九年级英语作文复习ppt
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初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
中考英语作文专题复习指导(共22张PPT)
Picture 4
“爱心”表现(examples)
1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I usually give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I sometimes help clean up the park.
开头;Nowadays,
a number of middle school students have their own Smartphones. Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily.However, students spend too much time on smartphones, they don't have time to communicate with their friends or family. And using smartphones too much may cause health problems. 结尾：In my opinion, students shouldn't use smartphones. Because it's bad for their health.
另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁 也是要失分的（中考中有1—2分的卷 面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。 解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少 用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少 涂改。
初三英语作文复习PPT
动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容（优劣利弊要求几点） 4、思考文章布局（段落、字数、中心句） 5、写作（注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅） 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错（时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误）
Let’s have a try
动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容（优劣利弊要求几点） 4、思考文章布局（段落、字数、中心句） 5、写作（注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅） 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错（时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误）
看 例 文 找 问 题
who only (also)
【参考范文】
主要问题小结
1.审题不清 2.句子结构错误，语言表达不规范，中文式英语 和语法错误现象较严重。 3.谋篇布局能力弱，文章结构不严谨。文章主要 由单个句子堆砌而成，缺乏整体性和流畅性， 缺乏恰当的连词和过渡语。 4.拼写错误较多，书写不规范，潦草，卷面不整 洁。 5.有的学生部分或全部抄袭阅读理解或完形填空 中的内容等。
语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯， 表达基本清楚。
说明： 语言表述：单词拼写、标点符号、大小 写等错误， 每两处扣0.5分，同一错误不 重复扣分。其它情况酌情扣分。 词数（1分）：全文词数不足80个扣1分。 卷面（1分）：卷面不整洁，书写凌乱， 扣1分。 本大题的最后得分如有0.5分，则入为 整数。
初三 英语 作文 复习 一、 二
书 面 表 达
话题项目表
1. 个人情况（Personal information）: 姓名、年龄、身高，家庭情况，所在的学校、班 级、工作等 2. 家庭、朋友和周围的人 （Family, friends and people around）: 3. 周围的环境（Personal environments） 4. 日常生活（Daily routines） 5. 学校生活（School life） 6. 兴趣与爱好（Interests and hobbies） 7. 个人情感（Emotions） 8. 人际关系（Interpersonal relationships） 17.语言学习（Language learning） 18.自然（Nature） 9.计划与愿望（Plans and intentions) 19.世界和环境（The world and the 10.节假日活动（Festivals, holidays environment） and celebration) 20.科普知识与现代技术(Popular 11.购物（Shopping） science and modern 12.饮食（Food and drink） technology) 13.健康（Health） 21.热点话题（Topical issues） 14.天气（Weather） 22.历史与地理（History and 15.文娱与体育（Entertainment and geography） sports） 16.旅游和交通（Travel and transport） 23.社会（Society） 24.文学和艺术（Literature and art）
中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示PPT演示课件
a gooAdlswo,asymile before you speak and do not feel shy.
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
a(1n)dWprlaitceefothuermorofnivtehwe owradlsl.Raedaadytohne pwioecrdeswohfepnaypoeur. see them,and try to use them in sentence.
看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
a(1n)dWprlaitceefothuermorofnivtehwe owradlsl.Raedaadytohne pwioecrdeswohfepnaypoeur. see them,and try to use them in sentence.
看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
九年级Units7--14英文作文范文课件(PPT25张)
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.
My parents think that teenagers should stay at houme on weekends, so they can go over their lessons and have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help
1. Go over lessons
1. …
2. have a good sleep
3. Help parents do housework
2. … 3. …
要求： 1. 包括上述表格中的信息， 2. 至少给出你的三个想法
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Unit 7
最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该再周末与朋友外出”进行 了讨论。 请根据下列信息提示，以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?为题，写一篇英语短 文。开头已给出不计入词数。
Your parents’ idea
Your idea
Unit 12 五三P103 看图写话
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the
My parents think that teenagers should stay at houme on weekends, so they can go over their lessons and have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help
1. Go over lessons
1. …
2. have a good sleep
3. Help parents do housework
2. … 3. …
要求： 1. 包括上述表格中的信息， 2. 至少给出你的三个想法
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Unit 7
最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该再周末与朋友外出”进行 了讨论。 请根据下列信息提示，以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?为题，写一篇英语短 文。开头已给出不计入词数。
Your parents’ idea
Your idea
Unit 12 五三P103 看图写话
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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九年级中考英语作文专题复习课件 (共26张PPT)
要求:
1.80-120词
2.写作要求(1)(2)
列：用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
1.I go to school on foot every day. I walk to school every day. 2. remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans . 3. turn off the tap, reuse water. 4. I make full use of paper. 5. Don’t use plastic bags.
人称一致:
时态:
she Alice is my best friend, he likes sports.
He has gone to Guilin yesterday. 主谓一致: is This pair of shoes are mine. The shoes are new. 习惯用法: with He helps me in my English.
• 1.句型、结构 --- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。
We all very like her.
We all like her very much.√
He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. √
•避免方法： 多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
中考英语作文评分标准
三档11 - 15分 基本完成试题规定的任务
——含有所有试题规定的主要内容。 —— 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——语法结构或词汇方面的应用基本正确，有一些错误但不影响
对写作内容的理解。 —— 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。总体而言， 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 四档16-18分 完全完成了试题规定的任务 —— 含有所有内容，布局合理。 —— 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇知识。 ——体现较强的语法应用能力，语法结构和词汇方面基本没有错 误。 ——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ——有亮笔之处。
中考英语专题复习课件 作文 (共18张PPT)
中考英语作文
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题： 弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟 写提纲； 2.圈要点： 仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调： 确定时态，人称，开头，结尾 4.写全文： 运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用：
(1) 尽量使用简单句； （2）学会使用意译法，将语义表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中 式英语； 例如：我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. （3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致； 例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组， 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如： “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整（80字左右）语句流畅， 无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分 3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多， 书写欠规范，给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题： 弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟 写提纲； 2.圈要点： 仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调： 确定时态，人称，开头，结尾 4.写全文： 运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用：
(1) 尽量使用简单句； （2）学会使用意译法，将语义表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中 式英语； 例如：我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. （3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致； 例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组， 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如： “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整（80字左右）语句流畅， 无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分 3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多， 书写欠规范，给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。
初中英语作文复习PPT幻灯片(PPT45页)
2018年衡阳市书面表达
假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问 有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节， 请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。 注意：1. 80~100词左右。 2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。 3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
阅读一个提升自我能力的好方法 ；既有用又高效
Reading is a good way to improve our ability，it is both useful and effective Reading is a good way to improve our ability，which is helpful and effective
复习和预习对于学习很重要，因为他们在学习 中扮演着关键的作用
Preview and review is important to study，because they play an key role in studying
保护环境很重要，因为自然环境对于我们的日常生活 不可或缺
protecting the environment is important ，for the reason that natural environment plays an important role in our daily life
2. 文中应写出自己的补充的三个观点。
3. 书写工整、语句通顺连贯、词数不少于80。
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community.
中考英语作文复习PPT课件
中考英语作文复习PPT 课件
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 1. 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词
B：老师对我说： “下周请准时到校！” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A： Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 1. 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词
B：老师对我说： “下周请准时到校！” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A： Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
中考英语书面表达复习课件(150张PPT)
2）学习范文结构，列出写作提纲 A. 线状结构图 以8B 第二单元为例 “my best holiday”要求学生描
述难忘的假日经历。这类结构可以以时间发展为 进程，如下图：现状结构图.doc
B. 网状结构 9A第五单元的任务是 my favourite film star.要
求学生为某一电影网站投稿，描述一位最喜爱的 电影明星。教师可以用网状图帮助学生理清文章 结构，此类线索的诸要素之间往往没有先后顺序， 但多有主次之分，写作时要注意详略得当。网状 结构图.doc
Yours, Ann
Dear Julia, I am sorry to hear that you are ill. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and take a good rest. You’d better eat a lot of healthy food. You’d better not drink coffee. You should drink lots of water. It’s good for your health. And you’d better not go to school tomorrow. Please take good care of yourself. I hope you’ll be better soon. Yours, Ann
Main task主要是基于文体的写作训练，以记叙文为 主，包括写人、记事、编写故事等；另有部分应 用类文体，包含书信类，如邀请信、申请信、推 荐信、抱怨信等以及海报、网页设计、演讲稿等。 Main task的写作内容覆盖初中学生学习、生活、 和其他各个方面，涉及个人情况，家庭，朋友与兴趣与爱好，饮食健康，日常生活，学校生活， 文艺体育，语言学习，自然等话题。具体内容如
中考英语作文复习ppt
e 1
Write a paragraph about your favorite place to visit during the summer holidays Use at least three objectives to describe it and provide a reason for your choice
汇报人：可编辑
2023-12-24
Review of English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
Composition type and formatWriting Skills and StrategiesCommon topics and materialsSimulated test questions and analysis
Authenticity
Questions should be based on real life scenarios and contexts to ensure that the students are prepared for the types of challenges they will face in the actual exam
Techniques
03
Use descriptive language to create vivid images, and show ratio than tell by depicting scenes and characters
Summary
An argumentative essay presentations a point of view and defends it through logical reasoning and evidence
Write a paragraph about your favorite place to visit during the summer holidays Use at least three objectives to describe it and provide a reason for your choice
汇报人：可编辑
2023-12-24
Review of English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
Composition type and formatWriting Skills and StrategiesCommon topics and materialsSimulated test questions and analysis
Authenticity
Questions should be based on real life scenarios and contexts to ensure that the students are prepared for the types of challenges they will face in the actual exam
Techniques
03
Use descriptive language to create vivid images, and show ratio than tell by depicting scenes and characters
Summary
An argumentative essay presentations a point of view and defends it through logical reasoning and evidence
九年级英语中考书面表达复习专题课件(共44张PPT)
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：80-100字左右。
第一步：审 要认真审题，明确写
作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求
具体做法：用笔勾画或写下
—— 1:体裁 2:人称 3:时态 4:提示 5: 要求
小组合作互批评分标准 满分20分： (1) 找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1--3分； （2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分； （3）词数不够扣1分； （4）单词拼写错3个扣1分； （5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5--1分； （6）时态用错扣1分； （7）主谓不一致整洁扣2分； （10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3-5分；
书面表达写作技巧 审
列 连
加
美
假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。 你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封申请信。
姓名 本人特点 “爱心”表现 加入目的 王林
性别
男
身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处 （见图片） 1.… 2. …
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、 反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主 代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用 物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误 用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 Ｍy mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.
初三英语作文教学(共32张PPT)
(104 in total)2016长宁一模
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is!
work hard; calm down; do proper outdoor exercise
Read carefully Find key words Enlarge the sentences
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is!
work hard; calm down; do proper outdoor exercise
Read carefully Find key words Enlarge the sentences
中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)
04
Student essay ments and revision suggestions
Response to…
Adherence to the given topic or task.
Common Problems in English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
01
02
03
04
Lack of Development
Frequent errors in grammar or spelling detract from the overall quality.
Lack of support or evidence to back up claims or arguments.
05 Weaktransit…
Lack of smooth transitions between ideas or paragraphs.
Body
Develop your main ideas and论证details with clear explanations and examples.
Conclusion
Summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.
• Writing Skills and Strategies • Analysis of Common Themes and Model
Writings
目录
CONTENTS
• Student essay ments and revision suggestions
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The weather was sunny that today. It was sunny that day. It was a sunny day that day.
hotel
taxi He took a taxi to the hotel. He went to the hotel by taxi.
What … take ? …
What … do?
Tony
Mike
Where did Tony go on his last vacation?
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
activity food
people
Tony's vacation in Beijing
weather
Tips: Making your sentences longer (小提示：扩句可以帮助我们得高分哦！)
Talking About the Vacation
－－writing a correct sentence
Let’s play a game !
方法: 取句子每个单词的第一个字母组成密 码, 看密码猜原来的句子.
I
I did
d M H
my homework.
密码: 1. W D Y D ( ? )
I had a good time with my parents.
Pairwork
Ask classmates about his /her vacation . Where … ?
Who … ?
How long … ?
How … ? When … ?
Ask questions about vacation
He bought souvenirs with his father
in Wang Fujing Street in the evening.
father Wang Fujing Street
Can you find rules to write about the activities on the vacation?
Tips: Make your sentences different. (小提示：句子多样化可以帮助我们得高分哦！)
Beijing
people
friendly
Beijing
dumplings
yummy
People in Beijing are friendly.
People there are friendly. There are friendly people in Beijing.
What did Tony do on his last vacation?
He ate Beijing duck with his family
in Quan Jude Restaurant in the afternoon.
Quan Jude Restaurant
What did Tony do on his last vacation?
（你能找出组成句子的规则吗？）
He flew kites with his friends at Tian’anmen Square in the morning. He went bungee jumping with his grandfather on the Great Wall in the afternoon. He ate Beijing duck with his family in Quan Jude Restaurant in the afternoon. He bought souvenirs with his father in Wang Fujing Street in the evening.
What did Tony do on his vacation? He flew kites. with his friends at Tian’an Men Square in the morning.
What did Tony do on his last vacation? He went bungee jumping with his grandfather on the Great Wall in the afternoon.
Sb. did something with Sb. somewhere sometime
Group work
morning
Tony ’s traveling in Beijing
afternoon Hutong parents
evening National museum father
Tian’anmen Square friends
bus
Tony’s diary
Monday, June 11th Sunny
There are friendly people there.
Beijing
trees
colorful
Tibet
water
clean
Trees in Beijing are colorful. Trees there are colorful. There are colorful trees in Beijing. There are colorful threes there.
flew kites took photos went sightseeing watched art shows
Report(报告):
Tony had a very happy vacation. He＿＿
＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What do/did you do ?
2. W D Y G ( ? )
Where did you go?
3. W D Y G O V (? )
Where did you go on vacaton?
4. I H A G T ( . )
I had a good/great time.
5. I H A G T W M P ( . )