2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮专题：热点材料写作：习惯养成

良好的习惯对于青少年的成长与成功发挥着重大的作用。

某英文网站正在就此话题在同学中展开调查。

请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，向该网站投稿，描述你的一种或两种个人习惯，并谈谈它（们）给你的成长与成功带来怎样的影响。

（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）
例文：Developing a good habit plays an important part in our daily life. Everyone has his own habit. There is no exception for me. My habit is reading. As a saying goes, reading makes a full man. I read books half an hour every day. Every time I read a book, it’s like I am going on a journey. There are two advantages as follows. Reading can open up my eyes. Meanwhile, reading is also a great way to improve writing skills. All in all, nothing is more beneficial than reading. Let’s take action to start a good reading habit.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“良好的个人习惯”为主题写一篇短文，叙述它们对个人成长与成功的积极影响。

2. 写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态应根据事情的不同发生时间采用相应的时态。

文章开头应鲜明点出自己的一（两）个好习惯，然后叙述该习惯养成的好处，最后向读者发出养成该习惯的倡议。

写作时应做到层次分明，思路清晰，不要出现单词拼写或语法时态使用错误。

【写作要求】
养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。

请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。

提示要点：
（一）良好的生活和学习习惯包括：
1）在生活方面：①健康饮食②经常锻炼③利用好时间
2）在学习方面：①课前预习②认真听讲③独立作业
（二）良好习惯带来的益处包括
1）帮助我们更好的学习知识
2）使我们提高技能，学会自我控制。

（三）谈谈你的感受
作文要求：
1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数90左右，开关已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．
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【优秀满分范文】
A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．
In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet．Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot．And we should learn to make good use of our time．In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson．In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully．Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own．
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills．We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits．
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body．
假如你是李华，在生活中你看到过各种浪费现象，比如：浪费时间、浪费食物、浪费资源等等。

为了培养同学们的节约意识，学校和某英文网站共同以“节约×××”为题征文。

请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中应该节约的某种东西，为什么应该节约它以及如何节约。

提示词语：population, limit, time, reuse, call on
提示问题：
• What should we save?
• Why should we save it?
• What do we usually do to save it?
经典范文：
In my point of view, all of us should save water. People can't live without water. But the real situation is that the shortage of water is becoming a serious problem in many parts of the world due to growing population and the pollution of the rivers and lakes.
To deal with the water problem, we can do something to avoid wasting water in our life. Firstly, we should remember to reuse water. For example, the water left over after washing vegetables can be used to water plants or to clean the floor. Secondly,we had better limit our shower time. Also, we can call on more people to save water in different ways.
In short, water holds great value to human beings. Let's do as much as we can to save water.
假如你是康康，你很健康，你是如何保持健康的？从个人生活习惯角度谈谈你的保健方法。

不少于60词。

【短语/句型】keep active 保持活力fast food 快餐
【参考范文】
I am Kangakang. I am glad to talk about health.
I never go to school without breakfast. I think breakfast can keep us active all day. I always have meals at home and I seldom eat out. I don’t like fast food. Mum says it is unhealthy.
I like doing sports. Before breakfast I run for half an hour. I play basketball with my friends after school. Of course I also do some other sports. I exercise at least two hours every day.
I played computer games a lot before, but now I find myself and I am living a healthy and happy life. What about you?
假设上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。

请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：
1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。

2. 你请他们不要那样做。

3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

4. 你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是祖国的未来，应该......
参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at
要求：
1. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

2. 要点齐全，行为连贯，可适当发挥。

【优秀满分范文】
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.
We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. Afte r a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.
In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our country lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.
为配合我市“礼仪宜宾（Charm Yibin）”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well”为主题的英语作文，请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。

内容包括：1.守时，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4...
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2.内容可适当扩充。

【优秀满分范文】
How to behave well
As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.
First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
良好的习惯让人受益终身。

如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。

要点:
(1)坚持锻炼,不要熬夜,睡眠充足;
(2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品:
(3)努力学习,广泛阅读:
(4)体贴父母,多做家务;
......
注意:
(1)要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不需逐条翻译;
(2)文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息:
(3)短文不少于80 词。

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【答案】例文：
How to develop a good habit
It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes if they are necessary for us. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more
knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and shouldn’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. Last but not least, when we have time, we should help our parents do some housework. We should be considerate of our parents because they work hard every day.
Good habits will make our study twice the result with half the effort. Let’s form good habits together!
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“How to develop a good habit”为话题展开讨论，要根据题目中所给出的要点描写，把每一个要点写清楚写具体即可，要注意语言的表达要清楚。

2. 例文点评：文章采取三段描写。

第一段总体指出好习惯的重要性并提出该如何做；第二段分别从几个方面具体描写要养成好习惯；第三段总体概括好习惯会事半功倍。

整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确流畅，意思明确易懂。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：in my opinion；listen to；take notes；on time；had better do sth；take exercise；What’s more；last but not least。

句型：if引导的条件状语从句；It’s adj for sb to do sth；when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句。

英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运”。

在生活中，一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。

请你以Good habits make me_____为题写篇短文(词数80-100)。

步骤与要点如下：
1.确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2.围绕主题，进行叙述；
3.写出具体计划
．．．．．。

．．．．，也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历
要求：
1.补全标题(参考词汇：better, happier, healthier, stronger等)；
2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发辉不予扣分。

短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.作文中可以写出具体计划内容，也可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，但要注意时态
．．的运用；如果参照短文中的内容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子；
5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。

Good habits make me___________
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think_______
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【答案】Good habits make me happier
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think reading is a good habit of mine. Every day, I read books for at least half an hour. Before I go to bed, I will read some books first. I think reading can broaden my horizon. It can also help me learn some knowledge which I can’t learn in class. Reading brings me happiness and confidence and these make me a better person. To keep this good habit, I will join a reading club in the future. I think reading is really a good habit and I’ll keep it forever.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，话题是Good habits make me_____为题写篇短文。

首先要根据参考词汇补全题目。

题目补全了之后，主题也就确定了。

第二步围绕主题，进行叙述；第三根据主题写出具体计划，也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】I think reading is a good habit of mine. 我认为读书是我的一个好习惯。

这是一个宾语从句。

句子很短，但是表达很丰富。

是我们熟悉的句子。

【高分句型二】It can also help me learn some knowledge which I can’t learn in class. 它还能帮助我学习一些我在课堂上学不到的知识。

which I can’t learn in class.是由which引导的定语从句。

说明知识点和语法功底扎实。

【高分句型三】To keep this good habit, I will join a reading club in the future. 为了保持这个好习惯，我将来会加入一个读书俱乐部。

To keep this good habit, 是动词不定式做目的状语。

养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。

请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。

提示要点：
（一）良好的生活和学习习惯内容包括：
1）在生活方面：①健康饮食，①经常锻炼，①利用好时间。

2）在学习方面：①课前预习，①认真听讲，①独立作业。

（二）良好习惯带来的益处内容包括：
1）帮助我们更好地学习知识。

2）提高技能使我们学会自我控制。

（三）谈谈你的感受（请结合自身认识，给出一至两点）。

作文要求：
1．表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数90左右。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3．表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
【答案】A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without think especially something that is hard to stop doing.
In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. And we should learn to make good use of our time.
In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides ,it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body. Let's form good habits and have a healthy life.
【详解】试题分析：本题要求根据所给的提纲材料，谈谈养成良好的习惯对我们成长的帮助。

要求从良好的学习、生活习惯的内容、给我们成长带来的好处以及自己的感受几个方面来表达。

短文主要用一般现在时态，用第一人称进行写作。

写作亮点：短文第1自然段对“习惯”下了一个定义；第2自然段从生活习惯上进行写作；第3自然段写的是
学习习惯。

后面谈的是自己的感受。

层次分明，包含了提纲材料的所有要点。

短文中所使用到的keep a healthy diet, make good use of our time, prepare for each lesson等等结构；it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.等等句型，使短文简洁、生动，也使短文增色不少。

【考点定位】：考查提纲作文。

良好的习惯成就美好的未来。

作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请根据以下内容提示以“How to Develop Good Habits”为题写一篇英语短文。

词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

内容提示：
1．上课认真听讲，做笔记；
2．每天按时完成作业；
3．闲暇时多读课外书籍；
4．每周锻炼3至4次；
5．多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品；
6．补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。

要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译。

2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。

How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have a good habit.
【答案】It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

要求介绍。

同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

【考点定位】提纲作文。