CET4写作范文

大学英语四级写作评分标准
简单来说，是以下几条：
14分文章切题。

文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。

11分文章切题。

文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。

8分基本切题。

有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

5分基本切题。

思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。

2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。

详细具体的定义为:考生在考试时应该明确作文的评分标准，根据大纲规定，短文的评分标准是：
1．正确表达思想；2．意义连贯；3．无重大语法错误。

这三者是互补的，但又各有侧重。

为评分的方便，国家考题组又将评分原则归纳为八个字，即“总体评分”和“综合评判”，并作了相应的解释。

前者指的是“阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分”。

后者指的是“要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍，用词和造句是否清楚确切地表达思想”。

根据这八个字，又将阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下：
2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分--基本切题。

表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分--基本切题。

表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。

11分--切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分--切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。

基本无语言错误。

除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素：
l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。

2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足5 0个词最多只给5分)。

所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。

3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。

2011年12月四级考试写作真题
Directions:You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I've done it hundreds of time." You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Outlines:
1．坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。

2．意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，
3．学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才
As we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. Although there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.
The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at last. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Take Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an example. If without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and become such a famous leader in the world?
The same is true for students who want to be successful in the future. Studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle complicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future success.
2013年6月四级考试写作真题
As can be seen from the picture, the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste, while his father told him that if he can empty the dustbin first, he can do anything.
Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things.
From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success.
3.
The above bar chart clearly shows us the unemployment rate in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%.
The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs.
This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.
4. 节俭
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高，根本没有节俭的概念，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)我的看法。

Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.
First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only child in the family. They are the apple in their famil y’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.
5. 出国留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1）目前很多中国学生出国留学，
2）出国留学的好处，
3）我的看法。

Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking （显著的）popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to（非常重要） studying abroad.
There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost（首先）, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world（一种不同的世界观）. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter（遭遇） their counterparts（相对的） from various countries and areas （地区） and are exposed to（面临着）diverse ideas and values.What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life（现实生活中） use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.
Generally speaking,it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps （可能） painful, the payoff is worthwhile（付出是值得的）. In the first place （首先）, in addition to（除了……以外）knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences（获得宝贵的经验）that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore（此外）, overseas experience, frustrating（令人沮丧） and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents（有利于青少年的成长）.
6.网络游戏
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡，
2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处，
3)你的看法。

As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.
However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.
From my point of view, online games can be wonderful entertainment if you play them in a reasonable way. However, when they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. Yet if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit from them.
7. 迟到、旷课
1）现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象
2）保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性
3）作为一个大学生应该怎样做
Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over(早退). Class attendance has become a thorny （棘手的；麻烦的）problem to both the students and teachers.
In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure that you catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers, too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality（准时）, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.
Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it.
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学生难找工作，
2、原因很多，
3、解决的办法。

Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all（更严重的是）, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled（入学） so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than（大于） the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon（估计）this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to small cities and country. There they can also give full play（充分发挥）to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention（重视）, the situation（情况） can be improved.
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic the most unforgettable Teacher I ever know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我生活中最难忘的老师是……
2、为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀，
3、结论。

In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.
What frequently bring back memories of my school teacher are his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.
Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.
10. 求职/求学信
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a position of a company. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese：1、申请职位，2、简要介绍自己的情况，3、期待回信。

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.
I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.
Words fail me when I try to express my heart felt gratitude to the help you rendered me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming。