高中英语作文范例：如何写求助信

【题文】假如你是高三学生李津，你想选择一所外地的大学，而你的父母想让在本市上大学，你很苦恼，请给你在中国留学的美国朋友Tom写一封求助信，主要内容包括：

1. 你的苦恼

2. 你和父母各持己见的理由

3. 询问Tom的建议

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

L ong time no see. As it won’t be long before I graduate from high school, I have to choose an ideal university in advance, which makes me really annoyed. Hoping to explore the world outside, I’m always dreaming about an university in other city. However, my parents insist on their opinion that I should attend an university here in my hometown.

L iving in this city for eighteen years, I have been familiar with its scenery and culture. What’s worse, there isn’t a suit able university which matches my ability. So from my point of view, I’d like to go somewhere outside my home town to enjoy new things and get a better education. However, my parents just announce that I should go to a college not far away from my home so that they could give me a hand in time if I get into trouble. I know their care and love for me, but I don’t w ant to give up my dream either. Could you give me some suggestions on how I can deal with that situation. Thank you very much.

I’m really looking forward to your early reply.

点评：

本文属于求助信，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性原则。本行文人称、时态运用准确得当；各个要点间逻辑连贯、行文通顺，如wha t‘s worse,however，from my point of view等；对要点不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句且运用高级句式正确得当；语气得当，非常不错。