(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习专题五层级三题型应对策略第一讲应用文写作专题强化训练
2020版新高考英语二轮复习 浙京津鲁琼版(课件+讲义)写作 专题五 第三节
第三节概要写作该题型要求根据所提供的材料写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
其中所提供的短文词数在350以内,所选材料的体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
评分标准本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分(词数少于40和多于80的,从总分中减去2分)常见错误1.不能准确抓住要点。
概要写作的重点是能概括出要点,如果不能抓住要点,句子写得再好,也不能得分。
因此,抓住要点是关键。
抓准要点,除了要读懂文章的主旨、了解文章的结构,还要特别注意一些标志词,如小标题、高频词等。
2.随意打乱文章的结构。
概要写作一般会提供结构比较清晰的文章。
而写概要的时候,一般都是按照文章的结构去概括要点。
不要轻易打乱文章的结构。
3.各个要点的独立性不够。
考试说明对要点的独立性有明确的要求。
因此,我们对要点的陈述也要相对独立,一般不要把几个要点放到一个句子中。
4.照抄原文中的句子。
概要写作的独立性除了各个要点的独立之外,其实还要求用自己的语言去概括文章,不能直接照抄原文的句子。
因此,切记要用自己的语言来概括要点。
一、在写作时,主要考虑以下内容:1.概括的准确性概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。
安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。
开篇用主题句清楚明白地告诉读者文章的写作目的,主题句的质量决定概括的成败。
2.语言的规范性尽量使用短句,慎用长难句。
多使用概括性词语,少用具体描述性词语。
不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的语言来表达,至少要对原文句子作一些同义词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。
3.篇章的连贯性理解准确,涵盖全部要点,完全使用自己的语言,准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇,得分档次相应比较高;相反,如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象,得分档次将会大大降低;所写内容与所提供内容无关则不得分。
所写的文章要有一个明确的主题贯穿全文,在组织材料时要有明晰的思路。
(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习 专题五 层级二 作文策略 第一讲 靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达教案
第三板块书面表达书面表达是高考浙江卷的重要试题。
本板块精研真题,引领考向;高考真题感悟与模拟题演练相互加力,讲解与练习环环相扣,帮助考生高效备考,轻松增分。
年份考查点词数考纲解读2019 .6 第一节感谢信80左右浙江属于高考综合改革实验省份,实行一年两考。
依据《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试用第一版)》可知,2016年10月份开始的浙江英语新高考与自主命题的浙江卷写作部分发生了重大变化。
其变化就是由原来的短文改错和书面表达变成了应用文写作和读后续写或概要写作两篇作文。
第一篇是应用文写作。
此题型对于考生来说并不陌生,因为我们在平常的学习中经常接触到这方面的内容。
常考的应用文有:书信、日记、海报、倡议书、电子邮件、第二节概要写作60左右2018 .11 第一节求助信80左右第二节概要写作60左右2018 .6 第一节申请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017 .11 第一节邀请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017 .6 第一节邀请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右的憧憬而已。
写作是一个人语言基本素养的流露,是综合能力的显现,非一朝一夕之功,但这并不等于写作水平已定型,无提升空间。
因为英语写作的能力要求远低于汉语写作的能力要求,如果针对自己的薄弱环节训练得当、措施得力,是完全能够在短期内提升一个档次的。
层级一审题准,表达清高考作文阅卷,时间紧、任务重,一篇作文往往在一分钟内被判“生死”。
要想赢得高分,首先要赢得阅卷老师的“印象分”。
审题偏颇、错误百出的作文会让阅卷老师大倒胃口,阅卷老师会毫不怜悯地将其打入低分冷宫。
所以,写作要想取得高分,先要把写作基础抓稳。
一、准审题——为写作定好基调审题是写作的前提,是一篇书面表达成功的关键所在。
审题正确可以保证得到基本分,所以真正开始写作前,必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备工作,具体包含以下几方面:[典例] (2019·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。
高考英语二轮复习专题五层级三题型应对策略第一讲应用文写作专题强化训练
层级三题型应对策略应用文写作(一)(建议用时:每篇15分钟)A(2019·湖州适应性考试)假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“中国国粹——京剧”的宣传活动。
请给你的外教Henry写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容:讲座、现场表演等。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:京剧 Beijing Opera________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear Henry,How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera which will be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.At the beginning of the activity, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera which is delivered by a famous artist. After that, there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. The artists dressed in costumes will perform various stories that happened in the history of China by singing, dancing and playing martial arts. Besides, methods of drawing facial makeup will be taught on the spot, so you can try your hand. Would you like to go with me?I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.Yours truly,Li HuaB假定你是李华,你的好友Peter在你校上周举办的“美丽校园”摄影比赛中获奖了。
(浙江选考)2020版高考英语大二轮复习 专题五 写作综合练7
写作综合练(七)第一节:应用文写作(2018·浙江宁波效实中学等五校第二次联考)新华学校是一所国际学校。
假定你是新华学校的学生会主席李明,请你用英文写一封邀请函,邀请在华外籍学生家长,前来观摩新华学校即将举办的科技博览会活动(science fair)。
内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动目的;3.活动安排。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第二节:读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.The father asked his son,“What is this?” The son replied,“It is a crow.”After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,“What is this?” The son said,“Father,I have just told you.It’s a crow!”After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,“What is this?”At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝).“It’s a crow,a crow.” A little while later,the father again asked his son for the fourth time,“What is this?”This time,the son shouted at his father,“Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’?Are you not able to understand this?”A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it,the following words were written in the diary: “Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2020年浙江高考英语应用文作文题目以及范文
2020年浙江高考英语应用文作文题目以及范文假如你是李华。
你校爱尔兰外教Peter因病回国休假。
请你给他写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:1.询问Peter近况;2.告诉Peter班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter;I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student from Class Three, Grade Three. I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. I'm wondering if you are getting better now. And I'm writing to show our genuine concern for your health.Through your tireless work, every one of us has made tremendous progress in English, especially in listening and speaking. So don't worry about our study and all you need to do now is have an adequate rest and a healthy diet. Besides, with the approach of the college entrance exams, we are busy making final preparations. Good news is that we have achieved satisfactory results in a mock examination. We are sure that we will live up to your expectations.We earnestly hope you will recover soon and we are expecting your early return to China. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 亲爱的彼得;我是李华,来自三年级三班的中国学生。
高考英语二轮复习应用文写作练习与讲解讲义(共三篇)
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、建议信:偶像对高中生成长的影响研究(浙江省名校协作体2023学年第二学期高二年级试题)假定你是高中生李华,将在假期和你校的英国交换生Jack共同完成一项研究性学习任务。
请给Jack写一封邮件,提议研究偶像对高中生成长的影响。
内容包括:1.选题理由;2.实施方案;3.征询意见。
注意:参考词汇:偶像 idol,写作词数应为80个左右。
写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。
第一段表示对合作任务的高兴并提出选题;第二段说明选题理由(要点1)和实施方案(要点2);第三段征询意见并期待回复。
【参考范文】Dear Jack,I hope this email finds you well! I am more than happy to learn that I will be working with you on a research project during the holiday.The influence of idols on the growth of high school students, I believe, is a good option. As we all know, idols ranging from stars and scientists, to heroes, play a significant role in shaping the values and cultivating the quality of students of our age. We can design and distribute questionnaires to carry out our research, organize a debate petition to give students a deep insight into the influence of idols, followed by the ments on it from the judges in the petition.I’m wondering if my proposal works. Looking forward to your early reply. (124 words) Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的杰克:见信好!得知我将在假期和你共同完成一项研究性学习任务,我非常兴奋。
(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习专题五层级三题型应对策略第三讲概要写作专题强化训练
第三讲概要写作概要写作(一)(建议用时:每篇25分钟)A阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Works of literature can be written in a wide variety of forms.These different types or sorts of writing are known as genre(类型).We can classify literary works by what they have in common—their styles or what they are about,for example.On a simple level,organizing works of literature into genres helps us understand the variety of literary works.Prose writing can be divided into two main types: fiction and nonfiction.Fiction includes stories that are made up by the author.They are not true in a factual sense but they may be based on scientific,historical or geographic facts.Within the broad area of fiction,we can distinguish two main types: realistic fiction and historical fiction.Realistic fiction includes stories that are set in the contemporary world and are about people and events that could happen.Most bestsellers are of this style.Realistic fiction itself has many subdivisions(划分) such as crime fiction,adventure stories and romantic stories.Stories set in the past and based on historical facts are historical fiction.Some of the characters in the stories are imaginary,while others may be real people from the past.Much of this type of fiction centers on wars or political events.Nonfiction books are based on facts and include genres such as biography,history,popular science and reference works such as dictionaries.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Different types of literary works can be called genres.(要点1) For example,fiction can be divided into two main types.(要点2) Stories in realistic fiction are about events that could happen in the contemporary world,while historical fiction is about stories that are based on historical facts.(要点3)Nonfiction books arewritten according to facts.(要点4)B(2019·湖州检测)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
2020版新高考英语二轮复习 浙京津鲁琼版(课件+讲义)写作 专题五 第一节 一
二、三步出美文 第一步:认真审题、圈出要点 包括审文体,审时态(主要用什么时态),审人称(写给谁,以第几人称写),审 要点。根据情景说明和写作要点思考要写哪些内容,并在试卷上圈出来。 第二步:列出句子、译成英语 根据文体需要或主题需要,再结合常识,将不成句的要点拓展成5~7个句子 (一般说来,有主语有谓语就是句子,即某人做某事或什么是什么等)。将上述 句子用英语表达出来,注意不要生硬地逐字逐句译,要根据英语基本句型的结 构或文体的要求等用正确得体的英语表达出来。当遇到难词表达不了时,就用 近义词或句型,将大概意思表达出来。
第三档 (7-9)
第二档 (4-6)
基本完成了试题规定的任务。 —虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。 —应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。 未适当完成试题规定的任务。 —漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。 —语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。 —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。 —较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
4.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you. 感谢您考虑我的申请,期待得到您的回复。 5.I would be grateful if you could consider my request,and I’m looking forward to your early reply. 如果您能够考虑一下我的请求,我将不胜感激,盼望您的早日回复。
2020版新高考英语二轮复习京津鲁琼版课件:专题五 书面表达 层级三 第一讲 应用文写作
I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
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第四档 (10- 12 分)
要求 完全完成了试题规定的任务: ——虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容; ——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求; ——语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复 杂语法结构或词汇所致; ——应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑; 达到了预期的写作目的
One possible version: Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a student from China, who is studying in London during the summer holiday. Knowing an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held at the gallery next month, I am writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.
2020版高考二轮复习专题五书面表达层级三第一讲应用文写作专题强化训练(英语 解析版)
A假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友William寒假期间要来中国游玩,行程中计划在你家住三天,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.住宿条件;2.活动安排;3.其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear William,I am delighted to know that you are coming to China,and especially excited that you will stay in my house. Now,I’d like to tell you some relevant information about your stay here.The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. A variety of books as well as a computer are available. Of course you have easy access to the network. What’s more, I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest. By the way, we are having a cold winter here. So, be sure to bring your winter clothes.I am sure you will have a wonderful experience here. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li HuaB假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom将来你家共度除夕,你打算当天下午去地铁站接他。
2020年浙江新高考英语二轮复习教师用书:专题五 书面表达2 层级三 题型应对策略 1 第一讲 应用文写作
层级三题型应对策略第一讲应用文写作书信书信是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交际的工具之一。
书信写作在近几年的高考作文中考得比较多,所考的书信格式也比较简单。
但由于民族语言和习惯上的差异,英语信件在书写格式及表达方式上与汉语不大一样,有些地方迥然不同。
因此我们了解一些英语书信的正规写法还是非常有必要的。
英文书信分为两大类:公务信件和私人信件。
公务信件是单位与单位或单位与个人之间来往的书信,可能是推荐信、求职信、入学申请书、邀请信,或询问、答复、反映意见(如投诉信)等的信件。
私人信件是指亲戚朋友之间的通信。
一、书信的构成这两类书信各有自己的格式。
公务信件要求比较严格。
一般格式:英文书信的构成可分为7个部分:信头(Heading),日期(Date), 收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address), 称呼(Salutation), 信文(Body of the letter), 结束语(Complimentary close), 署名(Signature)。
一般说来,私人信件不拘形式。
随着互联网的发展与普及,电子邮件已逐步代替书信。
电子邮件类似书信,但格式往往更简洁、更随便。
1.信头信头是指发信人的单位名称或地址。
一般情况下发信人只需把自己的地址写在信的右上角,离开信纸的顶头约1英寸,占二三行或四行均可,格式如下:①齐头式②缩进式2.日期①年份应写全,例如不能用“18”来代替“2018”。
②月份应写英文名称,除May, July外,可用缩写,如:Sept., Oct.。
但不要用数字来代替,如7/8/18 或7, 8, 18, 因为在英国此日期代表7th August, 2018。
③日期可用1, 2, 3, 4……11, 12……21, 22……31等,也可用1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th……11th, 21st, 22nd……31st等。
日期的几种写法:a.July 7, 2018b.1st October, 2018c.30 Nov., 2018 d.Sept.3rd, 2018④特别注意英文书信日期应紧接着写信人地址下一行,不能像写中文书信那样写在书信签名之后。
(浙江选考)2020版高考英语大二轮复习 专题五 写作提升练1 应用文
写作提升练(一)应用文1(2018·浙江温州5月高考适应性测试)假定你是李华,美国某所高中的学生即将来你校做交流活动,请你写一篇讲话稿,简要介绍你校,内容包括:1.学校概况;2.活动特色。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.不可出现真实校名。
2(2018·浙江教育绿色评价联盟高考适应性考试)假定你是李华。
因你班地理老师Mr.Lee出差在外,明天上午的地理课改为英国文学课,请按以下要点口头告知大家:1.课程变动情况;2.说明原因;3.课前预习任务布置。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3假定你是李华,最近你发现有学生将共享单车停到了校园内并且上了私锁。
请你就此现象,写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上,倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。
内容提示:1.共享单车带给人们的便利;2.如何正确使用共享单车。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua4(2018·浙江绍兴一中高考冲刺)美国某中学组织了游学团来你校交流学习,你校为此组织了一次以兴趣爱好为话题的座谈会。
假定你是李华,应邀参加这次座谈会并在会上简要介绍你的爱好。
请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.爱好——阅读;2.喜欢阅读的原因;3.你的愿望。
(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习专题五层级三题型应对策略第一讲应用文写作专题强化训练
层级三题型应对策略应用文写作(一)(建议用时:每篇15分钟)A(2019·湖州适应性考试)假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“中国国粹——京剧”的宣传活动。
请给你的外教Henry写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容:讲座、现场表演等。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:京剧 Beijing Opera________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear Henry,How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera which will be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.At the beginning of the activity, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera which is delivered by a famous artist. After that, there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. The artists dressed in costumes will perform various stories that happened in the history of China by singing, dancing and playing martial arts. Besides, methods of drawing facial makeup will be taught on the spot, so you can try your hand. Would you like to go with me?I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.Yours truly,Li HuaB假定你是李华,你的好友Peter在你校上周举办的“美丽校园”摄影比赛中获奖了。
2020新题型03 应用文写作-浙江高考英语新题型研读与训练 Word版含解析
新题型03 应用文写作2016年10月起,浙江省高考英语科目启用了新题型,其中写作分为两部分,第一部分为应用文写作,要求考生根据所给情景,写一篇80词左右的短文。
【题型分析】应用文属实用文体,有严格的语境限制,比如确定的时间、地点,确定的对象、范围,确定的行文目的等。
因此,应用文写作应力求主旨鲜明,格式正确,语言简练,语气因人因事而异。
书信、电子邮件是常见的应用文写作考查题型,主要包括询问信、致歉信、致谢信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信等,其次应用文还有:通知、发言稿、便条、日记、通知、调查报告扥。
写作时要注意格式正确,包含称呼语(salutation),正文(body),结束语(complimentary close),签名(signature)。
如在2016年10月的试卷中,应用文写作的要求是给未曾谋面的加拿大的住家(homestay)写一封咨询信(Letter of Inquiry)。
写作时遣词应尽量客气一些,行文应力求具有亲和力,切忌使用一些艰深的大词,也不宜使用一些结构过于杂糅的长句。
3、对学生能力的要求应用文相对于之前高考中的议论文、记叙文,更要求应用性、规范性、简明性。
这要求学生对各个文体尤其是邮件和信件格式的熟悉掌握,且需注意应用文所要求的语言表达与议论文、记叙文的区别。
因此我们会着重培养学生的格式熟悉度以及相关重要句式的表达。
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。
请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________写好应用文的第一步是准确审题。
2020新课标高考英语二轮课件:专题五书面表达 层级三 第1讲 应用文写作 -书信2(邀请信,道歉信,感谢信)
(2)第二部分:说明事由及活动地点和时间 ①Will you and Mrs. Smith give the pleasure of dining with us at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October the tenth, at eight o’clock? 10 月 10 日星期天晚上 8 点您和史密斯夫人能来北京饭店与我们共进晚餐吗? ②There will be a dinner party to be held at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October the tenth, at eight o’clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us? 10 月 10 日星期天 晚上 8 点我们在北京饭店举办晚宴,届时您和史密斯夫人能光临吗?
③The occasion will start at ________(具体时间).④This will be followed by a________(进一步的安排).⑤At around________(时间), ________(另一个安排).
⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ________(通知你的最后期限). Yours sincerely, ________
One possible version: Dear__Smith,
We__are__all____sorry__to__hear__that__you__will__leave__our__school.On behalf of my classmates,I appreciate all you have done to improve our English and to enable us to learn more about the outside world.You have really made a great difference to our lives.
2020版高考英语二轮复习第一部分板块三三应用文高分写作攻略——让作文得满分课件
2.吸引阅卷人篇中句 (1)I'm very glad to tell you something about... 我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。 (2)As far as I know/am concerned/can see... 据我所知……
3.吸引阅卷人结尾句 (1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your... 请马上写信给我,告诉我关于你的…… (2)I'm looking forward to your reply. 我盼望着你的回复。
[试写满分作文] (2019·沈阳检测)假定你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔 友Peter在邮件中询问你打算如何度过高三毕业后的暑假。请 你给Peter回复邮件,内容包括: 1.对暑假的期盼; 2.你的假期计划及理由。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题,“三段”谋篇
To start/begin with, I plan to take a trip to Beijing, the center of politics and culture. Not only can it broaden my horizons but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture. What's more, I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good opportunity for me to promote myself.I hold the firm belief that the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I'd like to read books as many as possible.I do hope I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.
浙江高考英语应用文复习
续写注意事项:
1. 改进书写,控制词数; 2. 两段大概词数相当,不能一长一短相差太大; 3. 所写内容同段首句自然衔接,同原文保持一致; 4. 挖掘问题,合理解决问题; 5. 尽量回顾原文和点题。 6. 尽量减少语言错误,准确使用高级词汇和句型,特别 是非谓语动词的使用要当心;
(稀里糊涂)
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性
信息未能清楚地传达给读者
第一档 极差
1--3 未完成了试题规定的任务
明显漏掉主要内容,写了一些无关内容 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
(一塌糊涂)
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯
信息未能传达给读者
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要 求内容无关或所写内容无法看清
应用文注意事项:
1. 语言的准确性。应用文是实用性文体,是否达到交际的目的,是否传 递了正确的信息是评分的关键. 语言好,但如果信息传递有误,也不能得 高分。(完全达到了预期的写作目的。)
Sunday afternoon(Dec 15th). All the students will take part. I think
this event is of great significance, for it can not only build up our body but help those in need. (介绍活动的相关内容以及对此项活 动的看法)
12. 主被动
正确:The activity will be held next week on the playground.
(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习 专题一 第二部分 题
第一讲 理解文中具体信息——细节理解题细节理解题是高考英语阅读理解中非常重要的一种题型。
细节理解题题干针对原文的具体叙述进行提问,主要考查考生对阅读材料中的某一特定细节、文章的主要事实或文中个别词句的理解能力,一般包括查找信息题、数字计算题等。
高考细节理解题题量统计考纲解读 年份浙江卷 (1)文章细节对于理解全文内容来说至关重要,同时也是归纳和概括文章中心思想的基础。
(2)命题人员会要求考生根据不同的要求阅读文章,以获得某些特定的信息或准确地寻求所需的细节。
(3)这类试题有时比较直接,理解字面意思即可答题;有时则较为间接,需要归纳、概括和推理才能答题。
2019.64 2018.112 2018.63 2017.114 2017.6 3【考查特点】Ⅰ.把握细节理解题常见的命题方式:(1)特殊疑问句形式:以when ,where ,what ,which ,who ,how much/many 等疑问词开头引出的问题。
(2)填空题形式:通常涉及与主题有关的事实和细节。
(3)就文中数字、排序等提问。
Ⅱ.掌握细节细解题的考查角度:(1)高频考点:直接信息题;综合细节题。
(2)低频考点:数字计算题;正误判断题;细节排序题。
[考向1] 直接细节题——精准定位判细节直接细节题即事实认定类细节题,该题型在原文中可直接找到答案,不要求考生对事实做出解释或者判断,只需要从阅读材料中直接获取信息(有时需要跨段落查找细节信息)。
正确选项和原文在表述上没有太大的变化。
常见的设问方式:◆Which activity will you choose if...?◆What will you/the students do on Tuesday/on the Capital City Bike Tour?◆When can you see a play in Hebrew?◆Where can you buy a souvenir at Pacific Science Center?◆At which place can people of different ages enjoy a good laugh?◆Who will give the talk on the islands in the Thames?[典例] (2019·全国卷Ⅰ·A片段)Jobs for YouthIf you are a teenager living in certain parts of the province, you could be eligible(符合条件) for this program, which provides eight weeks of paid employment along with training.Who is eligible: Youth 15-18 years old in select communities(社区).Summer CompanySummer Company provides students with handson business training and awards of up to $3,000 to start and run their own summer businesses.Who is eligible: Students aged 15-29, returning to school in the fall.21.What is special about Summer Company?A.It requires no training before employment.B.It provides awards for running new businesses.C.It allows one to work in the natural environment.D.It offers more summer job opportunities.[解题思路]第一步确定题干中的关键词Summer Company第二步根据关键词定位信息句Summer Company provides students with handson business training and awards of up to $3,000 to start and run their own summer businesses.第三步比对选项确定答案Summer Company的特别之处在于“它为经营新业务提供奖励”。
高考英语(浙江专版)二轮复习与策略讲练:专题3 应用文写作 类型5 求助信
①处troubled应改成troubling
②处应添加冠词the
③处应添加连词and
⑤处easy改为easily
⑥处exchange改为exchanged
3.要点一定不要遗漏
补上⑦处要点:I'd appreciate
it if you give me a way out.
[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进
类型5|求助信
1.求助信要简明扼要,语气委婉、真诚,不强人所难,并尽量提供足够的信息,能使收信人愿意帮助你。
2.写作指导
(1)清晰陈述请求的内容或所要获取的信息;
(2)提出的问题数量不宜过多,要便于回答;
(3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。
假如你是某中学的高一学生李明,最近与母亲关系紧张,难以相处。请根据下表内容用英语给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith写一封80词左右的求助信,请他帮你解决问题。
Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts.来自(如果您能帮助我,我将不胜感激。)
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
1.避免词汇搭配错误
④处in改为with
你的情况
你母亲的情况
你的问题
1.学习成绩好;
2.爱母亲;
3.有点害怕母亲。
1.大学教授,工作勤奋,很少有时间和你说话;
2.对你严格要求,易发脾气。
1.与母亲很少交流;
2.不知如何沟通。
[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文
Dear Mr.Smith,
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层级三题型应对策略应用文写作(一)(建议用时:每篇15分钟)A(2019·湖州适应性考试)假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“中国国粹——京剧”的宣传活动。
请给你的外教Henry写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容:讲座、现场表演等。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:京剧 Beijing Opera________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear Henry,How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera which will be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.At the beginning of the activity, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera which is delivered by a famous artist. After that, there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. The artists dressed in costumes will perform various stories that happened in the history of China by singing, dancing and playing martial arts. Besides, methods of drawing facial makeup will be taught on the spot, so you can try your hand. Would you like to go with me?I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.Yours truly,Li HuaB假定你是李华,你的好友Peter在你校上周举办的“美丽校园”摄影比赛中获奖了。
请根据以下要点给他写一封邮件:1.表示祝贺;2.你对获奖作品的看法;3.希望他分享摄影经验。
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua One possible version:Dear__Peter,Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.Your work stands out in the competition, which is quite representative of all works and close to the theme reflecting our school culture. Besides, your skills of taking photos are also in the prior position. In a word, you’ve done well in all the required aspects. So you’ve got the prize and I feel pround of you. Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!I hope you can share your skills of taking pictures with me.Yours,Li__HuaC假定你是李华,你在农村的舅舅向你寻求“乡村振兴(rural revitalization)”的建议,因此你发邮件给他提出一些建议,内容包括:1.利用青山绿水发展农村生态旅游(ecotravel);2.开发游客到农场种植和采摘水果的活动。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear uncle,I’m glad to have the chance to give you some advice about rural revitalization.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua One possible version:Dear__uncle,I’m__glad__to__have__the__chance__to__give__you__some__advice__about__rural__revit alization. I hope the tips below will be of some help to you.Nowadays the fresh air and the beautiful scenery in the countryside are appealing to more citizens. Villagers should make the most of their green mountains and clean water to develop ecotravel. Besides, I suggest villagers se t up selfservice fruit farms to get tourists involved in growing and picking fruits, like grapes, strawberries and so on. The farms can provide people with good chances to experience physical labour and enjoy the harvest, which will help tourists get away from loud noise and a busy city life.I hold the firm belief that more and more tourists will come to the countryside and enjoy the fruit farms, and that the villages are sure to enjoy a bright future.Yours__sincerely,Li__Hua应用文写作(二)(建议用时:每篇15分钟)A假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友William寒假期间要来中国游玩,行程中计划在你家住三天,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.住宿条件;2.活动安排;3.其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear William,I am delighted to know that you are coming to China,and especially excited that you will stay in my house. Now,I’d like to tell you some relevant information about your stay here.The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. A variety of books as well as a computer are available. Of course you have easy access to the network. What’s more, I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest. By the way, we are having a cold winter here. So, be sure to bring your winter clothes.I am sure you will have a wonderful experience here. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li HuaB(2019·绍兴模拟)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节,他请你帮他们预订酒店,请你给他回一封电子邮件。