四六级高分作文备忘录 PPT
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四六级写作ppt课件
• In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When talking to someone face to face, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.
5.使用V-ing形式 When she arrives,please give me a call. On her arriving,please give me a call.
6.使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of by the teacher.Her homework was well done. The girl whose homework was well done is spoken highly of by her teacher.
5.使用V-ing形式 When she arrives,please give me a call. On her arriving,please give me a call.
6.使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of by the teacher.Her homework was well done. The girl whose homework was well done is spoken highly of by her teacher.
备忘录(memo) PPT课件
her fourth year with SET Branch Company.
2. Donald Bush from the R&D Department. He is in his
second year with our headquarters.
They will be arriving in June 30. please make
目了然； 6. body:在以上书端内容下空一两行写正文（body），语
言简要明了，表达清楚；正文部分可免去称呼和客套语. 7. Reference Initials：有时在正文下空一行处需写上经手人
姓名或姓名首字母；该部分可省略. 8. 有些备忘录如需留副本，可加上cc.( carbon copy，副
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Memorandum To: General Manager From: Wang Gang, Manager of Rongxin Ex-im Company Date: Sept.3 Re.: Delivery of Goods
Mr. Wang Gang called at 9 a.m. He says they haven’t received our goods so far. We should contact him immediately if we haven’t delivered the goods yet. Otherwise they would have to cancel the order.
arrangement for these two newcomers to have their own
office. Let me know if you need more details.
四六级英语写作考试辅导资料(ppt 311页)
所以，既然四级考试考的是英语文章，大家 就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯： 表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持；表示反对就彻 彻底底地反对，而不能采取“墙头草两边倒” 的做法。
英语四级写作备考可分为四大步骤：
一、 背诵：首先认真研究历年四级写作真题，分析 近年来四级写作的出题规律和考试重点，从语言、 结构、 内容三大层面，认真研读经典写作真题范文： 语言方面学习范文中的精彩词汇、词组、句型；结 构方面学习范文的框架结构、内在逻辑、关联词、 同义替换和代词替换；内容方面学习范文的论点、 论据和论证。同时背诵精彩写作范文，要求滚瓜烂 熟、脱口而出、多多益善，扎扎实实提高自己的写 作实力。
the election.” • "I can come today," she said, "but not
tomorrow."
冒号Colon [:]
• 冒号后面的内容是说明冒号前面的内容，或者是满 足所提出的要求，有“如下”或“即”的含义：
• I’ve just had some good news: I’ve been offered a job in a law firm. (说明部分是个分句，可以把这个 分句看成是前面那个分句中名词短语的同位语。)
另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定 要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落 的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正 因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英 语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语 议论文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的 首句都简要地概括出了该段的主要内容，换句话说， 每段的内容都是根据首句来展开的，其顺序不能颠 倒。
二、默写：背诵熟练之后默写下来，仔细 对照原文，会发现你默写的文章与原文有一 些语法、拼写、标点的区别，这些区别就是 你的写作弱点，学习关键在于针锋突破，不 要全面出击。这些弱点正是你在考试中扣分 的原因所在，把这些弱点意义克服，分数自 然就会提高。
四六级作文考前指导.ppt
写作自查
• 语法： 1、主语同动词单复数是否一致？ 2、代词与先行词是否一致？ 3、代词指代明确吗？(尤其要注意的是“this”和 “that”) 4、修饰词的位置是否靠近被修饰词？ 5、有没有悬垂结构或放错位置的修饰语？ 6、动词的形式同时态及语态一致吗？ 7、有没有逗号重叠的情况？ 8、有没有发现不完整的句子？
英语 四六级写作的复习
• 一、背诵
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背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下5个层
次：(1)精彩词汇，(2)精彩句型，(3)精彩句子，(4)万能框
架，(5)经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作
为单词来记忆。背诵前，确保
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背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文
• Furthermore, celebrities as the products’ spokesmen may increase the cost of the products.
• 作文的写作时间为30分钟，合理的时间安排为10+15+5， 前面的10分钟用来读题审题 ，构思并列提纲，接着的15 分钟用来按照提纲写作，最后5分钟用来检查及润色。合 理的时 间安排是写出优秀
• ①用 恰当的逻辑词表现文章的逻辑性。②要注意自然段 与主题句的运用，即用自然段表现出文章 的逻辑性，并 在每段中用主题句说明要点，给人一目了然的感觉。③要 注意句型结构，注意 每句的重心和句与句之间的衔接， 使句意一环扣一环，避免松散。
• 从某种意义上来说四六级考试作文有其固定的写 作格式、结构，而对于固定的题型，有固定不变 的表达法。因此，大家有理由相信只要训练方法 得当，搞好写作是不难的。大家不妨试试多背范 文和常用句型，包括各类型作文的开头、结尾句、 中间展开、过渡句，以及比较、图表说明等的常 用句型和表达法，然后自己多动笔写一写，只要 按这样的方法进行练习，相信在一定时间内就可 以在写作上取得满意的分数
第四章、备忘录的写作ppt课件
MEMO
DATE: October 11th, 2003 TO: Gary Gao, Acting Personnel Manager FROM: Staff SUBJECT: New Hands Required
We need to add four people to our support staff for several reasons. 1、Last week alone four secretaries complained of overwork.
一、备忘录的定义(The definition of Memo)
备忘录有时也称便函，英文全称为 memorandum，缩写为memo，是企业、 商务机构内部同级之间、上下级之间的书 面交际形式。用于传递各种及时消息,备 忘或保留准备将来用的非正式的记事录, 帮助或唤起记忆的记录。
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Memo
TO: All Staff FROM: Samuel Johnson, Secretary DATE: 16 June 2002 SUBJECT: Correct Procedure Informed Please follow this procedure for signing in and out. 1. Sign in on your arrival at work. 2. Sign out for lunch and sign in on resuming work.
1、备忘录开头部分的四项基本内容是基 本固定的，但其格式并非一成不变，有时 排列的顺序，前后的位置也有变动。如： To: Date: Subject: From:
四六级写作模板(课堂PPT)
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• 三句话 总接图画中心思想； • simple as the cartoon looks, its
meaning behind is really so far-reaching-----• if you desire to do something great ,you have to do it from small things.
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• 第一段： • 一二句主语从句引出描述图画或图表； • it seems beyond dispute is that in the
vivid cartoon/chart ...
• a son is telling his father that he is .... while his father is saying that ....
• eg write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be 18
measures to reverse this disturbing trend 。
• 2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to
• 三句话 总接图画中心思想； • simple as the cartoon looks, its
meaning behind is really so far-reaching-----• if you desire to do something great ,you have to do it from small things.
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• 第一段： • 一二句主语从句引出描述图画或图表； • it seems beyond dispute is that in the
vivid cartoon/chart ...
• a son is telling his father that he is .... while his father is saying that ....
• eg write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be 18
measures to reverse this disturbing trend 。
• 2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to
memo_writing备忘录PPT教学课件
Closing segment: an action statement, requiring action from recipient, or informing
action to take.
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Guidelines for reference: A memo
also follows the ‘3Cs’ rule (conciseness, clarity and correctness) or possibly one more, ‘courtesy’
Subject—indicate the topic of the memo.
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Sample heading
To: All Staff From: Allen Smith, Administrative Officer Date: November 28, 2005 Subject: Operating Instructions for New
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Functions of a memo
A memo may communicate information, explain new procedures, announce changes, make requests, confirm results, or offer advice.
Different memo formats have been causing confusion between offices and partners. Starting on Monday, December 13th, all memos should be written using the following standard format.
action to take.
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Guidelines for reference: A memo
also follows the ‘3Cs’ rule (conciseness, clarity and correctness) or possibly one more, ‘courtesy’
Subject—indicate the topic of the memo.
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Sample heading
To: All Staff From: Allen Smith, Administrative Officer Date: November 28, 2005 Subject: Operating Instructions for New
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Functions of a memo
A memo may communicate information, explain new procedures, announce changes, make requests, confirm results, or offer advice.
Different memo formats have been causing confusion between offices and partners. Starting on Monday, December 13th, all memos should be written using the following standard format.
大学英语四六级写作PPT优秀课件
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Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
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Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
第7周四六级写作PPT教学课件
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1.2 利弊子类模板利弊子类模一Nowadays,.…is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.
Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but not least, we can take part in groups or mailing list to talk with friend of the same interest.
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- 将提示的第一句和第二句合为第一段，于 段尾提出自己的观点； - 说明自己的理由； - 结论段总结全文
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例子
标题： How to Achieve Success 提纲： 1 ）有人说成功主要靠运气；
2 ）有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫 无关系 ; 3 ）我的观点
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Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance. Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it wholeheartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds. To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, "No pains, no gains", "Where there is a will, there is a way."
《四六级写作》课件
修改润色
• 整篇论述通 读一遍
• 留意拼写、 标点等差错
写作技巧
提高语言表达能力的方法
多读作品可以学习表达技巧，积累词汇和语法； 多写练习可以多层次、多角度地思考问题，并加 以实践和改善。
常见问题和解决方案
• 冗长赘述：精简措辞，提升可读性 • 词汇重复：用近义词替换或删减 • 语法错误：遵循语法原则，学习典型结构
写作基础
写作目的和对象
写作目的要清晰明确，对象要针对读者需求。怎样选题、定位读者、把握主题，都是基础中 的基础。
写作内容和结构
写作内容要主题明确，重点突出，由浅入深，逻辑严密；结构要清晰合理，层次分明，版式 整齐。
写作方法和技巧
写作方法要因材施教，根据个人差异调整；写作技巧要熟能生巧，多积累多实践。引用举例、 排比比喻、设问反转等，皆是助力写作的好手填写大纲
• 认真阅读题 干，注意细
• 节确立写作目 标，梳理思 路
常见写作类型和模板
• 构思提纲， 清晰分段
• 布局合理， 制定时间
写作细节
• 注意语言准 确性和连贯
• 性运用技巧， 合理搭配
• 议论文：陈述观点，论证立场，提供证据，驳斥对方 • 说明文：解释原理，介绍功能，说明事理，展示特点 • 应用文：办理手续，请求帮助，发送礼物，道谢致歉
总结
写作的重要性和影响
优秀的写作能力是表达自我、交流情感、切实工作能力的必备素质，对个人成长和职业发展 有巨大推动作用。
实战中需要注意的问题
遵守规定，认真审题；分清重点，把握主线；精益求精，追求卓越。
提高写作能力的方法和途径
多练多看，不断反思；善用工具，注重反馈。
《四六级写作》PPT课件
掌握写作技巧，赢得高分。本课程将从写作基础、实战技巧、常见问题等方 面为你详细讲解。
四六级高分作文备忘录
CET- 4 Writing 四六级高分作文备忘录
•分值比例15% •平均评卷时间仅13秒 •总体评分法（Global Scoring） •结构完整、条理清晰 （三段论，每段有topic sentence, 过渡词等等）
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高分作文写作四部曲
Step1 审题构思（2.5 min）
(1)详读作文指令及文章标题 (2) 确立中心思想
It’s high time for us to take measures to stop the phenomenon. (解决措施) Firstly,(措施1) we should… Secondly,(措施2) the government should… Finally, (措施3)… Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a healthy environment for both customers and producers.(首尾呼应，深化主题)
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Step3 组织文章（20 min）
对提纲进行充实，补充必要的细节。分析论证时，巧用衔接语， 使条理清晰。全文基本框架如下：
Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon… （现 象陈述引出主题）
What reasons have caused such a phenomenon?(原因分析) On the one hand, (原因1)… On the other hand, (原因2 )… It has been widely believed that Piracy has caused a great loss(危害论 证)…
•分值比例15% •平均评卷时间仅13秒 •总体评分法（Global Scoring） •结构完整、条理清晰 （三段论，每段有topic sentence, 过渡词等等）
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高分作文写作四部曲
Step1 审题构思（2.5 min）
(1)详读作文指令及文章标题 (2) 确立中心思想
It’s high time for us to take measures to stop the phenomenon. (解决措施) Firstly,(措施1) we should… Secondly,(措施2) the government should… Finally, (措施3)… Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a healthy environment for both customers and producers.(首尾呼应，深化主题)
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Step3 组织文章（20 min）
对提纲进行充实，补充必要的细节。分析论证时，巧用衔接语， 使条理清晰。全文基本框架如下：
Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon… （现 象陈述引出主题）
What reasons have caused such a phenomenon?(原因分析) On the one hand, (原因1)… On the other hand, (原因2 )… It has been widely believed that Piracy has caused a great loss(危害论 证)…
《四六级考试作文》PPT课件_OK
连w贯ou性ld差be。in有cr较ea多sed的. 严重语言错误。
(注：这是老版本，满分为15分)
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14 Women are playing an increasingly important part in society
today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.
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词义扭曲
(1) The town has only 30 thousand population but its economy has been on the rise in recent years. • (2) In my opinion, a college student should learn at least five or six thousand English vocabulary. • (3) I can hardly find a common point with my deskmate. • (4) Information is unavoidable in our times, namely, we cannot keep away from it.
If you want to be successful in your future, you should attach importance to the study of English. But how can you do well in your English studies? Among other things, determination is an important factor in learning English. However, some people tend to neglect this and only hope that luck will help/favor them.
四六级写作高分策略课件
→Given enough time，I can do it well．
以介词短语开头 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced
fear and conquered it． →Like many other adventurers，Chester had
experienced fear and conquered it．
以同位语开头
Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
→Our monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
•In the president’s office, we have found new equipments of various kinds. (误)
•In the president’s office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正)
•There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误)
There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正)
• 11. 动宾搭配不当
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
• 4.动词时态、语态的误用
• I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
以介词短语开头 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced
fear and conquered it． →Like many other adventurers，Chester had
experienced fear and conquered it．
以同位语开头
Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
→Our monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
•In the president’s office, we have found new equipments of various kinds. (误)
•In the president’s office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正)
•There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误)
There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正)
• 11. 动宾搭配不当
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
• 4.动词时态、语态的误用
• I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
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place will you take him to first and why? 2. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your
campus, which place will you take him to first and why? 3. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your
(2004年6月) A Letter to the University President about
Step4 修改定稿（2.5 min）
人称、时态和数的一致。避免低级的 语法或拼写错误。 遣词优化：闪光词汇，词语搭配，一 义多词的变换使用等等 造句优化：句式应多样化，长短句结 合，避免连刀句和连动式等中式英语
p.s. 例文详篇附在 word 文档了，欢迎查看。
四六级作文谋篇布局
作文三段论
1. 开头段 （开门见山，点明主题） 2. 主体段 （或阐释说明，或论证辨析，或叙述原委，
或分析入微） 3. 结尾段 （与开头段首尾呼应，或总结归纳，或提出
建议，或提出解决方案，或表达愿望请求）
四六级作文大致分类
阐述主题类（或问题对策或道理阐释） Expository or Persuasive Writing
对比论证类（正反观点类） Argumentative Writing
英文信函类 Applied Writing
该文体裁是阐述主题类议论文（或问题对策 或道理阐释）（Expository or Persuasive Writing），主要的写作方法是分析、论证。 全文的主题句已确定，接下来是围绕主题句 构思全文，拟写提纲。
Step2 列纲定局 （5min）
根据大纲提示，将主题思想具体化、条理化，显现 出文章主题发展的脉络，还要考虑段落间的连贯、 衔接问题。
四六级高分作文备忘录
高分作文写作四部曲
Step1 审பைடு நூலகம்构思（2.5 min）
(1)详读作文指令及文章标题 (2) 确立中心思想
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
叙述说明类 Narrative and Descriptive
图表图画说明类 Picture Description
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
历年作文真题题目及其类型
叙述说明类 Narrative and Descriptive
2014年12月 1. A classmate that has influenced you most 2. A course that has impressed you most in college 3. A campus activity that has benefited you most 2014年6月 1. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to China, which
hometown, which place will you take him to first and why?
英文信函类 Applied Writing
A letter to a Schoolmate (2001年1月) A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重。
2. 造成这种现象的原因及其危害。
3. 我们应该怎么做
根据分析，可初步将主题定为：盗版现象危 害严重，我们应该采取措施反对盗版。 （Piracy has caused a great loss; we
should take measures to stop the phenomenon.）
Step3 组织文章（20 min）
对提纲进行充实，补充必要的细节。分析论证时，巧用衔接语， 使条理清晰。全文基本框架如下：
Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon… （现 象陈述引出主题）
What reasons have caused such a phenomenon?(原因分析) On the one hand, (原因1)… On the other hand, (原因2 )… It has been widely believed that Piracy has caused a great loss(危害论 证)…
1. Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon.
2. There are several reasons for the phenomenon and it has caused a great loss.
3. It’s high time for us to take measures to stop the phenomenon.
place will you take him to first and why? 2. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your
campus, which place will you take him to first and why? 3. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your
(2004年6月) A Letter to the University President about
Step4 修改定稿（2.5 min）
人称、时态和数的一致。避免低级的 语法或拼写错误。 遣词优化：闪光词汇，词语搭配，一 义多词的变换使用等等 造句优化：句式应多样化，长短句结 合，避免连刀句和连动式等中式英语
p.s. 例文详篇附在 word 文档了，欢迎查看。
四六级作文谋篇布局
作文三段论
1. 开头段 （开门见山，点明主题） 2. 主体段 （或阐释说明，或论证辨析，或叙述原委，
或分析入微） 3. 结尾段 （与开头段首尾呼应，或总结归纳，或提出
建议，或提出解决方案，或表达愿望请求）
四六级作文大致分类
阐述主题类（或问题对策或道理阐释） Expository or Persuasive Writing
对比论证类（正反观点类） Argumentative Writing
英文信函类 Applied Writing
该文体裁是阐述主题类议论文（或问题对策 或道理阐释）（Expository or Persuasive Writing），主要的写作方法是分析、论证。 全文的主题句已确定，接下来是围绕主题句 构思全文，拟写提纲。
Step2 列纲定局 （5min）
根据大纲提示，将主题思想具体化、条理化，显现 出文章主题发展的脉络，还要考虑段落间的连贯、 衔接问题。
四六级高分作文备忘录
高分作文写作四部曲
Step1 审பைடு நூலகம்构思（2.5 min）
(1)详读作文指令及文章标题 (2) 确立中心思想
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
叙述说明类 Narrative and Descriptive
图表图画说明类 Picture Description
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
历年作文真题题目及其类型
叙述说明类 Narrative and Descriptive
2014年12月 1. A classmate that has influenced you most 2. A course that has impressed you most in college 3. A campus activity that has benefited you most 2014年6月 1. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to China, which
hometown, which place will you take him to first and why?
英文信函类 Applied Writing
A letter to a Schoolmate (2001年1月) A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重。
2. 造成这种现象的原因及其危害。
3. 我们应该怎么做
根据分析，可初步将主题定为：盗版现象危 害严重，我们应该采取措施反对盗版。 （Piracy has caused a great loss; we
should take measures to stop the phenomenon.）
Step3 组织文章（20 min）
对提纲进行充实，补充必要的细节。分析论证时，巧用衔接语， 使条理清晰。全文基本框架如下：
Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon… （现 象陈述引出主题）
What reasons have caused such a phenomenon?(原因分析) On the one hand, (原因1)… On the other hand, (原因2 )… It has been widely believed that Piracy has caused a great loss(危害论 证)…
1. Presently, piracy has become a prevailing phenomenon.
2. There are several reasons for the phenomenon and it has caused a great loss.
3. It’s high time for us to take measures to stop the phenomenon.