读后续写微技能之情感描写 课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, making me unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. At the sight of the polar bear’s bloody mouth, she was rooted to the ground,with her face pale with fright. The furry creature launched an attack on the fence, instantly leaving a narrow opening on it.Terrified and scared,we let out a cry of horror with tears streaming down ,hoping someone would come to our rescue. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.
sweating. （我惊恐不已，感觉两腿发抖，手心冒汗。）
形容词，主句
心理+肢体动作描写
3. At the sight of the polar bear’s bloody mouth, she was rooted to the
ground,with her face pale with fright. (一看到熊的血嘴，她一动也不
小试牛刀: 根据所给情节，用本节课所学的句子就此情节续写。 注意情节的合理性和连贯性。
必备素材积累
Thank you!
神态描写：Eyes widened;Mouth opened; Throat tightened;Face turned pale 肢体动作描写:I was rooted to the spot/ground;I could not move an inch;I was frozen with fear;I buried my face in hands;My legs trumbled/shook;My palms sweated;My heart pounded/beat/raced violently
她十分恐慌。发出了一声惊叫，瞳孔放大（眼睛）
How do you feel when you see the snake?
One day ,you were asked to teacher’s office for not finishing the homework.
(你因未完成作业被叫到老师办公室)
心理描写: I was afraid/ frightened/ panicked/scared/terrified out of wits. I was thrown into/be seized with fright/fear/panic/terror/horror. A burst of fright/ fear/panic/terror/horror held me entirely in its power. Panic/terror/horror washed over/flooded over/poured through my body.
动，吓的面无血色)
with的复合结构 肢体动作+神态描写
形容词，主句+with复合结构+非谓语动词 4. Terrified and scared,we let out a cry of horror with tears streaming down ,hoping someone would come to our rescue. (感到恐惧害怕，我们发出了一声 惊叫，期待有人来救我们） 心理+肢体/动作+神态描写
How to show your feeling of fear vividly (生动地)?
2020年7月高考 浙江卷： 遇熊脱险
Glance the given passage , find out the sentences describing the feeling of fear and learn from them.
读后续写微技能训练 ——情感描写
How do you feel when you see the snake? When seeing the snake, I ...
读后续写微技能训练
——情感描写之“恐 惧” Do not “tell” me, but “show” me your feeling of fear.
I was asked to her office.
Feeling in great trouble,I was seized by horror with tears welling up.
Frightened but guilty ,I dropped my head with heart dancing in my stomach.
1. A burst of horror held me entirely in its pove an inch. (一阵恐惧袭来, 将我紧紧包围, 我已经无法动弹)
主句,非谓语动词
心理+肢体动作描写
2. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms
As is described in the given passage, there are many vivid ways to show the feeling of fear.
vivid
ways to show feelings
词组、 细节 句子 描写
肢体/动作描写
神态表情描写 句式
心理描写
看到那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，心跳的很快。
站在它面前，我吓得不敢动， 双腿颤抖手心出汗。 Standing in front of it , I was too scared to move an inch with my legs trembling and palms sweating.
公式2：Adj(feelings), sb did... with...
Extremely frightened ，Jane turned pale, with tears streaming down her chee.ks
惊恐万分，简脸色变得苍白,眼泪从脸颊流淌下来
Panicked , she let out a cry of horror, with her eyes widening.
……
形容词做 状语
非谓语动词
with复合结 构/独立主 格结构
sentences 公式1：Doing..., sb felt... with...
Seeing the dog jump out at me, I was frozen with terror , with my heart beating violently .