高三英语读后续写专题2体育运动课件
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“Quitters never win and winners never quit. You swim like you are a
The next day we arrived at the swim meet late, missing my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. My coach insisted I be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she was including me in the race so our journey to the meet would not be wasted, and she had no expectations whatsoever that I would come in anything but eighth place and only that, because there weren’t nine lanes.
One summer’s day, the day before a big swim meet, I decided to break the news to my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I told her, she looked me in the eye and said, “Baby, remember these words ‘Quitters never win and winners never quit.’ Your grandmother didn’t raise losers or quitters. You go to that meet tomorrow, and you swim like you are a grandchild of mine, you hear?” I was too afraid to say anything but “Yes, ma’am.”
读后续写02 体育运动
读原文：5W1HP1P2+角色特点+描写占比 1、串联首尾段5W1H+P1P2给定句，定故事走向
（1）首段：角色+大致事件 （2）尾段：决定具体事件+态度 （3）P1P2给定句：定故事结局走向
2、划出关键词(角色特点、关键情节)
（1）划出角色相关描写(adj/v/n)：用来续写角色，改写关键词 （2）找出矛盾/需求、关键情节：用来续写情节
角色1
角色2... what
矛盾/困难点conflict quit or not?
when
a big swim meet
where
swim meet/board/swimming pool
how
persevere/overcome difficulties
P1P2关键词 swam harder/heard the claps and cheers
all of a sudden 突然之间
our journey to the meet would not rbineg iwn masytehdea, da在n我d 的s脑he海里ha想d起no expectations whatsoever that I would come in anything but eighth palraricvee aant d到o达nly thjaotu, rbneecyanu.s旅e 行there weren’t nine laneiegsh.th place 第八名
故事解读和分析
语篇表达意图--故事 主题
attitude
perservance
Mars is a very cold place. Its atmosphere is full of iron oxide
dust, which makes it red
故事人物： 主要人物：“我” I 次要人物：
my coach, my grandma, other swimming girls
As I was mounting the board, all the other girls looked at me. I quickly noticed that these girls were all here to do just one thing — beat me. All of a sudden, my grandma’s words rang in my head, “Quitters never win and winners never quit. You swim like you are a grandchild of mine. Quitters never win and winners never quit.” “Yes, Grandma, I will swim like I am a grandchild of yours,” I said to myself.
insisAt vs.坚I 持was mobuenwtiansgtedth被e浪b费oard, all the other nginirelslanloesok第e九d 赛at道me. I qb被ue允iacl许klolw做ye某dno事totidcoed tn丝hoa毫et x没tphe有ecs任taet何iogn期isr盼lwshwatesoreevearll here to do just one thing — binecalutdme me.e 包A括ll 我of caomseuidndaenna,nymthyinggra获n得dm任a何’s东西words rang in my head,
The next day we arrived at the swimmmouenettthlaetbeo, amrdis上si跳ng板my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. Myncooticaechv.注in意si到sted I be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she wbaesatinmcelu打d败in我g me in the race so
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why topic attitude perserverance
who关a键s词wimm动e作r 5Vyears 角角色色12.m.. y grandma what关m键y句coach
q情u绪it /心理daisdcj ouraged insist afraid insist belittled
dsowni’mt mwianngt to have a bnouomkbsehre-olfnfeurlelaosfon“H第o一norasbhloewMuepn出ti现ons”, which you gc竞eot赛mju性pset游tibt泳ievcealyuse you sh原o因wed up. AfriOcanneAmsuemricmaner’s daKye,etphreecdeaivyingb一ef直or获e 得a big swim meet, I decided to b非re裔ak美t国he人news to my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I agtfoofooldrdduvhn.eif承or,r担ms得h好e起的l服oo装kedabtomholeketsehie运nlf动tnh.员书e 架eye and said, “Baby, remember these
competitively uniform number-one bookshelf show up break the news look sb in the eye raise journey to the meet expectation come in lane board
adv.竞争性地；竞争地 n. 制服 adj.第一的 n 书架 出现 宣布消息
3、观察描写占比，续写比例与其一致
（1）看各类描写：续写时尽量占比一致 (2) 语法、句式：尽量保持一致，也可模仿好句
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why
topic
who关键词 动作 V
情绪/心理adj
角色1
角色2...
what
矛盾/困难点conflict
when
where
how
P1P2关键词
Winners Never Quit
break the news to 将
消息告知给
I had been swimming competitively for five years but after such a
long time, I was ready to quit. I was often the onlyquAit fthriecsawnimAtmeaemri退ca出n at the swimming competitions and our team couldn’t游af泳fo队rd good uniforms. However, my number-one reason for wanting tol某oqo人ku的istb眼.win睛atshetheyaet 看I 着kept receiving “Honorable Mentions (荣誉奖)”. Any aathfrlaeidteadkj.n害ow怕s的that you
看着某人的眼睛 v.提升，增加，养育，培养 比赛之旅 n.期待，预期，指望 进来，到达，达到 n.线路，跑道 n.甲板，木板
Winners Never Quit
I had been swimming competitively for five years but after such a long time, I was ready to quit. I was often the only African American at the swimming competitions and our team couldn’t afford good uniforms. However, my number-one reason for wanting to quit was that I kept receiving “Honorable Mentions (荣誉奖)”. Any athlete knows that you don’t want to have a bookshelf full of “Honorable Mentions”, which you get just because you showed up.
when other swimmers look at me determined
where
how
(
考 试 时 ， 勾 画 标 明 信 息 点 ）
写 作 时 ， 以 此 表 格 梳 理 思 路
P1P2关键词
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why topic
who关键： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 SPLASH! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
The next day we arrived at the swim meet late, missing my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. My coach insisted I be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she was including me in the race so our journey to the meet would not be wasted, and she had no expectations whatsoever that I would come in anything but eighth place and only that, because there weren’t nine lanes.
One summer’s day, the day before a big swim meet, I decided to break the news to my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I told her, she looked me in the eye and said, “Baby, remember these words ‘Quitters never win and winners never quit.’ Your grandmother didn’t raise losers or quitters. You go to that meet tomorrow, and you swim like you are a grandchild of mine, you hear?” I was too afraid to say anything but “Yes, ma’am.”
读后续写02 体育运动
读原文：5W1HP1P2+角色特点+描写占比 1、串联首尾段5W1H+P1P2给定句，定故事走向
（1）首段：角色+大致事件 （2）尾段：决定具体事件+态度 （3）P1P2给定句：定故事结局走向
2、划出关键词(角色特点、关键情节)
（1）划出角色相关描写(adj/v/n)：用来续写角色，改写关键词 （2）找出矛盾/需求、关键情节：用来续写情节
角色1
角色2... what
矛盾/困难点conflict quit or not?
when
a big swim meet
where
swim meet/board/swimming pool
how
persevere/overcome difficulties
P1P2关键词 swam harder/heard the claps and cheers
all of a sudden 突然之间
our journey to the meet would not rbineg iwn masytehdea, da在n我d 的s脑he海里ha想d起no expectations whatsoever that I would come in anything but eighth palraricvee aant d到o达nly thjaotu, rbneecyanu.s旅e 行there weren’t nine laneiegsh.th place 第八名
故事解读和分析
语篇表达意图--故事 主题
attitude
perservance
Mars is a very cold place. Its atmosphere is full of iron oxide
dust, which makes it red
故事人物： 主要人物：“我” I 次要人物：
my coach, my grandma, other swimming girls
As I was mounting the board, all the other girls looked at me. I quickly noticed that these girls were all here to do just one thing — beat me. All of a sudden, my grandma’s words rang in my head, “Quitters never win and winners never quit. You swim like you are a grandchild of mine. Quitters never win and winners never quit.” “Yes, Grandma, I will swim like I am a grandchild of yours,” I said to myself.
insisAt vs.坚I 持was mobuenwtiansgtedth被e浪b费oard, all the other nginirelslanloesok第e九d 赛at道me. I qb被ue允iacl许klolw做ye某dno事totidcoed tn丝hoa毫et x没tphe有ecs任taet何iogn期isr盼lwshwatesoreevearll here to do just one thing — binecalutdme me.e 包A括ll 我of caomseuidndaenna,nymthyinggra获n得dm任a何’s东西words rang in my head,
The next day we arrived at the swimmmouenettthlaetbeo, amrdis上si跳ng板my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. Myncooticaechv.注in意si到sted I be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she wbaesatinmcelu打d败in我g me in the race so
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why topic attitude perserverance
who关a键s词wimm动e作r 5Vyears 角角色色12.m.. y grandma what关m键y句coach
q情u绪it /心理daisdcj ouraged insist afraid insist belittled
dsowni’mt mwianngt to have a bnouomkbsehre-olfnfeurlelaosfon“H第o一norasbhloewMuepn出ti现ons”, which you gc竞eot赛mju性pset游tibt泳ievcealyuse you sh原o因wed up. AfriOcanneAmsuemricmaner’s daKye,etphreecdeaivyingb一ef直or获e 得a big swim meet, I decided to b非re裔ak美t国he人news to my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I agtfoofooldrdduvhn.eif承or,r担ms得h好e起的l服oo装kedabtomholeketsehie运nlf动tnh.员书e 架eye and said, “Baby, remember these
competitively uniform number-one bookshelf show up break the news look sb in the eye raise journey to the meet expectation come in lane board
adv.竞争性地；竞争地 n. 制服 adj.第一的 n 书架 出现 宣布消息
3、观察描写占比，续写比例与其一致
（1）看各类描写：续写时尽量占比一致 (2) 语法、句式：尽量保持一致，也可模仿好句
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why
topic
who关键词 动作 V
情绪/心理adj
角色1
角色2...
what
矛盾/困难点conflict
when
where
how
P1P2关键词
Winners Never Quit
break the news to 将
消息告知给
I had been swimming competitively for five years but after such a
long time, I was ready to quit. I was often the onlyquAit fthriecsawnimAtmeaemri退ca出n at the swimming competitions and our team couldn’t游af泳fo队rd good uniforms. However, my number-one reason for wanting tol某oqo人ku的istb眼.win睛atshetheyaet 看I 着kept receiving “Honorable Mentions (荣誉奖)”. Any aathfrlaeidteadkj.n害ow怕s的that you
看着某人的眼睛 v.提升，增加，养育，培养 比赛之旅 n.期待，预期，指望 进来，到达，达到 n.线路，跑道 n.甲板，木板
Winners Never Quit
I had been swimming competitively for five years but after such a long time, I was ready to quit. I was often the only African American at the swimming competitions and our team couldn’t afford good uniforms. However, my number-one reason for wanting to quit was that I kept receiving “Honorable Mentions (荣誉奖)”. Any athlete knows that you don’t want to have a bookshelf full of “Honorable Mentions”, which you get just because you showed up.
when other swimmers look at me determined
where
how
(
考 试 时 ， 勾 画 标 明 信 息 点 ）
写 作 时 ， 以 此 表 格 梳 理 思 路
P1P2关键词
构思前：读原文，找素材 （要用到续写中）
why topic
who关键： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 SPLASH! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________