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高中英语复习北师大版《高三英语写作指导》(共23张PPT)
到 校 园 生 活 是那么 的美好 ,那么的 令人回 味呀!也 由 此 感 到一 种紧迫 感. 今 年 一 月 ,我 开始毕 业实习 .期间,我 不但 学会了 许多书 本没有 的专业 知识,还 从中体 检 到 人 生 的 苦与乐 .通过实 际操作 ,一方面 检验了 课堂理 论教学 中基本知识掌握的程 度 ;另 一 方 面 扩大了 知识面 ;再者 是锻炼 和增强 了实际 动手和 独立工 作的能 力,培养
书信（动物园） 留言条（房东） 写信（外教） 写信（辅导中心） 邮件（举办方） 书信（网店代卖） 报社 （投稿） 栏目（约稿） 写信
写信、写邮件
假定你是李华,你所在城市的希望中医药大学拟招外国留学生, 并提供新生奖学金.请你给外国笔友John 发封邮件告知此事.内容 包括:
1. 招生规模 2. 申请流程及截止时间 3. 联系邮箱:overseas@ admission. edu. cn. 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.
a brief ending
language
plan to do sth/intend to do sth admit students overseas with ideal scholarships offered
further your education feel free to visit its official website the due day to submit the application form
Para 1 Dear John,
Learning that you're passionate about chinese herbs, I'm writing to present you with a promising academic choice.
书信（动物园） 留言条（房东） 写信（外教） 写信（辅导中心） 邮件（举办方） 书信（网店代卖） 报社 （投稿） 栏目（约稿） 写信
写信、写邮件
假定你是李华,你所在城市的希望中医药大学拟招外国留学生, 并提供新生奖学金.请你给外国笔友John 发封邮件告知此事.内容 包括:
1. 招生规模 2. 申请流程及截止时间 3. 联系邮箱:overseas@ admission. edu. cn. 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.
a brief ending
language
plan to do sth/intend to do sth admit students overseas with ideal scholarships offered
further your education feel free to visit its official website the due day to submit the application form
Para 1 Dear John,
Learning that you're passionate about chinese herbs, I'm writing to present you with a promising academic choice.
高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作技能 要决4 满分作文登场课件
(4)Here are some suggestions on how to … 这里是一些关于如何……的建议。 (5)When it comes to protecting the environment, we should …当说到保护环境，我们应该……
3．结尾句 (1)Taking all these factors into account, we may safely reach the conclusion that…考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论…… (2)There is still a long way to go to solve the problem.要解决这个问题仍然有很长的路要走。 (4)We do hope that…我们真诚希望……
(4)At present, there is a widespread concern that…目前人们普遍担心…… (5)Modern technology has many advantages and disadvantages.现代科技有很多优势和劣势。 (6)In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I suggest that…为了度过一个有意义的假期，我建议……
(5)Only in this way can we… 只有这样，我们才能…… (6)To sum up, only if we concentrate on our lessons, can we make greater progress.总之，我们只有集中精力学习，才能取得更大的进步。
图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点， 其难点在于将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。在写作时要注意以下几点： 1．确定体裁。审题时，应仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章使用的体裁。
3．结尾句 (1)Taking all these factors into account, we may safely reach the conclusion that…考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论…… (2)There is still a long way to go to solve the problem.要解决这个问题仍然有很长的路要走。 (4)We do hope that…我们真诚希望……
(4)At present, there is a widespread concern that…目前人们普遍担心…… (5)Modern technology has many advantages and disadvantages.现代科技有很多优势和劣势。 (6)In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I suggest that…为了度过一个有意义的假期，我建议……
(5)Only in this way can we… 只有这样，我们才能…… (6)To sum up, only if we concentrate on our lessons, can we make greater progress.总之，我们只有集中精力学习，才能取得更大的进步。
图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点， 其难点在于将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。在写作时要注意以下几点： 1．确定体裁。审题时，应仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章使用的体裁。
高考英语一轮复习Unit15Learning课件北师大版
6．punishment n．惩罚，处罚→punish vt.惩罚 7．receiver n．接收者→receive vt.收到，接收 8．defence n．保卫，保护→defend v．防御，保卫 9．urge vt.力劝，强烈要求→urgent adj.紧急的，迫切的 →urgency n．迫切，紧迫；催促 10．inspire n．启发，鼓舞→inspiration n．灵感，启发 →inspired adj.受到鼓舞的，得到灵感的→inspiring adj. 鼓舞人 心的
7．switch_off 关掉(……的)开关 8．loose_conduct 行为不检点，品行不端 9．to_a_certain_extent 在某种程度上 10．set_off 出发；使爆炸 11．to_start_with 开始 12．be_accustomed_to 习惯于 13．tend_to 经常做，倾向于 14．put_forward 提出 15．approve_of 赞成，赞许 16．in_conclusion 最后，总之
from，she said her father's inspiring words inspired her to write
it.(inspire)
⊳高效识记·稳固根基
写一写——高频短语
1．frankly_speaking 坦率地说 2．lay_off 裁员；解雇 3．go_blank (头脑)变为空白 4．set_up 开办；竖起；搭起 5．go_up 上涨；被兴建；被炸毁 6．aside_from 除……之外
认一认——阅读词汇
1．ignore vt.忽视，不顾→ignorance n．忽视 2．access n．(使用或见到的)机会，权利→accessible adj. 可接近的，可利用的 3．slight adj.少量的，微小的→slightly adv.少量地，稍微地 4．simplify vt.简化→simple adj.简单的→simply adv. 简单 地，仅仅 5．instruct v．指导，教导→instruction(s) n．指导；说明 →instructive adj.有指导意义的
2024届高考一轮复习英语课件(北师大版闽粤皖京甘豫)：CONSERVATION
25 typhoon 26 Atlantic
n.台风 adj.大西洋的
Ⅱ.记重点单词
1 plastic 2 threat 3 switch 4 incredibly 5 species 6 mass 7 decrease
adj.塑料制的 n.威胁；(灾难等坏事)发生的可能 vi.& vt.转换，改变 adv.非常地，极端地 n.物种，种 adj.大量的 vi.& vt.减少 n.减少；减少的量
消失；绝迹，灭绝 彻底毁灭 把……归咎于 处境危险，受到威胁 交通堵塞 焦虑的 与……有关联
8 for instance 9 sum up 10 have a role 11 do one’s part 12 set out
例如 概括，总结 起某种作用 尽自己的职责 开始做某事，着手进行
Ⅴ.悟经典句式
12
endangered
→endanger
→danger
→dangerous
adj.形形色色的 v.变化 adj.各种各样的 n.种类 adj.濒危的 v.使面临危险；危及；危害 n.危险 adj.危险的
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consumer
→consume
→consumption
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wasteful
→waste
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2 They found that human activity is causing species to die out 1,000 times faster than normal.(倍数表达法) 他们发现人类活动导致物种灭亡的速度比正常情况快1 000倍。
3 Without forests，we would have no air to breathe，and without clean water we would be unable to survive.(without 引导含蓄虚拟语气) 没有森林，我们就不能呼吸空气；没有干净的水，我们将无法生存。
2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写写作指导课件
一、 文本
But the boy, pushing him aside,threw a rope round Daisy’s neck,and began to drag the little creature away.The poor lamb bleated(咩咩叫)very sadly.The cry of grief which fell upon the mother's ears was too much for her,and her heart sank within her. In a moment after,the children were all around her begging with tearful eyes, and voices choked with sobs for their little pet. "Please tell your boy to stop a moment"she said in husky(沙亚的)tones to the butcher.
children begged for Daisy.“No!-No!-No! " they dashed to Daisy and threw their arms around her, begging, “ Please, mother! We would rather go hungry than lose her! "Hearing this, Mrs. Grant was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding. After all, she clearly knew that the children had devoted so much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them, she was, in their eyes, a family member! Having struggled hard, she tuned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would retum the money.
2024年全国新高考卷作文课件高三英语一轮复习
试卷讲评课件
提分必背句式 1.首段常用语 ① How is everything going Having learned that you are enthusiastic in sth I would like to take this opportunity / could hardly wait to share my delightf experience to you. 最近好吗？听说你对...感兴趣，我想借此机会/迫不及待和你分享我的 一次愉快的经历
试卷讲评课件
必备词汇 5.think highly of 对... 高度评价 6. have rich experience in.../ be experienced in... 在....方面有丰富的经验 7.broaden one's vision/horizons 开阔眼界/开阔视野 8. provide a chance for us to 给我们提供了...的机会
试卷讲评课件
2.主体部分常用语 Personally, it provides us with a platform to communicate. Not only does it enrich my campus life, but it also enables me to make full use of precious 就个人而言，它为我们提供了一个交流的平台。它不仅丰富了我 的校园生活，也使我能够更好地充分利用宝贵的学习机会。 Most of the students think highly of this exhibition , which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art 大多数学生高度评价这次展览，它为他们提供一个平台去探索中国 之美，感受中国艺术的魅力。
高考英语复习方案 作文点拨课件 北师大版必修1
英语必修1 │ 作文点拨
对比：In addition, I will attend a party. It aims to raise money for the people
of Yushu. They suffered greatly from the big earthquake.
3．[2010·广东卷] Some schools, teachers and parents give their students or kids
英语必修1 │ 作文点拨
1．[2010·山东卷] They are looking forward to my giving_a_hand_to them and they hope to get_through the exam successfully. (对比：helping，pass)
2．[2010·江苏卷] I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put_them_to_use whenever possible. (对比：learn/remember，use them)
作文点拨
英语必修1 │ 作文点拨
一、写作指南 2010年高考英语作文评分标准包含评分原则、内容要
点、各档次的给分范围及要求、说明和参考范文五个部分。 其内容涉及文章的单词数，内容要点的覆盖程度，单词的 拼写和书写，标点、词汇及语法结构的应用，上下文的连 贯性及语言的得体性。想要在高考考场上写出高档次的书 面表达，就要在这几点上下工夫。其中，前面四项要求比 较容易理解和把握，而相对比较抽象和难以把握的是对词 汇及语法结构的应用、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 下面我们对此进行详细的阐述。
英语必修1 │ 作文点拨
适用于新教材2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step1第1讲简而不凡的基翠北师大版
第一讲 简而不凡的基础句简约却不简单的“主谓(+状语)”结构 1.主谓结构中,谓语常用来表示主语的动作或状态。这种句型中的谓语动 词为不及物动词,后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等,但不能接宾语, 也没有被动语态。常见的不及物动词有:arrive,come,lie,shine,live,walk,fall, rise,happen,exist,ride,occur,agree,write等。 2.谓语动词也可以是不及物动词短语,如come up (被提出),run out (用 完),get by (勉强生存),come out (出版),break down (出故障),drop by (顺便拜 访),pass out (晕倒)等。 (2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)The racing route started at our school
句式(五) 缺一不可的“主谓宾补”结构 1.常用名词作宾语补足语的动词 有:call,name,elect,make,appoint,leave,consider,keep,wish等。 We all call him Hilo. 我们都叫他希洛。 2.常用形容词作宾语补足语的动词有:believe,think,get,keep,make,find,set, wish,consider,prove,leave,paint,drive等。 (2020全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)It was Mr Liu who made me aware of the importance of learning English well. 是刘老师使我意识到学好英语的重要性。
2.可用介词for来变换间接宾语的动词 有:make,buy,cook,find,get,order,sing,spare,fetch等。(如:make sb sth=make sth for sb) My father bought me a new car. =My father bought a new car for me. 我爸爸给我买了一辆新汽车。
句式(五) 缺一不可的“主谓宾补”结构 1.常用名词作宾语补足语的动词 有:call,name,elect,make,appoint,leave,consider,keep,wish等。 We all call him Hilo. 我们都叫他希洛。 2.常用形容词作宾语补足语的动词有:believe,think,get,keep,make,find,set, wish,consider,prove,leave,paint,drive等。 (2020全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)It was Mr Liu who made me aware of the importance of learning English well. 是刘老师使我意识到学好英语的重要性。
2.可用介词for来变换间接宾语的动词 有:make,buy,cook,find,get,order,sing,spare,fetch等。(如:make sb sth=make sth for sb) My father bought me a new car. =My father bought a new car for me. 我爸爸给我买了一辆新汽车。
大一轮高考总复习英语(北师大版)课件：写作提升1.8+巧夺天工的连篇技巧
Ⅱ.完成短文 1．____________，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 2.____________ I wiped the dust off all the furniture.3.________________， I swept and mopped the floors. 首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然 后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。 答案：1.Firstly 2.Then 3.After that
02
即时跟踪训练
Ⅰ.完成句子 1．随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。 ______________________ the Internet ， computers play an important role in people’s life. 2．总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。 __________________/On the whole/In general, the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English. 3．就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 ______________________________，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.
What is more serious is that... In addition，I will go on a trip to Sichuan，where there are a great number of places of interest. Meanwhile，I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
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满分作文怎样得——四步作文法 书信邮件类 题目要求 (2017· 全国卷Ⅱ) 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸 (papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．展览时间、地点； 2．展览内容。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
解题思路 四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁 邀请信 2．时态 一般现在时和将来时 3．人称 第三人称为主
第三步 句式要美 1．句4合并升级为定语从句 There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_c ut_paper_on_the_spot. 2．句5升级为过去分词作定语 Some_beautiful_papercutting_works,_collected_from_all_ove r_the_country,_will_be_on_show.
现场阅卷· 作文升格 学生答卷 Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to invite you to the paper cutting exhibition.Papercutting is one of chinese traditions and I'm sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next saturday some famous chinese artists will perform on that day.Meanwhile，some beautiful paper cutting works，collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there.If you like， you can also join in papercutting.I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua
3．艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举 行。 The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8： 00_am_to_11：00_am_next_Saturday. 4．有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。 There_are_some_famous_artists. They will perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot. 5．从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。 Some beautiful papercutting works, which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_wilsible version： Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the papercutting exhibition. Papercutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.
第二步 要点要全 1．我是你的学生李华。 I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students. 2．我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传 统艺术形式之一，我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。 I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_papercutting_exhibition. Papercutting is one of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.
6．如果你喜欢，你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将 是一个令人难忘的经历。 If you like, you_can_also_join_in_papercutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you. 7．盼望着收到你的来信。 I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
我来阅卷 该生习作为四档作文，得分为18分。作文语言准确，而且 使用了非谓语动词、复合句(包括主语从句、状语从句)等，总 体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是，文章没有分段，缺少框 架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，给阅卷老师判卷带来了困 难，从而影响了得分。
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 11：00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful papercutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in papercutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua
解题思路 四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁 邀请信 2．时态 一般现在时和将来时 3．人称 第三人称为主
第三步 句式要美 1．句4合并升级为定语从句 There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_c ut_paper_on_the_spot. 2．句5升级为过去分词作定语 Some_beautiful_papercutting_works,_collected_from_all_ove r_the_country,_will_be_on_show.
现场阅卷· 作文升格 学生答卷 Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to invite you to the paper cutting exhibition.Papercutting is one of chinese traditions and I'm sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next saturday some famous chinese artists will perform on that day.Meanwhile，some beautiful paper cutting works，collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there.If you like， you can also join in papercutting.I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua
3．艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举 行。 The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8： 00_am_to_11：00_am_next_Saturday. 4．有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。 There_are_some_famous_artists. They will perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot. 5．从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。 Some beautiful papercutting works, which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_wilsible version： Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the papercutting exhibition. Papercutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.
第二步 要点要全 1．我是你的学生李华。 I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students. 2．我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传 统艺术形式之一，我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。 I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_papercutting_exhibition. Papercutting is one of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.
6．如果你喜欢，你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将 是一个令人难忘的经历。 If you like, you_can_also_join_in_papercutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you. 7．盼望着收到你的来信。 I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
我来阅卷 该生习作为四档作文，得分为18分。作文语言准确，而且 使用了非谓语动词、复合句(包括主语从句、状语从句)等，总 体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是，文章没有分段，缺少框 架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，给阅卷老师判卷带来了困 难，从而影响了得分。
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 11：00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful papercutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in papercutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua