九年级下册英语专题汇编英语书面表达(一)及解析

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
假如你是在苏州学习的英国交流学生Max,你的英国同学Simon给你写了一封电子邮件,想了解你在苏州的学习和生活情况。

请认真阅读下面的邮件内容,根据信中的内容及你的实际情况用英语给Simon回复一封电子邮件。

注意:1.词数90左右。

回复邮件的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复邮件须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3.同复邮引中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Simon,
Thanks for your email. I'm sorry I haven't written to you till now.
I will send you some photos next time. Take care!
Yours
Max
【答案】Dear Simon,
Thanks for your email. I'm sorry I haven't written to you till now.I am really busy with the course
and making new friends these days.People here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.
My school starts at 8 a.m.and finishes at 4:30p.m.After school,we can do some sports to relax.English classes in China are not live ones in Britain.The texts are easy.
Suzhou is a beautiful city.It’s famous for its pretty gardens.There’s lots of delicious local food here.I enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here.
I will send you some photos next time. Take care!
Yours
Max
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,给我的英国同学Simon给写一封电子邮件,介绍我在苏州的学习和生活情况。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm sorry……,.People here are……,My school starts at……,It’s famous for…….,There’s……,I will send you……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头为自己没有回信而感到抱歉,接下来介绍我在苏州的学习和生活情况,最后告知下次给他寄一些照片。

此处be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。

假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论,请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息,以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿,号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。

内容提示如下:
1.政府修建了很多新路、大桥,甚至还有地铁;
2.新添了很多露天开放公园,每到周末和节假日,人们常常去那里野餐,游玩;
3.私家车越来越多,停车已成了大问题;
4.城市变化有利有弊;
5.你的希望:……
注意事项:
1.发言稿须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。

作适当发挥;
3.词数90左右,发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years.The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds.There have been a number of open parks.People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays.More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars.The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages.I hope the government can deal with the problem.Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。

文中使用了大量短语,例如in the past few years,lots of,a number of,open parks,have a picnic,have fun,on weekends and holidays,more and more,both …and,deal with the problem,in the future等。

而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用,使本文内容丰富,表达流畅,是短文的亮点。

点睛:这是一篇材料作文,根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时,可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象,把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。

还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语,会给习作增色。

3.(·河北中考模拟)为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性,网上进行了一项安全问题调查。

以下是100名学生伤亡的原因,请根据表格内容用英语写篇调查报告,就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈你的看法。

要求:80词左右。

题目自拟,文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】A Report on Children’s I njury and Death
Recently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.
Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.
So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out.
After all, life is not a small matter.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性,网上对100名学生的伤亡原因进行了一项安全问题调查。

要求根据表格中的内容提示用英语写篇调查报告,就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈自己的看法。

本文时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。

在写作时,要注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性;要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来,要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

4.(·四川中考模拟)书面表达
现在越来越多的人在网上购物,网购已成为流行趋势,二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点,请参考下面的信息,并结合就的观点些一短文,谈谈你的看法。

1.方便,可以在家买东西,不受时间限制。

2.有很大的商品信息,可以买到当地没有的商品。

价格较便宜。

3.买货容易退货难;实物和图片有差距。

4.网络支付不安全。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________
【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to fi nd the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.
Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.
We should be careful when we shop on the internet.
【解析】
写作分析:本文需要写一篇小议论文,主题是网上购物,需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊,注意合理分段,使得文章结构清晰,可以先总起陈述,然后用一段来描述优点,再用一段描述劣势和不足,最后一段收尾,这样的作文就会条理清晰,结构合理。

具体来说,每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。

写作亮点:
首段总起介绍,挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。

第二段开始描述优势,这里用到
了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”(whenever you like)结构,在表达“...是开放的”也很准确,用了“be open”。

比较级的应用也相对准确,例如cheaper。

连词的使用也是亮点,besides 意为“除此之外”。

在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”,是个亮点。

“What’s more”也被合理使用到了,意为“此外”,避免与besides重复,体现了文章语言的多样性。

总体来说要点均被提及,语言准确富有活力。

5.(·江苏中考模拟)某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛,请你根据表格中的提示内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。

注意:
1. 词数90左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
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【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress.A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress,we can think actively and work harder.Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them.So we can pass the exams easily.
However,if we have too heavy stress,we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion,to deal with stress,we'd better plan and prepare well.We should also form some good habits,such as enough exercise and healthy diets.Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。

在题目中给出了一张表格,需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。

分析表格可以看到,这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面,第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的;第二个是过多的压力对我们有害;最后发表自己的看法,如何来应对压力。

因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写,这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。

在每一段中加上具体的内容,使段落更加充实。

最后还要补充两点自己的观点。

全文需要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来写。

注意多使用一些好的句式、短语,增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的范文。

作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来,并加上了自己的看法。

作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分,首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。

这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides,还用到了一些复合句,如条件状语从句等;接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处,段首先用however来进行转折,然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短,但是意思很完整;最后作者发表了自己的观点,用了短语in my opinion,还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。

整篇作文意思连贯,语言流畅,层次分明。

6.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置!
父母为我们付出了很多,你又做过哪些事情来表达自己的感恩之情呢?请叙述你为父母做过的一件事,并谈谈你的感受。

要求: 1. 条理清楚,书写规范整洁,100个词左右。

2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。

【答案】There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude. Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.
I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.
【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

运用适当的短语表达中心思想,增加作文的可读性。

完成提示词时也要符合事实。

温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

7.(·内蒙古中考模拟)书面表达
国家提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子的政策后,全社会展开了热议。

某校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查。

请你根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点。

问卷调查结果如下:
要求:1.词数90左右。

2.条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范。

3.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名。

文章开头已给出,不计入总数。

Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.
【答案】Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister.The opinions are different.
Here are the results. About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share happiness and sadness together. And they won't feel lonely anymore. What's more,they think they'll get freedom.
But others disagree. They think they won't get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before. Besides,they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.
In my opinion,it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents' choices. After all,they're the persons who will make the final decision.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点。

文章时态用一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。

本文所给材料比较详细,考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并可适当发挥。

在写作时,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

8.(·西安市铁一中学中考模拟)假如你是李华,上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇游记,介绍一下你愉快的周末。

内容: 1 天气:晴朗;2 交通:公交车; 3时间:早上9点到达,下午4点离开;4,活动:赏花,放风筝,野餐.......5 感想。

要求:1 参考提示内容,可适当发挥2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息4. 字数:不少于70字
【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 a.m. On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 a.m. we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had picnic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 p.m. we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 p.m. got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文,话题是假如你是李华,上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇游记,介绍一下你愉快的周末。

时态主要是一般过去时,注意表达的顺序。

认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,认真阅读所给提示,所给提示就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。

短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚,注意使用表达顺序词。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯
性。

写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。

本文提纲:
上周末我和几个同学去了青龙寺。

星期天天气晴朗。

我们早上7点乘公共汽车去了那里。

在公共汽车上我们谈笑风生,我们很高兴。

上午9点我们到了那里。

上午我们赏花,拍照,放风筝。

中午我们在山脚下野餐。

下午我们去爬山。

下午4点,我们离开青龙寺,下午6点回到家。

虽然我们很累,但我们还是很高兴。

【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

要学以致用。

像We were so happy, though we were tired.(1)学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

(2)列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

(3)切忌堆砌词语、句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

(4)注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

(5)注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

9.(·广东中考模拟)近年来,我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生,而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑,不敢去学校,甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。

请以“My opinions about school bullying” 为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。

提示:
1. What do you think of school bullying?
2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?
要求:
1. 所给提示信息应全部包括,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2. 80词以上。

参考词汇:心理问题mental health problems .
My opinions about school bullying
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【答案】My opinions about school bullying
School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?
If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文,谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

10.(·云南中考模拟)书面表达
A Special Day
提示:在每个人的生活中,总会有些特别的日子。

请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短
文,记叙你特别的一天。

要求:1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。

2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。

3、请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试题卷上无效。

【答案】A Special Day
Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I w ant to give him a surprise.
My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如such a special day,give him a surprise,a lot,make a dish,want to do,with the help of,return home等。

而复杂并列结构My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want.和Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11.(·黑龙江中考模拟)话题作文:构建文明和谐的社会是实现中国梦的一个重要组成部分,请你围绕构建和谐社会(build a harmonious society)写一篇文章。

提示:(1)对国家、社会的热爱;
(2)对父母、师长、同学的尊重与关心;
(3)对环境的保护。

(B)图示作文:仔细观察下列图片,展开合理想象,写一篇作文。

要求:(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

(2)词数在80~100词之间。

(3)要求字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。

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【答案】Build a harmonious society
Building a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?
First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a grea t interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and hel p those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.
Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
(B) My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.
When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.
What good children his classmates are!
【解析】
【详解】
A篇:
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能构建文明和谐的社会。

主要从对国家、社会的热爱;对父母、师长、同学的尊重与关心;对环境的保护这三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。

写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
Let’s take a great interest in the development of our ho metowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. 让我们热衷于家乡的发展,积极参与学校的各项活动。

本题是由and 连接的句子。

【高分句型二】
We should also care for each other and help those in need. 我们也应该互相关心,帮助那些需要帮助的人。

这句话的语言很好。

B篇:
这是一篇图示作文,根据图片的内容展开合理想象。

图片显示的内容是:图一,打篮球;图二,有一个学生摔倒了,腿受伤了;图三,同学们赶忙送他去医院。

图四,他的同学带着花去看他。

主要从这四个方面去介绍。

时态为一般过去时,人称为第三人称。

注意作文
中必须包含图片上的所有信息,并适当发挥。

写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 医生仔细地检查了他,他不得不住院几天。

本题是由and 连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】
What good children his classmates are! 他的同学们多好啊!
这句话是由what引导的感叹句。

【点睛】
A篇:
B篇:
看图作文是以图画或图表来提供目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等情景,要求作者借助图画,通过联想将一组画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式,用于反映图中所表现的思想内容。

从写作体裁上看,可说明介绍,可叙事记人、可写景状物,也可以发表议论。

看图作文主要考查考生的观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造能力和语言表达能力。

想写好看图作文,必须遵循以下步骤:
1. 仔细审题、弄清题目要求
首先,必须通读试题中的每一个字,认真观察所给的每一幅图画,正确理解提示所提出的各种要求,从而明确作文的中心思想,判断文章的类型、特点,了解文章的重点内容,力求切中题意。

2. 审好图,确定要素
认真观察图中的故事发生于何时?何地?图中的人物为何人?他们做了什么事情?结果如何?
3. 考虑用恰当的词语、句型和时态
弄懂了图上的大意后,在内心构思一个基本的框架,考虑用什么样的句型、词语、时态来充分表达文章的内容,尽可能用你熟悉的词语或句型,力求语言准确、意思明了。

4. 列出要点,组织语言
在认真审题、弄清题意的基础上,我们应逐个完整无误地把内容要点列出来,我们可以在每幅图画的旁边用简单的词语标出其所表达的要点,这样,既可以提醒自己不要漏写了要点,又能防止过分发挥。

接着就可以将内容要点译成英文词语或句子,以便下一步组织语言,形成短文。

要注意使用适当的连接词或过渡性语句,以使上下文更为连贯,过渡自然。

5. 详细得当
对一些细节方面的内容,如果是文章必不可少的细节,在写作时不可将这些细节忽略;如果是可有可无的细节,则可视具体情况进行增删。

因此,我们在审图时,一定要注意各图中的一些细节内容,看其是否影响文章的内容。

6. 仔细检查、修改
文章写完后,应进行必要的检查、修改,力求全文内容表达准确、完整,并最大限度减少。

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