初三英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)含解析
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初三英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟）当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。
请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。
Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。
而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest
that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。
（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Lingling
Last
week___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should
learn from her.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。
根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。
文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。
本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。
动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。
在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。
同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。
提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。
目前数量在减少，因为：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。
3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。
要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。
倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。
文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。
时态主要为一般现在时。
提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。
写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。
本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。
并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。
4．（·杭州市清河中学中考模拟）小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。
要求不少于80个字。
Hi, Xiao Ming!
【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!
In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school.
On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.
Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。
而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that
you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
5．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。
近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。
为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。
短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。
3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and
helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。
根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。
文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。
本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。
动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。
在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。
同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
6．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。
作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。
（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。
How to Become an Inventor?
With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,
【答案】How to Become an Inventor?
With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.
What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。
开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。
此处play an important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．
要求：
1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______
【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
【解析】
【详解】
高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。
高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．
高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的
句中使用短语有：“in order to do s th 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。
8．（·海林市朝鲜族中学中考模拟）（B）如今，许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天，请根据下列提示写一篇短文，针对这种现象谈谈你的看法与建议。
短文要包括所给要点，并补充第二点建议，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
80～100词。
提示：原因：想放松一下，打发时间。
结果：对运动不感兴趣，不愿面对面交流。
建议：1. 禁止学生把手机带到学校；2. ……
参考词汇： chat v.聊天；kill the time打发时间；face to face面对面
【答案】Nowadays, many students love chatting on their mobile phones after class. They think it is a good way to relax themselves and kill the boring time. However, many of them show no interest in sports and some even dislike talking with their friends face to face. I think they
shouldn’t be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Or they have to turn off their mobile phones when they are in the school. And they should spend more time on some sports, because playing sports is good for their body and mind.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天这一现象谈谈你的看法和建议。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如love doing, it作形式主语，however, face to face, be allowed to do, spend时间+on sth以及be good for。
增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。
文中已给出内容不计人总词数。
所给提示词语仅供选用。
请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。
请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。
提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help
提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?
Why will you take this activity?
How will you finish your homework?
Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________
______________________________________________________________
Your loring student
Li lHua
题目②
一位好老师，胜过万卷书。
在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。
某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。
假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。
主要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。
提示词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress
提示问题：Which teacher impressed you most?
What happened to make you impressed?
What do you want to say to him/her?
Thank you,my teacher
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
【答案】题目一：
Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.
In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.
I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.
Your loring student
Li Hua
题目二：
Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.
I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.
【解析】
【详解】
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题目①
本文是一篇应用文，作文要求写一张请假条，因此格式要遵循假条的格式。
假条的内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提示问题可知假条主要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。
本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般将来时为主。
例文分成三段，根据提示问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。
高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般将来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。
题目②
题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师的文章。
人称应该为第一人称。
注意给出的提示问题，文章要包含这三部分的内容。
本例文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。
文章第一段介绍“我”要感谢的老师，第二段用一般过去时介绍为什么“我”要感谢老师，第三段表达“我”的感谢。
分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。
高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；现在完成时；want to do sth。
10．（·山东中考模拟）“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。
你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。
2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。
100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。
而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
11．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
以“My Weekend Housework”为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活，并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活，并谈谈你做家务的感受。
提示词：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...
要求：1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，语意连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等；
4.不少于70词，开头给出，不计入总词数。
My Weekend Housework
I was busy last
weekend.___________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________
【答案】My Weekend Housework
I was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day.
In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed.
I think it was a busy weekend.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。
同时I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
12．（·浙江中考模拟）"你养我长大，我陪你变老。
"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付
出，成长要学会爱，感受爱。
假设今天是你爸爸的生日，是你向爸爸表达感激的好机会。
请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；教我学会……
2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
3）今天，我要为您……（自主发挥，至少两点）
要求：1）参考所给内容，可适当发挥；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和地名等信息。
4）词数：不少于70词。
（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
）
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.
【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.
You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said "I love you" to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。
而复杂并列结构In the past, I never said "I love you" to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly.和You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me./ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
13．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（B）图示作文：根据图画内容，展开想象，写一篇小短文。
小安是一名初三的学生，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。
请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。