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剑桥雅思阅读7原文(test3)READING PASSAGE 1You should spend about 20 minutes on Questions 1-13, which are based on Reading Passage 1 below.Ant IntelligenceWhen we think of intelligent members of the animal kingdom, the creatures that spring immediately to mind are apes and monkeys. But in fact the social lives of some members of the insect kingdom are sufficiently complex to suggest more than a hint of intelligence. Among these, the world of the ant has come in for considerable scrutiny lately, and the idea that ants demonstrate sparks of cognition has certainly not been rejected by those involved in these investigations.Ants store food, repel attackers and use chemical signals to contact one another in case of attack. Such chemical communication can be compared to the human use of visual and auditory channels (as in religious chants, advertising images and jingles, political slogans and martial music) to arouse and propagate moods and attitudes. The biologist Lewis Thomas wrote, ‘Ants are so much like human beings as to be an embarrassment. They farm fungi, raise aphids_as livestock, launch armies to war, use chemical sprays to alarm and confuse enemies, capture slaves, engage in child labour, exchange information ceaselessly. They do everything but watch television.’However, in ants there is no cultural transmission —everything must be encoded in the genes — whereas in humansthe opposite is true. Only basic instincts are carried in the genes of a newborn baby, other skills being learned from others in the community as the child grows up. It may seem that this cultural continuity gives us a huge advantage over ants. They have never mastered fire nor progressed. Their fungus farming and aphid herding crafts are sophisticated when compared to the agricultural skills of humans five thousand years ago but have been totally overtaken by modern human agribusiness.Or have they? The farming methods of ants are at least sustainable. They do not ruin environments or use enormous amounts of energy. Moreover, recent evidence suggests that the crop farming of ants may be more sophisticated and adaptable than was thought.Ants were farmers fifty million years before humans were. Ants can’t digest the cellulose in leaves — but some fungi can. The ants therefore cultivate these fungi in their nests, bringing them leaves to feed on, and then use them as a source of food. Farmer ants secrete antibiotics to control other fungi that might act as ‘weeds’, and spread waste to fertilise the crop.It was once thought that the fungus that ants cultivate was a single type that they had propagated, essentially unchanged from the distant past. Not so. Ulrich Mueller of Maryland and his colleagues genetically screened 862 different types of fungi taken from ants’ nests. These turned out to be highly diverse: it seems that ants are continually domesticating new species. Even more impressively, DNA analysis of the fungi suggests that the ants improve or modify the fungi by regularly swapping and sharing strains with neighbouring ant colonies.Whereas prehistoric man had no exposure to urban lifestyles — the forcing house of intelligence — the evidence suggests thatants have lived in urban settings for close on a hundred million years, developing and maintaining underground cities of specialised chambers and tunnels.When we survey Mexico City, Tokyo, Los Angeles, we are amazed at what has been accomplished by humans. Yet Hoelldobler and Wilson’s magnificent work for ant lovers, The Ants, describes a supercolony of the ant Formica yessensis on the Ishikari Coast of Hokkaido. This ‘megalopolis’ was reported to be composed of 360 million workers and a million queens living in 4,500 interconnected nests across a territory of 2.7 square kilometres.Such enduring and intricately meshed levels of technical achievement outstrip by far anything achieved by our distant ancestors. We hail as masterpieces the cave paintings in southern France and elsewhere, dating back some 20,000 years. Ant societies existed in something like their present form more than seventy million years ago. Beside this, prehistoric man looks technologically primitive. Is this then some kind of intelligence, albeit of a different kind?Research conducted at Oxford, Sussex and Zurich Universities has shown that when desert ants return from a foraging trip, they navigate by integrating bearings and distances, which they continuously update in their heads. They combine the evidence of visual landmarks with a mental library of local directions, all within a framework which is consulted and updated. So ants can learn too.And in a twelve-year programme of work, Ryabko and Reznikova have found evidence that ants can transmit very complex messages. Scouts who had located food in a maze returned to mobilise their foraging teams. They engaged incontact sessions, at the end of which the scout was removed in order to observe what her team might do. Often the foragers proceeded to the exact spot in the maze where the food had been. Elaborate precautions were taken to prevent the foraging team using odour clues. Discussion now centres on whether the route through the maze is communicated as a ‘left-right’ se quence of turns or as a ‘compass bearing and distance’ message.During the course of this exhaustive study, Reznikova has grown so attached to her laboratory ants that she feels she knows them as individuals — even without the paint spots used to mark them. It’s no surprise that Edward Wilson, in his essay, ‘In the company of ants’, advises readers who ask what to do with the ants in their kitchen to: ‘Watch where you step. Be careful of little lives.’Questions 1-6Do the following statements agree with the information given in Reading Passage 1?In boxes 1-6 on your answer sheet, writeTRUE if the statement agrees with the informationFALSE if the statement contradicts the informationNOT GIVEN if there is no information on this1 Ants use the same channels of communication as humans do.2 City life is one factor that encourages the development of intelligence.3 Ants can build large cities more quickly than humans do.4 Some ants can find their way by making calculations based on distance and position.5 In one experiment, foraging teams were able to use theirsense of smell to find food.6 The essay, ‘In the company of ants’, explores ant communication.Questions 7-13Complete the summary using the list of words, A-O, below.Write the correct letter, A-O, in boxes 7-13 on your answer sheet.Ants as farmersAnts have sophisticated methods of farming, including herding livestock and growing crops, which are in many ways similar to those used in human agriculture. The ants cultivate a large number of different species of edible fungi which convert 7..............into a form which they can digest. They use their own natural 8..............as weed-killers and also use unwanted materials as 9.............. . Genetic analysis shows they constantly upgrade these fungi by developing new species and by 10..............species with neighbouring ant colonies. In fact, the farming methods of ants could be said to be more advanced than human agribusiness, since they use 11..............methods, they do not affect the12..............and do not waste 13.............. .A aphidsB agriculturalC celluloseD exchangingE energyF fertilizersG foodH fungiI growing J interbreeding K natural L other specesM secretions N sustainable O environmentREADING PASSAGE 2You should spend about 20 minutes on Questions 14-26, which are based on Reading Passage 2 on the following pages.Questions 14-19Reading Passage 2 has seven sections, A-G.Choose the correct headings for sections A-F from the list ofheadings below.Write the correct number, i-x, in boxes 14-19 on your answer sheet.List of Headingsi The results of the research into blood-variantsii Dental evidenceiii Greenberg’s analysis of the dental and linguistic evidence iv Developments in the methods used to study early population movementsv Indian migration from Canada to the U.S.A.vi Further genetic evidence relating to the three-wave theory vii Long-standing questions about prehistoric migration to Americaviii Conflicting views of the three-wave theory, based on non-genetic evidenceix Questions about the causes of prehistoric migration to Americax How analysis of blood-variants measures the closeness of the relationship between different populations14 Section A15 Section B16 Section C17 Section D18 Section E19 Section FExample AnswerSection G viiiPopulation movements and geneticsA Study of the origins and distribution of human populations used to be based on archaeological and fossil evidence. Anumber of techniques developed since the 1950s, however, have placed the study of these subjects on a sounder and more objective footing. The best information on early population movements is now being obtained from the ‘archaeology of the living body’, the clues to be found in genetic material.B Recent work on the problem of when people first entered the Americas is an example of the value of these new techniques. North-east Asia and Siberia have long been accepted as the launching ground for the first human colonisers of the New World1. But was there one major wave of migration across the Bering Strait into the Americas, or several? And when did this event, or events, take place? In recent years, new clues have come from research into genetics, including the distribution of genetic markers in modern Native Americans2.C An important project, led by the biological anthropologist Robert Williams, focused on the variants (called Gm allotypes) of one particular protein — immunoglobin G — found in the fluid portion of human blood. All proteins ‘drift’, or produce variants, over the generations, and members of an interbreeding human population will share a set of such variants. Thus, by comparing the Gm allotypes of two different populations (e.g. two Indian tribes), one can establish their genetic ‘distance’, which itself can be calibrated to give an indication of the length of time since these populations last interbred.D Williams and his colleagues sampled the blood of over 5,000 American Indians in western North America during a twenty-year period. They found that their Gm allotypes could be divided into two groups, one of which also corresponded to the genetic typing of Central and South American Indians. Other tests showed that the Inuit (or Eskimo) and Aleut3 formed a thirdgroup. From this evidence it was deduced that there had been three major waves of migration across the Bering Strait. The first, Paleo-lndian, wave more than 15,000 years ago was ancestral to all Central and South American Indians. The second wave, about 14,000-12,000 years ago, brought Na-Dene hunters, ancestors of the Navajo and Apache (who only migrated south from Canada about 600 or 700 years ago). The third wave, perhaps 10,000 or 9,000 years ago, saw the migration from North-east Asia of groups ancestral to the modern Eskimo and Aleut.E How far does other research support these conclusion? Geneticist Douglas Wallace has studied mitochondrial DNA4 in blood samples from three widely separated Native American groups: Pima-Papago Indians in Arizona, Maya Indians on the Yucatan peninsula, Mexico, and Ticuna Indians in the Upper Amazon region of Brazil. As would have been predicted by Robert Williams’s work, all three groups appear to be descended from the same ancestral (Paleo-lndian) population.F There are two other kinds of research that have thrown some light on the origins of the Native American population; they involve the study of teeth and of languages. The biological anthropologist Christy Turner is an expert in the analysis of changing physical characteristics in human teeth. He argues that tooth crowns and roots5 have a high genetic component, minimally affected by environmental and other factors. Studies carried out by Turner of many thousands of New and Old World specimens, both ancient and modern, suggest that the majority of prehistoric Americans are linked to Northern Asian populations by crown and root traits such as incisor6 shoveling (a scooping out on one or both surfaces of the tooth), single-rooted upper first premolars6 and triple-rooted lower firstmolars6.According to Turner, this ties in with the idea of a single Paleo-lndian migration out of North Asia, which he sets at before 14,000 years ago by calibrating rates of dental micro-evolution. Tooth analyses also suggest that there were two later migrations of Na-Denes and Eskimo-Aleut.G The linguist Joseph Greenberg has, since the 1950s, argued that all Native American languages belong to a single ‘Amerind’ family, except for Na-Dene and Eskimo-Aleut — a view that gives credence to the idea of three main migrations. Greenberg is in a minority among fellow linguists, most of whom favour the notion of a great many waves of migration to account for the more than 1,000 languages spoken at one time by American Indians. But there is no doubt that the new genetic and dental evidence provides strong backing for Greenberg’s view. Dates given for the migrations should nevertheless be treated with caution, except where supported by hard archaeological evidence.1 New World: the American continent, as opposed to the so-called Old World of Europe, Asia and Africa2 modern Native American: an American descended from the groups that were native to America3 Inuit and Aleut: two of the ethnic groups native to the northern regions of North America (i.e. northern Canada and Greenland)4 DNA: the substance in which genetic information is stored5 crown/root: parts of the tooth6 incisor/premolar/molar: kinds of teethQuestions 20 and 21The discussion of Williams’s research indicates the periods at which early people are thought to have migrated along certainroutes. There are six routes, A-F, marked on map below.Complete the table below.Write the correct letter, A-F, in boxes 20 and 21 on your answer sheet.Route Period (number of years ago)20.................. 15,000 or more21.................. 600 to 700Early Population Movement to the AmericasQuestions 22-25Reading Passage 2 refers to the three-wave theory of early migration to the Americas. It also suggests in which of these three waves the ancestors of various groups of modern native Americans first reached the continent.Classify the groups named in the table below as originating fromA the first waveB the second waveC the third waveWrite the correct letter, A, B or C, in boxes 22-25 on your answer sheet.Name of group Wave numberInuit 22..................Apache 23..................Pima-Papago 24..................Ticuna 25..................Question 26Choose the correct letter, A, B, C or D.Write the correct letter in box 26 on your answer sheet.Christy Turn er’s research involved the examination ofA teeth from both prehistoric and modern Americans andAsians.B thousands of people who live in either the New or the Old World.C dental specimens from the majority of prehistoric Americans.D the eating habits of American and Asian populations.READING PASSAGE 3You should spend about 20 minutes on Questions 27-40, which are based on Reading Passage 3 below.Forests are one of the main elements of our natural heritage. The decline of Europe’s forests over the las t decade and a half has led to an increasing awareness and understanding of the serious imbalances which threaten them. European countries are becoming increasingly concerned by major threats to European forests, threats which know no frontiers other than those of geography or climate: air pollution, soil deterioration, the increasing number of forest fires and sometimes even the mismanagement of our woodland and forest heritage. There has been a growing awareness of the need for countries to get together to co-ordinate their policies. In December 1990, Strasbourg hosted the first Ministerial Conference on the protection of Europe’s forests. The conference brought together 31 countries from both Western and Eastern Europe. The topics discussed included the coordinated study of the destruction of forests, as well as how to combat forest fires and the extension of European research programs on the forest ecosystem. The preparatory work for the conference had been undertaken at two meetings of experts. Their initial task was to decide which of the many forest problems of concern to Europe involved the largest number of countries and might be thesubject of joint action. Those confined to particular geographical areas, such as countries bordering the Mediterranean or the Nordic countries therefore had to be discarded. However, this does not mean that in future they will be ignored.As a whole, European countries see forests as performing a triple function: biological, economic and recreational. The first is to act as a ‘green lung’ for our planet; by means of photosynthesis, forests produce oxygen through the transformation of solar energy, thus fulfilling what for humans is the essential role of an immense, non-polluting power plant. At the same time, forests provide raw materials for human activities through their constantly renewed production of wood. Finally, they offer those condemned to spend five days a week in an urban environment an unrivalled area of freedom to unwind and take part in a range of leisure activities, such as hunting, riding and hiking. The economic importance of forests has been understood since the dawn of man — wood was the first fuel. The other aspects have been recognised only for a few centuries but they are becoming more and more important. Hence, there is a real concern throughout Europe about the damage to the forest environment which threatens these three basic roles.The myth of the ‘natural’ forest has survived, yet there are effectively no remaining ‘primary’ forests in Europe. All European forests are artificial, having been adapted and exploited by man for thousands of years. This means that a forest policy is vital, that it must transcend national frontiers and generations of people, and that it must allow for the inevitable changes that take place in the forests, in needs, and hence in policy. The Strasbourg conference was one of the first events on such a scale to reach this conclusion. A general declaration wasmade that ‘a central place in any ecologically coherent forest policy must be given to continuity over time and to the possible effects of unforeseen events, to ensure that the full potential of these forests is maintained’.That general declaration was accompanied by six detailed resolutions to assist national policy-making. The first proposes the extension and systematisation of surveillance sites to monitor forest decline. Forest decline is still poorly understood but leads to the loss of a high proportion of a tree’s needles or leaves. The entire continent and the majority of species are now affected: between 30% and 50% of the tree population. The condition appears to result from the cumulative effect of a number of factors, with atmospheric pollutants the principal culprits. Compounds of nitrogen and sulphur dioxide should be particularly closely watched. However, their effects are probably accentuated by climatic factors, such as drought and hard winters, or soil imbalances such as soil acidification, which damages the roots. The second resolution concentrates on the need to preserve the genetic diversity of European forests. The aim is to reverse the decline in the number of tree species or at least to preserve the ‘genetic material’ of all of them. Although forest fires do not affect all of Europe to the same extent, the amount of damage caused the experts to propose as the third resolution that the Strasbourg conference consider the establishment of a European databank on the subject. All information used in the development of national preventative policies would become generally available. The subject of the fourth resolution discussed by the ministers was mountain forests. In Europe, it is undoubtedly the mountain ecosystem which has changed most rapidly and is most at risk. A thinly scattered permanentpopulation and development of leisure activities, particularly skiing, have resulted in significant long-term changes to the local ecosystems. Proposed developments include a preferential research program on mountain forests. The fifth resolution relaunched the European research network on the physiology of trees, called Eurosilva. Eurosilva should support joint European research on tree diseases and their physiological and biochemical aspects. Each country concerned could increase the number of scholarships and other financial support for doctoral theses and research projects in this area. Finally, the conference established the framework for a European research network on forest ecosystems. This would also involve harmonising activities in individual countries as well as identifying a number of priority research topics relating to the protection of forests. The Strasbourg conference’s main concern was to provide for the future. This was the initial motivation, one now shared by all 31 participants representing 31 European countries. Their final text commits them to on-going discussion between government representatives with responsibility for forests.Questions 27-33Do the following statements agree with the information given in Reading Passage 3?In boxes 27-33 on your answer sheet, writeTRUE if the statement agrees with the informationFALSE if the statement contradicts the informationNOT GIVEN if there is no information on this27 Forest problems of Mediterranean countries are to be discussed at the next meeting or experts.28 Problems in Nordic countries were excluded because they are outside the European Economic Community.29 Forests are a renewable source of raw material.30 The biological functions of forests were recognized only in the twentieth century.31 Natural forests still exist in parts of Europe.32 Forest policy should be limited by national boundaries.33 The Strasbourg conference decided that a forest policy must allow for the possibility of change.Questions 34-39Look at the following statements issued by the conference.Which six of the following statements, A-J, refer to the resolutions that were issued?Match the statements with the appropriate resolutions (Questions 34-39).Write the correct letter, A-J, in boxes 34-39 on your answer sheet.A All kinds of species of trees should be preserved.B Fragile mountain forests should be given priority in research programs.C The surviving natural forests of Europe de not need priority treatment.D Research is to be better co-ordinated throughout Europe.E Information on forest fires should be collected and shared.F Loss of leaves from trees should be more extensively and carefully monitored.G Resources should be allocated to research into tree diseases.H Skiing should be encouraged in thinly populated areas.I Soil imbalances such as acidification should be treated with compounds of nitrogen and sulphur.J Information is to be systematically gathered on any declinein the condition of forests.34 Resolution 135 Resolution 236 Resolution 337 Resolution 438 Resolution 539 Resolution 6Question 40Choose the correct letter, A, B, C or D.Write the correct letter in box 40 on your answer sheet.40 What is the best title for Reading Passage 3?A The biological, economic and recreational role of forestsB Plans to protect the forests of EuropeC The priority of European research into ecosystemsD Proposals for a world-wide policy on forest management剑桥雅思阅读7原文参考译文(test3)TEST 3 PASSAGE 1 参考译文：蚂蚁智能每当我们想到动物界的智能成员时，头脑中立刻出现的会是猿和猴子。

07雅思大作文分类

社会类07.01.06The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss thepossible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.07.04.28 =04.09.18Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say itis a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.07.06.02 ≈ 06.05.20Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?07.06.16In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fastfoods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.07.26 （加考）Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.08.25Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 07.09.08The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? 07.09.20 （北京、杭州、深圳）Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in artis necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.07.09.22Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:1. All costs are paid by the government.2. All costs are paid by the student.3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that mustbe repaid after graduation.Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?07.10.06 （加考）Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.10.13Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more importantthan life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?07.10.25Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinions.07.12.15Today, it is common that TV news programmes show the images of disasters and violence to the public. Discuss the reasons and the effects on the individual and the society.教育类07.01.13Some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace in the future. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What do you think are the main functions of a university?07.03.03 ≈04.12.04Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.07.05.12 ≈06.09.23Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.05.19Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?07.07.07In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today's world, which system is appropriate?07.07.14In the last, lecture lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.09.01Some people think that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. But others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.07.10.20Some people think it is better for children to begin to learn a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school. What's your opinion? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?07.12.08Many people believe that main aim for university education is help graduates to find better job, while some people believe that university education has wider benefit for individual and society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.政府类07.01.20 =05.07.09Some people say the government should pay for the health care and education,but others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.07.03.22 （深圳加考）Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets, etc. However, other people think that is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 07.11.03The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?环境类Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.12.01We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish.What are the causes and what are your solutions?科技类07.02.10 ≈05.11.26Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.03.10With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters willdisappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?07.03.31 =05.02.26People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well asbusiness transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on an individual and the society as a whole?07.06.09Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.08.11It is known to all that the technological and scientific advances have made greater changes to the range and quality of our food. Some people regard it asan improvement while others believe that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.广告媒体类07.04.14The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?07.11.17Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children, some people think there are lots of negative effects for children, and should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree?能源类07.06.28 ( 加考)The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?07.08.16（加考）The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What can be done to reduce it?国际类07.07.21As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.11.24Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than the positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?语言文化类07·08.18Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?。

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剑7Test3大作文As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?1.话题和题型分类工作类2.题目分析工作满意度的构成；“全民皆满意”的可能性3.思路提示A.工作满意度的构成感受到自身价值具有归属感团队合作精神浓厚获得成就感具有竞争力的薪酬B.可能性每个人很难找到自己适合的工作知识技能不匹配与个人性格不匹配Nowadays,many adults have full‐time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high.So one’s feelings about one’s job frequently reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole.Because of this,job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of thatperson.Factors such as positive feedback,a sense of progression and a sense of belonging contribute to job satisfaction.However,not everyone can achieve such satisfaction.内容详细条目段落此段结构1描述现实2表达观点此段功能首段开篇摆明观点:工作满足感非常重要，受工作中的积极反馈、归属感等因素影响，但并不是每个人都能获得这种满足感。

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剑桥雅思真题7—写作（Test 3 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.According to the chart, during the period from 1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses in three cities decreased significantly by five percent in New York (USA) and about 7.5 percent in both Tokyo (Japan) and London (UK). While the average house prices increased slightly in two cities Madrid(Spain) and Frankfurt(Germany) by about 1.5 percent respectively.As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned, it is clear that the average house prices decreased only in Tokyo (Japan) by 5 percent. In contrast the average house prices increased in the rest of cities. In New York it increased consideraply by 5 percent, in Madrid it increased slightly by 4 percent, in Frankfurt it increased by 2 percent.London has the largest increase in the average house price over the 6-year period from 1996-2002 as it increased dramatically by 11 percent.All in all, there are a wide differences in house prices between the five cities which illustrated in this chart. These differences may be a result of the number of population or the number of houses required in a certain city.本文得分6.5。

雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析

雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。

此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。

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雅思大作文写作7分范文雅思写作对于一些同学来说是难点，今天给大家整理了雅思作文真题优秀范文，希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

2018年11月10日雅思大作文写作7分范文：职场社交能力重要性大作文写作题目是：Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思大作文解析今天的考题是一个旧题，重复的是2012年1月14日的考题，不过由于过于久远，想必很多同学都没有复习到。

但这个题目的问题，我们多数同学都应该思考过，即到底文凭重要，还是社交能力重要?就这个问题，我们的思考方向依然是三种：A. 双边讨论：认为两者都很重要B. 一边倒讨论：只认为文凭更重要，或社交能力更重要C. 批判思维：对某些工作而言，文凭更重要，而对其他工作而言，社交能力更重要。

考生可以在以上思维方式中任选一个进行写作。

以下是老雅的高分范文。

本范文中，老雅遵从主流意见，认为文凭和社交能力都重要。

本题还应注意的是，要结合“招聘”来讨论问题。

老雅认为，在招聘的时候，文凭很重要，因为文凭背后代表的是求职者具有某种能力，而没有文凭，应聘者可能连面试的机会都得不到;同时，社交能力也很重要，因为这种能力意味着求职者可以和各种人和谐快乐地相处，从而提高工作效率。

请大家认真阅读范文，看老雅是如何把以上思路落实到具体文字表达的。

It is important for job seekers to highlight both their professional qualifications and social skills. Employers are looking to hire those who have the right mix of professional qualifications as hard skills and social skills as soft skills.(1) 本段开门见山，直接表明观点，即专业资质和社交能力同等重要。

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雅思大作文突破7分总结（背景引入-题目改写-撰写观点）（利弊）讨论型1.People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Some people believe that advertising has more negative than positive influences on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2.As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?观点对比型3.Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion4.Nowdays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gradually people become the slaves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion.5.Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly. Others believe that there are more effective forms of international aid.原因-结果型、6.The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree?7.Today advertising can be seen everywhere in daily life. It has influenced what people think is important, and sometimes has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?手段方法型8.Riding a bicycle is the best way than other transportation methods. Do you agree or disagree.9.Some people believe that become successful in adult life, it depends on the way parents bring up their children. Do you agree or disagree.趋势或者现象讨论型10.It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree?11.Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare trainning courses.。

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雅思大作文写作7分范文鉴赏虽然今年6月的雅思考试已经结束，但我还是想为大家带来本场雅思写作大作文真题范文及解析，目的是为了让大家更好地学习。

本期写作话题为：增加年轻人对本国历史人物兴趣的方法。

Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。

这是为什么呢?怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣?范文来自网络：As the globalization of entertainment industry, a great number of foreign celebrities has dashed into our lives, especially for the youth; fascinating super stars is becoming a trend, and even being idolaters has been a lifestyle for many young people. Gradually, more people start to worry about the inheritance of local traditional culture, which is worth considering around the society.随着娱乐产业的全球化，大量的外国名人闯入了我们的生活，尤其是年轻人;吸引人的超级明星正在成为一种趋势，甚至成为偶像已经成为许多年轻人的生活方式。

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雅思写作真题解析与答案雅思写作是雅思考试中其中一个重要的部分，对于考生来说，熟悉并掌握雅思写作的技巧和方法十分关键。

本文将为你提供一些雅思写作真题的解析与答案，帮助你更好地应对雅思写作考试。

1. 题目：In many countries, people are living longer and the populationis getting older. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?（在许多国家，人们的寿命越来越长，人口越来越老。

这一趋势有哪些优点和缺点？）解析：这个题目要求我们探讨人口老龄化的优势和劣势。

我们可以分段来讨论。

1. 优点：首先，人口老龄化可以带来更多的经验和智慧。

老年人经历丰富，拥有许多宝贵的人生经验和知识，他们可以为社会提供更多的指导和启发。

其次，老龄人口的增加可以促进医疗保健的发展。

随着人口老龄化，对医疗保健的需求也会增加，这将刺激医疗和生物技术的研究和发展，进一步提高医疗水平和生活质量。

最后，老年人口的增加也可以提供更多的就业机会。

随着老年人口的增加，相关行业，如养老院、康复中心和护理机构等，将需要更多的员工来满足需求，从而创造更多的就业机会。

2. 缺点：首先，人口老龄化会增加养老负担。

随着老年人口的增加，社会养老保障制度将面临更大的压力，政府需要投入更多的资源来支持养老金和医疗保健等服务，这会给财政带来压力。

其次，人口老龄化可能导致劳动力短缺。

随着年龄的增长，老年人无法继续从事劳动力工作，这将导致劳动力市场供应不足，并对经济发展产生不利影响。

最后，人口老龄化还可能引发社会问题。

老年人口的增加可能导致社会孤立和心理健康问题的增加，需要社会和家庭给予更多的关爱和支持。

答案：综上所述，人口老龄化带来了一些优势，如经验和智慧的积累、医疗保健的发展和就业机会的增加，但也存在一些劣势，如养老负担的增加、劳动力短缺和社会问题。

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Even if television and internet can meet some needs of students but they cannot completely perform the effects of the fact, children also need to learn the method of communication and how to become a good this aspect,teachers play an important role during the learning computer cannot completely achieve the teaching goal. To sum up, modern technologies can replace some of teachers' job. but considering other important parts in education, I do not believe this development can make teachers useless in the future.雅思7分范文(篇二)You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Families are not as close as before. Give reasons for this change, and suggest some ways to bring families closer.You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.In the past, family was a very important concept in people’s minds, and it was the center of many people’s lives. Nowadays, however, the relationship between family members is not as close as before. But as to what factors contribute to this phenomenon, different people have diverse opinions. As far as I am concerned, it results from the following reasons.The first reason is that people spend more time on their study and work. Compared with the past, people face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. Therefore, they have to devote more time and energy to their careers. Some people are too occupied to spare time for their family. What is more, many jobs require people to work in other cities and many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, these people become emotionally estranged from their parents.Another reason is that there are more entertainment forms available. Nowadays high technology brings us more interesting things which can easily attract people’s attention, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet or plating video games. As a result, people are indulged in these activities, totally neglecting the feelings of other family members.To bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions. Firstly, never bring your work home and leave it in your office. We should spare more time with family members no matter how occupied we are. Secondly, try to squeeze some time for a regular family dinner because dinner time is a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas. Last but not least, we should teach the children the sense of family when they are still young.Family is the basic unit of a society. It plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should take efforts to create a close family relationship. 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But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思7分范文(篇四)Nowadays, there are several channels to get news, such as radio, TV, newspaper and internet. I think internet is the best among these. In my essay, I am going to explain why.Since its invention, the Internet has been keeping booming as a prospective industry. Not only because it is a combination of texts, audios and videos, but also due to its convinience. It has threatened the domination of spreading news of the traditional media, and, I would say, is about to take control.We can find everything we want on internet – latest news, books, songs, movies, cartoons… whatever. With radio, we can merely hear. Compared with newspaper, radio and TV can provide the lastest information. For instance, it was immediately availalbe of the breaking news of the Americans’ attacking on Iraq, as we ll as thatthe Twin Towers of New York were destroyed on September 11, 2001. __ However, we just cannot carry TV 24/7.Internet is a convinient way of getting information, as long as your mobile phone is connected or you possess a laptop. When I am on a vehicle, I usually have my cellphone connected to internet, then browse what happend in the past few hours, or log in MSN to begin a conversation with my friends. Reading newspaper is also a good way to kill time, but for me, a youngster, it is not so modern as “surfing online while being transported”.The traditional media will never disappear, though internet has taken a big advantage in the competition. And definitely, there is still a long way for internet to go. Anyway, internet benefits me the most, and I highly appreciate it.雅思7分范文(篇五)题目：Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文：Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on theprotection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no placein the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists onlyfor the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right toallow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, thereis no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in orderto feed or accommodate the world’s population. 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Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. 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That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.雅思7分范文(篇七)现在小伙伴们都知道雅思baba的写作套路了么？那既然已经知道写作有题库，同学们是不是应该对雅思写作真题重视起来市面上的很多资料都是有题目不完整、没范文、没高频词汇的情况，对童鞋们来说其实用处并不大。

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雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇1Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?Today there is a large increase in anti-social behavior, such as stealing, robbery and bullying, in almost every country. Also, irresponsibility and disrespect to others are common. The reason for the anti-social behavior are both complicated and varied.One possible reason for people to show anti-social behavior is that they may be dissatisfied with certain policies made by the government, so they choose an extreme way to express their dissatisfaction. For example, a local government does not punish the businesses that cause pollution to the environment just because these companies pay a large sum of tax every year. As a result, some people intentionally hurt employees working for these companies as a warning. Another reason is that some people lack education in learning how to respect and how law works when they were young, so they fail to realize what harm their behavior would cause to others. I think this explains why they appear harmful to the society.To address this problem, the government should listen to public opinions with an open mind, taking the benefit of all parties into consideration before making policy, and make every effort to meet people’s demand in fields like living environment, price index and working benefits. Public media should broadcastnoncommercial advertisements to convey the importance of showing respect to others and obeying the law. Also, schools and parents ought to put emphasis on cultivating law-abiding consciousness and let youngsters know that only respecting others can obtain others’ respect.In sum, any anti-social behavior is regarded as a threat to social order. Mostly , the ones that misbehave lack a good understanding in manners and law. So the government media and education institutions need to join hands to solve this problem.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇2In recent years, young people in many countries choose to live by themselves. What are the reasons and is it positive or negative for the development of the society?Traditionally , young people often lived with other people. Now , more young people are choosing to live by themselves. Some people question whether this trend will have a negative or positive impact on the development of society.Some people are choosing to live by themselves for convenience purposes. Maybe they have a lengthy commute back and forth to work and it is no longer reasonable to live such a distance away. They want to live close to where they work and a roommate or someone to live with is not an option. Some people choose to live alone because they dislike the inconveniences of cohabiting with someone who has different living habits. Other people choose to live alone simply because they are introverts and they do not enjoy social contact.Although a person should certainly have the right to determine whether they live alone or not, it is important to note that human contact and social interaction remain important to aperson’s development and well-being. Human beings are social creatures and studies have shown that we can all benefit from social interaction. Many of us think that we can enhance our lives with computer time, television time, or smartphone time, but face-to-face interaction can still be beneficial and enriching.It remains to be seen if there will be any long-term effects from the current trend of people living alone, but there is a possibility that this trend may have a negative impact on people’s ability or interest in social interaction.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇3An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative?Some people wonder why career changes are becoming more prevalent and whether those more frequent changes are having a positive or a negative effect. Although one can certainly argue about the positive or negative effects, I believe that these changes can be positive, if the person making the career change is doing so for the right reasons.Admittedly, companies come and go in our fast-paced world economy. So it is probably no longer realistic for a person to think that they will be able to start and finish working with the same company. Along the same lines, it should be noted that many companies and employers do not value loyalty as much as their counterparts from previous generations.This trend can be positive if people change jobs for the following purposes. First, they make career changes in an attempt to find more satisfaction or fulfillment with their new career. Second, they made a mistake in the previous career they chose for themselves but it is no late to pursue a more suitable one. Lastly, some people make career changes in search of a moredesirable lifestyle, more career advancement or a higher income.If people choose a different career path so they can be happier or more fulfilled in their career. I support them to do so. Happy and fulfilled employees are more productive and their employers will be benefited. Everyone deserves the chance to have a better career development. If career change is the key to their future success, they should not hesitate to make the change.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇4Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people maintain that their governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease.It is obvious that environment pollution can create widespread illness. Studies have shown that poor air quality can create illness, including cancer, and those illnesses can reduce our quality of life and our lifespan. The same can be said for water pollution, as many disease and illnesses are a direct result of poor water quality. Unfortunately, in many countries the water and air quality is already poor due to years of abuse or negligence. Government efforts to ensure air and water quality can be quite expensive, as a lot of cleanup is required.In regards to a lack of quality housing, that can result in similar health problems and concerns, as people who are homeless or living in the street are certainly more prone to disease and illness.That being said, a government cannot spend all of its financial resources in curbing pollution or creating affordablehousing. The government has other priorities and problems to consider, including transportation, education, employment and health care. If these priorities are ignored, other problems will arise. Bad roads or bad bridges may impact the economy. Uneducated and unemployed citizens are also sure to have a negative impact on the economy. If a society is unable to care for its sick population, the society will also suffer.With this in mind, it seems that the government is best served in establishing a balance in determining which problems and areas to focus on. Although they may never be able to solve all of those problems at ones, maybe they can make enough progress so that someday those problems will be in the past.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇5Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people claim that the latest information is mostly from newspapers, but I would say television is a better way to get news and other information.立场：不赞成纸媒体不能及时把新闻信息第一时间传播出去纸媒体好处：更多细节，读者可以反复阅读电子类媒体：更新及时，视频的方式报道，让人们更直观的了解到事件的进展On behalf of newspapers, newspaper stories are generally more detailed and more in-depth than other media accounts of the same stories. A television or radio newscast has limited time in which to tell a news story. If the television news is only 30 minutes or 60 minutes in length, the television network can use only a limited amount of time for each story. 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剑桥雅思阅读7真题解析pdf精选

剑桥雅思阅读7真题解析pdf精选reading passage 1you should spend about 20 minutes on questions 1-13, which are based on reading passage 1 below.let’s go batsb bats have an engineering problem: how to find their way and find their prey in the absence of light. bats are not the only creatures to face this difficulty today. obviously thenight-flying insects that they prey on must find their way about somehow. deep-sea fish and whales have little or no light by day or by night. fish and dolphins that live in extremely muddy water cannot see because, although there is light, it is obstructed and scattered by the dirt in the water. plenty of other modern animals make their living in conditions where seeing is difficult or impossible.c given the questions of how to manoeuvre in the dark, what solutions might an engineer consider? the first one that might occur to him is to manufacture light, to use a lantern or a searchlight. fireflies and some fish (usually with the help of bacteria) have the power to manufacture their own light, but the process seems to consume a large amount of energy. fireflies use their light for attracting mates. this doesn’t require a prohibitive amount of energy: a male’s tiny pinprick of lightcan be seen by a female from some distance on a dark night, since her eyes are exposed directly to the light source itself. however, using light to find one’s own way around requires vastly more energy, since the eyes have to detect the tiny fraction of the light that bounces off each part of the scene. the light source must therefore be immensely brighter if it is to be used as a headlight to illuminate the path, than if it is to be used as a signal to others. in any event, whether or not the reason is the energy expense, it seems to be the case that, with the possible exception of some weird deep-sea fish, no animal apart from man uses manufactured light to find its way about.questions 1-5reading passage 1 has five paragraphs, a-e.which paragraph contains the following information?write the correct letter, a-e, in boxes 1-5 on your answer sheet.nb you may use any letter more than once.1 examples of wildlife other than bats which do not rely on vision to navigate by2 how early mammals avoided dying out3 why bats hunt in the dark4 how a particular discovery has helped our understanding of bats5 early military uses of echolocationquestions 6-9choose one word only from the passage for each answer.write your answers in boxes 6-9 on your answer sheet.facial visionquestions 10-13choose no more than two words from the passage for each answer.write your answers in boxes 10-13 on your answer sheet.10 long before the invention of radar, …………… had resulted in a sophisticated radar-like system in bats.11 radar is an inaccurate term when referring to batsbe cause………… are not used in their navigation system.12 radar and sonar are based on similar ………… .13 the word ‘echolocation’ was first used by someone working as a ……… .reading passage 2you should spend about 20 minutes on questions 14-26, which are based on reading passage 2 on the following pages.questions 14-20reading passage 2 has seven paragraphs, a-h.choose the correct heading for paragraphs a and c-h from the list of headings below.write the correct number, i-xi, in boxes 14-20 on your answer sheet.list of headingsi scientists’ call for a revision of policyii an explanation for reduced water useiii how a global challenge was metiv irrigation systems fall into disusev environmental effectsvi the financial cost of recent technological improvementsvii the relevance to healthviii addressing the concern over increasing populationsix a surprising downward trend in demand for waterx the need to raise standardsxi a description of ancient water supplies14 paragraph aexample answerparagraph b iii15 paragraph c16 paragraph d17 paragraph e18 paragraph f19 paragraph g20 paragraph hmaking everydrop counta the history of human civilisation is entwined with the history of the ways we have learned to manipulate water resources. as towns gradually expanded, water was brought from increasingly remote sources, leading to sophisticated engineering efforts such as dams and aqueducts. at the height of the roman empire, nine major systems, with an innovative layout of pipes and well-built sewers, supplied the occupants of rome with as much water per person as is provided in many parts of the industrial world today.b during the industrial revolution and population explosion of the 19th and 20th centuries, the demand for water rosedramatically. unprecedented construction of tens of thousands of monumental engineering projects designed to control floods, protect clean water supplies, and provide water for irrigation and hydropower brought great benefits to hundreds of millions of people. food production has kept pace with soaring populations mainly because of the expansion of artificial irrigation systems that make possible the growth of 40 % of the world’s food. nearly one fifth of all the electricity generated worldwide is produced by turbines spun by the power of falling water.c yet there is a dark side to this picture: despite our progress, half of the world’s population still suffers, with water services inferior to those available to the ancient greeks and romans. as the united nations report on access to water reiterated in november 2001, more than one billion people lack access to clean drinking water; some two and a half billion do not have adequate sanitation services. preventable water-related diseases kill an estimated 10,000 to 20,000 children every day, and the latest evidence suggests that we are falling behind in efforts to solve these problems._underground stores of water。

雅思写作7分范文

雅思写作7分范文雅思写作7分范文第1篇：国家差异消失的优缺点Nowadays we can enjoy the same films, fashions, brands, advertisements and TV channels. The evident difference between countries is disappearing. To what extent do you think the disadvantages overweight the advantages of this?Globalization creates conditions for widening international exchanges, strengthening mutual understanding between nations, expanding cultural, educational, and scientific cooperation between nations and countries, enjoying the cultural achievements of people around the world which encourages the process of modernization and the enrichment of national culture.However, these conditions also create the possible danger of diminishing the national culture with a negative impact on the pre123vation of national identity. Through globalization and an open door policy, erroneous concepts and a lowering of ethical standards, a selfish and individualistic lifestyle and harmful cultural products can easily be imported into the country. At present, modern information technology which in the main is controlled by US is hourly and intensively disseminating US ideology, way of life, culture and films across the world. Even US food is promoted so that some people consider globalization as global Americanization.During the process of economic globalization, inequality between developed and developing countries has been increasing and the gap between the rich and the poor has become wider, most of the result of globalization go to assist developed countries. Globalization does not pose equal interests and risks to all nations. With an overwhelming advantage compared to most of the developing countries in terms of finance and the level of science and technology, developed ca123alist countries control the situation of economic globalization.For these reasons, globalization is a fierce and complicated struggle in both cultural and ideological fields. We take the initiative in international economic integration but also have to take the initiative in fighting to keep our distinct culture resisting pro-foreign and cross-bred phenomena, and overcoming the psychology of preferring money over ethical values.雅思写作7分范文第2篇：说谎有没有必要Telling lie is usually looked upon as an evil, because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults. On the other hand,honesty is widely recognized as the best policy.Parents always try to prove the benefits of being honest when you are a little child. A good story in this regard is .One day the childWashington chop down his farther s favorite cherry tree; although knowing he would deserve to be punished, he told his father the truth. Unexpected, his farther apprised him rather than executing a punishment; moreover, he was encouraged to maintain the good manner all the time. As known to all, the honest boy eventually became one of the greatest presidents in American history.However, telling lie,despite its negative effects, sometimes is essential in our daily life. First, the liar itself will benefit from the lie by escaping from the pressure of unnecessary embarrassment. On the other hand, the listener will feel more comfortable by reasonable excuses. For example, if a little girls farther died in an accident, her mother would comfort her by saying farther has gone to another beautiful land. In such cases, a lie with original goodwill is like a naught angel who might make the cruel nice. Furthermore, To some extent, the skills of telling lie can be regard as a capacity of creation and imagination.Taking all those factors into consideration, we can definitely come to the conclusion that whether telling lie is harmful depends on its original intention and the ultimate result it will bring. If one is honest with oneself, one always learns from mistakes, can correct a concept or a hypothesis and work further, and reach the goal finally.雅思写作7分范文第3篇：环境问题In a world today of immense technology, increasing population and flourishing economic , investigations have shown that the global economy was outgrowing the earths ecosystems. The whole industrial process which makes many of the goods and machines we need and use in daily lives, is bound to create a number of waste products which upset the environmental balance.As mass production is the core principle of industrial economy, mass consumption and mass abandonment become the core principle in industrial age. Many of these waste products can be prevented or disposed of sensibly, but clearly while more and more new goods are produced and made more complex, there will be new wastes to be disposed of. The rise of wastes has led to an unparalleled debate between environmental protection and economic development.However, they often ignore that the real victim of pollutions is not the citizen, because the rubbishes usually be gathered together and moved to an area far from the cities. As a result, in these areas the usable fields will be destructed, the air will be polluted, wild life, including both plants and animals will be put at risk, moreover, many inhabitants will be weaken on account of the waste despoil with poisonous materials from industrial companies.Whatever its underlying effects, there is no doubt that much of the pollution could be controlled if only companies, individuals andgovernments would make more effort.Globally, we can replace the automobile-based, fossil-fuel-centered, throwaway structure with a renewable-energy-based economy that reuses and recycles materials and has a stable population. Individuals, on the other hand, can help to solve by cutting out unnecessary buying,excess consumption and careless disposal of the products are use in our daily lives.雅思写作7分范文第4篇：幸福是什么Without any discussing, the key to happiness, in my opinion, is a harmonious relationship with the people in our lives.It is the people in our lives who bring us the most happiness. Family, friends and co-workers, who are part of our inner circle, share our experiences, hopes and dreams, successes and frustrations, joys and pains. Too often, many of us get on the fast track of life and take each other for granted. As a new millennium approach, more people disregard their passion and interests and choose careers based on job security, pay and professional promotion. As a result, they find themselves isolated and without friends. Loneliness is a common tragedy that destroys lives.Actually we were old enough to remember the old saying Money doesnt buy happiness, yet we strive for the material objects and pay a high price. The essence of happiness is the unconditionallylove we have for the people in our lives and their unconditionally love for us. To live life only for ourselves will bring us nothing but sadness and misery.A self-centered life is an unhappy life. Selfishness is a major block to happiness. Our feelings of insecurity and low self-esteem cause us to be takers rather than givers. Our selfishness is often a mask for fear. If we dont think too much about ourselves, we have a lot of work to do in order to enhance our self-worth. We must live for something greater than ourselves. To be happy, we must get out of ourselves. An unhappy person must turn outward, not inward, to find happiness.I truly believe that the happiest people are those who love many things. They love children, family and friends. They love sunrises and sunsets. They love life. They have even learned to love pain and despair rather than viewing them the opposite of happiness.雅思写作7分范文第5篇：计算机Globally, we have moved from a culture centered on network television, cable, AM and FM radio and telephone into a digital society with mass media,streaming information, intelligent computer. To shift to a digital economy, best demonstrated by the explosive growth of the Internet, is transforming everyday products and practices. Ideas expressed in soft wares, chips, communicationsystems, financial institutions and mass media have enormous leverage worldwide. Beyond emails and online shopping, the Internet promises to change dramatically huge spectrum activities. Its benefits can be well illustrated in the following aspects.In the first place, it contributes to escape us from laborious work, save our time, facilitate our lives. Secondly, with computers extensive reach into every corner of the world, a perspective of human life can be shown only with a single keystroke. No matter where we are, in school, business workshops, operating rooms, labs, banks of halls of government, the Internet appears to reflect a perspective of human life. Furthermore, computer profits us by relaxation and entertainment it provides.But on the other hand, some people debate that it is also inconvenient, waste the time, isolated us from people only with the company of computers, and make our lives more complicated. Some people repair the most sophisticated computer but cant mend a pair of socks. Yet in fact, computer collapse the distances and demolishes all boundaries. Whether computer is a blessing or a curse, depends on different circumstance and the way you use it.As a new millennium approach, we look forward to constructing a new fantasyland by combination with the wealth this new age will bring and the high technology it will provide.雅思写作7分范文第6篇：体罚的坏处Parents usually expect too much while raising their children. As a result, when it comes to discipline, most of them let temper flare out of control by executing physical punishment to their children. They believe bitter pills have wholesome sweet and they always in a panic that down to crime for youngsters is easy without pain tastes. Investigations showed that half of parents use punishment once or more, no matter their ethnicity, age, and socieconomic groups. However, despite the benefits it will bring, physical punishment is a hazard, which affects not only children, but also the parents themselves.On the first place, punishment can exert a bad impact on children by experience of serious reprocessing, with its evident contribution to childrens mental illness. Several studies showed that most frequent physical punishment with maltreatment maybe lead to depression, juvenile crimes and even suicide. Thus, most countries have already passed laws banning disciplinary action that inflicts physical suffering on a child.On the other hand, parents might also affect by their punishment behavior. When they lose them temper with their kids, they might feel irritated, sometimes even worse than children do. Moreover, the physical punishment, regardless its original intentions,has a negative impact on the bond between parents and children, on the account of frustrations, misunderstandings and even tears it will bring.Taking all those factors into consideration, I would argue that law are not the key to a violence-free, psychologically healthy upbringing, communication is. While Parents are establishing a bridge with a child during dialogue and equally exchange, they will both profit from it. Remember, serious punishment add sorrow and pain to our life, on the contrary, communication is the only remedy for better family relationship.。

《剑桥雅思七》写作例文的修改和讲解

《剑桥雅思七》写作例文的修改和讲解近来,我在国内出版的雅思书籍和相关网站看到介绍《剑桥雅思七》TEST 2的一篇Band 7.5写作例文,但都没有将文中的具体错误加以更正,这样对广大雅思考生英语水平的提高是无益的.本人现将该文的错误予以更正并作出详细讲评,供广大考生研习.文章题目如下:Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.《剑桥雅思七》原书写作例文如下:Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimising the number of crimes committed.If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.A person killing in self-defense can not be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next. In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.There has to be fixed punishment for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions.An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is competition law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger.Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.《剑桥雅思七》一书提供的雅思考官对该文的点评:该文论证清晰、观点明确、用词和句型丰富多样,除个别地方外,基本准确.但该文的段落分配不够合理,有的段落连接显得混乱.此外,没有明确的结论也是该文的一个不足.以下是经我改正过的范文:To date, imposing a fixed punishment for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments for and against the execution of penalty.On one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on potential criminals. Individuals will think twice before committing an offence if they know that they will be subjected to a certain punishment if convicted of a given crime. In addition, this deterring effect also helps to enhance social stability and security through minimising the number of crimes committed. On the other hand, if people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result in criminals getting away with their crime and a high level of injustice could be caused by the subjective approach of different courts.There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws should also foresee certain cases of exemptions. One example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is the competition law under which a person held liable for a crime will be convicted to pay a fine according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for exemptions, in some countries thieves stealing food during a period of famine are exempted from punishments.Therefore, in my opinion, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for the measurement of punishment. A person killing in self-defense can not be compared to a serial killer who moves from one victim to another. Perhaps a balanced approach could be a perfect way to ensure legal justice and equality.修改讲解:第一段:1. 原文第一句Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue不如改为To date, imposing a fixed punishment for each type of crime has been a debatable issue更符合英语逻辑和书面表达习惯,而且加上to date显得更为自然些.2. 原文第二句表达显过于wordy, 改为There are many arguments for and against the execution of penalty较为简练,而且避免了fixed punishment重复使用.第二段:1. 原文第一句中的on society 说法有些过于笼统,现改为更为具体的potential criminals.2. 原文第二句表述有些不够流畅,改为Individuals will think twice before committing an offence if they know that they will be subjected to a certain punishment if convicted of a given crime. 原文的will be subject to a certain punishment 改为will be subjected to a certain punishment更为常见.第四段:1. 该段原文的最后一句中的result into 应该为result in才符合英语惯用.第五、六段:将原文第五六段放到文章结论段更符合行文逻辑.原句中an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way改为a balanced approach could be a perfect way to ensure legal justice and equality 更为简练、准确.第七段:原文provide后的for 应删掉.第八段:原文第一句的where用在这里不准确,liable of 应改为liable for.第九段:原文中的thiefs应为thieves, taking into consideration the distress and hunger用在这里从修辞角度讲指代不够明确.另外,原文段落过多,显得十分松散.通过合并或调整一些段落,改后的作文更加紧凑,同时也修正了原文缺乏结论段的败笔.。

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇1）场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon.2）一些人的观点（some people’s opinion）,这局部在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3）个人观点，这一局部在有些文章的开头首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少到达250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。

因此总结出大作文开头的方式通常有以下几种情况：1）题目中包含了背景信息（phenomenon）,有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。

这种情况下最保险的方法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达（paraphrase）,可以做：主动语态换成被动语态主谓宾换成主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like puter science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree转换成The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blamethis on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as puter science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

雅思高分范文

雅思高分范文以下是为您生成的一篇作文，希望能符合您的要求：雅思考试，这可是让无数学子又爱又恨的存在。

对于想要出国留学或者移民的人来说，雅思成绩那就是通往梦想之地的敲门砖。

而要拿到高分，可真不是一件容易的事儿。

就拿我自己准备雅思的经历来说吧，那简直就是一部“血泪史”。

记得刚开始准备的时候，我天真地以为凭借自己还算不错的英语基础，应该能轻松应对。

可现实却给了我一个响亮的耳光。

听力部分，那语速快得就像机关枪扫射，我还没反应过来，一句话就过去了。

尤其是那些夹杂着各种口音的对话，简直让我怀疑人生。

有一次做模拟题，听到一个印度口音的对话，我愣是听了三遍都没搞明白他们在说啥。

当时我就急得抓耳挠腮，心里想着：“这说的都是啥呀？难道我学的是假英语？”阅读也是个大难题。

密密麻麻的英文单词，看着就头疼。

而且题目类型繁多，什么判断题、填空题、选择题，每一种都有它的“坑”。

有一次做一篇关于历史的阅读文章，里面全是各种生僻的专业词汇，什么“archaeology”（考古学）、“paleontology”（古生物学），看得我云里雾里。

时间一分一秒过去，我却还在第一道题上纠结，最后急得满头大汗，结果可想而知，惨不忍睹。

写作更是让我叫苦连天。

平时用中文写作都未必能写得条理清晰，更何况是用英文。

为了提高写作水平，我开始疯狂地背范文、记模板。

可真正到了考试的时候，一紧张，那些背过的东西全忘到九霄云外了。

有一次考试，题目是关于环保的，我本来心里有一些想法，可一落笔，就发现语法错误百出，单词拼写也错了好几个。

看着那写得乱七八糟的作文，我真想找个地缝钻进去。

口语就更别提了。

平时和同学用英语交流还算顺畅，可一面对雅思考官，紧张得舌头都打结了。

有一次模拟口语考试，考官问我一个关于旅游的问题，我本来想说“我喜欢去海边享受阳光和沙滩”，结果说成了“我喜欢去海边晒黑自己”，说完我就意识到说错了，脸一下子红到了脖子根，考官也忍不住笑了起来。

不过，经过一番痛苦的挣扎和努力，我也逐渐找到了一些应对雅思的方法。

剑桥雅思7阅读解析test

Q u e s t i o n 1 答案：YES关键词：1400 years定位原文: 第1段第2句：“Records show that only two have collapsed during the last 1400 years.”有记录显示，在过去1400年间，只有两座倒塌了。

解题思路: 使用1400 years定位到第一段第二句，该句明确表明1400年间只有两座日本宝塔倒塌Question 2答案：NO关键词：1995, Toji temple定位原文: 第1段最后1句：“Yet it led the magnificent five-storey pagoda ...”尽管大地震将京部附近东寺周围的大量建筑夷为平地，可寺里宏伟的五层宝塔却完好无损。

解题思路: 本题的考点在于要将原文中的leave...unscathed同题干中的destroy对立起来。

unscathed指“没有负伤的，未受损伤的”，这样就与题干中的destroy(毁坏)相抵触。

Question 3答案： NOT GIVEN关键词：30 years定位原文: 第2段第2句：“It was only thirty years ago that…”仅仅在 30 年前，建筑界的从业者们才有足够信心建造髙于十二层的钢筋混凝土办公大楼。

解题思路: 这句话与此题的唯一联系就是这个thirty years，抛开这一点，两者简直是牛头不对马嘴。

即使读完全段，也未见题干中所表达的意思，而且the other buildings near the Toji pagoda的勉强对等成分也出现在第一段a number of buildings in the neighbourhood。

一道题目的主要成分零散在文中数段，这就是典型的形散神必散型的NOT GIVEN。

Question 4答案： YES关键词: builders, weather定位原文: 第3段倒数第2句：“Clearly, Japanese carpenters of the day knew ...”显而易见，当时的日本木匠懂得一些窍门让建筑物可以顺风摇摆，不与自然力量对抗，而是顺应自然，从而稳稳矗立。

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雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析
距离雅思写作7分你大概还有3个步骤要走，是的，不是谁都可以轻轻松松活动雅思高分的。

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雅思7分大作范文批改和解析
雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)
问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)
同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.
解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出
国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。

此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。

大家找问题的时候是不是去找语法或者词汇使用上面的错误了?对，很多时候大家认为自己写的没什么问题(毕竟词汇和语法没少使用)，分数低会归类到“压分”。

那么在感受一下5.5分的原因真是词汇或者语法问题吗?考官看不懂，就是看不懂;唯一看懂的就是结构还算完整，所以5.0 - 5.5分。

雅思写作提高第二步：逻辑(6.0 - 6.5)
逻辑部分的主要得分点有两个：一个是观点的准确性;一个是论证方法的灵活使用。

我们根据刚才的5.0 - 5.5分的*，进一步感受一下有了逻辑的内容有什么区别。

问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)
Tim老师改：One reason for those who decide to go overseas for study is that they believe they can have access to different educational resources. That is to say, different countries have different educational system, and they can provide people with
their specialized courses and rich resources to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in a foreign environment and being affected by local culture make people learn a language more quickly.
解析：Tim老师通过修改了上面同学的问题，把内容变得更准确、有说服力。

所以，5.5 - 6.0分的一个最佳提分方式就是学会总结归纳自己要说的内容;否则，只是通过词汇或者语法是很难提高分数的(大家可以感受一下自己当下的学习方式就知道了)。

雅思写作第三步：语言(7+)
小站雅思君进一步给大家感受一下7.0分的标准又和上面的内容有什么区别。

问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)
On one hand, people can have access to different educational resources when they pursue their study in another country. It is self-evident that everyone would choose a place that offers a more competitive and better education in certain field as the destination for their overseas studies. This explains the reason why bunches of
young people flood into some countries for further their study, such as America or Germany. Under this circumstance, students will receive many materials that are more up-to-date and teachers can provide them with the latest development in their fields that differs from others.
解析：一段只围绕一个观点做展开论述。

通过强调论证、解释论证、递进句等不同论证方法来解释观点：出国留学可以让人们获取不同的教育资源。

并且语言使用准确且多样，层层递进。

所以，从段落的逻辑性、紧密型以及语言使用的多样性还有准确性上面都符合7分标准。

雅思写作Task2教育类考官范文
Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors.
I strongly believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and will examine both below.
Model Answer:
One of the greatest advantages is that the children learn to be independent. Having to cook, clean, and pay bills instills this in them. Often they have to work part-time to make ends meet, and。