2023届高考英语读后续写复习：2020年新高考山东卷真题示范课件
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After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “ I wish we could help him to earn money ， ” said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”
how
They decided to make popcorn, and put it into paper bags. Bernard could take it around to the houses and sell it.
故事情节发展分析
1-2
Background information
经济萧条 很多人失业 Mrs.Meredith 善良且乐于助人
3-4
A boy in need A mother wanted to help
Bernard一家 爸爸卧病在床 妈妈照顾他无法工作
5-8
Children want to help Bernard
听说了这件事情之后 Mrs.Meredith的孩子
dark. ⑥He stood there with a lump in his throat and tried to fight
back tears.
范例
进行续写
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children，“Let's get started！”Immediately, Clara volunteered to get the big box of corn and prepared the microwave oven to make popcorn. At the same time, John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff in place. Harry ran to Bernard's and dragged him to the scene. After hearing the explanation, Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him. They can hardly wait. Time went by swiftly, and the children laughed, carrying out their great “project”. Joy filled the yard and everyone's heart.
would bring food and medicine to them. How：人物品质
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
who
“I wish you could see him，” she said to her own children, John, Harry，and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”
who
Mrs. Meredith ， her children John, Harry and Clara; Bernard and his mom and dad
what A boy named Bernard was in need；Mrs. Meredith and her children John, Harry, Clara wanted to help.
可用句型 ①Hearing the news, he was exceedingly grateful. ②His smile shone like diamond. ③Where there is a will, there is a way. ④Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. ⑤Love may have many ways, but it always warms those in
When
the economy was in decline
情节分析 5w+1H
why：A man (Bernard's dad) was sick in bed；his wife, who took care of him could not go out to work.
where
a small community
2022年高考英语 全国1卷续写真题
解析
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ____________________________________________________
______H__o__w__w__a_s__t_h__e__b_u__s_i_n_e_s__s__________ How they felt? What lesson could they learn?
想帮助Bernard
climax/conflict
How to help Bernard
如何才能帮助 他们呢？
叙事模型
续写预测
文章概况
用一般过去时讲述了过去发生的事
文章主题
Help and kindness
整体合理预测 Meredith一家帮助 Bernard一家走出困境
两段续写预测 P1： 妈妈听完卖爆米花主意后的反应
孩子们的前期准备 P2：卖爆米花生意如何
Bernard和Meredith 一家的心情 升华主旨
原题分析
注意：续写词数应为150左右。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
What d_i_d__s__h___e____s___a___y__?________________p___r__e___p___a___r_a___t__i_o___n______________________________________
“So do I，”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”
Problem——how to help Bernard?
动作描写 For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried，“I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成)．” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do，” said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 情节铺垫句
读后续写真题讲解
2020·新高考山东卷
Miss Lin
2022.12.2Fra bibliotek 0102
录
原题分析
情节分析
03
04
叙事模型
预测和续写
who
原题分析 where
when
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy
was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of
their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying
to help each other meet the challenges. 情节铺垫句
Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Carrying all the paper bags in the community, he called out， “Popcorn! 50 cents for one extralarge pack！”People started to gather aroundhim, which drew even more people. Everyone is ready to buy one pack to support him. The air was rich with happiness and kindness. Within no time, Bernard sold out all popcorn and earned quite some money. On returning, he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes. For Clara, Harry and John, it was an unforgettable experience as well. It turned out that their efforts not only helped a brother in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others.
高分标准
(1)故事要围绕主要人物展开； (2)详细刻画人物角色及其情感； (3)有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑； (4)运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描 写生动； (5)第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑 合理，语境连贯； (6)续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风 格保持一致，思想积极向上。
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how
They decided to make popcorn, and put it into paper bags. Bernard could take it around to the houses and sell it.
故事情节发展分析
1-2
Background information
经济萧条 很多人失业 Mrs.Meredith 善良且乐于助人
3-4
A boy in need A mother wanted to help
Bernard一家 爸爸卧病在床 妈妈照顾他无法工作
5-8
Children want to help Bernard
听说了这件事情之后 Mrs.Meredith的孩子
dark. ⑥He stood there with a lump in his throat and tried to fight
back tears.
范例
进行续写
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children，“Let's get started！”Immediately, Clara volunteered to get the big box of corn and prepared the microwave oven to make popcorn. At the same time, John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff in place. Harry ran to Bernard's and dragged him to the scene. After hearing the explanation, Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him. They can hardly wait. Time went by swiftly, and the children laughed, carrying out their great “project”. Joy filled the yard and everyone's heart.
would bring food and medicine to them. How：人物品质
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
who
“I wish you could see him，” she said to her own children, John, Harry，and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”
who
Mrs. Meredith ， her children John, Harry and Clara; Bernard and his mom and dad
what A boy named Bernard was in need；Mrs. Meredith and her children John, Harry, Clara wanted to help.
可用句型 ①Hearing the news, he was exceedingly grateful. ②His smile shone like diamond. ③Where there is a will, there is a way. ④Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. ⑤Love may have many ways, but it always warms those in
When
the economy was in decline
情节分析 5w+1H
why：A man (Bernard's dad) was sick in bed；his wife, who took care of him could not go out to work.
where
a small community
2022年高考英语 全国1卷续写真题
解析
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ____________________________________________________
______H__o__w__w__a_s__t_h__e__b_u__s_i_n_e_s__s__________ How they felt? What lesson could they learn?
想帮助Bernard
climax/conflict
How to help Bernard
如何才能帮助 他们呢？
叙事模型
续写预测
文章概况
用一般过去时讲述了过去发生的事
文章主题
Help and kindness
整体合理预测 Meredith一家帮助 Bernard一家走出困境
两段续写预测 P1： 妈妈听完卖爆米花主意后的反应
孩子们的前期准备 P2：卖爆米花生意如何
Bernard和Meredith 一家的心情 升华主旨
原题分析
注意：续写词数应为150左右。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
What d_i_d__s__h___e____s___a___y__?________________p___r__e___p___a___r_a___t__i_o___n______________________________________
“So do I，”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”
Problem——how to help Bernard?
动作描写 For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried，“I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成)．” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do，” said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 情节铺垫句
读后续写真题讲解
2020·新高考山东卷
Miss Lin
2022.12.2Fra bibliotek 0102
录
原题分析
情节分析
03
04
叙事模型
预测和续写
who
原题分析 where
when
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy
was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of
their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying
to help each other meet the challenges. 情节铺垫句
Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Carrying all the paper bags in the community, he called out， “Popcorn! 50 cents for one extralarge pack！”People started to gather aroundhim, which drew even more people. Everyone is ready to buy one pack to support him. The air was rich with happiness and kindness. Within no time, Bernard sold out all popcorn and earned quite some money. On returning, he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes. For Clara, Harry and John, it was an unforgettable experience as well. It turned out that their efforts not only helped a brother in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others.
高分标准
(1)故事要围绕主要人物展开； (2)详细刻画人物角色及其情感； (3)有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑； (4)运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描 写生动； (5)第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑 合理，语境连贯； (6)续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风 格保持一致，思想积极向上。
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