考研基础写作——写从句

可以用的状语从句连接词
• as long as, on condition that, lest, so…that, such…that, in case, as if, now that, whether…or, however • 1.You’ve bought a new car. What are you going to do with the old one?
使文章富有表现力的手段
• 1.使用有难度的词汇 • 2.使用形容词修饰名词，使用副词修饰整个 句子 • 3.使用被动语态 • 4.使用倒装句（not only…but also， only…） • 5.尽可能使用名词和名词结构（将动词改写 成名词短语），而不是习惯中的动词和形 容词
构造从句
• 1.They need more help in English. That is quite obvious. • 2. I was far more intelligent than he was. I always took that for granted. • 3. You were unable to attend our meeting. We all thought that was a pity.
• 7.Mr Brown just came from Britain yesterday. He will teach us accounting this term. • 8.I have an arrangement with my bank. By the arrangement they let me use their money and repay them next month. • 9.He sent her a letter. In the letter he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her.
作文修改
• 写完作文后应进行修改，注意：尽量不修改内容，主要修 改语言。 • 1、字母大小写 • 2、怪符号（如VIP） • 3、主谓一致 • 4、动词时态 • 5、名词单复数 • 6、单词拼写 • 其中，3、4、5三条中文中没有，应该特别注意。如： I love my girlfriend. He likes to go to park with me. I love my fathers and mothers.
• Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country. And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business. • Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts. And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.
考研基础写作
——造从句
张一凯
考研写作评判标准
一、评判重点：内容、结构、语言、书写和 标点 （一）内容：不跑题即可。注意：1.不要妄图 以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 首要要求：不跑题！不要在构思上浪费时间， 想出的话题要与自ຫໍສະໝຸດ 的表达水平相符。（二）结构
1.牢记总—分—总。先写主题句（topic sentence），再写分论点，最后写总结句 （conclusion） 2.大作文最后一段如果是解决方法段，直接 用模板。因为阅卷老师不看。
• Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts. And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.
• 6.He tried very hard. But he could not do the job satisfactorily. • 7.It may take an hour or even a whole day. But I shall find out the answer. • 8.I remember the whole thing. It seems that it happened yesterday. • 9.You can go out. But you should promise to be back before 11 at night.
• 最后一句润色过程： • 1、try our best to prevent people from cutting trees • 2、exert every effort to prevent people from cutting trees • 3、efforts have been exerted to prevent people from cutting more trees • 4、efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut （改主动句为被动句） • 1、realize v. realization n. • 2、it is important to realize to make our cities greener • 3、the realization of making cities greener is important • 4、the realization of making cities greener is of great importance （改动词结构为名词结构）
• Recently ,with the development of business and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities. We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees. But, it is important to realize to make our cities greener. • In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a rapid development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined dramatically. Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.
• 2.We’d better take the telescope with us. Perhaps it is needed. • 3.We must hurry off. Otherwise, we might miss the bus. • 4.I’ll lend you my computer. The condition is that you keep it in good shape. • 5.The aircraft was flying at a very high attitude. We could hardly see it.
• In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a rapid development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined dramatically. Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.
• 4.He won the first gold medal The news soon spread throughout the country. • 5.The United States is known for its supermarkets. In these supermarkets, huge quantities of all kinds of food and household articles are sold. • 6.The story happened in late 19th century. • At that time, China is suffering from the invasion of western powers.