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“小英赛”作文小贴士和范文诵读
一.作文类型
从近几年小英赛的作文题目来看,作文基本属于以下3类:
1.“人物类”如About me, My family, My grandpa, My English teacher...
2.“场景类”如:Winter, On the beach, New Year,Eric’s weekend...
3.“事件类”如:Birthday present, Cross the road, My favorite subject...
二.写作小技巧
⏹通用技巧:
首先,最最最重要的是要先看题目要求,看题目让写什么写什么。
不要出现题目是“Eric’s weekend”,但是文章却都是“I go to.., I do...., I feel ...”,这样你吧啦吧啦再多都没用滴!
不要出现题目让写My family, 但是整篇文章都只在写一个人,一定要看准“人家要的什么”,而不是你觉得好玩好写,你就写什么。
其次:有图有真相,图片信息很重要,可以免你很多痛苦的思考。
写作文全天下的通病就是“我不知道写什么”!那么请把提供的作文图片好好细细观察下,能把图片内容都描述出来,基本就够40字的要求啦!还有就是给你的“提示词”,一定要好好用上。
最后:学会“变难为易”
有些句子,有些单词不会写怎么办呢?记住一个原则,只要可以表达出意思,可以把不会写的单词变成自己会说的简单说法。
比如说Cross the road(帮盲人过马路)这个作文,你想写“我扶着盲人过马路”这句话,“扶”和“盲人”不会说,你看这样写是否也可以达意呢:I help the man who can’t see cross the road carefully.(刚学的carefully也巧妙地用上了,考官看到了,肯定会大声称赞“这个学生好厉害啊!”)
⏹分类技巧:
1)描述图片内容(适用于任何类型哟)
我看图片看图片,我再看图片,然后把描述的话语写下来。
在这个环节里有一员不可忽视的“大将”,那就是“形容词”,形容词在任何时刻都可以“拯救你于水火之中”,比如说,写冬天the snow is white and beautiful;写family, i have a big/small family, my father is tall and strong, he has short black hair.所以,请你多学点多记点形容词吧。
2)基本信息表述(适用于场景,事件类)
如果你觉得“老师,图片内容我只能写出二三句来,怎么办?”没关系!请你把时间,地点,天气,心情等相关基本信息罗列一番,文章既完整丰富,内容(尤其在字数字数上)也可以帮你一大把!
3)隐含信息挖掘(he’s good at ....., he’s not good at...)
此时,请发挥你有想象力的大脑,如果图片描述完了,觉得字数还不够,可以把图片中隐藏的信息组织一下,想做事情的原因,做事情后的结果,做事情的心情等等。
比如:图片上的人在踢足球,那么可以尝试写:He’s good at playing football, he often plays with his friend. 图片上看到一个女孩在堆雪人,可以写:She makes a big snowman, the snowman is pretty and cute, she likes her it very much.
看这一句话多长啊(17词,再写一句都成一篇40字文章啦),而且简单!
4)最后结束语:总结心情,说出期待和计划。
终于作文快写完了,再最后总要写写自己的感受啊,心情啊,以后想怎么做(计划)之类的。
请看例子:Winter结尾:I like winter,I always have a happy winter. Weekend结尾:I feel free and happy at the weekend, I want to play with my friends every weekend. Birthday present结尾:I love my father very much, I will buy present for him every birthday.
请大家看以下例文,体会小英赛作文的写法。
其实你可以写的比例文更动人!加油!
My English Teacher 人物类
My English teacher is Miss Black. She is 30 years old. She is very tall and
nice. She has long hair, big eyes and a small mouth. She likes swimming and
reading books. She has a dog. She likes her dog very much. Bananas are her
favorite fruit. She is very kind to us. We all like her.
(其实还可以写在哪里游泳,在哪里看书,和狗狗都做些什么等等)
My Birthday Party场景类
Today is a special(特殊的)day. It’s my birthday. I’m nine year s old now.
I hold(举办)a birthday party. My friends come to my house to play with me.
We eat birthday cake and sing the birthday song. After that, they give me gifts.
I like my friends very much. We have a good time together.
(special不会写,可以用最简单的good或者happy;hold 换成have也可以)
On the Beach场景类
It is Sunday. I go to the beach with my family. It is sunny. The sky is blue. There are some birds in the sky. My mother and my sister are playing on the beach. I’m in a boat with my dog. We want to catch some fish. Where is my father? He is sleeping under the tree. (catch不会写可以考虑换成get)
Happy New year 场景类
I’m very happy this new year. I went to my grandparents’home with my parents. My grandparents bought me some gifts and a lot of food. My parents bought new clothes for me. I played with my sister and brothers. We said “Happy New Year’to everyone.(“举例子”,也是一个写作宝典,比如买了什么food呢)
Winter
There are four seasons in a year. Winter is my favorite. In winter, it is cold and snowy. I like the snow very much. I can make a snowman. It looks very beautiful. I can play snowballs with my friends. My pet dog likes winter, too. Look! How happy it is! I like white world.
My father’s Christmas present
My father likes playing football very much. But his football shoes are broken(坏了). So I save my pocket money and go to the shoe shop. I choose (选择) a pair of beautiful shoes for him. Christmas is coming. I give the shoes to my father as a Christmas present! He is very happy.。