高考英语作文真题训练50题含范文
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高考英语写作真题训练50题含范文
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、开放性作文
1.近日,某报社开展了以“Sports Make Me Happy”为主题的征文大赛,请你根据主题及以下内容投稿:
1. 强调运动的重要性;
2. 简述你最喜欢的一项运动;
3. 号召大家积极参加运动;
注意:1. 词数100字左右
2. 标题已给出,文中不得透漏个人信息和学校名称。
Sports Make Me Happy
___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________
【答案】Sports Make Me Happy
I enjoy sports like tennis, basketball and swimming. But my favourite sport is playing basketball. I like sports because they can make me stronger and healthier. Besides, through sports, I can relax myself. I can forget unhappy things. What’s more, I can make many new friends in doing sports. We play together and then talk with each other. I feel very happy and excited when I am doing sports. So sports make me very happy.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生针对以“Sports Make Me Happy”为主题的征文大赛,根据主题及给出的内容投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
喜欢:enjoy→ be fond of
此外:besides→ what’s more
放松:relax→ release
交谈:talk with→ communicate with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, through sports, I can relax myself. I can forget unhappy things.
拓展句:Besides, I can relax myself and forget unhappy things when I do sports.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I like sports because they can make me stronger and healthier.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I feel very happy and excited when I am doing sports.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
2.12月21日下午,你们班在学校餐厅举行了一次以包水饺为主的冬至庆祝活动。
请你写一篇报道给校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动经过;
3.活动影响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
提示词:冬至Winter Solstice
A Winter Solstice Celebration
___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】
A Winter Solstice Celebration
On the afternoon of December 21, my class held a winter solstice celebration which focused on making dumplings in the school restaurant.
The reasons why my class held the activity are as follows. First of all, let the students understand the traditional Chinese winter solstice and the origin of Chinese traditional food -dumplings. Second, through hands-on practice, let students master the procedures and skills of making dumplings, improve their living ability and experience the happiness of labor.
During the activity, the teacher asked the students to guess a riddle concerning dumplings. Then the students watched TV to understand the origin of the winter solstice. The
teacher explained the scientific knowledge of the winter solstice. The students then learned how to make dumplings and experience the fun of making dumplings.
This activity enriched students’ after-school life and enabled the students to understand Chinese traditional culture and benefited students a lot.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于新闻报道,要求考生写一篇报道给校英文报投稿,报道本班在学校餐厅举行的一次以包水饺为主的冬至庆祝活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
集中精力于:focus on→concentrate on
掌握:master→grasp
技巧:skill→technique
乐趣:fun→enjoyment
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the activity, the teacher asked the students to guess a riddle concerning dumplings.
拓展句:During the activity, the teacher asked the students to guess a riddle which concerned dumplings.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On the afternoon of December 21, my class held a winter solstice celebration which focused on making dumplings in the school restaurant.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]The reasons why my class held the activity are as follows.(运用了why引导的定语从句)
3.北京成功申办2022年冬奥会(Beijing Winter Olympics),某英文报开设了一个我最喜欢的体育运动员专栏。
请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜爱的体育运动员谷爱凌。
要点如下:
1.该人物的基本信息。
2.该人物在运动生涯中所取得的成就。
3.你喜欢她的理由。
(注意词数100字左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
)
提示:1. 她的母亲是中国人,父亲是美国人,她从父母那里发现了对运动的热爱;
2. 她的坚持、热爱和专业技巧让她获得了世界冠军(champion);
3. 她的座右铭(motto):如果一切都简单,我们也就不会有梦想。
提示词:对...热爱show strong passion in
滑雪ski
致力于devote oneself to sth.
为祖国而竞赛compete for our nation
面对挑战和压力face challenge and pressure
追求v. pursue
实现某人的梦想achieve one’s goal
为梦想而努力struggle for on
【答案】Aileen Gu, also nicknamed "International Freestyle skier", was born to a Chinese mother and American father, from whom she first discovered her love for the sport. When she was young, she showed strong passion in skiing. She has devoted great effort to skiing and was admitted to the national team eventually. In 2015, just a few months after she reached her first World Cup podium, the San Francisco native announced she was switching to compete for China instead of the US—a controversial decision that thrusted her firmly into the spotlight. But what impresses me most is her wonderful performance in 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, when she faced great pressure from the French competitor. It is with great courage, outstanding professional skills, and perseverance, that she overcame all the difficulties and finally won the competition, becoming the world freestyle skiing champion.
Owing to that, her spirits will never stop influencing me, pushing me to work hard to achieve my goal. Aileen Gu has set an excellent example to us that whatever difficulties and ordinary appearance we have, or however frequently we are defeated,we can achieve what we pursuit in our life, as long as we are not disheartened and go on with our dreams. Her diverse talents to the world demonstrate her famous saying well, "if it were easy, it wouldn't be a dream". From her motto, I would inspire myself to be a diligent man to struggle for my dream as well as for the human society.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生介绍最喜爱的体育运动员谷爱凌。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
致力于:devote oneself to=commit oneself to
最终:eventually→finally
竞赛:compete→contest
决定:decision→determination
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Owing to that, her spirits will never stop influencing me, pushing me to work hard to achieve my goal.
拓展句:Owing to that, her spirits will never stop influencing me, which will push me to work hard to achieve my goal.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Aileen Gu, also nicknamed "International Freestyle skier", was born to a Chinese mother and American father, from whom she first discovered her love for the sport. (运用了过去分词作后置定语和from whom引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is with great courage, outstanding professional skills, and perseverance, that she overcame all the difficulties and finally won the competition, becoming the world freestyle skiing champion. (运用了it强调句和现在分词作状语)
4.近几年,越来越多的优秀国产主旋律电影把“中国故事”、“中国精神” 讲得越来越精彩、生动。
上周日,你校组织了一场观影活动。
现你校校报英文专栏征稿,请就此用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 影片:长津湖;
2. 影片的主要内容(抗美援朝最惨烈的战斗之一,志愿军身着单衣在极寒环境下,凭着钢铁意志扭转了战局);
3. 你的感受(勿忘历史,铭记英烈,维护和平等等)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给。
提示词:The Battle at Lake Changjin;The War to Resist US Aggression and Aid Korea Last Sunday, we watched an epic war film named The Battle at Lake Changjin at the school hall.
___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________
【答案】Last Sunday, we watched an epic war film named The Battle at Lake Changjin at the school lecture hall. The blockbuster glorifies Chinese sacrifices and heroism during the War to Resist US Aggression and Aid Korea.
A crucial victory for the Chinese side, the historic battle saw the CPV overcome long odds to successfully blow up the Shuimen Bridge and push US military forces into retreat. In order not to expose the target, all 125 officers and soldiers remained motionless in severely cold winter with temperature of around -40℃. Although they were frozen to the ground, they were still in combat posture, as if ready to charge.
It is not the film itself that makes us moved, but the heroes of the war years who fought bloodily for our country and the people. The real battlefield is definitely far more impressive than the scene in the film. They risked their lives to win us a peaceful life, hoping the next generation no longer has to live through war. The stories deserve to be heard by us and history should never be forgotten.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生写一篇记录观影活动的文章,内容包括:1. 影片:长津湖;2. 影片的主要内容(抗美援朝最惨烈的战斗之一,志愿军身着单衣在极寒环境下,凭着钢铁意志扭转了战局);3. 你的感受(勿忘历史,铭记英烈,维护和平等等)。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
撤退:retreat→withdraw
保持:remain→keep
感动的:moved→touched
为了不:in order not to→so as not to
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The real battlefield is definitely far more impressive than the scene in the film. They risked their lives to win us a peaceful life, hoping the next generation no longer has to live through war.
拓展句:The real battlefield where they risked their lives to win us a peaceful life, hoping the
next generation no longer has to live through war, is definitely far more impressive than the scene in the film.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Although they were frozen to the ground, they were still in combat posture, as if ready to charge.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]It is not the film itself that makes us moved, but the heroes of the war years who fought bloodily for our country and the people.(运用了强调句和who引导的定语从句)5.某英文杂志Culture专栏准备刊登两只来自中国的大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”的照片,请你写篇短文,配发在照片旁。
内容包括:1.对大熊猫的介绍(如外貌特征、生活习性等);
2.“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Yuanyuan. They are so lovely. They are fat and plump like bears. Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. They have a big belly and a short tail. Living in the south of China, the giant pandas like to eat bamboos. Their favorite activity is climbing trees.
The pandas have been sent to China Taiwan as a gift by Chinese mainland. Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给即将刊登中国大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”照片的英文杂志Culture专栏,写篇短文,配发在照片旁。
内容包括:对大熊猫的介绍(如外貌特征、生活习性等);“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
可爱的:lovely→cute
圆胖的:plump→chubby
巨大的:giant→big
礼物:gift→present
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Y uanyuan. They are so lovely.
拓展句:The two pandas whose names are Tuantuan and Yuanyuan are very lovely.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. (运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句) 6.假如你是李华,了解到有些同学很苦恼自己父母总在网上晒他/她的照片,你向学校的英语校报投稿,对此事发表自己的观点。
内容包括:1.支持或反对“晒娃照片”;
2.用2至3个理由支撑你的观点。
3.帮助他们想出解决问题的方法。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.第一句已给出(不计入总词数)
While it is common for parents to post their children’s photos online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it.
Li Hua 【答案】支持:
While it is common for parents to post their children’s photos online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it. As for me, it’s something acceptable.
In my opinion, posting children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known. As a result, he is likely to have more chances to be successful in the future. It will also be easier for parents to communicate with their friends, for they have more to share with each other. Besides, it’s a way to strengthen an online social circle and connect with people we don’t know before.
Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children’s photos, it’s not necessary to be too cautious about it. We should have confidence in our society.
反对:
While it’s common for parents to post their children’s photos online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it. I hold the same view as them. In my opinion, it is not always the smartest or safest thing to do so. What parents view as delightful photos may be interpreted differently by others and give a false image of what the child is really like. Besides, some individuals or companies steal children’s images and use them in advertisements or other commercial activities. Moreover, it can result in them being re-shared and altered by other online users without permission, which may end up damaging their school status or future career prospects. In short, have a good talk with your parents to make sure they are cautious about it.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于议论文。
要求考生向学校的英语校报投稿,对有些同学很苦恼自己父母总在网上晒他/她的照片一事发表自己的观点。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
在我看来:in my opinion→from my perspective
因此:as a result→therefore
而且:besides→moreover
增强:strengthen→enhance
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, posting children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known.
拓展句:In my opinion, that parents post children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It will also be easier for parents to communicate with their friends, for they have more to share with each other.(运用了for引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children’s
photos, it’s not necessary to be too cautious about it.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)7.上个月下了一场大雪,我们班雪后在校园里进行了一次除雪劳动。
请用英语给校报美语专栏写一篇文章介绍这次劳动,要点如下:
1. 劳动的目的
2. 劳动的情况
3. 你的感受
注意:1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
参考词汇:spade铲子;铁锹broom扫帚
___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _____
【答案】We had the first heavy snow last month, which became potential dangers to the majority of students. Our monitor organized us to remove snow on campus before class. As planned, some students used spades, removing the snow around the teaching buildings, some using brooms near the school gate, and the others on the school paths. It took us half an hour to finish all the removal.
Tired though we felt, we were happy to help to ensure the safety of teachers and students. Importantly, not only did we realize the importance of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生介绍自己班级在上个月进行的一次除雪护安全活动中的情况,以及自己的感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
潜在的:potential→hidden
确保:guarantee→ensure
意识到:realize→be aware of
原句:Tired though we felt, we were happy to help to ensure the safety of teachers and students.
拓展句:Though we felt tired, we were happy to help to ensure the safety of teachers and students.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We had the first heavy snow last month, which became potential dangers to the majority of students. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Importantly, not only did we realize the importance of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.(运用了not only...but also...的倒装句)
8.假设你是李华。
你在学校冬季三项比赛中获得冠军,请你在全校学生大会上围绕体育精神发表一个演讲,主要内容包括:
1.谈谈何为体育精神(至少两点);
2.鼓励积极参与锻炼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:体育精神sportsmanship
Good morning, everyone!
___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It is such a great honor to stand here and give a speech to you today. The topic of my speech is sportsmanship.
Sportsmanship means that a competitor works hard to improve and achieve sporting excellence. Moreover, sportsmanship calls for cooperation with teammates and respect for opponents, which will double a competitor’s happiness. Sportsmanship also lies in fair play and it will undoubtedly contribute to the richness and charm of our sporting life.
With sportsmanship born in mind, let’s embrace sports and enjoy sports.
Thanks for your listening!
这是一篇应用文。
要求考生写一篇围绕体育精神的演讲稿,谈谈体育精神并鼓励大家积极参与锻炼。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
演讲:deliver a speech→give a speech
主题,话题:theme→topic
要求:require→call for
牢记:keep...in mind→bear...in mind
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句:It is such a great honor to stand here and give a speech to you today. The topic of my speech is sportsmanship.
拓展句:It is such a great honor to stand here and give a speech to you today, the topic of which is sportsmanship.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Sportsmanship means that a competitor works hard to improve and achieve sporting excellence. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Moreover, sportsmanship calls for cooperation with teammates and respect for opponents, which will double a competitor’s happiness. (运用了which引导非限制定语从句)
9.假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校正在开展“健康饮食”的活动,请你代表学校用英语写一封倡议书。
内容包括;
1.健康饮食的重要性;
2.如何健康饮食;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
At present, due to the improvement of people's living standards, people's eating habits have changed greatly. Many people eat high-fat foods, leading to obesity and different diseases. In view of this phenomenon, it is time for us to improve our diet habits.
To achieve a healthy diet, we must first realize the importance of a balanced diet. Secondly, try to eat less fatty and high calorie foods and eat more vegetables and fruit. These foods not only provide the rich vitamins which are needed by the human body, but also contain many minerals. Thirdly, don't overeat, and reasonably arrange the amount of food for three meals a day.
I hope you can have a healthy eating habit, which is more beneficial to your future life and study. I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestions.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
假定考生是某国际学校的学生李华,你校正在开展“健康饮食”的活动,要求考生代表学校用英语写一封倡议书。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
由于:due to→ owing to
导致:lead to→ result in
安排:arrange→plan
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many people eat high-fat foods, leading to obesity and different diseases.
拓展句:Many people eat high-fat foods, which lead to obesity and different diseases.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】These foods not only provide the rich vitamins which are needed by the human body, but also contain many minerals. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope you can have a healthy eating habit, which is more beneficial to your future life and study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请你围绕学校上周六开展的主题为“Sports Keep Us Energetic”的冬季运动会,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 参加人员;
2. 活动内容;
3. 收获及感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。
【答案】Last Saturday, our school held a winter Sports meeting with the theme of “Sports Keep Us Energetic”. Everyone was eager to sign up and showed a high level of enthusiasm.
Each class sent outstanding athletes to compete on behalf of the class. Other students were also very active as cheerleaders to cheer for them. The games included the 100-meter race, middle and long distance races, relays, and the high jump and long jump. In the competition, most of the athletes showed a high level of competition and motivation.
Finally, the game ended in a tense atmosphere. Although some players lost the game regretfully, everyone was very united and friendly. After all, friendship first, competition second.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。
要去考生围绕学校上周六开展的主题为“Sports Keep Us Energetic”的冬季运动会,写一篇短文参赛稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→ represent
积极地:active→ positively
比赛:competition→ match
遗憾地:regretfully→ unfortunately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Saturday, our school held a winter Sports meeting with the theme of “Sports Keep Us Energetic”.
拓展句:Last Saturday, our school held a winter Sports meeting, whose theme was “Sports Keep Us Energetic”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Although some players lost the game regretfully, everyone was very united and friendly.(运用了Although引导的让步状语从句。
)
【高分句型2】After all, friendship first, competition second.(运用了“友谊第一,比赛第二”的名言警句。
)
11.你校将举办英语演讲比赛。
请你以“Let’s Promote Ecotourism”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 当前趋势;
2. 你的观点;
3. 你的倡议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Let’s Promote Ecotourism
Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these years.
As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment. Therefore, it does little harm to the environment. By being exposed to natural areas, tourists can have a pleasant experience to get close to nature. Meanwhile, ecotourism benefits the economic development of local communities.
Ecotourism means responsible and sustainable travel. We have only one planet. To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生就提倡生态旅游主题写一篇演讲稿参加学校即将举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
影响:impact→influence
为了:with the aim of→ for the sake of
呼吁:call on→appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变主从复合句
原句:To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
复合句:To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature which can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasing1y popular these years. (运用了过去分词短语作原因状语)
【高分句型2】To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts. (运用不定式作目的状语和省略连词的宾语从句)
12.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你校的学生社团在开展了为期一个学期的活动后圆满结束。
现在,你将代表学校,与英国友好学校进行线上经验交流,请你写一篇发言稿,内容如下:
1. 简要介绍你所在的社团开展的相关活动(至少写出两点)
2. 谈谈你们开展该活动的收获和感想
3. 表达期望
注意:
1. 词数不少于100词
2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数
3. 可以设当增加细节,使行文连贯
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I feel honored to take this opportunity to share with you the experience of our student associations.
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Thanks for your listening and I’m looking forward to the experience you will share with us.
That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I feel honored to take this opportunity to share with you the experience of our student associations.
I’ve been in the English club for a whole term. First of all, we set up an English learning
column where students can write articles, poems and so on. Excellent works are selected and displayed every month. In addition, we held an English speech contest. Not only did the students practice their spoken English, but they also improved their ability to express themselves. Finally, we also performed English dramas. It gave students more chances to understand the cultural customs of English-speaking countries and increase their interest in English culture.
Many members said that they had benefited greatly from these activities. The activities improved their English and brought them a lot of fun. Personally, I think it’s a good idea to set up a club. I hope our club will become stronger and more mature.
Thanks for your listening and I’m looking forward to the experience you will share with us.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于发言稿。
要求考生代表学校,与英国友好学习进行线上经验交流,介绍学生社团开展的活动以及收获和感想。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
设立:set up→establish
优秀的:excellent→outstanding
展览:display→exhibit
比赛:contest→competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Finally, we also performed English dramas. It gave students more chances to understand the cultural customs of English-speaking countries and increase their interest in English culture.
拓展句:Finally, we also performed English dramas, which gave students more chances to understand the cultural customs of English-speaking countries and increase their interest in English culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First of all, we set up an English learning column where students can write
articles, poems and so on.(运用了where引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only did the students practice their spoken English, but they also improved their ability to express themselves.(运用了not only置于句首,使用部分倒装结构)
13.你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“我尊敬和爱戴的人”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
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【答
案】
The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. As for me, the person I respect most is my mother. Born and raised in a small city, my mother is a doctor who loves her work and her patients very much.
When the epidemic started to spread from Wuhan, she canceled her holiday and returned to work in hospital. From day to night, she worked very hard, achieved a lot in her work, and was respected by her colleagues and patients. After work, she would also spare some time to accompany me and share many positive things about her work. When faced with the problems of learning, I sometimes was encouraged to overcome the difficulties wisely and bravely.
So, in my mind, she is a person I respect a lot.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于人物介绍。
你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“我尊敬和爱戴的人”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1. 人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
返回:go back→return
成就:accomplish→achieve
陪伴:keep sb. company→accompany
鼓励:inspire→encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:From day to night, she worked very hard, achieved a lot in her work, and was respected by her colleagues and patients.
拓展句:From day to night, she worked so hard that she achieved a lot in her work and was respected by her colleagues and patients.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Born and raised in a small city, my mother is a doctor who loves her work and her patients very much. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] When the epidemic started to spread from Wuhan, she canceled her holiday and returned to work in hospital. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
14.假定你是李华,你校计划本周六举行主题为“保护环境,人人有责”的演讲比赛,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参赛人员;
2.告知对方比赛的时间、地点;
3.就如何准备提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
To raise people's awareness of protecting our environment, our school organized a speech entitled “Start from ourselves to protect our earth”.
The contest is to be held in our lecture hall by the Student Union this Saturday. It is strongly recommended that you should talk about garbage sorting which helps improve the recycling of the waste and protect the environment. If you have a passion for this topic, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.
We do hope our school will carry out more similar activities in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生对本校计划本周六举行的主题为“保护环境,人人有责”的演讲比赛进行报道。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提高:increase →raise
命名:name → entitle
建议:suggest →recommend
参加:go in for→ sign up for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To raise people's awareness of protecting our environment, our school organized a speech entitled “Start from ourselves to protect our earth”
拓展句:Our school organized a speech entitled “Start from ourselves to protect our earth” whose aim is to raise people's awareness of protecting our environment,
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If you have a passion for this topic, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】We do hope our school will carry out more similar activities in the future.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
二、读后续写
15.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。