2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练(25) 含答案

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（25）含答案
第一套
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。

并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/）划掉.
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。

I’m a middle school student name Li Ming。

I’m writing to tell you something。

Recently I
noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school.
I went there too in
the other day。

I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or
chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.
On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.
The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games。

The Internet
is good if we make good use of it。

Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local
government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber
cafes positively。

参考答案
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming。

I’m writing to tell you something.
1．named
Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our
school。

I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students
2,去掉in 3。

surprised
playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even
4．chatting
talking about love affairs online.
5。

in
On my opinion，cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful
5.in 6。

where informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than
7 information
place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it。

Otherwise, it
8 a place
will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make
9．do 10 measures sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
9．我国正提倡建设“节约型社会”,下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情况。

请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society"为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。

项目学期用电用水用纸
上学期80万元62万元11万元
下学期95万元73万元12．7万元
文章须包括以下要点:
节电：及时关闭电灯、电脑等用电设备
节水:随手关闭水龙头;废水再利用
节纸：纸张再利用
补充:自己日常生活所感所为
留意：
1．词数：100~120词，短文标题、开头已给出，但不计入总词数.
2．内容可适当发挥，留意行文贯通。

How to build an economized society (东北三校）
Our government is aiming to build an economized society．It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal including us students．
To build an economized society, we must keep the following points in our minds。

Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no one in the room. Set the room temperature at above 26℃。

Remember to turn off the computer when you are not using it. Secondly, try to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used。

Use basins when washing faces or vegetables. Thus the water can be used again to clean toilets or water flowers. Thirdly, it will be good enough to use a basket instead of plastic bags when you go to the market。

As we know, a basket can be used many more times。

In a word, we should try our best to build an economized society。

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第二套
短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。

每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1。

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2。

只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mrs Winthorp，
So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think
I’d email you and let you know what things are going。

I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor。

There are two girls from my course here and I plan
to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well，I had better
to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afte rnoon，for
I’ve got some preparation s to make。

Keep in touch。

B est，
Carol
参考答案
短文改错：
1.what—-———how
2.anything————everything
3.find—-—-found
4.on second-—-——on the second
5.friend----friends
6.on—--—with
7.warmly----warm
8.to stop————stop
9.mine-—--my
10.for--——-so
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
10．可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行可持续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题.请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。

（江苏省2008年高考全真模拟试卷)
3．对民众进行教育
4．加强了国际间相互合作
你的看法……
留意:
1．不要逐条翻译.
1．可适当发挥
2．词数：150左右
3．文章的开头部分以给出
4．参考词汇：差距gap相关法律relevant laws
One possible version:
The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world。

How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet.
The present situation is worrying。

First, natural resources are becoming less than before。

Second, as some people are not aware of the importance of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree。

The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider。

To our great joy, many countries have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection。

One the other hand，popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out.
As for myself, I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development，our future and the lives of our children and our grandchildren will be in danger。

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第三套
短文改错（满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\)，并在该句下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分。

例如：
In March 1984，Dr John Fellows, who lived in England，and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA。

He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport。

When he
reached，however，he realized t hat he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even，he
discovered he can’t remember her family name too！Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived，but
with much luck. Eventually，he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he
caught a next plane back to England.
参考答案\\\\\ 短文改错（满分10分）
In March 1984，Dr John Fellows，who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/\ Kennedy Airport. When he
to reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address。

Worse even，he
arrived
still
discovered he can’t remember her family name too！Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
couldn’t either
airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but
trying
that
with much luck。

Eventually，he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he
no
caught a next plane back to England。

The
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高考英语书面表达常用词汇句型集锦
▲举例：for example,for instance，take…for example,such as，like，and so on,so on and so forth,and so on and on and on，etc。

等。

▲说明：that's to say,in other words,namely,等。

▲因果：therefore,as a result，thus，because，because of，thanks to…，owing to…,due to …等
▲递进:then,besides,in addition，furthermore,moreover，what’s more 等。

▲顺序：
firstly，secondly，thirdly，finally；
in the first place，in the second place, in the third place，
To begin with,then，furthermore，finally；
to start with，next, in addition，finally；
first and foremost，besides，last but not least；
most important of all，moreover，finally（以上为时间顺序)
in the front of，in front of …,before, behind，at the back of，on the right/left（of），to the right /left of…，on the other side of …，in the center of …，in the middle of …,at the beginning of ，
at the end of …，by the side of …，on the top of …，at the foot of …,on
the bottom of，inside，outside, upstairs，downstairs（以上为空间顺序）
▲转折：nevertheless，however，although, though，but，on the country，after all，oppositely等。

▲总结: in short，in a word，in general，generally speaking，finally,at last，as far as I know，in brief，briefly speaking，in the end，as a matter of fact，in reality, in fact, on the whole，in conclusion，on account of this，therefore等。

▲强调：really，indeed，certainly，surely，for sure，above all等。

▲对比：in the same way，just as，in common with，compared with，on the one hand…,on the other hand，
for one thing… ，for another，similarly等。

▲平行:and，both…and，as well as，as well,neither…nor…or,either…o r，not only…but also
正确使用时间状语从句的复合句、带宾语从句的复合句、强调句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、条件句、让步或转折的句式等
1. 带时间状语从句的复合句
①It’s also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. (2004北京卷)
这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁，而且连词when，while，as，
before，after甚至by the time都考到了，时态上现在时、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都出现了。

而且有些年份带时间状语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。

因此我们建议广大考生应加强训练这类复合句，在高考中尽量少犯错误,注意时态。

2. 带宾语从句的复合句
①I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent，and how well you've learned Chinese。

（NMET2004, I）②I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. (NMET2004，III）
③I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future。

(2004江苏卷)
3. 带定语从句的复合句
①If the re is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help。

（NMET2004，I)
②As is shown on Chart 2，only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷)
4. 其他
▲强调句型It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （NMET1993）
▲带主语从句的复合句
①Here is how you can find us
②On the other side，where the playground used to be now stands another new building—our library.（NMET1999）
▲so that句型:
①I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty。

（2004广东卷）
②I am so sorry that I won't be able to …tomorrow afternoon。

(NMET2004, III）
③The noise was so loud that I couldn’t go on studying. （2004广东卷）
▲让步或转折：
①I don’t know about others，but I used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （NMET2001）
②Although the city is modern and convenient，there are still some problems，such as air pollution，crowdedness and noise.
▲条件句：
①If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004，I）
三、书面表达开头和结尾的写作
1。

书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难.其实，一点也不难。

高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。

你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。

注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。

一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。

那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。

开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点,即要用一些好的套语开始。

比如：
①As is shown on Chart 2，only 10％of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷）
可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。

有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力,这样就容易被老师看好。

档位在开始时就已定得很高了。

2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。

好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。

例如：
①If there is anything I can do for you, I wou ld be more than glad to help.（2004全国卷I）
②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk。

③What’s more，some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder。

Don’t you think it a wonde rful program？（2004福建卷）
④In short，the students have not arrived at any agreement yet。

（2004湖北卷)
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