2018-2019学年高中英语 Unit 6 Design Section Ⅶ Writing——描

Section ⅦWriting——描写
你梦想中的房子
[写作技法指导]
[文体指导]
本单元写作任务是描写梦想中的房子。

描写梦想之屋时，通常要包括这样一些方面：梦想之屋的类型，梦想这样的房屋的原因、位置，还有描述它的形状、大小、材料、结构、内部设施、功能、独特特征，对这个梦想之屋的评价等。

当我们描写梦想之屋时，常常要包括以下步骤：
1．梦想之屋的类型：宫殿、木屋、别墅……，并说明理由。

My dream house is a small wooden cottage so that I can get close to nature.I'd like a big villa for my big family.
2．梦想之屋的位置：在市中心、郊区、乡下……
The house should be located on the coast.I'd like a house in the centre of town.
3．梦想之屋的特点：形状、材料、颜色、风格……
The house is made of stone.It is very big and modern.
4．梦想之屋的内外设施、配备家具、组成部分。

Trees surround the house.In front of the house is a swimming pool.It is equipped with fine furniture.
5．对梦想之屋的整体评价或结束语。

That is my dream house.The dream house is really pleasant.
[亮点句式]
1．It looks like.../It is like.../It is big/small...
2．It is...long/tall.../It has an area of.../It covers...
3．There is...in it./It has...
4．It is made of.../It is constructed with.../...is used to build it.
5．It is convenient/easy/good for.../It provides.../It makes...
[满分佳作构建]
[写作任务]
请以“My Dream House”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇作文。

1．位于绿树之间的一座两层楼的大房子；
2．一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和电视；
3．最主要的房间是楼上的起居室，有很多家具，如书架等；
4．屋顶有太阳能帆板(solar panel)，供应洗澡和学习；房子有特殊材料，冬暖夏凉；5．喜欢住在这样的房子里，因为设计的既节能又环保。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．不要逐句翻译。

[审题谋篇]
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1．locate v．位于
2．electricity n. 电
3．furniture n. 家具
4．bathe v. 洗澡，沐浴
5．provide v. 供应，提供
6．comfortable adj. 舒适的
7．energy­saving adj. 节约能源的
8．environment­friendly adj. 有利于环境的
9．special material 特殊材料
10．a large tw o­storey house一座两层楼的大房子
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
(一) 完成句子
1．我理想的房子是一座两层楼的大房子。

My dream house is quite a large two­storey house．
2．它位于绿树之间。

It is located among green tall trees.
3．一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和彩电。

On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofa and color TV.
4．最主要的房间是楼上的起居室。

The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs.
5．楼上的起居室有很多家具，如书架，书桌等。

In the sitting rooms upstairs there is a lot of furniture，such as bookshelves and desks.
6．屋顶有太阳能帆板，供应电能以便洗澡和学习。

On the roof there are solar panels，which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with.
7．房子还有特殊材料。

The house also has got special material．
8．房子冬暖夏凉。

It is cool in summer and warm in winter.
9．专门设计既节省能源又环保。

It is specially designed to be both energy­saving and environment­friendly．
(二) 句式升级
10．用过去分词作定语合并句1和句2
My dream house is quite a large two­storey house located among green tall trees.
11．将句4和句5合并成含有定语从句的句子
The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs，where there is a lot of furniture，such as bookshelves and desks.
12．用so that改写句7和句8
The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】
My Dream House
My dream house is quite a large two­storey house located among green tall trees with a large garden in front of it.It is specially designed to be both energy­saving and environment­friendly.
On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofa and color TV.The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs，where there is a lot of furniture，such as bookshelves and desks.
On the roof there are solar panels，which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with.The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.
I would like to live in such a dream house forever.。