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• environmental sustainbility will be ensured
– The children, who were born in wealthy families, can receive high-quality education.
• The children who were born in wealthy families can receive high-quality education.
• People always use disposable items lead to environmental pollution. – People always use disposable items, which lead to environmental pollution.
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 滥用大词，用词不准 – The addiction to computer games will have
catastrophic effects on children.
• catastrophic--adverse
– Almost all countries are faced with heterogeneous problems.
雅思写作
类别
常见题型
要求
评分
Task 1
Task 1
1-9分
线图、饼图、表格、20分钟、150字 Task 1
A类
柱状、流程、地图 Task 2
1/3
Task 2
40分钟、250字
Task 2
议论文
2/3
Task 1
Task 1
1-9分
投诉信，请求信， 20分钟、150字 Task 1
G类
建议信，邀请信等 Task 2
常见错误(4)
• 两种衔接与连贯的错误
– 缺乏中心wk.baidu.com想 – 先表达观点，然后再用论据支持说明观点，确保条理清晰 – 建议列一个简要提纲
常见错误(4)
• 两种衔接与连贯的错误
– 逻辑混乱 – 确保语言表达逻辑性 – 因果关系、转折关系、递进关系 – therefore, as a result, however, in addition, next, what is more – 代词的使用 – The number of female students exceeded that of male
• hardly--hard
– When one studies at home lonely, he or she will be less motivated.
• lonely--alone
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 可数/不可数名词误用 – Children are expected to acquire a lot of
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 分论点缺乏支持论据 – 论点 – Imposing heavy punishment can reduce crime rate. – 论据 – In China, the rate of driving while intoxicated has
considerably declined since the traffic offenders who commit crimes should receive long term imprisonment. – 切忌 – If the punishment is not heavy, the crime rate will not decline.
目标分评分标准
完成任务 达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调 主要特点或要点，但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。 连贯及衔接 信息和分论点安排连贯，论证过程清楚，有效使用衔接手段，但句内或句 间衔接有错误或显机械呆板，有时指代不清晰或不恰当。 词汇量 相对写作任务而言，所运用的词汇量充足，尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出 现错误，拼写和构词出现一些错误，但不影响交流。 句式多样性及语法准确性 句式多样性及语法准确性方面，混合使用简单和复合句，语法和标点出现 一些错误但基本不影响交流。
• have--has
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 语态错误 – Some people think that old buildings should
preserve.
• preserve--be preserved
– The problem of traffic congestion is can solved by increasing parking fees.
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 主谓不一致 – Morality and academic knowledge is very
important for young people nowadays.
• is--are
– The number of female people have risen sharply in recent years.
• Smoking effects our health. – Smoking affects our health.
常见错误改错练习
• The number of cars has been on constantly rise. – The number of cars has been on constant rise.
• is can solved--can be solved
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 句子不完整/从句引导错误 – If the use of renewable resources is encouraged,
will ensure environmental sustainbility.
knowledges.
• knowledges--knowledge
– Parents can give some reasonable suggestion to children.
• suggestion--suggestions
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 双谓语 – The children lack self-control cannot focus on
• People can get many informations from TV programmes. – People can get many information from TV programmes.
• There are a great deal of problems which need o be solved. – There are plenty of problems which need o be solved.
violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? – 错误--主体段落写解决社会暴力的三种方法 – 正确--政府应不应该控制暴力电影的量，以及 暴力场面的减少是否会降低犯罪
study.
• The children who lack self-control cannot focus on study.
– People always use disposable items lead to environmental pollution.
• People always use disposable items, which lead to environmental pollution.
1/3
Task 2
40分钟、250字
Task 2
议论文
2/3
四组评分标准
Task Response Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy
完成任务 连贯与衔接 词汇量 句式多样性及语法准确性
Task 1 （6分） Task 2 （7分）
5
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 词汇匮乏 – advantage
• merit, benefit, strength, upside, virtue
– increase
• rise, grow, climb, ascend, jump
– percentage
• proportion, share, ratio, portion
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 悬垂修饰词(句首的短语与后面的句子逻辑关系 混乱)
– To find well-paid jobs, academic achievement is essential.
• students should demonstrate academic achievement.
becoming wider. What problems can the situation cause and give the solutions. – 错误--贫富差距的原因和建议 – 正确--贫富差距所带来的问题以及解决方法
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 分论点偏离主题 – The government should control the amount of
ieltswritingintroduction课程安排tasktwo审题写作翻译练习tasktwo结构范文分析taskone写作雅思写作类别常见题型要求评分线图饼图表格柱状流程地图task议论文task20分钟150字task40分钟250字19分task13task投诉信请求信建议信邀请信等task议论文task20分钟150字task40分钟250字19分task13task23四组评分标准taskresponse完成任务coherencecohesion连贯与衔接lexicalresource词汇量grammaticalrangeaccuracy句式多样性及语法准确性目标分评分标准task完成任务达到写作任务各项要求能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述呈现并强调主要特点或要点但细节可能与要点无关不恰当或不准确
IELTS Writing
Introduction
课程安排
• Lecture 1 考试模式、评分标准、常见错误 • Lecture 2 词汇语料积累 • Lecture 3 Task Two 审题、写作、翻译练习 • Lecture 4 Task Two 结构、范文分析 • Lecture 5 Task One 写作
• heterogeneous--various
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 词性使用错误 – The students from poor areas always work hardly
when they get the opportunity to receive higher education.
常见错误改错练习
• Children grow up in rural areas do not have the opportunity to receive a high-quality education. – Children who grow up in rural areas do not have the opportunity to receive a high-quality education.
stundents in 2009.
常见错误改错练习
• The campus is absolutely spectacular. – The campus is amazing.
• Children always obtain money from their parents. – Children always get money from their parents.
– Young and inexperienced, the task cannot be completed well.
• new employees cannot complete the task well.
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 审题不仔细 – The gap between the rich and the poor is
完成任务 达到写作任务所有要求、全文能进行清晰论述、呈现、延伸并支持主要特 点或要点，但可能因过度概括、支持观点以至于失去主旨。 连贯及衔接 能够逻辑的组织信息和观点，论证过程能使用一系列的衔接手段，但可能 会出现过多或过少的使用，每个段落都能体现一个清晰的主题。 词汇量 能运用的词汇量充足并展现了一些灵活性和准确性，能运用非常见词汇， 并能注意风格和搭配，但偶尔有词汇选择和拼写错误。 句式多样性及语法准确性 复杂结构用得多，句子基本无错误，语法和标点掌握很好但还是出现一些 错误。
– The children, who were born in wealthy families, can receive high-quality education.
• The children who were born in wealthy families can receive high-quality education.
• People always use disposable items lead to environmental pollution. – People always use disposable items, which lead to environmental pollution.
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 滥用大词，用词不准 – The addiction to computer games will have
catastrophic effects on children.
• catastrophic--adverse
– Almost all countries are faced with heterogeneous problems.
雅思写作
类别
常见题型
要求
评分
Task 1
Task 1
1-9分
线图、饼图、表格、20分钟、150字 Task 1
A类
柱状、流程、地图 Task 2
1/3
Task 2
40分钟、250字
Task 2
议论文
2/3
Task 1
Task 1
1-9分
投诉信，请求信， 20分钟、150字 Task 1
G类
建议信，邀请信等 Task 2
常见错误(4)
• 两种衔接与连贯的错误
– 缺乏中心wk.baidu.com想 – 先表达观点，然后再用论据支持说明观点，确保条理清晰 – 建议列一个简要提纲
常见错误(4)
• 两种衔接与连贯的错误
– 逻辑混乱 – 确保语言表达逻辑性 – 因果关系、转折关系、递进关系 – therefore, as a result, however, in addition, next, what is more – 代词的使用 – The number of female students exceeded that of male
• hardly--hard
– When one studies at home lonely, he or she will be less motivated.
• lonely--alone
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 可数/不可数名词误用 – Children are expected to acquire a lot of
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 分论点缺乏支持论据 – 论点 – Imposing heavy punishment can reduce crime rate. – 论据 – In China, the rate of driving while intoxicated has
considerably declined since the traffic offenders who commit crimes should receive long term imprisonment. – 切忌 – If the punishment is not heavy, the crime rate will not decline.
目标分评分标准
完成任务 达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调 主要特点或要点，但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。 连贯及衔接 信息和分论点安排连贯，论证过程清楚，有效使用衔接手段，但句内或句 间衔接有错误或显机械呆板，有时指代不清晰或不恰当。 词汇量 相对写作任务而言，所运用的词汇量充足，尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出 现错误，拼写和构词出现一些错误，但不影响交流。 句式多样性及语法准确性 句式多样性及语法准确性方面，混合使用简单和复合句，语法和标点出现 一些错误但基本不影响交流。
• have--has
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 语态错误 – Some people think that old buildings should
preserve.
• preserve--be preserved
– The problem of traffic congestion is can solved by increasing parking fees.
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 主谓不一致 – Morality and academic knowledge is very
important for young people nowadays.
• is--are
– The number of female people have risen sharply in recent years.
• Smoking effects our health. – Smoking affects our health.
常见错误改错练习
• The number of cars has been on constantly rise. – The number of cars has been on constant rise.
• is can solved--can be solved
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 句子不完整/从句引导错误 – If the use of renewable resources is encouraged,
will ensure environmental sustainbility.
knowledges.
• knowledges--knowledge
– Parents can give some reasonable suggestion to children.
• suggestion--suggestions
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 双谓语 – The children lack self-control cannot focus on
• People can get many informations from TV programmes. – People can get many information from TV programmes.
• There are a great deal of problems which need o be solved. – There are plenty of problems which need o be solved.
violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? – 错误--主体段落写解决社会暴力的三种方法 – 正确--政府应不应该控制暴力电影的量，以及 暴力场面的减少是否会降低犯罪
study.
• The children who lack self-control cannot focus on study.
– People always use disposable items lead to environmental pollution.
• People always use disposable items, which lead to environmental pollution.
1/3
Task 2
40分钟、250字
Task 2
议论文
2/3
四组评分标准
Task Response Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy
完成任务 连贯与衔接 词汇量 句式多样性及语法准确性
Task 1 （6分） Task 2 （7分）
5
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 词汇匮乏 – advantage
• merit, benefit, strength, upside, virtue
– increase
• rise, grow, climb, ascend, jump
– percentage
• proportion, share, ratio, portion
常见错误(2)
• 五种语法错误
– 悬垂修饰词(句首的短语与后面的句子逻辑关系 混乱)
– To find well-paid jobs, academic achievement is essential.
• students should demonstrate academic achievement.
becoming wider. What problems can the situation cause and give the solutions. – 错误--贫富差距的原因和建议 – 正确--贫富差距所带来的问题以及解决方法
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 分论点偏离主题 – The government should control the amount of
ieltswritingintroduction课程安排tasktwo审题写作翻译练习tasktwo结构范文分析taskone写作雅思写作类别常见题型要求评分线图饼图表格柱状流程地图task议论文task20分钟150字task40分钟250字19分task13task投诉信请求信建议信邀请信等task议论文task20分钟150字task40分钟250字19分task13task23四组评分标准taskresponse完成任务coherencecohesion连贯与衔接lexicalresource词汇量grammaticalrangeaccuracy句式多样性及语法准确性目标分评分标准task完成任务达到写作任务各项要求能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述呈现并强调主要特点或要点但细节可能与要点无关不恰当或不准确
IELTS Writing
Introduction
课程安排
• Lecture 1 考试模式、评分标准、常见错误 • Lecture 2 词汇语料积累 • Lecture 3 Task Two 审题、写作、翻译练习 • Lecture 4 Task Two 结构、范文分析 • Lecture 5 Task One 写作
• heterogeneous--various
常见错误(1)
• 四个用词错误
– 词性使用错误 – The students from poor areas always work hardly
when they get the opportunity to receive higher education.
常见错误改错练习
• Children grow up in rural areas do not have the opportunity to receive a high-quality education. – Children who grow up in rural areas do not have the opportunity to receive a high-quality education.
stundents in 2009.
常见错误改错练习
• The campus is absolutely spectacular. – The campus is amazing.
• Children always obtain money from their parents. – Children always get money from their parents.
– Young and inexperienced, the task cannot be completed well.
• new employees cannot complete the task well.
常见错误(3)
• 三种审题错误
– 审题不仔细 – The gap between the rich and the poor is
完成任务 达到写作任务所有要求、全文能进行清晰论述、呈现、延伸并支持主要特 点或要点，但可能因过度概括、支持观点以至于失去主旨。 连贯及衔接 能够逻辑的组织信息和观点，论证过程能使用一系列的衔接手段，但可能 会出现过多或过少的使用，每个段落都能体现一个清晰的主题。 词汇量 能运用的词汇量充足并展现了一些灵活性和准确性，能运用非常见词汇， 并能注意风格和搭配，但偶尔有词汇选择和拼写错误。 句式多样性及语法准确性 复杂结构用得多，句子基本无错误，语法和标点掌握很好但还是出现一些 错误。