专题05 应用文写作(第01期)-2023届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编(教师版)

专题05 应用文写作（第01期）-2023届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编【江苏省百校联考2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次考试】
假定你是李华, 为了丰富学生的暑假生活,你所在的社区提供了丰富多彩的托管服务活动。

请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括：
1.活动的目的；
2.活动的内容；
3.活动的反响。

注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Summer Day Care Programmes in My Community
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】Summer Day Care Programmes in My Community
To provide both enrichment and child care, my community organized a series of activities during the summer holidays.
School children were completely immersed in the extracurricular courses, ranging from judo, baking, music and chess to computer programming, which were on offer for students attending day care programs during summer vacation. The kids ran toward each other with open arms in the playground, beautiful melodies float out of the classrooms, and the whole classroom was enveloped by the tantalizing aroma of freshly baked cookies.
The programmes which have been well-received, have relieved burden for both parents and children.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生用新闻报道所在的社区提供的丰富多彩的托管服务活动。

【详解】词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
完全地：completely→fully
围绕、笼罩：envelope→surround
缓解：relieve→reduce
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The programmes have been well-received. The programmes have also relieved burden for both parents and children.
拓展句：The programmes which have been well-received have relieved burden for both parents and children.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To provide both enrichment and child care, my community organized a series of activities during the summer holidays. (运用了不定式做目的状语)
[高分句型2] School children were completely immersed in the extracurricular courses, ranging from judo, baking, music and chess to computer programming, which were on offer for students attending day care programs during summer vacation. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【江苏省镇江市2022-2023学年高三上学期期初】假定你是李华，你所在的城市将举办主题“讲好城市故事，传播城市形象”（Our Story，Our City）的英语演讲大赛，你的留学生朋友Jimmy想要了解比赛的具体情况，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 比赛的时间地点；
2. 比赛的具体要求；
3. 比赛的意义。

注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jimmy,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jimmy,
Knowing that you are interested in the English speech contest, I am glad to provide some detailed information.
The contest, whose theme is “Our Story, Our City”, will start at 9 a.m. on October 15th in the city hall. Contestants are supposed to tell their own stories related to our city in no more than three minutes. The speech will be judged not only by its originality and vividness, but also by its fluency and accuracy. I believe it will boost our city image.
Please contact me if further information is needed. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求考生给留学生朋友Jimmy写封电子邮件，告知你城市将举办主题“讲好城市故事，传播城市形象”的英语演讲大赛。

邮件内容包括：比赛的时间地点；比赛的具体要求；比赛的意义。

【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→ offer
相关：related → relevant
比赛：contest→ match
需要：need→ require
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing that you are interested in the English speech contest, I am glad to provide some detailed information.
拓展句：Because I know that you are interested in the English speech contest, I am glad to provide some detailed information.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The contest, whose theme is “Our Story, Our City”, will start at 9 a.m. on October 15th in the city hall. （运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The speech will be judged not only by its originality and vividness, but also by its fluency and accuracy. （运用了not only…but also并列的结构）
主席李华。

你从官网得知，青少年艺术节(Youth Art Festiva)组委会正在招募今年英语戏剧比赛的承办学校。

请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动，内容包括：
1.承办条件；
2.初步计划。

注意: 1.词数80~100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

To whom it may concern,
I am Li Hua, president of the student union in Xin cheng High School.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the student union in Xin cheng High School. On behalf of our school, I am writing to you to apply to be the host school of this year’s English Drama Competition.
I’m convinced that our school is well qualified for hosting this activity. First of all, in the past three years, our school has successfully held three English drama competitions, each of which is widely welcomed and appreciated by all teachers and students. Secondly, as for our arrangement, we will invite professional teachers to join us and give us guidance on English skills. Finally, we will use the English corner to warm up in advance and publicize this drama competition. I believe that the English drama competition held by our school will bring a visual feast to this year’s Youth Art Festival.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。

要求考生代表学校给青少年艺术节(Youth Art Festiva)组委会写一封邮件，申请承办今年的英语戏剧比赛。

1.词汇积累
相信：convinced→sure
首先：first of all→firstly
将……考虑在内：take…into consideration→take…into account
指导：guidance→direction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, as for our arrangement, we will invite professional teachers to join us and give us guidance on English skills.
拓展句：Secondly, as for our arrangement, we will invite professional teachers to join us, who will give us guidance on English skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, in the past three years, our school has successfully held three English drama competitions, each of which is widely welcomed and appreciated by all teachers and students.(运用了非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(运用了
if引导的条件状语从句)
【江苏省扬州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期开学考试】假定你是李华，你的英国网友James 邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。

请用英语写一封回信。

内容包括：
1. 表示同意；
2. 计划拍摄的内容（1~2点）；
3. 邀请对方提建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear James,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear James,
How is everything going? It’s my great privilege to record a short video about my campus life for your classmates. I’m writing to tell you what will be included in the video.
First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture．In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life．
I wish such a video could live up to your expectations．If there is anything that needs improving, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。

请用英语写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：privilege→honor
以……为中心：focus on→center on
此外：In addition→besides
需要：need→require
2.句式拓展：
同义句转化
简单句：I’m writing to tell you what will be included in the video.
拓展句：I’m writing to tell you something that will be included in the video.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture．(使用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作定语)
【高分句型2】In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life．(使用了动名词短语做主语和from which引导的非限制性定语从句。

)
【江苏省南通市海门实验学校2020-2021学年高三上学期学情调研二】假定你是李华，你的美国网友John打算到中国留学，学习汉语和中国文化，发邮件向你了解相关情况。

请给他回复邮件，要点如下：
1.建议他如何准备；
2.感谢他在英语学习上的帮助；
3.期望与他共同在同一所大学学习。

注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
I am glad to hear that you will come to China for further education.
As for how to get ready to study Chinese and Chinese culture, you’d better make adequate preparations in advance. For example, you can attend some Chinese training course to lay a solid language foundation before going to China, which can help you overcome the language barrier quickly when studying and living here. Besides, you should try your best to search for much
information, including the local culture about your destination. So that you can adapt to the life easily.
By the way, thank you for your help with my English. It’s my pleasure to provide you with some assistance. If possible, I am looking forward to studying with you at the same university. And we can continue to help each other.
Yours,
Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。

假定你是李华，你的美国网友John打算到中国留学，学习汉语和中国文化，发邮件向你了解相关情况，请给他根据所给要点回复邮件。

1. 词汇积累
学习：study→ learn
足够的：adequate→ enough
克服：overcome→ get over
另外：besides→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, you should try your best to search for much information, including the local culture about your destination.
拓展句：Besides, you should try your best to search for much information which includes the local culture about your destination.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For example, you can attend some Chinese training course to lay a solid language foundation before going to China, which can help you overcome the language barrier quickly when studying and living here. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am glad to hear that you will come to China for further education.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
友Michael打算来中国旅行，让你推荐一个旅游胜地。

请你给Michael回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。

注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Dear Michael,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Michael,
I’m glad that you are coming to visit China. There is one city I want to recommend to you.
Bejing, the capital of China, has a long history. Many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, so there are many majestic buildings. If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I advise you to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. Besides, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted. Wishing you a pleasant trip in China!
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求考生以李华的身份，给你的英国笔友Michael回信，为他推荐一个中国的旅游胜地。

1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：Besides→What’s more
著名的：famous→known
佳肴，特色菜：delicacy→speciality
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, so there are many majestic buildings.
拓展句：Because many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, there are many majestic buildings. 【点睛】[高分句型1] If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I advise you to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. (运用If引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Besid es, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted. (运用that引导定语从句)
国一个中学代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。

请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎辞。

写作要点：
1.表示对客人的欢迎；
2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；
3.表达对客人的祝愿。

写作要求：
1.词数不少于80；
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear American guests,
On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities. As scheduled, we have an English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists of the following activities:
Mini-Ted, singing, spelling bee, story-telling and so on. The show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇欢迎词。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一篇欢迎词：假定你是中学生李华，美国一个中学代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。

请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎辞。

写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3.表达对客人的祝愿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：On behalf of our school（代表我们的学校）；our English Week activities（我们的英语周活动）；As scheduled（按着预定的时间）；consists of the following activities（组成下面的活动）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

同时文中使用高级句子。

As scheduled, we have an English
Talent Show today.句中使用过去分词和省略；Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities I hope we students will benefit from your presence.句中使用定语从句。

【2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三第一次模拟】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris近日结束了埃及（Egypt）之旅。

请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达问候；
2. 询问他旅途收获；
3. 邀请他来中国感受古代中国之美。

注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】One possible version
Dear Chris,
I was so excited once I heard you had come back from Egypt. I’m writing this letter to you hoping that you can share your experiences in Egypt with me as soon as possible. What do you think of your trip? Is Egypt similar to what you’ve learned from your hi story books?
As I know, you are enthusiastic about ancient civilization. The Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world, so I hope you can come to China and explore the beauty of ancient Chinese civilization some time.
I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris近日结束了埃及（Egypt）之旅。

请给他写一封邮件。

1.词汇积累
认为：think of→consider
返回：come back from→return
热衷于：be enthusiastic about→be crazy about
探索：explore→probe into
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world, so I hope you can come to China and explore the beauty of ancient Chinese civilization some time.
拓展句：I hope you can come to China and explore the beauty of ancient Chinese civilization some time because the Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing this letter to you hoping that you can share your experiences in Egypt with me as soon as possible. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I was so excited once I heard you had come back from Egypt. (运用了once引导时间状语从句)
【江苏省扬州市宝应县2022-2023学年高三上学期期初检测】假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为“保护世界野生动植物”的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖。

请给Eric写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.祝贺他获奖；
2.肯定他付出的努力；
3.美好祝愿。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

Dear Eric,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eric,
Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you.
I think it is a prize that you deserve. First of all, you have a talent for art. Secondly, your rich imagination is one of the advantages over other competitors. Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters.
Please accept my congratulations again. I wish you every success in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求考生就“英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为‘保护世界野生动植物’的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖”一事，给Eric写一封电子邮件，肯定他付出的努力，向他表示祝贺。

1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
对……有天赋：have a talent for→have a gift for
此外：furthermore→what’s more
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take inter est in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I wish you every success in the future.
拓展句：May you succeed in the future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和过去分词短语做后置定语)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【江苏省泰州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期期初调研】假定你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片，现招募英文字幕编写者，你想申请加入，内容包括：1. 提出申请；2. 你的优势；3. 期待加入。

注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：英文字幕English subtitles 纪录片documentary
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Hearing that volunteers who can write English subtitles are needed for the coming documentary for the life of senior three students, hardly can I wait to apply for the position.
As a senior student, I have a better understanding of this tough but very meaningful year, because of which I can write more touching and dramatic subtitles for the wonderful scenes in the documentary. Besides, what qualifies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty in writing. Additionally, with enthusiasm and responsibility, I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for it.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

因考生学校英语社团公众号计划为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片，现招募英文字幕编写者，考生想写信申请加入。

要求考生内容包括：提出申请、考生的优势和期待加入三部分。

1.词汇积累
有意义的：m eaningful→ significant
此外：besides → what’s more
考虑：take...into account→take...into consideration
了解：have a good knowledge of→have a better understanding of
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Hearing that volunteers who can write English subtitles are needed for the coming documentary for the life of senior three students, hardly can I wait to apply for the position.
拓展句：As I have heard that volunteers who can write English subtitles are needed for the coming documentary for the life of senior three students, I can hardly wait to apply for the position.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, what qualifies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty in writing. （运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）【高分句型2】Additionally, with enthusiasm and responsibility, I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for it.（运用了助动词do表强调，that引导的同位语从句）。