广西马山县高考英语二轮复习 语短文改错练习(7)

广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习
1.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When l was in high school, I had an awful experience．At that time l was so brave and outgoing as the others．Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me．I was scaring to see him．
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine out．I agreed．We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well．By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me．Now we have become close friends．
In our life, everyone may make mistakes．What counts most are that we have the courage to correct them．
【参考答案】1.
When I was in high school, I had an awful experience. At that time I was∧
not
so brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom
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would do all kinds of bad things to me. I was scaring to see him.
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So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited
But invite
me to dine out. I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went everything
well. By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me. At had
Now we have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we
is
have the courage to correct them.
短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
【参考答案】2.
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
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One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the
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details in that determine our su ccess, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should
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form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we
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should learn to keep∧balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster
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we do them , the more mistakes we usually make .In that case we are possible to neglect the
it likely
details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no
which
importance.
短文改错
This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich. As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, “ No litter.” And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her
mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, “What clever you are!”
【参考答案】3.
第一处：去掉第二个the 第二处： eat—ate
第三处： advices---advice 第四处： that---which
第五处： throw前加 to 第六处： slow---slowly
第七处： her---my 第八处： by---with/on
第九处： seen---seeing 第十处： What---How
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_________
far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful
67_________
if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school
68_________
looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in
69_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study 70_________ better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons
72_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but
73_________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a
74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place.
75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→ha ppy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we
（***）
Smoking which is a widespread habit even among school children. 76. The number of young smokers are increasing. It is reported that
77.
over two-fifth of the students in a certain school smoke, and
78.
some of whom even steal money to buy cigarettes. This is terrible.
79.
As we all know, smoking is harmful to our health. So it's
80.
even harmful to middle school students for it does great harm not
81.
only to their health but also for their mind. Middle school students
82.
are future builders of the country. They should spend their time
83.
learning useful knowledges. So it's really time that these young
84.
smokers made up their minds give up smoking. 85.
【参考答案】(五)
76．去掉which 77.are → is
78. two- fifth → two-fifths
79. whom → them 80.So → But
81. ∧harmful → more 82.for → to
83. √ 84.knowledges → knowledge 85. minds ∧→ to
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning
Province in June, in 1965． When I was a child, I dreamed of flying
in the sky． I joined the army in June, 1983． In 1992, I was sent to
the air force base． In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination． I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 .
I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．
On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled
around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ． I was honored
to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．
参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2．去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。

4．把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9．把circle改为circles
10．在have后面加been。