GMAT作文之AA七宗罪

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GMAT作文满分模板

GMAT作文满分模板

AA作文模版一、开头段(Based upon a survey that……) The statement draws a conclusion that…….Several reasons are offered in support of this argument.First of all, the author cites the fact that .................What’s more ,the author points out that ................In addition, he infers that……(用于中间结论)At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be some what convincing, but further reveals that it omits some important concerns to make the argument sound. In my opinion, the argument suffers from N logical flaws.二、结尾段Based on the reasons I listed above, this argument is dubious/unwarranted/ unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen the conclusion, the author would have to provide evidence…….to support the conclusion. Meanwhile, it is important to rule out other possibilities that might lead to the same result and take other issues mentioned into consideration, this argument would have been much more thorough and logically acceptable.三、中间段(记住七宗罪:养(样本不足)姐(结论错误)饮(因果无关)泪(错误类比/横向比较都一样)二(二选一、非此即彼)等(等时等地/纵向比较都一样)茶(调查错误)大体结构:1)First of all, Secondly, Furthermore, Last but not least2)任选一句the author concludes that….however, this is a very weak claim as(because) ..it is highly doubtful that..the assumption fails to take into account that..the author unfairly assumes that..Another problem is that..(较为特殊,仅能在除第一段以外的段落使用)3)for example,…it is unlikly that..4)Therefore/as a result/ Accordingly/Consequentlythe reasoning is wrong unless …without further evidence, that author cannot concludes that…without further evidence, the claim that… is groundless.还是举个例子,第二段的写法:Secondly,Another problem is that.. for example,…Therefore,the reasoning is wrong unless …1、养----样本不足(insufficient sample)1)调查样本大小不足不具有代表性One problem of the argument is the research/survey itself. The number of participants reveals a small sample that is insufficient to represent the XX group and might deflect the actual result. For example…..(举出其他的可能情况).Unless the author can show that A1 is representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.2)Misapplied Generalization(大范围推小范围)(A发生----关于A中A1结论) The author’s conclusion/prediction relies on the gratuitous assumption that 大范围applies specifically to 小范围. There is, however, no guarantee that this is the case, nor does the author provide any evidence to substantiate this assumption. Just as likely, 小范围….( is just in the opposite direction). In that case, the author’s conclusion/recommendation might amount to especially poor advice.3)时间样本不足However, a mere recent one-year A is insufficient to claim that... Statistics from such limited anecdotal evidence is not a good indicator for this trend.2、姐----结论错误3、泪---错误类比(横向即跟别人比)(based on a false analogy)the argument has also committed a false analogy fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects and failing to take into account the possible differences between these two.... In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn from B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight the similarities. It is possible that B is unlikely to experience the same consequence if it adopts A’s strategies. For example, …all affects A but are virtually absent in B. ...(A however B)....Therefore, without providing sufficient information showing that most or even all of the conditions in A&B is similar or the same, the author cannot convince me that ...which is efficient in A can also be efficient in B as well.4.饮---因果错误(Correlation to Causation)1)因果无联系(时序因果、因果倒置)+有他因(举例)(时序因果)The author unfairly assums that B is due to A just because B happened after A/ A coincided with B.However, there is no sufficient evidence which can substantiate the assumption that there is a cause-and-effect relationship between A and B.The author provided no more reliable evidence to rule out other possible attributes that might also lead to this result. For instance,...........(列举他因)In short, without considering and ruling out all of these and other possibilities, the credibility of the author’s conclusion is really open to doubt(因果倒置)it is possible that the author confuses cause with effect respecting B. Perhaps A was a response to B. Since the author may fails to account for this possibility. The claim is completely unwarranted.2)有他因Casual Oversimplification(因素A不一定会导致某结果B 有他因/ B结果的发生还有其他的原因)The author unfairly assumes that B determined solely by A. While A is a seemingly important element in determining B, it is hardly the only or even necessarily required one. the author fails to eliminate other possibilities (other possible factors)Forexample….. Therefore, this argument is unwarranted unless other factors relevant have been considered and ruled out.3)无端假设The argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that if only A happens, B is bound to happen. The author, however, failed proving the assumption justified because no further evidence was cited. For example….. It is likely that …………it is also likely th at ……………Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.比如说某国增加sugar的出口量来解决贸易赤字问题,sugar出口的增加一定会导致trade deficit减少吗,可以举个反例啥的,例如该国的进口一直在大幅上升,sugar那点出口增加根本盖不住。

七宗罪

七宗罪
英文中的动词不能作主语。
The problems that are created by environmental contamination(污染)is very hard to resolve.
主谓不一致。主should pay attention the disadvantages globalization may create.
两套主谓宾结构中间没有连词。加上while,变成复杂句。
There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.
There be 句型后面的名词再加动词时不要用原形。 Think--thinking
Pay attention介词搭配to, 类似有reason for
Solution to
Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.
代词距离名词较远时要看它的单复数。
Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.
写作语法“七宗罪”
1. Employee can get more benefits from telecommucating than employer.
可数名词永远不能单独使用。
英语里面的任何一个可数名词,前面必须加上限定词, the/an/ a/this/that/ my等

GMAT高分心经汇总2

GMAT高分心经汇总2

780,M51,V45考试过程:考前嘴硬说不紧张,其实还是很紧张的,还冲着LP发火(这在平常是绝对不敢的)。

在做完题目后,我回答完所有的调查问题,心里反而不紧张了,心想要是分数不怎么样,也无所谓,大不了重考就是。

今天做题目的感觉实在是太差了。

根据NN们的经验,今天我是下定决心math每题都做2遍,保证不错粗心题。

结果做到后10题时直后悔做的太慢,差点没做完。

真是应了前几天NN 们所说,7月后数学太麻烦了,大部分题目都是又臭又长。

我做完math后只剩下2分钟,更可悲的是一道数学题竟然花了5分钟没做出来,闭着眼睛选了一个。

而且真是非常奇怪,我做的题目37题如一题,基本上是个个难缠,只碰到不多于5个的所谓傻子题,到了最后,题目还长长的,是不是我前面做错很多题啊?当我做verbal时,反而想开了,碰到实在搞不明白的题目我就猜猜猜,不让每一道错题影响下一题。

阅读感觉很顺很好,语法自己知道的有2题没把握,逻辑有2题没把握。

我心里大致估算verbal里没把握的都是错的,有把握的里面可能会粗心错4道,总共8道。

加上数学一题肯定错,而且做出来的math题目可能会有2-3题的错。

750肯定是到不了了。

为了750,我不惜延期了40天,看来还是水平不够啊。

Click后,我呆住了,780分,M51,V45。

这是我的成绩吗?不过还是要等到作文成绩后再决定。

现在只能祈祷,作文也出个好成绩。

关于考试的体会:从我考试的经历来看,考试的时候不要被暂时的挫折影响,该错的题目就让它错吧,每一道题目都要努力做好,坚持下去,胜利就在前方。

我感觉到ETS的判分标准应该是对每个人都是公平的,成绩很大程度上不是由错题的数量决定的,而是由题目的难度决定的。

如果你做题的时候觉得很难,有些题目没有把握,往往可能是好事。

我们不能决定ETS给我们题目的难度,但我们可以控制自己的情绪,让自己在考试时发挥出最大的能量。

碰到题目看不懂,做不出来,一定要在自己事前限定的时间内猜一个。

6分的gmat AA模版

6分的gmat AA模版

AA Tip:1. 我用的是800分大牛的AA 模版,但根据实际经验,对各段稍作精简,再排了序(挑出常考到的高频理由)。

2. AA无需它法,只要把这些理由背熟!3. 画线处为经典的段首、尾句式,请务必背熟、灵活运用!因为各段内容可以现编,也常常编的是废话反复说,但有了这样漂亮的段首、尾来保障结构,就安全多了。

非常经典的开头、结尾――看完题目就开始直接打这两段,边打边想理由!(经典)开头段模板The conclusion endorsed 认可,支持in this argument is that…. Several reasons are offered in support of this argument. First of all, the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…(What’s more, he also assumes that …) At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that the conclusion is based on some dubious不可靠的assumptions and the reasoning is biased due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of本质,本身evidence provided to justify the conclusion. A careful examination would review how groundless this conclusion is.(经典)结尾段模板To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. Accordingly 因此, it is imprudent不谨慎的for the author to claim that…To make this argument logically acceptable, the author would have to show that…In addition, to solidify巩固,具体化the conclusion, the author should provide concrete evidence as well to demonstrate that…Only with more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal. (感官上的、情感上的呼吁、请求)(结尾中复述的理由就copy/paste开头中的理由)高频理由(按频率由高到低排列)时序性因果攻击Firstly, the author is engaged in ‘after this, therefore, because of this’reasoning. The line of reasoning is that because A happened before B, the former caused the latter. However, this reasoning is fallacious 谬误的unless other possible causal factors have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C. As a result, any decision aimed at addressing the problem of B must be based on a more thorough investigation to gather data in order to narrow down and locate the actual cause of B.同时性因果攻击Secondly, the author’s solution rests on the assumption that A is the cause of B just because A coincided with B同时发生. However, a mere positional 位置上的correlation does not necessarily prove a causal relationship. In addition, all other prospective causes of B, such as C and D, must be ruled out. Without detailed analysis of the real source of B, it would be groundless to attribute B to A.错误类比攻击Additionally, it is highly doubtful that strategies drawn from A are applicable to B. However, differences between these two clearly outweigh the similarities, therefore making the analogy much less valid正当的、有效的. For example, C and D all affect A but virtually absent in B. Accordingly, we can see that A and B are so dissimilar that B is unlikely to experience the same consequence if it adopts A’s strategies.非此即彼攻击Last but not least, the author unfairly assumes that a reader must make a either-or choice. However, the argument fails to rule out possibility that adjusting A and B mightproduce better results. Moreover, if the author is wrong in the assumption that A and B are the only causes of the problem, thus the most effective solution might include a complex of other factors—such as C and D. In any event, the author provides no justification for the mutually exclusive choice imposed on the reader.必要性攻击In the first place, the author unfairly assumes that B was determined solely by A. While A is a seemingly important element in determining B, it is hardly the only or even necessarily required element. This assumption overlooks other crucial criteria in determining B—such as C, D. Without accounting for these potential factors, the author concludes too hastily草率地、匆忙地that …is the best way to achieve goals.充分性攻击In the second place, the author’s solution rests on the assumption that A is sufficient to give birth to the desired goals. However, if it turns out that B is due to a combination of factors, some of which will remain unchanged in the future, such as C and D, only A might have no impact on B.选择性样本攻击 A threshold 门槛(比喻)开始problem is that the author provides no evidence to claim that the general group as a whole is of the same characteristic. The example cited, while suggestive of this trend, is insufficient to warrant that the sample is representative of the whole group. For example, I question that…Therefore, such evidence would be obviously unrepresentative. In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious for the author to draw any conclusion at all.(与“选择性样本攻击”较类似) 样本代表性攻击Moreover, a possible methodology problem in the argument is that it is of bias. The term ‘so many’ is too vague to be statistically meaningful. It is very possible that workers who were more interested in the survey might be likely to respond to the questionnaire. Lacking in the information about the number of workers surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to assess the validity of the survey. For instance, if 1000 workers were surveyed but only 10 responded, the result should be highly suspect. Because the author fails to account for other interpretations, the survey would be useless in concluding that….其他理由忽略他因攻击Thirdly, the author has focused only on A. A more detailed analysis would reveal that other factors far outweigh the factor on which the author focuses. For example, C. Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the causes, it is presumptuous for the author to claim that A solely determined B.因果倒置攻击At last, it is possible that the author has confused cause with effect. Perhaps A was a response to B. Since the author fails to account for this possibility, the claim that …is completely unwarranted没根据的、无理由的.样本数量攻击Another problem that seriously weakens the logic of this argument is that the survey cited is based on too small a sample to be reliable. Offered in support of the argument,the only evidence is that…. Unless it can be shown that the sample is typical of all general group, the fact that … is groundless to claim that…Loaded question和诚实性攻击What’s more, the methodology方法of the survey is problematic 有问题的for two reasons. For one thing, we are not informed whether the survey provided only 3 alternatives. If it did, the respondents, who might very well prefer another choice not provided in the survey, might be forced to give up their preferences. For another thing, we are not informed whether the survey responses were anonymous or confidential秘密的. The respondents might supply responses favored by their superiors who might conduct the survey. Both events would lead this survey unreliable, let alone draw the conclusion that…样本时效性攻击Last but not least, another flaw that significantly undermines this argument is that the author neglects to indicate how recently the survey was actually conducted. When used to generally claim a particular group, the samples should be close enough to support the generalization, in order to prevent historical changes from invalidating the generalization. All we know is that the survey is recently published. The less recent the survey itself, the less reliable the results to demonstrate that…差异概念攻击To begin with, we must establish the meaning of the vague concept A. If the term were synonymous with同义的、同类的B, the evidence cited would strongly support the argument. However, A may be defined in other terms such as C and D. Accordingly, the author has drawn the conclusion too hastily due to the ignorance of other definitions of A.范围内推攻击What’s more, the most egregious[ɪ'gri:dʒəs]极坏的;异乎寻常的reasoning error in this argument is that the author uses evidence pertaining to(与…有关系的,附属…的,为…固有的~to) a general group on the basis of a particular B. Even if the reasoning may be sound in general sense, the particular situation in which B is involved may not be representative of the entire general group. It is possible that... If this is the case, the claim that… is ill founded.不随时变攻击Moreover, the author unfairly assumes that A will remain unchanged over the next decades. However, a mere recent one-year A is insufficient to claim that. Statistics from such limited anecdotal 轶事的、趣闻的evidence is not a good indicator for this trend. In addition, it is possible that in the future, this trend would greatly fluctuate or even reverse, then the adoption of the author’s proposal might give birth to B, however, it might also have a negative impact on C1 and, in turns, C2. Admittedly, this argument would be even weaker and weaker each day as time goes by.。

GMAT写作七宗罪详细分析

GMAT写作七宗罪详细分析

GMAT写作七宗罪详细分析1.构建逻辑错误:这是最常见的漏洞,阅读文章和听力录音之间存在不一致或者缺乏逻辑推理的问题。

解决这个问题的方法是在阅读和听力中寻找一致的信息,并且在写作中强调这些信息的重要性。

2.事实与观点混淆:有时候,听力录音中提到的是个别观点或者例子,而阅读文章表明这些例子并不代表全部真相。

在写作中,要清晰地区分事实和观点,并提供适当的证据和解释支持自己的观点。

3.信息纵观不明:GMAT写作考查考生对于文章主旨及关键信息的理解,所以在写作中要清楚地传达主要内容,并突出重点。

可以列出关键点,以确保写作中没有遗漏重要信息。

4.逻辑推理困难:有时候,听力录音中的理由和例子并不与阅读文章中的论点完全一致,这会使得写作变得困难。

为了解决这个问题,可以更仔细地分析并评估听力录音和阅读文章中的论证,找出他们之间的共同点和不同点,并寻找真正的逻辑推理。

5.信息细节过载:有时候,阅读文章和听力录音中提供了大量细节,但这些细节并不对解决问题有实质性的帮助。

写作要尽量避免过多关注这些细节,而是集中在问题的核心点上,提供简洁但有力的论点。

6.概念混淆:有时候,GMAT写作的题目涉及到一些抽象或技术性的概念,这可能导致解释不清或者混淆概念。

写作应该尽可能简明扼要地解释这些概念,并提供具体的例子或者解释说明,以确保读者能够理解。

7.语法和拼写错误:最后一个七宗罪是语法和拼写错误。

GMAT写作的得分也包括对语言使用的评估。

为了避免这个问题,写作前应该充分准备,尽量使用简单而流畅的语法结构,并检查文章的拼写和语法错误。

总体而言,GMAT写作考察考生的关键阅读、理解和写作能力。

通过注意以上七个七宗罪并提供适当的解决方案,考生可以在写作中展示出自己的能力,从而获得更好的评分。

AWA 七宗罪写作模板

AWA 七宗罪写作模板

GMAT Essay Model开头段The conclusion endorsed in this argument is that…Several reasons are offered in support of this argument. First of all, the author points out that… In addition, the author reasons that… What’s more, he also assumes that … At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that the conclusion is based on some dubious assumptions and the reasoning is biased due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of evidence provided to justify the conclusion. A careful examination would review how groundless this conclusion is.AWA七宗罪结论无据(other factors)The author assumes that A is due to B.However, B may be an important contributing factor but not necessary the only one. For example, such factors as… and ……may account for A.Without taking into account other essential factors, the assumption is unsupportable. The author has to rule out other factors that may lead to the conclusion.无因果联系The author falsely establishes a causal relationship.The mere fact that A is somewhat correlated with B is insufficient to establish a causal relationship.For example...Without taking into account the real relationship between two events, the assumption is unreasonable.The author has to provide more concrete evidence to prove a causal relationship between A and B.错误类比The author assumes that A is analogous to BHowever, their discrepancy outweighs their similarities. The author actually makes a false analogy.For example, A and B will be poles apart if…Without taking into account such discrepancy, the assumption is groundless.The author has to provide the A resembles B in all aspects.时地全等The author assumes that conditions of will remain unchanged as they were before. However, the future is uncertain. The argument commits a fallacy of “All things are equal”.For example…Without taking into account such possibilities, the assumption is ungrounded.The author has to rule out other possibilities that may lead to the conclusion.二者择一The author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives.And by applying such an “either-or” reasoning, the author actually presents a false dilemma.For example, there could have other possibilities that…Without taking account into other options, the assumption is unfair.The author has to rule out other options that may lead to the conclusion.可疑调查(gratuitous assumption)The evidence quoted is intended to support the author’s claim that….However, the evidence is too vague to be informative.For example…Without taking into account such potential issues, the issues may portrait a distorted view of…….and mislead the mass audience.The author has to provide the evidence to rule out that possibility.样本不足The author relies on the assumption that A is typical of B as a whole.However, the evidence quoted is too limited to substantiate the assumption.For example, it is entirely possible that……Without taking into account such cases, the assumption is unwarranted.The author has to provide the evidence that A is representative of the whole group.结尾段To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. Accordingly, it is imprudent for the author to claim that…. To make this argument logically acceptable, the author would have to show that…. In addition, to solidify the conclusion, the author should provide concrete evidence as well to demonstrate that…. Only with more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.。

枝干--各部分的复习

枝干--各部分的复习

枝干——各个部分的复习(1)math在我写的那篇机经里已经说过了,GMAT里的数学似乎有变难的趋势,所以即令勤奋聪慧如CD诸友者,仍未必能够轻松拿下数学。

因此我觉得这部分还是应该引起大家的重视。

我感觉,数学部分的复习还是最好从基本的概念开始,新东方老师的三本书我都有,吴强,钱永强,陈向东。

我感觉各有千秋,数学概念方面总结的都比较好。

但我本人比较喜欢吴强那一本,尽管里面有不少错误,但那本书里确实有不少很不错的解题思路,概率、统计和排列组合部分也总结了不少的难题,对于数学复习来说帮助不小。

数学准备的第二步应该就是OG了,我希望大家注意一点,那就是OG数学前面的题目确实很简单,但做到后面就会发现题目越来越难,换言之就是水平越来越高。

我第一次备考就是只做了ps的前100题,当时真的是狂妄的要命——就这题拿来考我?笑话!可是和逻辑一样,当我发现根本不是那么简单的时候一切都已经晚了。

这次备考OG数学认认真真的作了两遍。

我感觉解题思路对于math部分来说似乎不如verbal那么重要,但是语言表达方面却绝对值得引起大家重视,要知道因为不熟悉语言表达在math上失分是很冤的。

第三步就是狒狒宝典和机经了,那些题目确实很有价值,但我觉得大家最好还是以掌握解题思路为主,切勿强记答案。

原因有三,一、因为我们不可能把几百道题的答案全部准确地记下来;二、考试的时候的题目未必和宝典上的题目一致,说不定换了数字;三、即使考试的时候遇到了相似题目我觉得大概也没有谁敢直接去点答案,原因就是上面说的第二条,多数的情况就是会把真正考试的题目去和记忆中的题目进行比较,而这样很费时间。

但是时间对于考试来说又是至关重要的,所以我觉得宝典和机经的作用就在于让我们达到有宝典如无宝典,有机经如无机经的境界——一切了然于胸,无惧千变万化。

(当然了,我还差得远,不过我的数学水平基本上是等而下之,大家比我强得多,达到这样的境界只是时间问题)。

最后,也就是考前的阶段我觉得还是要回归OG和概念以及专有名词,把不熟悉的题目再作一作,基本上问题就不算大了。

七宗罪

七宗罪

ArgumentIn this argument the author reaches the conclusion that.... The basis for this recommendation is that.... An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that...(The author cites...as an example in support of this recommendation). At first glance, the author's argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument.In the first place,In the second place,In the third place,In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for.... As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence to prove that.... To better assess the argument, we need additionaldetailed information about...so that we can establish the conclusion whether....严重推荐:Argument之七宗罪第一宗罪:无因果联系The author commits a fallacy(谬误) of causal oversimplification. The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality (因果关系). However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D.第二宗罪Insufficient-sampleThe evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a fewrecent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.第三宗罪: 错误类比(based on a false analogy )<横向>The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do....第四宗罪all things are equal<纵向>The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that....第五宗罪Either-Or choiceThe author assumes that AA and BB are mutually(互相)exclusive(专一的)alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice. Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results.第六宗罪survey is doubtfulThe poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.第七宗罪gratuitous(无理由的)assumptionThe author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that....However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility。

七宗罪英语作文

七宗罪英语作文

七宗罪英语作文The concept of the Seven Deadly Sins has long been a subject of fascination and moral reflection. These sins—pride, greed, wrath, envy, lust, gluttony, and sloth—are considered the root of many societal ills.Pride, often seen as the most grievous sin, can lead to arrogance and a disregard for the feelings and needs of others. It is the sin of self-importance, which can alienate individuals from their community and foster a sense of superiority.Greed, the insatiable desire for more, whether it be wealth, power, or status, can drive people to act unethically and harm the environment and others for personal gain.Wrath, or uncontrollable anger, can lead to destructive behavior and conflict. It can poison relationships and lead to a cycle of retaliation that benefits no one.Envy, the feeling of discontent with one's own possessions or achievements in comparison to others, can breed resentment and a negative outlook on life.Lust, the excessive desire for sexual pleasure, can lead to the objectification of others and a disregard for emotional connections and consent.Gluttony, the overindulgence in food or drink, can harm one's health and lead to a lack of appreciation for the simple pleasures in life.Sloth, the avoidance of physical or mental work, can result in a life devoid of purpose and a failure tocontribute positively to society.Understanding and recognizing these sins is the first step towards personal growth and the betterment of society. By striving to overcome these vices, we can cultivate virtues such as humility, generosity, patience, kindness, moderation, and diligence.。

3 作文万能理由七件功和七宗罪

3 作文万能理由七件功和七宗罪

万能理由:七件功1.Of/among all thebeneficial/rewarding ingredients/elements/factors of ○○○, convenience/creativity seems to be the first to come into our minds. It makes …2.*** can broaden our horizon, enlarge our scope of knowledge and enhance our understanding/comprehension of the essence of life.3.*** provides us with both convenience and privilege.4.… will meet the society’s needs, physically and psychologically. , environmentally and economically.academically and practically/spontaneous5.*** will surely win the consentaneous/universal appreciation/favor of the public.6.*** is a safe cure for the problem/issue of ○○○ (cyber crime/environmental pollution/traffic jam/…)7.Nothing but *** can play an indispensable role in (the cultivation of one’s personality/the establishment of a society ofharmony/building of a peaceful world).万能理由:七宗罪1.The goal/objective of buildinga harmonious society may fail with the negative/vicious influence/effect/impact of ***.2.*** will inevitably bringgreat/gigantic/enormous/coloss ous losses to both the individual and the whole society.3.*** will undoubtedly waste social resources of all kinds.4.It is thus justifiably claimed that *** will do more harm than good to not only the individuals, but the whole society.5.*** will prove an epitome of the discord/disharmony of the society/the relationship between man andsociety/nature.6.The recent statistics issued by CASS, Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, will convincingly prove the negativity of ***.7.Steve Jobs, the late co-founder of Apple Inc., said, “light is darkness, a devil in disguise.” To dig deeper into the remark, everything benign in appearance has its vicious aspects in essence. So is ***.。

3 作文万能理由七件功和七宗罪

3 作文万能理由七件功和七宗罪

1.Of all the beneficial ingredients/elements/factors of ○○○, *** seems to bethe first to come into our minds.2.*** can broaden our horizon, enlarge our scope of knowledge and enhanceour understanding/comprehension of the essence of life.3.*** provides us with both convenience and privilege.4.*** will meet our needs, physically and psychologically.5.*** will surely win the consentaneous/universal appreciation/favor of thepublic.6.*** is a safe cure for the problem of ○○○ (cyber crime/environmentalpoll ution/traffic jam/…)7.Nothing but *** can play an indispensable role in (the cultivation of one’spersonality/the establishment of a society of harmony).1.The goal of building a harmonious society may fail with the negativeinfluence/effect/impact of ***.2.*** will inevitably bring great losses to both the individual and the wholesociety.3.*** will undoubtedly waste social resources of all kinds.4.It is thus justifiably claimed that *** will do more harm than good to notonly the individuals, but the whole society.5.*** will prove an epitome of the discord/disharmony of the society/therelationship between man and society/nature.6.The recent statistics issued by CASS, Chinese Academy of Social Sciences,will convincingly prove the negativity of ***.7.Steve Jobs, the late co-founder of Apple Inc., said, “light is darkness, a devilin disguise.” To dig deeper into the remark, everything benign inappearance has its vicious aspects in essence. So is ***.。

七宗罪让你此生难成大器【高考英语阅读素材】

七宗罪让你此生难成大器【高考英语阅读素材】

七宗罪让你此生难成大器【高考英语阅读素材】Yeah that’s right; you heard me I’m talking to you I’m calling you out.是,你没看错......说的就是你说的就是你呢!I’m looking you in the eyes, (ok well, not really since you are probably reading this article, but figuratively, I am burning a cyclops type hole in your face right now) and telling you that you don’t stand a chance.我此刻死盯着你的眼睛(好吧,也不是那么名副其实的盯着,因为你看到的是这篇文章不是我,但请想象,我现在正在死盯着你,我的镭射眼大概已经看穿你的脸了)告诉你,你一点儿机会都没有。

I’m telling you that if you can read this article, look through this list and not claim it as your own, then you should be a little worried.我肯定,如果你看完这文章这罪状还不觉得这是你的问题所在,那你就该发愁了。

Actually, you should be very worried. You should drop everything and immediately question your existence on earth. You should find a mirror, look yourself in the eyes, raise yourhand and slap yourself in the face.其实你该愁死了才对。

20XX年1月1日gmat考试作文AA机

20XX年1月1日gmat考试作文AA机

2012年1月1日gmat考试作文AA机经2012年1月1日gmat考试作文AA机经GMAT考试已于12月27日更换题库,以下是2011年12月的GMAT作文AA部分机经更新,更新日期从11年12月27日起至12年1月1日,目前共39题。

1.v1.alice追梦:一个衣服店,卖流行衣服,五年都经营很好。

这次准备再开125家retail stores。

因为卖的时流行,而且管理也不错,再加上CEO原来是rock star,所以肯定也会成功。

因此,劝大家都去买这个公司的股票。

V2. larrylw:AA服装店前摇滚歌星CEO那篇,写的很爽,因为给的原因多,所以你的字数可以一直往上加。

V3. ksdl : 一个什么crow’s cloth company 要扩大市场份额,他的CEO是个摇滚明心很有号召力,所以某行业分析师建议挂高达投资者投资这个公司股票V1.某集团的某产品在一些连里面销售不错。

所以他们计划打算自己卖(在超市里面)。

有一个投资经理忽悠客户叫他们赶紧买这家公司的股票。

因为上面的原因。

还有一个更搞笑的,该公司CEO是“前”摇滚明星。

具有recognition知名度,能号召Young 什么的购买力。

V2.讲的是一个young rising company 扩张了自己的业务,并且为了company的成功给出了两种预测——第一个是由于员工的极力推荐,可以使这个这个公司的发展获得成功。

第二个是由于该company 的CEO是一个rock star,通过该CEO的star power也可以促使这个young rising company 获得成功V3 说有间clothing is the new trend for youth apparel,然后financial analyst 建议investment firm to purchase this company based on the following。

GMAT写作类比方法概述

GMAT写作类比方法概述

类比在ARGUMENT中的运用
Argument是驳论性文章,也就是找一段文字中的错误,进行有理有据的驳斥。

一般来说,argument比issue容易些,因为错误的类别其实很固定的,俗称“七宗罪”。

在这七宗罪中就有三宗是跟类比有关系的,分别是:misapplied generalization(概括误用,即以大推小);hasty generalization(匆忙概括,即以小推大);faulty analogy(错误类比)。

不管是哪一种错误,只要是跟类比扯上关系,在驳斥时,我们都可以把它简化成一件事---找相异性。

因为对于类比关系而言,它成立的前提和基础就是相似性,所以只要找到所比较两者间的相异性,那么再有逻辑的推理也是不成立的。

我们举个很简单的例子来说明这个道理。

如有这样一个观点:
你应该请在埃里克的派对中请的那支相同的乐队,因为他们很棒
据360教育集团介绍,在进行驳斥时,千万不要花时间去论证埃里克所请的那支乐队是否很棒,这不是问题的关键。

关键是找到两个派对的相异性,只要能证明这两个派对没有可比性,那么无论那支乐队棒或不棒,都不该请。

我们可以从派对参与人数(比如你的派对1000人,埃里克只有10人),派对参与对象(你的派对全是年轻人,埃的派对平均年龄88),派对场所(你的派对在户外大广场,埃的在室内)等等方面提出假设,进行驳斥。

THESEVENDEADLYSIN(一)(400字作文)

THESEVENDEADLYSIN(一)(400字作文)

THE SEVEN DEADLY SIN(一)_400字
PROLOGUE
我们都是已死之人。

THE SEVEN DEADLY SIN顾名思义,七宗罪。

在这个世界里,每个人都有一种罪,这种罪不仅是罪,也是他们的
能力,根据罪分为七不八个种族。

傲慢(PRIDE)、暴怒(WRATH)、懒惰(SLOTH)、贪婪(GREED)、嫉妒(ENVY)、暴食(GLUTTONY)、淫欲(LUST),以及王族原罪(SIN)。

根据这样分理,原罪的王城是权利的象征,种族为了争夺领地,随时随地爆发战争。

而在这个世界中的人,都是已经死了的,不会再死第二次了,不管你死相如何凄惨,你都会在某一地方重生,除了被八个种族的人杀死的人。

而在这里的人,这里的十岁才等于现实的一岁而故事就从这里开始。

六年级:童茹楠。

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一、七宗罪的记忆方法:因、果、证分析了两个晚上的AA,发现“七宗罪”确实是好东西,就是那些“罪”太多、而且过于零散,很难记忆。

因此将七宗罪分类整理了一下,按照论证的原因、结果、论证过程三部分,归为三个类别:因、果、证1、因就是原因上的问题,有以下三个:可疑调查样本不足结论无据2、果就是结论上的问题,有以下两个:无因果联系二者择一3、证就是论证过程上的问题,有以下两个,纵向横向各一个:错误类比(横向)时地全等(纵向)这样,只要记住了三字诀:因、果、证,就很容易记牢全部七宗罪了。

顺便分析一下本月JJ的一篇AA:“Our total sales have increased this year by 20 percent since we added a pharmacy section to ourgrocery store. Clearly, the customer’s main concern is the convenience afforded by one-stopshopping. // 无因果联系,可能另有他因。

The surest way to increase our profits over the next coupleof years, therefore, is to add a clothing department along with an automotive supplies and repairshop. We should also plan to continue adding new departments and services, such as a restaurantand a garden shop, in subsequent years. // 时地全等Being the only store in the area that offers such a range of services will give us a competitive advantage over other local stores.” // 结论无据附:七宗罪第一宗罪:无因果联系The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification. The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D. 第二宗罪样本不足Insufficient-sampleThe evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.第三宗罪: 错误类比(based on a false analogy )<横向>The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do....第四宗罪时地全等all things are equal<纵向>The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that....第五宗罪二者择一Either-Or choiceThe author assumes that AA and BB are mutually exclusive alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author provides no reasonfor imposing an either-or choice. Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results.第六宗罪可疑调查survey is doubtfulThe poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.第七宗罪结论无据gratuitous assumptionThe author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that.... However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility二、七宗罪超级turbo增强版Fallacies of DistractionFalse Dilemma: two choices are given when in fact there are three options From Ignorance: because something is not known to be true, it is assumed to be falseSlippery Slope: a series of increasingly unacceptable consequences is drawn Complex Question: two unrelated points are conjoined as a single proposition Appeals to Motives in Place of SupportAppeal to Force: the reader is persuaded to agree by forceAppeal to Pity: the reader is persuaded to agree by sympathy Consequences: the reader is warned of unacceptable consequences Prejudicial Language: value or moral goodness is attached to believing the authorPopularity: a proposition is argued to be true because it is widely held to be trueChanging the SubjectAttacking the Person:(1) the person's character is attacked(2) the person's circumstances are noted(3) the person does not practise what is preachedAppeal to Authority:(1) the authority is not an expert in the field(2) experts in the field disagree(3) the authority was joking, drunk, or in some other way not being serious Anonymous Authority: the authority in question is not namedStyle Over Substance: the manner in which an argument (or arguer) is presented is felt to affect the truth of the conclusionInductive FallaciesHasty Generalization: the sample is too small to support an inductive generalization about a populationUnrepresentative Sample: the sample is unrepresentative of the sa mple as a wholeFalse Analogy: the two objects or events being compared are relevantly dissimilarSlothful Induction: the conclusion of a strong inductive argument is denied despite the evidence to the contraryFallacy of Exclusion: evidence which would change the outcome of an inductive argument is excluded from considerationFallacies Involving Statistical SyllogismsAccident: a generalization is applied when circumstances suggest that there should be an exceptionConverse Accident : an exception is applied in circumstances where a generalization should applyCausal FallaciesPost Hoc: because one thing follows another, it is held to cause the other Joint effect: one thing is held to cause another when in fact they are both the jointeffects of an underlying causeInsignificant: one thing is held to cause another, and it does, but it is insignificant compared to other causes of the effectWrong Direction: the direction between cause and effect is reversed Complex Cause: the cause identified is only a part of the entire cause of the effectMissing the PointBegging the Question: the truth of the conclusion is assumed by the premises Irrelevant Conclusion: an argument in defense of one conclusion instead proves a different conclusionStraw Man: the author attacks an argument different from (and weaker than) the opposition's best argumentFallacies of AmbiguityEquivocation: the same term is used with two different meanings Amphiboly: the structure of a sentence allows two different interpretations Accent: the emphasis on a word or phrase suggests a meaning contrary to what the sentence actually saysCategory ErrorsComposition: because the attributes of the parts of a whole have a certain property, it is argued that the whole has that propertyDivision: because the whole has a certain property, it is argued that the parts have that propertyNon SequiturAffirming the Consequent: any argument of the form: If A then B, B, therefore A Denying the Antecedent: any argument of the form: If A then B, Not A, thus Not BInconsistency: asserting that contrary or contradictory statements are both true Syllogistic ErrorsFallacy of Four T erms: a syllogism has four termsUndistributed Middle: two separate categories are said to be connected because they share a common propertyIllicit Major: the predicate of the conclusion talks about all of something, but the premises only mention some cases of the term in the predicateIllicit Minor: the subject of the conclusion talks about all of something, but the premises only mention some cases of the term in the subjectFallacy of Exclusive Premises: a syllogism has two negative premisesFallacy of Drawing an Affirmative Conclusion From a Negative Premise: as the name impliesExistential Fallacy: a particular conclusion is drawn from universal premises Fallacies of ExplanationSubverted Support (The phenomenon being explained doesn't exist)Non-support (Evidence for the phenomenon being explained is biased) Untestability (The theory which explains cannot be tested)Limited Scope (The theory which explains can only explain one thing)Limited Depth (The theory which explains does not appeal to underlying causes)Fallacies of DefinitionT oo Broad (The definition includes items which should not be included)T oo Narrow (The definition does not include all the items which shouls be included)Failure to Elucidate (The definition is more difficult to understand than the word orconcept being defined)Circular Definition (The definition includes the term being defined as a part of the definition)Conflicting Conditions (The definition is self-contradictory)References。

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