My Ideal School Life

My Ideal School Life
I study in a middle school. We have a wonderful school life, but I hope to have a more enjoyable school life. I ‘d like to have more school activities such as ball games, swimming , drawing singing and dancing. In this way, our school life will be more exciting. I’d also like to have more school trips to other places because I think we can learn a lot from the experience of travelling. Besides, we have much homework every day, so I’d like to have less homework. This is what my ideal school life is like.
I am a middle school student. We have a lot of homework every day. I always feel very tired so I’d like to have a different kind of school life. First of all, I’d like to have less homework. Next, I’d like to have more school activties. For example, I’d like to have more outings. Picnics in the park will be fun. We can share our food. How wonderful it will be! The last but not least, I ‘d like to have a swimming pool in the school because I enjoy swimming a lot. I am really eager to have this kind of school life. It is my ideal school life.
I am good at my study and I enjoy my school life very much. However, I hope we can make some changes to our school. For example, I’d like to have more books and magazines in the library. It will be nice to have a bigger library. I am interested in reading all kinds of books. Besides, I ‘d like to have more display boards in the classroom. We can put up some good works of my classmates on the display boards. In this way, we can learn more from each other. It will also be helpful to have a modern science laboratory in our school. We need to do a lot of experiments when we have chemistry and biology lessons. How wonderful my ideal school life is!
We have a wonderful school life, but I hope to have a more enjoyable school life.
I always feel very tired so I’d like to have a different kind of school life.
I am good at my study and I enjoy my school life very much. However, I hope we can make some changes to our school.
First of all,
The last but not least,
For example,
I ‘d like to have…
I’d also like to have
It will also be helpful to have
Besides,
, so
In this way
have more outings
am interested in
enjoy …. a lot
We need to do a lot of experiments when we have chemistry and biology lessons. more school activities such as ball games, swimming , drawing singing and dancing put up some good works of my classmates on the display boards
can learn more from each other
Picnics in the park will be fun.
How wonderful it will be!
It will be more exciting.
It will be nice to have a bigger library.
can learn a lot from the experience of travelling.
This is what my ideal school life is like.
I am really eager to have this kind of school life. It is my ideal school life.
How wonderful my ideal school life is!
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