专项训练 英语作文01(中考)

中考英语作文专项训练
（一）中考英语作文要求
中考英语作文要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。

考生应能：
（1）准确使用语法和词汇；
（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清晰、联贯地表达自己的意思。

要求考生根据提示写一篇80词摆布的英语作文。

提示或者图表、或者图文皆有。

（3）中考评分标准
*满分档（15分）：文本长度符合要求（70-120字），书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清晰，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。

*第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清晰，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。

*第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2要点得给9-10分），行文比较联贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。

*第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整（惟独1个要点），行文不联贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。

*第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。

*第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。

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（二）写作要点
(1)细审题目，切中题意
在动笔之间，一定要把试题认真读两遍，明确作文的中心思想。

(2)拟定提纲，提炼要点
考生应充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出，但不用过于详细，只需根据短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，以免答题时间不够
(3)连词成句，扩展基本句型，连句成篇
尽量使用自己最熟悉，最有把握的句型和短语表达，尽量灵便变通，使用多种句型，避免使用句型的单调性。

用英语思维和表达，切忌汉语式英语。

所使用的词组、句型应该是自己见过或者听过的，切忌生造词句，平空捏造。

(4)通读文章，检查改错
总之，惟独坚固掌握英语的句法和词法，学会运用英语的基本句型和结构，写作时应注意各项细节，才干提高书面表达的得分率。

因此，平时的学习中英多注意积累好词、好句，全面掌握所学的句式及语法知识，多读，多练，认真总结书面表达技巧，最终做到有的放矢、有备无患。

（三）写好英语作文的秘诀
1.积累丰富的词汇量和词组
2.掌握语法
3.大量的课外阅读，积累好词和好句
4.背诵范文和经典句型
5.勤于动笔
（四）英语作文的结构：
不少考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。

如按每一个句子平均8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。

其基本模式为：
英语作文范文
*根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。

时间星期日（７月１０日）
地点人民公园
交通工具坐公共汽车前往
出发时间早上７：００
到达公园时间早上８：３０
活动安排上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐
下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照像
返回时间下午４：３０
要求：１、词数：８０个词摆布；题目及文章的开头已给出，但不算在词数内。

２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文联贯。

３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称，否则答案作废。

Notice
Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news.
We are planning an outing. __________
例文
Notice
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (扩展句) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (扩展句) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m.. (扩展句) Please get ready for the outing. (扩展句)
Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句)
点评：
本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。

文章环绕“Notice”这一主题展开，把表格所提供的信息陈述清晰，要点齐全。

文章中语句简炼，语句变化多样，有简单句、并列句和复合句，也用上了祈使句，过渡自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染
力。

话题作文
怎样学好英语
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。

怎样学好英语是我们向来在探索的问题。

几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。

要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

Brainstorm
Framework
(1)主题句
English is important and useful to us.
(2)过渡句
Here are my suggestions.
(3)陈述观点，巧用连词
First, second, third, at last
(4)增强修饰，美化文章
Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.
It’s good for us.
(5)总结中心思想
In a word
(6)复查作文，检查错误
We should do………
As+adj+as possible, as+adj/adv+as one can Be afraid of doing sth.
How to learn English well Watching English movies
listen to English songs speak English join the English club read more English newspapers and
recite some good passages and keep
you had better do
★范文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. A t last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
（五）实用英文表达方式
(1)提建议
1. had better (not) do 最好（不）做
2. how about / what about doing ...怎么样?
3. I think you should do 我认为你应该...
I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做...
If I were you, I would do... 我要是你的话，我会做...
It's best to do 最好做...
Why not do / why don't you do...? 为什么不...
(2)表示喜欢和感兴趣
1. like / love doing
2. enjoy doing
3. be fond of doing 喜欢做...
4. be keen on doing 喜欢做...
5. prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
6. be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in doing
(3)表示想/希翼
1. want to do = would like to do 想做...
2. hope to do 希翼做...
3. expect to do 期待着做...
4. wish to do 希翼做...
5. consider doing 考虑做...
(4)常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Third/Thirdly,
And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition
3.表转折对照关系的：However, On the contrary, but
Although+clause （从句）, In spite of+n/doing
On one hand… On the other hand…
Some…, while others…
4.表因果关系的：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example ，句子；For instance ，句子；such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know, In my opinion
9.表总结：In short, In a word. In conclusion, In summary, all in all,
★背诵范文
书面表达：（15分）
提示：1.短文应包括调查对象、调查问题及调查结果，并谈谈你对课外阅读的感受。

2.对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

3.词数：80词摆布。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

（参考词汇：课外读物collateral reading; 漫画书comic;学习参考学习参考书learning reference book ）
背诵范文
The Reading Day is coming. A survey has been done to find out what kinds of books are middle school students’ favorite collateral readings. 1,000 middle school students took part in the survey.
According to the survey, forty-six percent of the students like reading popular science books and science fictions best. Twenty-seven percent of the students say that comic books are their favorite and sixteen percent of the students say they like reading learning reference books in their free time. Only eleven percent of them are interested in great books and other novels.
I like reading a lot. I think reading is helpful to one’s growing. It is also very important and
科普科技 类46% 名著及其 它小说11% 学习参考书16%
漫画类 27% 在今年“世界读书日”来临之际，为了了解当今的中
学生到底喜欢阅读什么类型的书，某教科院对1000名初中生的课外阅读情况做了一次调查。

请根据下图提示的信息，给一家英文报纸做一个调查汇报，并谈谈你对课外阅读的看法和感受。

interesting. A good book can even change one’s life. In order to build up a better society, let’s read more good books.
【英语作文课堂练习】
（一）书面表达
目前有关“幸福”的话题在网上引起了热议。

假如你叫李华，是阳光中学的一位学生，你在班里做了一次“你幸福吗？”的调查。

请根据以下调查结果用英语写一篇调查报告，并就“幸福”话题谈谈自己的认识。

百分比原因
幸福60% 父母呵护，衣食无忧
不幸福35% 作业太多，户外活动少，独生子女感到孤傲
不确定5% 此话题对他们来说有点太深，没有认真思量过
要求：1.语言表达准确，短文联贯通顺；
1. 短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数80摆布，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Regarding Happiness
A survey on “Are you happy? Has been done in our class. Here is the result. ___________
参考范文
A survey on “Are you happy?”has been done in our class. Here is the result.
60% of the students think life is full of happiness, because their parents take good care of them, and they don’t have to worry about food and cl othes. 35% feel unhappy, because they have too much homework to do and there is little time for their door activities. At the same time, some are the only child in their family, so they often feel lonely. The rest of the
students think happiness is such a deep topic for them that they never think about it carefully.
As middle school students, we should learn to be thankful to life and try to keep happy every day. What’s more, we should do more for the society and try to make others around us feel happy.
（二）书面表达：（15分）
假设英语老师要你们在课堂上讨论有关健康饮食习惯的话题。

现请你根据以下提示内容写一篇英语短文，描述你的看法。

内容提示：
1.你和你的小组成员认为错误的饮食习惯对我们的身体健康有很大的危害。

列举一些错误的饮食习惯；
2.谈谈什么是良好的饮食习惯。

要求：
1.语言表达准确；短文联贯通顺；
2.短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得浮现真实姓名和学校名称；
4.词数80词摆布。

开头已给出，不计入总词数；
Healthy Diet
Meals are an important part of life.
参考范文
Meals are an important part of life. However, many of us have eating habits that are
bad for our health. Some people eat too quickly or too much, while others don’t have meals in order to lose weight. And some people just eat snacks instead of having meals.
It is important to have good eating habits. To stay healthy, don’t eat too much or too little. You should eat all different kinds of healthy food, such as vegetables, fish and eggs so that you can get enough nutrition.
All in all, having good eating habits is very important.
（三）网络游戏
题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。

作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。

字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up，concentrate on，be (become) interested in
★参考范文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many pleasant ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
（四）书面表达：（15分）
十八大提出要努力建设“漂亮中国”。

当前环境污染严重。

据报导，2022年1月以来，全国多个城市空气质量浮现雾霾污染现象。

保护环境是每一个中国人的责任。

作为中学生，我们应该从自身做起，从小事做起，为保护环境做出自己的一份贡献。

请根据提示，写一篇英语短文。

内容要点：
1.自己走路或者骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；
2.平时节约用水、节约用电；
3.将用过的课本留给低年级学生；
4.购物不用塑料袋；
5.积极参加植树和捡垃圾的活动等。

要求：
1.语言表达准确；短文联贯通顺；
2.短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得浮现真实姓名和学校名称；
4.词数80摆布。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Protecting the Environment
It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, As a student,
参考范文
It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, As a student, we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we can ride to school or walk to school and ask our parents to ride to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, give the used books to the next grade students, if so, we can save many trees. Fourth, remember not to use plastic bags when we go shopping. At last, we can pick up the litter near the river and take an active part in the activity of planting trees. I believe our country will become more and more beautiful if
we can do these things.
In order to build beautiful China, Let’s take actions!
（五）保持健康生活习惯
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。

你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强体健身。

要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。

字数在80词摆布。

★范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If w e don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
【课后作业】
标题：我的理想职业
最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。

请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员理想职业原因
Mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画
Kate 园艺工(gardener) 爱慕植物，想让城市更美
Mike 作家愿意与别人分享精彩故事
Tom 厨师为别人煮健康美味的食物
你
注意：1.词数80摆布(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas._________________________________________
Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.__________________________ ★范文
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.
Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener since she likes plants, and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to make delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.
Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
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