中考英语总复习书面表达知识点(大全)

中考英语总复习书面表达知识点(大全)
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是在苏州学习的英国交流学生Max，你的英国同学Simon给你写了一封电子邮件，想了解你在苏州的学习和生活情况。

请认真阅读下面的邮件内容，根据信中的内容及你的实际情况用英语给Simon回复一封电子邮件。

注意：1.词数90左右。

回复邮件的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;
2.回复邮件须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺;
3.同复邮引中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Simon,
Thanks for your email. I'm sorry I haven't written to you till now.
I will send you some photos next time. Take care!
Yours
Max
【答案】Dear Simon,
Thanks for your email. I'm sorry I haven't written to you till now.I am really busy with the course
and making new friends these days.People here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.
My school starts at 8 a.m.and finishes at 4:30p.m.After school,we can do some sports to relax.English classes in China are not live ones in Britain.The texts are easy.
Suzhou is a beautiful city.It’s famous for its pretty gardens.There’s lots of delicious local food here.I enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here.
I will send you some photos next time. Take care!
Yours
Max
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给我的英国同学Simon给写一封电子邮件，介绍我在苏州的学习和生活情况。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm sorry……，.People here are……，My school starts at……，It’s famous for…….，There’s……，I will send you……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头为自己没有回信而感到抱歉，接下来介绍我在苏州的学习和生活情况，最后告知下次给他寄一些照片。

此处be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。

1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。

2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。

价格较便宜。

3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。

4.网络支付不安全。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________
【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.
Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and
don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.
We should be careful when we shop on the internet.
【解析】
写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。

具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。

写作亮点：
首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。

第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“...是开放的”也很准确，用了“be open”。

比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。

连词的使用也是亮点，besides 意为“除此之外”。

在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”，是个亮点。

“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。

总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。

3．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。

“网上学习（online learning）”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。

假设你是陈欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。

以下是你所在班级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。

提示：
要求：1、词数不少于80词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

2、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________
【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.
In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“网上学习（online learning）”为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。

根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

4．（·海南中考模拟）书面表达
年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。

要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右。

（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …
What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。

而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

5．（·全国中考模拟）年春晚节目中相声演员为大家讲述姥姥的故事，展现家风家教的传承，温暖了每一个中国人的心。

假如你叫Jack，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据下表提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。

要求：
1. 推荐信的内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数100字左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Dear Sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.
【答案】Dear Sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.
In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.
In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.
What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neigh bourhood. It’s really beautiful.
Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours Faithfully
Jack
【解析】这是一篇图表，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb与某人相处融洽；volunteer to help people in need.自愿帮助需要的人
6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）话题作文：根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。

（A和B两篇，可任选一篇）
现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物就是其中的一种。

越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购有利有弊，请根据下面提供的信息用英语以“Online shopping”为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。

优点：1、可以在任何时候购物；2、只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3、方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；
4、无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。

缺点：1、网上付款有时不安全；2、看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。

注意：1、语意连贯，表达准确；2、词数80－100。

字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!
But shopping on the Internet also has some dis advantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.
【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达网络购物的利与弊。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你在英国的笔友Andy给你发来电子邮件，想了解你近阶段的学习情况。

请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。

要求：1. 词数90左右。

开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须符合邮件话题，结合自己情况适当发挥，使全文连贯通顺；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Andy,
Thank you for your email. I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
LiLei
【答案】Dear Andy,
Thank you for your email. I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.
I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to us.When I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.
How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
LiLei
【解析】这是一篇回复书信类的提纲作文。

内容为根据邮件的内容及自己的实际情况回复邮件。

时态主要为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

写作要点包括：1、你一切都好吗？2、你觉得你的英语课怎么样？3、当你遇到麻烦时，你会找谁去帮忙？在动笔前，要认真审题，根据写作要点列出每个要点中可能要用到的表达，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，需要注意书信体裁的格式，要符合英语的表达习惯；注意表达的条理性、连贯性，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

8．（·山东中考模拟）假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。

请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。

要点如下：1.少开汽，多走路。

2.停止向河内排放废水。

3.少用餐巾纸，塑料袋。

4.节约水电，多植树。

要求：1词数：80--100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥。

3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【答案】Dear classmates,
As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps
whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our eart h.
The Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。

请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

9．（·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）
假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。

注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,
I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.
My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。

而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．（·江苏扬州教育学院附中中考模拟）你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述，请根据提示，以“Kindness is a gift”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。

要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Kindness is a gift
Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】例文Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.
I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述，请根据提示，以“Kindness is a gift”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。

内容要求中指出了
写作要点，动笔前一定要认真阅读内容要点，根据内容要点组织材料，确定句子人称，时态等问题。

可以先把各要点用句子表达出来，然后再组合成文。

写作中注意语意通顺，符合逻辑关系，为了使短文更显得有逻辑性，在列举自己的优势时，可以适当使用序数词。

举出的例子要有说服力，想象合理并适当发挥，不能遗漏要点。

注意采用一些习惯的句式，固定短语，以使自己的演讲稿更有文采。

写完后多读几遍，适当修改。

【点睛】
这是一篇非常优秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson.这些给文章增色不少。

二、中考英语完形填空汇编
11．阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的四个选项中选出一个最佳答案.
The Secret Soldier
A young soldier, Robert Shurtliff, lay dying in a hospital bed. He was too 1 to speak or move. Two men stood over him.
"I think this young man has 2 ," one man said.
"I'll take his jacket and boots," said the other.
Robert gathered all of his strength to 3 , "I…I'm alive. "
The doctor came running over as Robert fell into a coma（昏迷）. "We can 4 him," he said as he examined the young soldier, "Oh, my! He's a 5 ! "
It was true. The young soldier, Robert Shurtliff, was really Deborah Sampson. 6 who was she？
Deborah Sampson had grown up in Massachusetts, living as a servant. She 7 of having great adventures （冒险）. 8 the Revolutionary War broke out in 1775, women were not allowed to serve in the army. But Deborah 9 herself as a man and became a solider.
She called herself Robert Shurtliff.
One day, during an attack, Deborah was shot in the neck and 10 . Another soldier lifted Deborah into his horse and rode her to the 11 . A doctor treated the wound on her back and asked if 12 had any other injuries. Deborah lied and said no. She was afraid that if the doctor examined her leg, he would discover her 13 . Using a pocket knife, Deborah got the bullet（子弹）out of her own leg. She 14 to fight as a soldier.
After the war ended, Deborah got married and had children. But she still longed for 15 . So she put on her soldier's uniform and travelled around the country telling of her life as young, brave soldier, Robert Shurtliff.
1. A. busy B. weak C. surprised D. strong
2. A. got up B. lost heart C. passed away D. got lost
3. A. whisper B. cry C. shout D. laugh
4. A. accept B. kill C. support D. save
5. A. soldier B. mother C. woman D. father
6. A. Though B. But C. Or D. However
7. A. died B. talked C. heard D. dreamed
8. A. When B. While C. Until D. Since
9. A. worked B. dressed C. acted D. lived
10. A. arm B. hand C. leg D. stomach
11. A. hospital B. library C. studio D. bedroom
12. A. she B. he C. it D. they
13. A. appearance B. ability C. beauty D. secret
14. A. failed B. continued C. agreed D. planned
15. A. home B. fashion C. peace D. adventure
【答案】（1）B；（2）C；（3）A；（4）D；（5）C；（6）B；（7）D；（8）A；（9）B；（10）C；（11）A；（12）A；（13）D；（14）B；（15）D；
【解析】【分析】短文大意：本文主要记叙了一个叫Deborah Sampson的妇人很喜欢冒险，在战争爆发时她女扮男装到战场上作战，后来被子弹射击后才被医生发现她是个妇人，而不是男人。

（1）考查形容词辨析。

句意：他太虚弱以至于不能讲话或移动。

A忙碌的，B虚弱的，C 惊讶的，D强壮的. 根据下文I think this young man has …以及I'll take his jacket and boots，可知其他士兵是以为他过世了，准备把他的夹克和靴子拿走，可知是因为他太虚弱了以至于让别人误会他过世了，故选B。

（2）考查动词辨析。

句意：我觉得这位年轻的男人应该已经过世了。

A起床，B没爱心，C过世，D迷失。

根据"I'll take his jacket and boots"有其他士兵会拿走的靴子，可知是以为他过世了才带走他的东西，故选C。

（3）考查动词辨析。

句意：Robert用尽他全身的力气小声地说。

A悄悄说，B哭喊，C大喊，D嘲笑。

根据上文可知他身体很虚弱，且下文I…I'm alive可知他几乎讲不出声音来了，所以是很小声，悄悄地说的，故选A。

（4）考查动词辨析。

句意：我们可以救他。

A接受，B杀害，C支持，D救。

根据下文as he examined the young soldier医生给这位士兵检查身体，且此空中的can可知是可以去救这个士兵，故选D。

（5）考查名词辨析。

句意：他是一个妇女。

A士兵，B妈妈，C妇人，D爸爸。

根据下文It was true. The young soldier， Robert Shurtliff， was really Deborah Sampson. …who was she 中的she可知这个士兵是个女的，故选C。

（6）考查连词辨析。

句意：但她是谁呢？A尽管，B但是，C或者，D然而。

根据下文…who was she？中的反问号可知是大家都很好奇她到底是谁，所以此处是转折关系，转折连词，结合选项，故选B。

（7）考查动词辨析。

句意：她梦想着去冒险。

A死了，B谈话，C听见，D梦想。

根据下午…of having great adventures （冒险）中dream of doing sth. 梦想做某事，这个妇人是一直梦想冒险，所以男扮女装去当士兵，故选D。

（8）考查副词辨析。

句意：1775年，当革命战争爆发时，妇女都不允许参军的。

A在..的时候，B当..时，C知道，D自从。

根据下文women were not allowed to serve in the army可知这两句话中缺少连词，when当……的时候，且下半句是非进行时态，故用when而不用while，故选A。

（9）考查动词辨析。

句意：但Deborah把自己打扮成男装，然后成为了一名士兵。

A工作，B穿着，C表演，D居住。

根据上文战争爆发时女生是不允许上战场的，下文herself as a man中的herself和man，可知是把她自己打扮成一个男人，故选B。

（10）考查名词辨析。

句意：在一次射击中，Deborah的腿和脖子被射中了。

A手臂，B 手，C腿，D胃。

根据下文She was afraid that if the doctor examined her leg可知她的腿也是受伤的，故选C。

（11）考查名词辨析。

句意：另一名士兵把Deborah放在一匹马上，然后载她到医院。

A 医院，B图书馆，C录音室，D卧室。

根据下文A doctor treated the wound 有医生给她治疗，可知是把她载到了医院，故选A。

（12）考查代词辨析。

句意：一名医生把她脖子上的伤口处理好然后问她是否还有其他的伤口。

A她，B他，C它，D他们，根据上文treated the wound on her back and asked if 中的her，她的，可知此时陈述的是用第三人称的女的她，故选A。

（13）考查名词辨析。

句意：她担心如果医生处理她腿上的伤口，那他会发现她的秘密的。

A外貌，B能力，C美，D秘密。

根据上文She was afraid 中她很担心，是因为她担心医生会发现她女扮男装的秘密，上文也讲到了她穿了男装上战场，故选D。

（14）考查动词辨析。

句意：她继续像一名士兵一样作战。

上文讲到她女扮男装上战场中枪了，抢救过来后，A失败，B继续，C同意，D计划。

下文提到fight as a soldier又像个士兵一样去打战了，可知她是伤好了后又继续上战场了，故选B。

（15）考查名词辨析。

句意：但她依然想冒险。

A家，B潮流，C安静，D冒险。

上文讲到她很喜欢冒险，根据此处still longed for 中的still依然可知她是依然想冒险，long for sth. 期待某事，long for adventure，期待冒险，故选D。

【点评】此题考查完形填空。

在通读全文，了解大意的基础上开始答题。

答题时要根据短文的内容和要求，结合短文的主题思想，对空缺句子作合乎逻辑的推理。

要弄清空缺词句
的确切含义，并对每一个空白的四个选项进行认真分析，反复推敲。

空缺词句与其前后句
的意义衔接必须自然、合理，不可出现意义断层或说东道西的情况，还要综合运用学过的
知识，从语法、词语固定搭配、词形变化及逻辑推理和生活常识等角度考虑，找出问题正
确答案。

12．阅读下面短文，从短文后备题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可咀填八空白处
的最佳选项。

Four years ago, Joel Kline gave up his job as a magazine editor to become a freelance copywriter for advertisements, but now he had money trouble. He says that he wishes he'd never 1 to set up his own business.
"I am now in such a bad situation" says Joel, "I hope I am 2 working as an editor. You see,
I was 3 with my job, and I used to get really angry at my boss and the way he used to 4 me around all the time. I talked to a few friends and they said that they could give me 5 ,
so I told my boss l was leaving. At first, everything was 6 : I had so much work that I had to take on an assistant（助理）, my best friend at work, Don, just to be 7 to finish things on time. And soon we 8 large amounts of money. Don and I had a really great lifestyle, and when the work was finished, we used to take good 9 in places like Cancum and the Bahams, just to get relaxed.
At first, we were busy having fun, and charged（支付）everything to my credit cards instead, but then I began to 10 how much in debt（负债） I was. At last, I had to 11 Don off. I then had to sell all my office equipment（设备）.Now I could do almost nothing even if people 12 me. Things got so bad that I even asked my old boss if I could do some work
for the 13 , but he said that I'd been so 14 to him when I left that he would never employ（雇佣） me again. I've had to 15 my business now and I don't know what I'm going to do for money. It just goes to show, if you set up your own business, you shouldn't spend money you don't have."
1. A. pretended B. learned C. failed D. decided
2. A. specially B. still C. also D. certainly
3. A. pleased B. strict C. bored D. patient
4. A. show B. order C. serve D. lead
5. A. time B. money C. food D. work
6. A. perfect B. wrong C. hard D. fun
7. A. afraid B. ready C. able D. about
8. A. lost B. borrowed C. donated D. made
9. A. vacations B. pictures C. courses D. chances
10. A. imagine B. remember C. wonder D. realize
11. A. lay B. see C. take D. put
12. A. paid B. helped C. forgot D. asked
13. A. advertisement B. magazine C. equipment D. lifestyle。