初三 书面表达真题解析及模拟训练
初三英语书面表达及其解题技巧及练习题(含答案)及解析
初三英语书面表达及其解题技巧及练习题( 含答案 ) 及分析一、英语书面表达1．今日手机在我们平时生活中已宽泛使用。
但中学生在学校能否应当拥有手机，一些学生和老师有不一样的看法。
你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请依据以下表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
看法原由一些学生同意拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥有有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机舞弊；你的看法 1. 2.要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连接；`2.一定包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适合发挥；3.词数： 80-100 词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phoneswill make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.Some teachers are against it． They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly ，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachersshould do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【分析】【解】本篇写作需注意要求中所供给的重点，不行漏。
(英语)初三英语书面表达题20套(带答案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。
请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。
要求：1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。
初三英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析.docx
初三英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析一、英语书面表达1．诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。
而你的朋友Daming 最近却被诚信危机所困扰。
上周末，他本来和Lingling 相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。
因此，Lingling 很生气，并且不愿接受Daming 的道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise 为题”，内容要点如下：1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming 一些建议。
注意：1、词数 80—100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people whobreak their promise.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people whobreak their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friendDaming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that daybecause of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling ’ s anger, but also made her lo trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。
九年级上册英语书面表达模拟试题含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达（湖南衡阳）荣光学校九年级（2）班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。
许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。
请根据表格中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。
3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80.参考词汇：optimistic adj.乐观的 government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（乐观的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级2班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会情况进行介绍。
(英语)初三英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析
（英语）初三英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析一、英语书面表达1．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。
你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。
2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。
100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。
【英语】初三英语书面表达专项训练及答案含解析
【英语】初三英语书面表达专项训练及答案含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。
现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。
作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。
内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达专项练习试卷附解析
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达专项练习试卷附解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。
你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽3.景点:山和古村落:4.文化:茶、黄梅戏5.建议提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera注意:1.词数80-1002.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?2．请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。
要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。
2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。
3、词数不少于60个英语单词。
4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。
3．书面表达根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。
In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 4．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。
(英语)初三必备英语书面表达技巧全解及练习题(含答案)及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。
注意：1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3．词数90左右。
短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude （态度） to life．_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。
(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达题20套(带答案)及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达年济南市入选全国文明城市。
为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。
请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。
要求： 1.词数100个左右。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need. Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s nece ssary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。
【英语】初三英语书面表达模拟试题含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·甘肃中考模拟）（年浙江绍兴）书面表达。
76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。
请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）你的观点至少两条；（3）词数：80—100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达练习题附解析
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达练习题附解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。
The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study inclass.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________2．书面表达为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother"为主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。
参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to…提示：1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。
九年级英语英语书面表达模拟试题及解析
九年级英语英语书面表达模拟试题及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。
某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为主题的征文活动。
假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。
提示词语： important, help, happy提示问题：● What do you think of being kind to others?● What did you do?● How do you feel?Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德）of Chinese people. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in theEnglish exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.【解析】试题分析：本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。
初三英语书面表达题20套(带答案)含解析
初三英语书面表达题20套(带答案)含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。
对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。
但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。
请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。
你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you shou ld give a “like” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her?【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的应用。
初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)含解析
初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达本周你们班召开了一次主题班会“毕业前，我能为学校做些什么？”大家踊跃发言，作为第三小组成员，请你根据各小组的情况汇报以及你们小组的讨论情况，写一个总结交给老师。
第一小组把我们用过的书本和学习用品赠送给七年级、八年级的弟弟妹妹，尤其是家庭贫困的同学。
第二小组筹钱，为学校图书馆购买书籍。
第三小组......提示词：赠送 present 用过的 used注意：1. 字数不少于80词；2. 补充好本小组讨论情况；3. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。
What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and betterand we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片书面表达要求学生写出一个班会会后的总结。
初三九年级英语(完整版)初中英语书面表达专项练习试卷附答案
初三九年级英语(完整版)初中英语书面表达专项练习试卷附答案一、初中英语书面表达1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。
请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。
由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!2．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。
初三必备英语书面表达技巧全解及练习题(含答案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·北京中考模拟）假如你叫李华，学校英语广播站正在招募主持人。
请你用英文给负责的老师 Sam 写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具体打算做的事情。
提示词语： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示问题：● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英语广播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I become a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是围绕一篇演讲稿展开，贴近学校生活，学生有话可写。
(英语)初三英语书面表达试题经典及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·西安市铁一中学中考模拟）由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。
请你根据以下建议；自己的事情自己做；家里得事情帮着做；学校的事情抢着做，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。
要求；1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范2. 字数70 字左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总字数）As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeusindependent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let's begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。
(英语)初三英语书面表达模拟试题及解析
（英语）初三英语书面表达模拟试题及解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。
大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。
请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。
注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80-100；（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。
九年级下册英语书面表达模拟试题及解析
九年级下册英语书面表达模拟试题及解析一、英语书面表达1．假定你是David，来自美国，你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。
请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。
注意：1.词数90左右。
回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。
初三英语书面表达的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)及解析
初三英语书面表达的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)及解析一、英语书面表达1．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。
你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。
请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。
注意：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分注：社会实践 social practice activitiesDear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。
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书面表达真题解析及模拟训练下面是一份英语学习自我评价表，每个评价项目后有若干个选项。
请在符合自己情况的选项方框中打√(可以多选)。
根据你的选择，以My English Learning为题写一篇短文，介绍你英语学习中的优势与不足，并针对自己的不足之处提出改进方法。
词数80左右。
短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
【写作指导】这篇文章是篇描述自己的学习情况的记叙文，由于是描述目前的情况，描述部分用一般现在时。
而后面的改进方法则可以用will,should,can等情态动词。
这篇文章要点分五个部分，平均每个部分两个句子左右，所以每个部分的选项不要选太多，因为第五部分还要求提出改进的方法。
第五部分可以写详细些，那么有些自己不是很有把握的要点则可以选择一句话带过，有所提及就可以了。
这篇作文并不难写，因为很多表达都在评价表里给了出来，但是同学们要注意的是要加上合理的开头和结尾，这才能使其成为一篇完整的文章，而不仅仅是罗列要点。
题目已经给出第一句话了，为了衔接自然一点，最好还是再加上自己对英语的看法(喜好、水平等等)，结尾可以表达一下期望和决心。
【习作例文】English is a very important subject at school. I want to study it (1) well so I work hard. I can remember most new words. I like pair work best because I like to talk with my classmate in English. I think writing is the most difficult part in English learning. My writing need (2) to be improved.I think reading texts aloud is a useful way in English learning. I will read more English books and keep an English diary. I hope my English writing will become better and better.【点评与评分】这位同学的文章包含了所有要点，语法错误不多，有两个地方，一个是study it 这个搭配不恰当，学英语我们最好用learn English。
还有一个地方My writing need，作者忘了第三人称单数要加s，这里估计是粗心的缘故，因为这位同学的语言运用能力看起来不应该是不知道这个语法点。
这个错误可以通过检查后得到更正。
作者把评价表里面的顺序换了一下，把第三部分和第五部分放一起，使得文章看起来更连贯和流畅，但是在处理第四部分内容时，她可能找不到适合的解决方法，缺少必要的过渡，使文章显得有些突兀和不自然。
缺点在于，这位同学的语言变化不多，多数是套用了评价表里面的内容，不过她能比较准确地套对，说明她的语法基础不错。
文章末尾better and better这个结构用得不错。
如果评分的话，总的来说，这是一篇介于一档和二档之间的文章。
以总分为15分来计，如果是整体评，这篇文章是11~12分左右。
English Learning Self-assessment1. The new words I can remember:all most some several2. My favorite activitiepair work writing doing grammar exerciselearning new vocabulary class discussion3. The most difficult part in English learningreading listening grammarvocabulary speaking writing4. The useful ways in English learning:keeping a vocabulary notebooktaking an active part in class discussiondoing English duty reports reading texts aloudpreparing lessons carefully before cla5. Need to be improved in learning arealistening reading speakingwriting grammar vocabularypronunciation working with other暑假即将来临，某校学生会打算在假期举行为贫困地区和受灾地区(disaster area)的孩子们奉献爱心的活动。
请你用英语写一封倡议书，号召同学们，用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心。
要求：1.文中应包含：至少两种帮助方式，这样做的目的和意义。
2、词数80~100：短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vocation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.As students,_____________________________________________________________________Students’ UnionJune 13, 2008【写作指导】这是份倡议书，目的是号召人们行动，所以会经常用到can，may等表示建议的情态动词。
要求是至少2种帮助方式以及其目的和意义。
要求的篇幅是80~100词。
根据这样的要求，最好选3~4种帮助方式比较好写。
这样的作文如果是平时练习，在考虑帮助方式的时候，最好和同学一起进行brainstorming，可以拓展自己的思路。
内容是关于帮助灾区的小朋友，所以有可能会用到donate这个词语。
在文章的结尾要注意加上一句简洁有力的呼吁。
【习作例文】Dear schoolmates,While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vocation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.As students, we are not making any money now, but we can give out our pocket money. The money may help them go to school again. They can also use the money to buy food and medicine that they need. Books and school things are also welcome by the children in disaster area. Books can help to heal their broken hearts. Of course, your care is also wonderful gift to them. Why not take up your pen and write to them? Be their friends and comfort their heart.(1) Help them go through the hard time. (2)Come on and you’ll find the happiness of giving and caring.Students’ UnionJune 13, 2008【点评与评分】这篇作文是可以评为一类文的。
从文章可以看出这位同学有较高的英语水平，也使用了一些非课标要求的词语，除了恰当地表达了所有的要点，还运用了各种不同的句式：陈述句、祈使句、反问句、定语从句等；使文章显得活泼生动，也符合倡议书的要求。
值得一提的是，这位同学可能不知道donate这个词语，但是她灵活地运用了give out来代替，这也是可以的。
需要改进的是：文章中有些句子有生译的感觉，如 comfort their heart，有些句子如能恰当合并会更好一些，如(1)与(2)。
有些句子意思重复，应注意语言的精练。
模拟训练题目：My favorite invention现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑 (laptop)、手机 (mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机 (DV) 等。
请描述你最喜欢的一种发明并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。
词数在80词左右。
范文：My favorite inventionAmong all the modern inventions, laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.。