高考英语写作高分策略

hard, they could not work in the field.
1. It was raining hard；they could not work in the field. 2. It was raining hard, so they could not work in the field. 3. It was raining so hard that they could not work in the field. 4. They could not work in the field because it was raining hard. 5. As it was raining hard, they could not work in the field.
使用强势句式，增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. 2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. 3.He never speaks about his own family. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child though/as he is, he knows a lot →___________________________________.
[能力提高] 1. 作文填空 请考生将括号中的中文翻译成英文完 成此篇作文。
I (1) participated in / took part in / joined in _________________________________ (参加)a fantastic English talent show in People’s Park on Dec. 25， 2009. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)____________________________ (表演了各 performed all kinds of programs 种各样的节目), like English songs, English short plays and English stories.
2. 翻译句子 请根据括号中的提示将下列中文 句子翻译成英文。 (1) 我觉得, 帮助那些急切渴望我们帮助和关 心的小孩, 是我们应有的职责。(feel it+ 名词+ to do, give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be dying for) (1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care.
does he speak about his own family →Never__________________________________________
is a notice saying ”Please Save Water” →On the wall_____________________________________
hold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
3.clever
wise bright smart intelligent cute
改变句子结构,与众不同
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s. A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s. 2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了. I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
• The professor walked into the classroom, he carried a bag of books with him.
1. The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him. 2. The professor walked into the classroom ; he carried a bag of books with him. 3. The professor,who carried a bag of books, walked into the classroom , 4. The professor walked into the classroom, carrying a bag of books with him. 5. The professor walked into the classroom with a bag of books .
Writing
高考英语写作高分策略
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
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1.The character of this gala is that it relates people’s lives 2.The most striking feature of this gala is its _______ traditionally close link with ordinary people’s lives. ____________________________
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3.Young people don’t want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of __________________________ celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. _________________________
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影响给分的因素之二：
文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1. good 2. think
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in one's opinion/view
2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty.
3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school. The main subjects I studied at school →______________________________include Chinese, English and Physics . 4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden He was watering flowers. →_________________, Mr. Smith was watering Early in the morning in the garden _________________.
How glad →_______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!
→It was_________________________________________ not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化
1.He got excited when he heard the news. Hearing the news, he got excited. →___ Hungry and thirsty →_________________, the girl went home.
(3) The purpose / aim of this show is to或This show _______________________________________ _______________________________________ (这 aims / is aimed to / is meant to / is intended to 场表演的目的在于)encourage students to introduce Guangzhou and the 2010 Asian Games in English and to arouse students’ interest in English as well. I was very excited because I was the leading actor/actress in an English short play at the show. Though I was(4) a little bit nervous ________________(一点点紧张) at the beginning, later on I felt relaxed and the performance was a great success.