最新九年级下册英语书面表达真题汇编(含答案)

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束,在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋时还应增添一份你自己满意的答卷。

请以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题写一篇文章,记录你过去三年中难忘的校园生活,并描述自己对将来学习生活的期望。

文章应包括以下要点:
要求:
① 词数100左右;
② 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
③ 文中需包括所有写作要点,但不要逐字翻译,可适当加入过渡词句,使短文通顺、连贯;
④ 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准:语言规范,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯,书写工整。

My Unforgettable School Life
How time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
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【答案】How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.
In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接着正文写下来,将所给要点翻译出来,分三部分来写,写出“三年所得、三年所失、未来的打算。

2. 先翻译关键词再来组句。

在过去In the past,学到了很多知识learn a lot of knowledge, 对某人感激be grateful to sb, 对我们的老师感激be grateful to our teachers,和同学相处得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相学习,彼此帮助help each other and learn from each other.贫困学生poor students, 尽自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上学迟到be late for school不太爱好体育运动I am not good at sports,在未来In the future…,简要写出自己对未来的规划。

3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆为过去,所以时态上要用一般过去式,最后一项对将来的规划,用一般将来时。

4. 最后一项对未来的规划,既是对所得所失的理解,也是对未来的展望。

5. 写句子时要注意人称和数要一致。

2.(·陕西师大附中中考模拟)书面表达
以“My Weekend Housework”为题,写一篇短文,谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活,并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活,并谈谈你做家务的感受。

提示词:make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...
要求:1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,语意连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等;
4.不少于70词,开头给出,不计入总词数。

My Weekend Housework
I was busy last
weekend.___________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________
【答案】My Weekend Housework
I was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day.
In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed.
I think it was a busy weekend.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如all the day,in the morning,to be honest,like cooking,very much,after breakfast,go to the store,do the shopping,take out,do some washing,make my bed等。

同时I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等宾语从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3.(·江苏中考模拟)某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛,请你根据表格中的提示内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。

注意:
1. 词数90左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress.A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress,we can think actively and work harder.Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them.So we can pass the exams easily.
However,if we have too heavy stress,we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion,to deal with stress,we'd better plan and prepare well.We should also form some good habits,such as enough exercise and healthy diets.Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。

在题目中给出了一张表格,需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。

分析表格可以看到,这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面,第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的;第二个是过多的压力对我们有害;最后发表自己的看法,如何来应对压力。

因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写,这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。

在每一段中加上具体的内容,使段落更加充实。

最后还要补充两点自己的观点。

全文需要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来写。

注意多使用一些好的句式、短语,增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的范文。

作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来,并加上了自己的看法。

作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分,首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。

这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides,还用到了一些复合句,如条件状语从句等;接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处,段首先用however来进行转折,然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短,但是意思很完整;最后作者发表了自己的观点,用了短语in my opinion,还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。

整篇作文意思连贯,语言流畅,层次分明。

4.(·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟)书面表达。

现在提倡全民阅读,某英语网站正在举办以”reading”为题的英语征文活动。

请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,向该网站投稿。

提示:1.读书有哪些好处?
2.中学生可以读哪些书?
3.你的读书计划是什么?
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥。

Reading
________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Reading plays an important rol e in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read o ne book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.
【解析】写作分析:本文需要按照要求以“阅读”为主题写作,要写出读书的好处、中学生
可以读的书、你的读书计划。

按照要求逐条描述即可,但要注意增添相关细节使得文章连贯。

写作亮点:
总起要对reading做一个概括,用到了“plays an important role”(扮演重要的角色)这一搭配,关于读书的好处提到了:open our minds(开阔思维),relax(放松)。

关于可以读的书,介绍了几种文本(textbooks, newspapers and magazine),关于介绍读书计划,描述了自己读书的频率,最后,有引用谚语,也是一个亮点。

5.(·北京中考模拟)友谊是焦渴时的甘泉,黑暗中的明灯;友谊是快乐时的分享,忧伤时的抚慰……
某英文网站正在开展“ Friendship”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最珍视的一段友谊,主要内容包括:你最好的朋友是谁,你们如何成为好朋友的,以及你为什么珍视你们之间的友谊。

提示词语:in trouble, help, encourage, together, treasure, happy
提示问题:Who is your best friend?
How did you become best friends?
Why do you treasure the friendship between you?
As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs friends.__________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
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【答案】As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs friends.A life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone's life.
Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on.
So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,“ Friendship”为主题写一篇短文,谈谈我最珍视的一段友谊。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I believe that……,Friendship is ……,Friends are……,When I lose……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头介绍了友谊的重要性,接下来介绍我的一段友谊,最后指出如何对待你的朋友。

此处lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达。

现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国,实现中国梦而奋斗.请根据下列图示,谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的.作为学生,你又该怎么办?
要求:1、短文需包含提示要点,并适当发挥;
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3、语句通顺,结构合理,书写规范;
4、词数:80词左右.短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数.
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream.
【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream.
In the fields,a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels.In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit,they are busy growing plants.Meanwhile,in hospitals,doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night.Besides,they also take good care of the old.(医生)In our daily life,we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people.(警察)As for scientists,they concentrate more on
scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards.(科学家)As students,what should we do to build our country?I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍为建设美丽中国,实现中国梦,农民,医生,警察和科学家怎样做贡献的。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Now all the Chinese people are……,they are busy……,we can see……,I think……
等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头介绍了为了实现中国梦,中国人正在努力做贡献,接下来介绍农民、医生、警察和科学家如何做贡献的,最后表示我们作为学生应该做的事。

此处make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7.(·山西中考模拟)书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

学会分享很重要。

你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请结合自身的一次经历,写一篇短文,并阐述分享的意义。

要求:1.词数不少于 80;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】It's very important to learn to share with each other.I have many things to share in different ways.For example,I can share some beautiful pictures,my favorite music,different ideas with others face to face or by QQ,email which are widely used.Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.
Emily was lonely and unhappy.Once I found her crying alone for some reasons.It made me worried about her,so I hoped to cheer her up.At first,I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after class.When we knew each other better,I began to talk more about my everyday life with her.As time went by,she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with me.Now we are good friends.
In a word,sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.We can learn a
lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.
【解析】本文属于话题作文,结合自身的一次经历,阐述分享的意义。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如share with,in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容词最高级+名词复数,make sb+形容词,chat with, as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

8.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
中考后暑假即将开始,你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。

旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。

请根据旅行社提供的信息,将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由;
2. 结合游玩国家的情况,自拟希望可以安排的活动,并提出1-2点出游的注意事项;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范;
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting. However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

中考后暑假即将开始,你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。

旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。

要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。

在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

9.(·山东中考模拟)写作
假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。

请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。

2. 陈述自己的理由。

3. 提出至少2条建议。

【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her
have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A
stu dents in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。

此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10.(·陕西师大附中中考模拟)书面表达
每个人都有自己的梦想和理想,为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。

请根据提示内容,以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英文短文,向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。

要求:1.参考提内容,可适当发挥
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整
3. 文中不得出现任何真实(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。

(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。


My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to
be________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.
To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.
All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。

请根据提示内容,以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英文短文,向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。

文章时态用一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。

动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并可适当发挥。

在写作时,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

11.(·广西中考模拟)近几年来,一些学校开设了一些兴趣班(interest classes)或特色课(special classes), 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。

你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。

以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。

请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文,发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语:develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求:1. 短文应包括表格中的信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80左右。

开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a dis cussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my o pinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文,并且已给出了内容提示,所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求,可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如:I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。

另外,可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点,使文章更有条理,次序。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。

首先内容完整,第一段摆出事实,第二段说明别人的的观点,最后说出自己的观点,在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语,例如such as,and so on,However等使句子更有连贯性,及好的句型表达,例如:Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. Th ey think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

12.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下图),你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文,向你校英语报社投稿。

短文内容如下:
1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求:
1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇:lift…up扶起,knock…down撞倒,trust信任
Mother Stops Him
_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文,所给材料较为详细,逻辑清楚,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态,主要是第一人称,句型以简单句为主。

写作时要灵活运用,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确。

【点睛】
本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。

所以在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
13.(·广东中考模拟)马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。

班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。

请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言
稿。

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题,写一篇发言稿。

题目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。

审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。

内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。

表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们。

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