写作课 笔记2： 真题2012-2010 大作文引子部分
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2010年
关于手机用户量的变化在发达国家和发展中国家上升程度不同
本文思路：
1.引子：发达国家上升慢，然而发展中国家上升特别快
As described in the chart, we can see tha t dramatic changes with regard to the mobile phone subscriptions have taken place across the world. According to figures above,the number of mobile phone users in developed countries goes up slightly, while the past few years have witnessed a sharp rise in the phone use of developing economies, from 0.3 billion in 2000 to 4 billion in 2008.
2011年轿车品牌市场份额
国产份额：上升最快
日系份额：下降
美系份额：上升其次
注意：和2010年相比，此处是三个，无非多了一个
引子：
思路日系下降然而美系上升；但是令人最惊讶的是国系上升特别快
As described in the chart, we can see that dramatic changes with regard to the market share of cars made in Japan, America, and China have taken place. According to the figures above, the market share for cars produced in Japan declines, while an increasing number of people prefer auto brands from America.
Most surprisingly（逻辑词），the past few years have witnessed a sharp rise in the market share of domestic cars.最高明之处在于换词，这三句话怎么不重复--- 市场份额这个概念。