked him what is the matter, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's telephone number. So I called him immediately. Ten minute later, the boy saw his mom and became exciting. His mom was so much thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, and I refused At that time, I felt quite happily because I did something really good.To my opinion, the world needs love and we should be willing to help others without expecting any reward. If we want a reward, as matter of fact, a "thank-you" is enough.6、 Over the last few years, my family and I started working towards a greener life. My mum and dad drive less and often take the bus to work. They are carefully to save gas when they cook. We recycle things and give old clothes and furnitures to charities. I believe there is a lot more we can do. For example, we can try touse fewer water by turning off the tap when we brush us teeth. Taking shorter showers will help, either. Save the planet needs everyone's effort. Although each one of us may only do a little, but together we can make a big different.7、 Last weekend, our school organized a activity to welcome the foreign students from Zhongshan University. It last about 3 hours. We talked and laughed happy during the whole activity. Which impressed me most was that they all were good at speaking both English or Chinese. They also told us that it was necessary to master some social skills like how deal with different people and difficult things. I benefit a lot from the activity, which makes me understood that if we want to be much more suitable for the modern society, you should be excellent enough. I like this kind of activity because of it gives us a chance to communicate with foreigner, know their culture and enrich our experiences.8、 There is no doubt that the Internet changed our life since it came into use. People can surf the Internet for any information we need in a short time without consume large amounts of time in the library. Besides, it is convenient to communicating with others via the Internet.However, the Internet also has some disadvantage. For one thing, there is much information that are not good for children. For another, many students spend too much time playing games online, that not only influences their studies but also harms their health.On my view, we should make a proper use of the Internet. It is of great important for us to separate good plants from wild weeds.答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：During the Men’s 800-metre Race of our school’s sports meeting, Li Hua from Senior 2 soon got well ahead of the others and finally rankingrankedfirst. The crowd wereshouting to him whilewhen Li Hua fell to the ground and got injuryinjured. Many people came tohis assistance. A teacher gaveher him first aid ，while some kindly kind students passed water and a towel to him. In not notime ，Li Hua recovered. When interview interviewed , Li Hua expressed his thanks to everyone ，saying ，“Injured as I am, I can feel thewarm warmth from you. ” He was delighted to make the contributions to his class.解析：2答案及解析：答案： I became interesting int erestedin playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoonwhere when I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me but andalmost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly hardback to the playground. To everyone’s surprising surprise , the ball went into the net. All the football player playerson the playground cheered loudly, say saying that I had a talent for football. From now thenon, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. 解析：1. 考查形容词用法。
2020届高中英语二轮复习短文改错(2)
修改 :在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。
Travelling abroad, you should follow the customs of the country you were visiting. When
’ s the best one I have ever been taken part in. The opening ceremony was a
feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster makes a speech. Then came various performance,
including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, some students dressed up as dolls, and that they
wanted to show was confident and talent. When the teachers
修改 :在错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意 :
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ; 2.只允许修改 10 处 ,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。
The time we have is usual limited. However, even an hour is of much valuable. We should
2020 届高中英语二轮复习
短文改错（ 2）
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文
,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
高三英语《短文改错》专项练习题(含答案)
高三英语《短文改错》专项练习题（含答案）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1．I have been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up volleyball club in our school, hope that students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that many students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just foll owed them without thinking. We practiced together, on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was sel ected for the school team. What excited and proud I was!2．Dear Li Lei,I’m proud to tell you what you heard of is true.As is proved, that some UK primary schools will use 36 math textbooks, exercise books, and teachers’ guid es publishing by the Shanghai Century Publishing (SCP). The textbooks will be used in both Shanghai or the UK at a same time. It is the first time Chinese textbooks had been adopted by a devel oped country in so a systematic and large-scale way. The textbooks have listed as a sample by the National Centre for Excellence in the Teaching of Mathematics of the UK. Without SCP’s permission, British publisher Harper Collins, the UK publisher of the textbooks, will be responsibly for the promotion of the schoolbooks.Don’t we take pride in you Chinese?Yours,Li Hua 3．Dear John，Thank you very much for your recommendation. It’s great opportunity to take part in the English speech competition. Therefore, I'm afraid that I can't attend it. My mother had been ill for several days and I have to take care of her in my spare time, because I d on't have enough time to prepare for the speech competition.I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming, who I think he is the most suitable person to participate for this competition. He is good at English and speaks fluently English. Besides, he is a member of the wild animal protection club and devotes much time to care animals. I'm sure his rich experiences of animal protection and perfect speaking English will enable him to achieve success.Sorry again for my absence.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua4．You have offered me l ots of helps. I still remember I had difficulties learn English. It was hard for me memorize English words and understand what other were saying. However, I am luck to meet you. Firstly, you advised me to listen more but read more, which real helped me. Besides, you suggested that you shoul d watch for English movies and sing English songs. You also advised me to form the habit of reading al oud in the morning. As a result, I finally make great progress.5．Are students' grades matter of personal privacy? Shoul d test scores be made public?Opinions vary from person to person. I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers —they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the l ow performers. But competition is a life skill that need to be learned to be successful in the really world. The earlier, the best. Regardl ess of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or losing, but it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.6．My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now. He has been living the busy and active life, going online, writing articles for newspapers, but attending academic conferences all over the country. He also has many hobby, such as growing fl owers at home, collecting stamps and coins and especial drinking tea. There are many different tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home, most of that I can’t name.My g randpa is so very crazy about tea that he can’t live without enjoying tea several times a day. He once told nee he would be sleepy with tea. I often help making tea and drink together with me. I l ove my grandpa.7．Three years ago, I went to a boarding school. The reason for my attend ed such a school was that my parents was very busy. They often went abroad on business but had no time to take care of myself. Besides, they thought I ought to learn to independent. Honest speaking, the school life does benefit me a lot. I not only l earned some ways to solve problem in my own but also learned how to get along with others. But that I treasure most now is the friendship that I devel oped into at that time. How I miss that wonderful time!8．I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall last weekend. Having tol d about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at thisworld wonder. He was fascinated by the beauty of the Great Wall, so I took photos of himself, which woul d be a good memory for him. At the top, there was an activity about environmentally protection. Mr. Brown was so interested in protect the environment that he was eager to join in them. Both the Great Wall or the warm-hearted Chinese people deeply impress him. He d ecid ed to visit more place of interest when free.9．One day, I was cooking in the kitchens when the tel ephone rang. I went to answer it immediate. It was my close friend, Lisa. When they were talking on the phone, a fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I was rather worrying. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the wind ows and then went out of the house. With my surprise, two fire engines were outsid e my house. I was tol d the firemen that it was my careless cook which caused the heavy smoke.10．It is essential to take an useful summer vacation after the exam. There are many kinds of activity for us to take part. First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend a happily time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hang out with our friends will also be excited. Third, we shoul d take more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, we’d better to review what we had learned at school. Finally, it is necessary of us to do some housework, that can help our parents a l ot. Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.11．I live in a city and frequently notice the trash throwing rand omly on the sides of the roads. Every time I take my d og for a walk and go outside for something else, I am happy that to pick up at l east one piece of trash. Although it seems that this small act won t make a differ, it trulymakes me feel good about me for helping out.If we all do this small thing just one a day,we'll be taking part helping the planet. Gradually，our worl d may become the cl eaner and better place. I hope this inspired even one person to pick up the rubbishes.12．Dear Sir, I am a stud ent from the near school. Here I want to report the environmental situation for you. There used to many green trees and all kind of fl owers in our school all the year round. The school looks like a beautiful garden and we had a clean studying environment. And everything has changed since your chemical factory was built a year before. Every day it produces lots of waste water and harm gases. The terrible pollution has been d one great harm to our health. We all expect you factory can take measures to stop the pollution soon.13．I watch TV until 12 o’clock, so I couldn’t go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late that I had to go to school without breakfast in hurry, but I was still late for the first class. When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explain an important problem, and all the eyes were fixed upon me. My face turned red. Something even worse was happened to me in English class. The teacher asked me recite the text. However, I could say nothing and sorry, for I did not spend some time preparing my lessons. The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes. I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head. How a terrible day I had! I will never d o anything like this.14．After read your advertisement, I want to offer yourself for the position. I’m twenty years old, male, 1.78 meters tall, strong and health. And I am going to graduate from Nanjing University this year. I had learned English for ten years. My speaking English is very good and I can write good article. I have won several prizes in English contests. I have been made agreat number of inventions, most of them have been put into practice. But I can use the computer skillfully. If I can get the job, I’ll do all I can do it well．Thank you for your kindness.15．My parents and I spent half a month in New York last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit America. The weather is usually cool or there aren’t too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, and my parents didn’t like travell ed by und erground. I went to look at the places that all tourists went to see. We went shopping in Times Square and spend too much money. What we like most were going to the theater. We d on’t have the chance to see so wond erful plays at home.16．I have worked from ages 17 to now（I am 60 this year）, and I’ve really enjoy my career in IT. One week after l eave school, I started to work. Now I do feel that my work has shaped myself in many ways.At some point soon, I will retire— and I am terrifying! I have no idea that I will d o with all that time or why I will d o it. I am happy married and have a 21-year-old son. My wife and I can travel and I can read book. There are operas to enjoy it and restaurants to try, but this isn’t going to get me out bed at a reasonable time!17．This summer holiday, I go to a seasid e city with my family. We got there by air. It is a very beautiful and modern city, where impressed us a lot. On the first day, we took a bus to a place calling the Sea Park. There were such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe in my eyes. On the second day, we went swimming, and we all enjoyed ourselves. During the next two days, we went to some tourist spot, shopping and taking photos. Several days late,we left the city. Although we were tiring on our way home, we felt happily about the holiday. What unforgettable experience!参考答案1．1. before→ago2.up后添加a3.hope→hoping4.very→so5.honestly→honest6.去掉on7.boring→bored8.So→But9.carry→carried10.What→How2．3．1. great前加a 2. Therefore→ However 3. had→ has 4. because →so 5. 去掉he 6. participate 后的for改为in 7 . fluently→ fluent 8. care→ caring 9. experiences→ experience 10. speaking →spoken4．第一句：helps→help第二句：learn→learning第三句：在me后加to；第四句：other→others第五句：luck→lucky第六句：but→and；第七句：real→really第八句：you→I；第九句：去掉for第十句：make→made5．1. matter前加a 2. 去掉recognize后的for 3. try→trying 4. therefore→ however 5. need→ needs 6. really→ real 7. best → better 8. motivating → motivated 9. when→ how 10. them→ themselves6．7．1. attended →attending2. parents后的was →were3. b usiness后的but →and4. myself →me5. independent前加be6. Honest →Honestly7. does →did8. in my own的in →on9. I treasure 前的that →what10. 去掉developed后的into8．hewho;Having后加been;amazing →amazed;himself →him;environmentally →environmental;protect →protecting;join后去掉in；or → and;impress →impressed;place →places9．10．1. an 改为a 2. activity 改为activities 3. take part 后加in 4. happily 改为happy5. hang 改为hanging6. excited 改为exciting7.删掉we’d better 后的to8. had 改为have9. of 改为for 10. that 改为which11．th rowing→thrown and→or去掉that differ→differenceme→myself one→once part后面加上in the→ainspired→inspires rubbishes→rubbish12．1. near→nearby；2. for→to；3. 在used to ∧many 之间加be；4. kind→kinds；5. looks→looked；6. And→B ut；7. before→ago；8. harm→harmful；9. 把has been done 中的been去掉；10. you→your13．14．1. read→reading 2. Yourself----myself 3. health→healthy 4. had---have5. Speaking---spoken6. article→articles7. been→去掉been8. them→which 9. But→And 10. 第二个do前加^to15．16．1.ages→age2.enjoy→enjoyed3.leave→leaving4.myself→me5.terrifying→terrified 6.that→what7.happy→happily8.book→books9.将it去掉10.在out后面加of17．1. 第一句：go→went2. 第三句：where→which3. 第四句：calling→called4. 第五句：such→so5. 第五句：去掉in6. 第七句：spot→spots7. 第八句：late→lat er8. 第九句：tiring→tired9. 第九句：happily→happy10. 第十句：unforgettable前加an。
2020年高三高考英语二轮复习题型专练讲解--短文改错
2020年高三高考英语二轮复习题型专练讲解---短文改错命题趋势短文改错的题稳中有变，难度逐年上升。
试题中与法规则有关的错误设置在减少，对固定习语、机械性记忆的要求在慢慢弱化。
错误设置主要集中在动词时态(而且多局限于对一般现在时与一般过去时的判断)、名词(大都是可数名词的单复数交化)、冠词的用法、介词、连词的误用等，而且语篇意识年年在强化，很多错误需要联系全文背景或上下文语境才能准确找出。
考纲内容短文改错集语法知识与语言技能为一体，旨在考查考生对语言的评价与校正能力和对词汇、语法、语篇三要素的把握能力，要求考生正确判断出错误并将其改正。
错误主要涉及词法、句法、行文逻辑等，需要考生具备一定的阅读、分析和逻辑推理能力，在不同程度上借助语境进行判断，改项的设置注重在语篇中考查学生对所学语法及语言知识的综合运用能力。
题型解读一、命题特点短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。
主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。
短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考査考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。
从近几年的高考短文改错题看，试题具有以下特点：1.选材短文改错的文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文(以书信为主)。
一般约100词，所选取的语言材料贴近实际生活，多为考生所熟知，且话题贴近学生，有的带点幽默，有的包含教育意义。
文字浅显易懂，材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇;句子结构简单，基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句语言地道，符合英语语语言习惯。
2.考点短文改错所考查的词类覆盖面广，分布合理。
其重点是从句法、词法和行文逻辑等角度考査考生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力，同时兼顾句型结构、习惯搭配等。
短文改错的设题有错词、缺词和多词三种可能。
错词现象主要出现在名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、连词、介词、主谓一致、代词、词形(指应该用动词、名词还是形容词形式，以及平行结构中词的正确形式)、冠词:缺词现象主要出现在冠词(名词前)、介词(不及物动词后或固定结构中)、助动词、不定式符号to、连词、语义不完整现象等方面;多词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。
高考二轮复习英语小题必练：短文改错专训(含答案)
（2020·全国II卷）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.（2020·全国III卷）My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.Passage 1As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, but I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followedbehind. After two hours’ bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. At that moment, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.Passage 2Last week, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During a match, the players from all teams played very hard. Grade 2 was a stronger team. However, for our surprise, Grade 1 won at last. The player jumped and hugged to celebrate their success. Just then, the players from the other team that approached and said “Congratulations!” to them.They wore smiles on faces and you couldn’t tell from their expressions that they had lost the match. We were touching by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.Passage 3Four months ago I was walking on the campus while I heard two students saying that Mrs. Wu, our English teacher, would retire next month.I returned to the classroom and shared the news for my classmates. To express our thanks to Mrs. Wu for her patient teaching, we agreed on a celebration after a heating discussion.After school we began to make fully preparations. I went to a flower shop, where I bought a bunch of flowers, represents our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmate had some PowerPiont slides made, which included many photos recording the touching moments we spent them together.When she came into the classroom on Wednesday morning, all of us stand up. I presented the flowers to him. With tears in her eyes, Mrs. Wu was greatly moved by what we do! She said her feelings were beyond words.Passage 4In general, our houseparents(学生宿舍管理员) are annoying for boys students in dormitories.I didn’t begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week. I was asleep when my alarmclock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces. After the while, the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in. Instead blaming me, he asked me anxious what was going on. Before making sure I was OK, he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself. Since then, I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents. They are like our parents, kept all of us safe.Passage 5I don’t think this wise that the school requires us to have some extra classes on weekends. In our view, we should be allowed more time of our own. It might be true that adding some extra classes would be of some helpful to a few passive students. However, we cannot always expect rely on someone else to decide for us which is necessary for our success. Besides, the place that we are weak varies great from person to person. What our teachers do in the class can rarely meet the needs of individual students. Thus, if we can have more free times, we can focus on our weaknesses and balanced our energy on different subjects.（2020·全国II卷）【答案】1.第一句，what改为which2.第二句，在come后加to3.第三句，surely改为sure4.第四句，start改为started5.第四句，for改为but/yet6.第五句，vocations改为vocation7.第六句，such改为so8.第六句，删掉on9.第七句，yours改为your/you10.第八句，sooner改为soon【解析】本文为一篇应用文，介绍了自己学习功夫的经历。
【专题训练】2020届高考英语二轮复习常考题型大通关(全国卷)：短文改错(一)附答案
2020届高考英语二轮复习常考题型大通关（全国卷）：短文改错（一）附答案1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语二轮复习：短文改错(1)
高考英语二轮复习：短文改错（1）一、改错题（共10题；共50分）1. ( 5分) （2021高三上·安徽开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Today I'll talk a little bit about Italian culture. Music plays a important role in the culture of Italy. Italian music is heavy influenced by its history. And the piano and the violin are said have been invented in Italy. Italians are fond of spend time with their families. In the old days, Italian families were used to be large. However, they are smaller in size now. Family member always get together at every festival. As for sports, one of the most popular sports in Italy are football. The Italian national team is one of the better in the world. Another popular sports include volleyball, basketball, boxing or bike riding.2. ( 5分) （2021高三上·蚌埠开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2020年高考英语短文改错专题训练及答案
2020年高考英语短文改错专题训练(名师押题预测，绝对精品，值得下载练习)第一节短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧) ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the beginning of the new term, our school organized military training. In the first three day, our instructor taught us how to walk and stood like a real soldier. On the last day of military training, we were honoring for our achievements. Through our efforts, they won the first prize. After the four-day military training, my classmates and I was expressed our thanks for our instructor's hardly work. He not only taught us how to behave like a soldier but also showed us meaning of honor or teamwork. Never will I forget that he taught me.第一节：短文改错：（10分）In the beginning of the new term, our school organized military training. In the first three day,At days our instructor taught us how to walk and stood like a real soldier. On the last day of militarystandtraining, we were honoring for our achievements. Through our efforts, they won the first prize.honored weAfter the four-day military training, my classmates and I was expressed our thanks for our instructor’s 去掉hardly work. He not only taught us how to behave like a soldier but also showed us ˄ meaning hard theof honor or teamwork. Never will I forget that he taught me.and what第一节短文改错(共10小题:每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
2020高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练(二十一)短文改错Word版含解析
专项技能保分练（二^一）短文改错Test 1[2019湖北省联考]Dear Wangping,How are things going with you? It's bee n six month si nee you studiedabroad in En gla nd.It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fitin the life in a foreign eountry. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about the food? As an exeha nge stude nt, have you overcome all thedifficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and com muni cate free with your classmates now? You are suchsmart that you must have bee n made rapid progress in your studies.Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days that we stayedtogether.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Y ours,Li Hua答案与解析：Dear Wangping, How are thi ngs going with you? It's bee n six —month since you① months studiedabroad in En gla nd.It is the first time that you ②hOd/e been abroad. Without doubt, it is —accustom , to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange ④ accustomedstudent, have you overcome all the difficulties English? Can you understand ⑥w^at the teachers say in class andthat you must have been ⑨^oEverything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days ⑩嶠£ we stayed together.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours ,Li Huahard to fit in ③ with the life in a foreign country. Have you gotyou havecom muni cate ⑦^|帥 with your classmates now ? You are糊 smart made rapid progress in your studies.① mon th改为mon ths mo nth为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。
【高考试卷】2020届届高考英语二轮复习必刷题型：()短文改错(二) Word版含解析
2020年高考冲刺试卷芳草香出品短文改错（二）1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
专题05 短文改错-2020年高考英语二轮专项提升(解析版)
六、 找名词 第（5第（5）句中，everyone`s surprising 为名词所有格形式， 所以改为 surprise（名词形式）。 第（6）句中的 all the football player 改为 all the football players。因为此短语中心名词为 player,短语 最前面的限定词用的是 all,所以改为 players。
专题 05 短文改错
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.（1） One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. （2）Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. （3） I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. （4）To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. （5）All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football.（6） From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school.（7） I am a good player now. （8） 【解析】 首先认真阅读文章， 全文共八句话。 一、 找谓语动词
2020高考英语短文改错专项训练附答案课件17页
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There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.
高三英语组
改错要容易，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，逐一排查高速度。
三个步骤
1.从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态和语态。 2.从句子入手，依据考点，逐句分析，推敲语法。 3.从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代。
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(53)
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（53）短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
As an English beginner, I found difficult to read fast. It 1．was because whenever I read I always try to translate every 2．English word or sentence into Chinese after I could 3．understand it. As a result of, it usually took me over 10 4．minutes to finish read a passage. To get it over, I read 5．a lot. Firstly, you read the passage fast and answered the 6．questions within six minutes. Secondly, I checked the answer 7．to see which of them were wrong. Then I looked up only 8．those key new words to seeing why they were wrong. 9．By this way, I have improved my reading speed a lot. 10．书面表达据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。
2020届高考英语二轮复习：短文改错+Word版含答案
2019-2020学年英语二轮复习短文改错1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜钱(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day last year when I was busy prepare for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice somehow aroused my fear of her. So the other day after a long talk, surprisingly, I feel warmth and was touched. I sudden realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didn’t even notice his love for me. Like my parents and my other relative, my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The dialect may sound unfamiliar with me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us causing by the difference in our languages.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练：短文改错(2)及参考答案
2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练11-短文改错（2）1、When I was a young boy, my father save my life. Although I do not remember an incident，it is a story that has told many times in my family. I was two years old at one time，and my brother was four. We were with my father when he was feeding the cattles on our family farm. He didn't notice that my brother and I had wandered off until my brother，scared and out in breath，but came running to him. My brother could hard speak. He struggled to saying，“Rolfe’s in the cave!”2、Since I was a kid，I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First，I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then，when I was in the five grade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.3、The photo was taken during the sixty anniversary of our school. The elderly man on the picture attended our school 50 years ago, shortly after it founded. It was the first time he has been back to our school since he graduated and he was deeply impressed by his look. Once a young student， the elderly man now has gray hair or wrinkles，while our school has a new and modern look. After all these years，he’s still emotional when talking about that how proud he is of once be a student of our school. I was great t ouched by the scene. I know someday I’ll have a same feeling as this lovely man.4、 When I was very young, my parents teach me the value of writing thank-you notes. Whenever they asked me to, I would roll my eyes and write them after birthdays and some festivals unwilling. Only after my grandmother passed away I realize the impact. My mom and I had the task of clean my grandmother's house. I opened a drawer in her bedside table when I found a beautiful wooden box. I opened it but was shocked to see every card I had ever written to him. The impact of a moment stayed with me all my life. When my children grew, they had learned the value of writing thank-you notes and still do so, even as grown adult.5、 I'm a high school students in China. History is one of my most favorite subjects. My friends always laugh me because they don't understand why I'm such enthusiastic about history. They say it's bored and it’s the useless subject. But I don't think so. In their opinion, history taught us who we are and where we come from. I enjoy look back at points in the past and thinking about why certain decisions were making.I believe I can develop the skill of making decisions through studying history.6、 Smartphone apps certainly makes our life easier. And now, it seems that they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various of study aid apps aimed at student. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient they are, these apps present problems with both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps to chat with others. Therefore, this isn't to say that study aid apps should be completely ban. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps' strengths and avoid their weaknesses.7、 As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on what to grow up healthily.Some students at home were too addicted to smartly phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, every student is strong advised to get rid of them and spare some time to exercise on a regular basis to make them energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach great importance on making friends and communicate with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great benefit.I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.8、 When he was 12, I believed honest should always be rewarded. One afternoon,I was playing football with my companions when accidentally I kick the ball througha nearby apartment's window. The crashing sound was followed by kids running from all directions and screamed, "Run! No one will tell." Instead of running away, I went to the apartment owner without hesitation expecting praise for being honest,so he laughed, saying. "I've never seen a kid inform against(告发) himself. What silly boy!" I felt bad hurt. When I get home，my mother said, "Remember: regardless of what he said, pride in yourself will always be your reward." This is an experience I will never forget it.答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：When I was a young boy, my father savesavedmy life. Although I do not rememberantheincident，it is a story that has been told many times in my family. I was twoyears old atonethe/thattime，and my brother was four. We were withmyourfather when hewas feeding the cattlescattleon our family farm. He didn't notice that my brother and Ihad wandered off until my brother，scared and out inofbreath，but came running tohim. My brother couldhardhardlyspeak. He struggled tosayingsay，“Rolfe’s in the cave!”解析：2答案及解析：答案：Since I was a kid，I’ve considered different jobjobsI would like to do.First，I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coollycool. Then，when I wasin the fivefifthgrade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teachertoovery/somuch. When I studied chemistry high in/at school, I reconsidered my goalor and decided to be a doctor.TheyTherewere two reasons for the decision. One was thatI was amazingamazedat the fact that a sick person could feel much more better afterseeing a doctor. And the otheriswasthat I wanted to help people in need.解析：第一处：job→jobs。
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(58)
山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（58）短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
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When Joe left university, he got a good job in a bike's factory．And after he had worked there for some years, he decided to have a change．So he put a notice several newspapers, says what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have．One of the answer he received was from a man who was looking for a job either．This man wrote to him, "Dear sir, when you get a new job, to be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position like yours for a long time．" After he had finished reading the letter, he suddenly realizes what he had done was real foolish.书面表达假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友Jack最近因为被朋友误解而苦恼。
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专项技能保分练(二十一) 短文改错Test 1[2019·湖北省联考]Dear Wangping ，How are things going with you? It's been six month since you studied abroad in England.It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days that we stayed together.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours ，Li Hua答案与解析：Dear Wangping ，How are things going with you? It's been six since you studiedmonth ①months abroad in England.It is the first time that you been abroad. Without doubt, it ishad ②have hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got∧ ③with accustom ④accustomed to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have youovercome all the difficulties you have English? Can you understandlearn ⑤learning the teachers say in class and communicate with your classmatesthat ⑥what free ⑦freely now? You are smart that you must have been made rapid progress insuch ⑧so ⑨so your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days wethat ⑩when stayed together.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua①month改为months month为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。
故将month改为months。
②had改为have 此句“It is the first time that sb have done...”是现在完成时的固定句型之一，故将had改为have。
③在in后加with fit in with...为固定搭配，意为“适应……”，故在in后加with。
④accustom改为accustomed get accustomed to doing sth.意为“习惯于做某事”，为固定用法，故将accustom改为accustomed。
⑤learn改为learning 分析句子结构可知，此处为have difficulty (in) doing sth.的变形。
故将learn改为learning。
⑥that改为what 分析句子结构可知，understand为动词，后接宾语从句，宾语从句引导词在从句中作say的宾语，故将that改为what。
⑦free改为freely communicate为动词，应用副词修饰。
freely意为“自由地”；free作为副词时，意为“免费地”，不符合语境。
故将free改为freely。
⑧such改为so smart为形容词，前面应用so修饰；such常用来修饰名词结构。
故将such改为so。
⑨删除been make与其主语you之间为主动关系，故应用主动语态，故删除been。
⑩that改为when 分析句子结构可知， ... we stayed together为定语从句，先行词为days，定语从句引导词在从句中作时间状语，应用when引导。
故将that改为when。
Test 2[2019·重庆一中检测]Tea has a long history in China, dated back to 5,000 years ago. Obvious, it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many of distinguished poets and writers had written many masterpieces about the appreciate of tea and the love for it, among them was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, a first book on tea, but he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”．Chinese people take delight in teadrinking.It served almost everywhere. Whenever guest visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese people's daily life.答案与解析：Tea has a long history in China, back to 5,000 years ago.dated ①dating , it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good manyObvious ②Obviously ③distinguished poets and writers written many masterpieces about thehad ④have of tea and the love for it, among was Lu Yu in the Tangappreciate ⑤appreciation them ⑥whom dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, first book on tea, he wasa ⑦the but ⑧and/so regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”．Chinese people take delight in teadrinking. It served almost∧ ⑨is everywhere. Whenever visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basicguest ⑩guests social custom. Tea is part of Chinese people's daily life.①dated 改为dating date back to...意为“追溯到……”，无被动语态，此处应用现在分词形式作时间状语。
故将dated 改为dating 。
②Obvious 改为Obviously 此处作状语，用来修饰后面的整个句子，应用副词。
故将Obvious 改为Obviously 。
③删除of a good many 后可直接加可数名词复数，和many 的用法类似，此处意为“许多杰出诗人和作家”，表示泛指，不需要of 。
故删除of 。
④had 改为have 句意为：许多杰出的诗人和作家写了许多对于茶的鉴赏和热爱的杰作……此处表示诗人和作家关于茶的写作这件事从过去持续到现在，应用现在完成时。
故将had 改为have 。
⑤appreciate 改为appreciation about 是介词，后面接名词或动名词作宾语。
故将appreciate 改为appreciation 。
⑥them 改为whom 此处是非限制性定语从句，引导词作介词among 的宾语，在从句中作主语，应用whom ，指代名词短语poets and writers 。
故将them 改为whom 。
⑦a 改为the “the ＋序数词＋名词”表示“第几……”，“a/an ＋序数词”表示“又一/再一”。
此处特指《茶经》是关于茶的第一本书，应用定冠词。
故将a 改为the 。
⑧but 改为and/so 句意为：他写了第一本关于茶的书籍——《茶经》，(所以)被认为是“茶圣”。
根据句意可知，前后句存在顺承关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。
故将but 改为and/so 。
⑨在It 后加is 此处It 指代茶，与serve 之间是被动关系，又根据本段整体时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。
故在It 后加is 。
⑩guest 改为guests 句意为：无论什么时候客人来访，给他们上一杯茶是一种基本的社交习俗。
guest 为可数名词，且根据后面的them 可知，此处应用复数形式。
故将guest 改为guests 。
Test 3[2019·山西省联考]This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p ．m., tired and happy.答案与解析：This morning my American Jack and I went to the temple fairfriends ①friend in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at weholding ②held that ③what saw. There were many different performances and booths sellingsuch ④so handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat,tradition ⑤traditional and performances to see, we at least six hours walking through crowdsspend ⑥spent of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous∧ ⑦a kinds of local snacks and dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lionanother ⑧other dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back home at⑨about seven p ．m., tired happy.and ⑩but ①friends 改为friend 此处指Jack 这个美国朋友，故应用friend 的单数形式。