PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例
及点评
My friend and I
I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger than me. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier than me. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we
play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!
【要领点评】
写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。

既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。

不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。

这无形中增加了写作的难度。

解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。

可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每
个人物的特点。

这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。

时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。

句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。

注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。

不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。

两人能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。

在表达喜好时，不同的句型应交叉运用，避免枯燥的重复。

例“Our favourite colours are…”，“We like …best”，“We both like…,too”，为突出不同时间
做不同运动，用“On Saturdays…”，“On Sundays…”，形成鲜明对比。

常使用并列连词and 和转折连词but ，使文章读起来更流畅。

结尾以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！
A Bad Cold
I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!
I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。

写出了小作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。

时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。

如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。

句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。

注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。

不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。

要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写
得病的情况。

常见病句：My nose is hurt。

因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用on the bed。

生病，是卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。

表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。

词汇量要控制在40~60之间。

Zoom’s Weekend
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on
Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom 的周末活动。

时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。

句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。

注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。

Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。

时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。

由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。

句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……
主语+will+动词原形+其他……
注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。

例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。

A Post Card from John
Dear Sarah,
This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we
went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.
John
【要领点评】
写法：这是一封明信片，按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。

分别记叙了游览石林，迷路，看民族舞，购物，买礼物等活动。

时态：这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事，所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。

句型：主语+动词过去式+其他。

注意：描述已经发生过的事要用一般过去时，在写这篇文章的时候要注意动词的过去式的变化，尤其是动词过去式的不规则变化。

没发生过的事要用一般将来时。

A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese
Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。

记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。

时态：这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。

由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。

句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。

现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。

一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。

注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。

学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。

另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。

2005—2006学年度第二学期小学英语学科工作计划
一、小学英语学科教师情况
2005年9月进行了全区小学英语教师情况调查
从调查表中我们可以看出，今年小学英语教师的数量又有增加（去年299人），但英语专业教师人数却有所降低（去年26.1%），大部分教师任课在1-5年内
（53.1%），优势是青年教师多，26-30岁的教师占51.2%。

学校总数144 英语教师328人
女教师264人男教师64人英语专业79人，占24.1% 非英语专业249人，占75.9% 英语教龄3年以内135人，占41.2% 年龄30岁以下202人，占
61.6%
二、指导思想
以北京市教学工作会议精神、房山区教育工作会议精神和房山区教委关于“深化课堂教学改革全面提高教学质量的意见”精神为指导，以北京市基础教育课程改革实验为契机，以“房山区小学加强教研网络建设的意见”为主线，以提高全区小学英语教学质
量为根本，以“道德文化至上，学术精神之高”为方向，加快自身素质提高，努力完成教研员研究，指导，服务的职责，带好全区小学英语教师，为房山区小学英语教学做出贡献。

三、工作思路
抓好教研组长培训与教研组活动，促各校“校本教研”活动有效开展；抓专题研究，促课改质量提高；抓教委“以英语教学和教师教育为切入点”的契机，借力使力促教师队伍成长。

教研组长能够带领一所学校英语教学活动的有效开展。

抓好教研组长的培训和各校的教研组活动，能够推动校本教研活动的有效开展，做到以点带面，促进全区教师教
学水平的提高。

课题研究是解决教学中出现问题的有效途径。

课程改革中新教材的使用会出现很多问题，如何解决需要教师通过课题研究来解决，如英语学科中故事教学一直是困扰教师的一个难题，如何在课堂教学中实施德育，攀登英语实验的有效进行都是我们的主要课题。

小学英语教师队伍目前已328人，人员组成复杂，只有近24.1%的是英语专业毕业的，绝大部分是转岗教师，如何带好这支队伍是我们面临的主要问题。

由于我们的力量有限，只能借力使力，区教委为这些教师的专业水平的提高提供了很好的条件，开办了英语师资大专班，国际教师职业发展培训
班，市教委还开展了绿色耕耘的培训，我们的教师实实在在的学到了一些英语专业和教学方法上的知识，但是与课堂教学还有一定的差距，如何来弥补，正是我们考虑的问题。

四、重点工作
1．本学期以“课程标准”和“课堂教学质量标准”的实施为重点，努力增强教研活动的针对性，实效性。

2．做好房山区小学英语教学展示活动。

为下半年参加北京市英语教学展示活动作准备。

3．做好六年级英语教学质量监控工作。

4．认真完成各项编写任务。

五、具体工作安排
1．3月下校视导听课。

2．3月底二年级、五年级研究课(北潞园学校)
3．4月一、二年级、攀登英语研究课4．5月中旬论文评选。

主题：我与课改同成长。

要求：
1）论文左上角标明《我与课改同成长
---课改论文》或《我与课改同成长---
攀登英语论文》
2）打印稿，一式三份。

A 4纸，小四。

形式不限，可以是教学叙事，教学案
例，实验报告或教学论文。

字数不限。

3）交稿时间：06年5月10日前。

5．五月小学英语教学展示活动文艺汇演
初赛。

每校一到两个节目，英文短剧，英语故事。

具体要求如下：
1）每个节目三分钟之内，短剧10人以内，一至五年级学生参加。

故事三人以内。

2)各校必须参加。

最多两个节目。

3）攀登英语实验校每校一个节目。

3）4月20日前报名。

6．5月底6月初房山区小学英语教学展示活动。

7．6月六年级质量监控。

六、材料编写
小学英语文艺汇演评分标准
短剧
故事
房山区教师进修学校小学教研室英语组
200 6年2月28日
小学英语文艺会演报名表短剧
故事
交表时间及地点：
2006年4月20日前交进校217，或e-mail: panxiufei217@
房山区教师进修学校小学教研室英语组
2006年2月28日
六年级下册英语期中测试题
一、选出划线部分读音不同的单词。

(5分) ( )(1)a．baby b．take c．day d，cat
( )(2)a．fly b．why c．yellow d ．sky
( )(3)a．know b．how c．cow d．now
( )(4)a．here b．cheer c．where d．ear
( )(5)a．mum b．use c．but d ．bus
二、英汉互译。

(10分)
(1)have a
headache____________ (6)感冒
_________________________
(2)take pictures______________ (7)滑冰______________________
(3)eat good
food______________ (8)更强壮的
_____________________
(4)row a boat__________________ (9)更大的____________________
(5)funnier__________________ (10)喉咙疼______________________
三、按括号内要求写出下列单词的适当形式。

(10分)
(1)watch(过去式)________ (2)go(过去式)________(3)see(过去式)__________ (4)sing(过去式)________(5)buy(过去
式)_______(6)teach(第三人称单数形
式)_______
(7)make(现在分词)_____(8)swim(现在分词)_______________
(9)thin(比较级)_________(10)do(第三人称单数形式)_______________
四、用所给词的适当形式填空（5分）
1.A sperm whale is than a killer whale.( long)
2. The rabbit′s tail is than the monkey′s.( short)
3. What you do last weekend ? (do)
4. I to a park yesterday. (go)
5. How big are your ? (foot)
五、选择（10分）
（）1. ----How are you, Mike? You look so________.
----It's raining outside. I can't play football.
A. happy
B. excited
C. sad
（）2.----What's the matter?
----My leg
_____.
A. hurts
B. sore
C. is hurts
（）3.----_______did you go on your holiday? ---Shanghai.
A. What
B. Where
C. How
（）4.----Did you ______ pictures yesterday?
A. take
B. took
C. taking
( ) 5. I my room and watched TV .
A. clean
B. cleaned
C. cleaning
六、按要求改写句子（10分）
1.He studies in a middle school last year. （改为否定句）
2. You can take bus NO.5（改为一般疑问句）
3. We went to Hangzhou because my grandma was ill. （对划线部分提问）
4. The boy swims faster than the girl. (改为一般疑问句)
______ the boy ______ faster than the girl?
5. Tom runs faster than Helen. (对话线部分提问)
_____ runs faster than Helen?
七、读一读，选择正确答句(20分)
( ) 1. Does she teach
math? A. I am 160 cm tall. ( ) 2. How tall are
you? B. I feel sick.
( ) 3. How do you
feel? C. I went to Xinjiang by bus.
( ) 4. What did you do last weekend? D. Yes, she does. ( ) 5. How did you go to Xinjiang on your holiday? E. I visited my grandparents.
( ) 6. What day is it
today? F. It's Wednesday. ( ) 7. Where did you go yesterday? G. It's on January
1st.
( ) 8. Is she playing the violin
now? H. Come in, please.
( ) 9. May I come in? I.
I went to Shanghai
( ) 10. When is your
birthday? J. Yes, she is.
九、连词组句，自己加标点。

(10分)
(1)than，shorter，me，you’re
__________________________________________ ______________________
(2)big，your，how，are，feet
__________________________________________ __________________
(3)on，did，the，you，do，weekend，what
__________________________________________ ___________________
(4)on，did，go，you，weekend，swimming，the
__________________________________________ ___________________
(5)go，where，you，holiday，on，your，did
__________________________________________ ___________________
十、根据短文内容选择正确答案,将其序号填入题前括号内。

（每题1分,计10分）
（一）
My name is Jim. There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, my
mother, my father, my sister and I. My grandma is old. She stays at home. My mother
is a teacher. She teaches English in No.3 Middle School. Now she is making a cake
in the kitchen. My father is a doctor. He is reading a book now. He is busy all the time.My sister, Lucy, is 12. We are tw ins. We’re in the same school, but in different classes.We have a lot of friends here. We are doing our homework now.
( )1. There are______ people in Jim’s family.
A. five
B. four
C. six
( )2. Jim’s mother is a ________.
A. doctor
B. teacher
C. nurse
( )3. Now Jim’s mother is ______.
A. at school
B. at home
C. in the shop
( )4. Jim and his sister are
________now.
A. watching TV
B. making a cake
C. doing their homework ( )5. Jim is ______ years old.
A. 14
B. 12
C. 13
（二）It is Saturday morning. Mrs Black and her daughter Kate go to the bookshop Near their house. Mrs Black wants to buy some picture books for her grandson. Kate wants to buy some storybooks. In the bookshop Kate meets her old classmate, Sue. They are good friends. They talk and talk for a long time and forge to buy books. At twelve o’clock Mrs Black finds them and asks Sue to go and have lunch in their house, Sue says: “Yes.” The two girls are very happy.
( ) 1. Mrs Black and her daughter go to the bookshop on Sunday Morning. ( ) 2. The bookshop is near the school.
( ) 3. The two girls meet in the bookshop.
( ) 4. Kate forget to buy books. ( ) 5. The two girls go and have lunch at twelve o’clock.
小学部2005---2006学年度下学期五年级
英语月考试题
得分
Listening Part（听力部分）一．Listen and choose听音，给听到的句子选择答语(6分)
( )1.A. Yes, there is. B. Yes, I can. ( )2. A. I can cook the meals. B. Yes, I can.
( )3. A. Yes, there aren’t. B. Yes, there is.
( )4. A. I can do the dishes. B. No, I can’t.
( )5.A. Yes, he can. B. Yes, I can. ( )6. A. She can cook the meals.
B. I can make the bed.
二．Listen and write听音写单词(12分)
1.I can run in the _______.
2.There is a ________ near the village.
3.The _________ is very long.
4.There are many________ in the mountain.
5.The __________ is very beautiful and big.
6. Da ming ________ is in Jinan. 三．Listen and match听音给句子排序(14分)
( )1. Is your village beautiful?
( )2. I live in a small village.
( )3. No, there aren’t. There are many houses.
( )4. Is there a river in your village? ( )5. Are there any buildings? ( )6. Yes, there is. The water is very clean.
( )7. Yes, it’s very pretty.
Writing Part (笔试部分)
四、Fill in the blanks填入所缺字母，完成单词。

（18分）
1.卧室__ e __ r__ __ m
2.卫生间__ __ th __ __ __ __
3.客厅；起居室liv__ __ __ r __ __ m
4.垃圾箱tra__ __ __ __ __
5.窗帘__ ur __ ai __
6.衣橱__ __ __ se __
7.镜子__ i
__ __ o __
8.床头柜__ __ d __ __ __ le
五、Read and answer questions阅读短文回答问题。

（10分）
I live in a small city. There are many buildings in the city, but there are no small houses. There is a park in the city. There are many flowers and trees in the park. Near the park, there is a river. There are no bridges over the bridges. The sky is blue. The water is clean. The city is very beautiful.
1.Is there a park in the city?
__________________________________________ _______
2.Are there any buildings in the city?
__________________________________________ _______
3.Are there any small houses in the city? __________________________________________ _______
4.Is there a river near the park?
__________________________________________ _______
5.Are there any bridges over the river? __________________________________________ _______
六．Write sentences根据要求完成句子（10分）
1.There is a mountain near the
village.(变为一般疑问句)
_________ _________ a mountain near the village?
2.Is there a bridge over the river? (变为肯定句)
_________ _________ a bridge over the river.
3.There are many buildings in the city. (变为一般疑问句)
_________ _________ any buildings in the city?
4.Are there any flowers in the park? (变为肯定句)
_________ _________ many flowers in the park.
5.Are there any houses in the village? (变为肯定句)
_________ _________ many houses in the village.
七、Write sentences连词组句。

（10分）
1、there, Is, mirror, bedroom, the, a,
in
__________?
2、There, many, curtains, in are,
room, the
______________.
3、any, in, the, Are, there, tables,
kitchen
___________?
4、many, There, mirrors, my, are, in,
bathroom
___________.
5、a, There, cloud, the, is, in, sky
___________.
八、Choose选择最佳答案。

（5分）( )1.There are many fish ___ the river.
A. in
B. over
C. behind
( )2.—______ there any clouds in the sky? .
A.Is
B.Are
C.Am
( ) 3._____ is the end table? It’s behind the door.
A. What
B. When
C. Where ( ) 4.The air-conditioners ____ big. A. is B. am C. are ( )5.The mirror ____ terrific.
A. is
B. am
C. are
九、找出画线部分与其他两个不同的词。

（5分）
（）1.A. short B. horse C. doctor
（）2.A. tall B. plant C. small （）3.A. flat B. forest C. path
（）4.A. river B. flower C.
park
（）5.A. farm B. park C. lake
十、Read and judge读对话判断对错。

（10分）
I have a bedroom. It’s small, but it’s very clean and beautiful. T here is a small bed near the window. Near the bed, there is a desk. There is a clock, a radio and many books on the desk. There is a closet n ear the door. What’s over the bed? It’s an air-conditioner. I like my bedroom very much.
（）1. There is a big bed near the window.
（）2. My bedroom is small and clean.
（）3. There is a desk over the bed. （）4. There is a clock, a radio and many books on the desk.
（）5. There is a closet behind the door.
（）6. There is an air-conditioner over the bed.
（）7. I like my bedroom very much. 一．Listen and choose听音，给听到的句子选择答语(6分)
( )1. Is there a flower in the bedroom? ( )2. What can you do?
( )3. Are there any tall buildings in the city?
( )4. Can you sweep the floor? ( )5.Can he do the dishes?
( )6. What can she do?
二．Listen and write听音写单词(12分)
1.I can run in the park.
2.There is a path near the village.
3.The road is very long.
4.There are many trees in the mountain.
5.The house is very beautiful and big.
6. Da ming lake is in Jinan. 三．Listen and match听音给句子排序(14分)
(6 )1. Is your village beautiful?6
( 1 )2. I live in a small village.1
( 5 )3. No, there aren’t. There are many houses.5
( 2 )4. Is there a river in your village? 2 ( 4 )5. Are there any buildings?4
( 3 )6. Yes, there is. The water is very clean. 3
( 7 )7. Yes, it’s very pretty.7。