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开头The argument is well-presented but not thoroughly well-reasonedOn several grounds, this evidence lends little credible support for the memo's condusions.正文常用表达The usage of…We do not know the percentage of …Cannot consider other factors.Besides revenue, the cost should also be taken accountWhat question is asked in a surveyThe arguer fails to rule out…The situation in…and …may not comparableUnwarrantedmight be insignificant because we do not know the base amount ofgranted the assumption tenable…conclusion is hasty and assertiveNo evidence is provided to indicate thatThe author fails to consider the feasibility and necessity of…The author does not inform us what fraction of …….involved in ……The manager fails to rule out the possibility thatThe author fails to establish a causal relationship betweenthe necessity of the author’s recommendation is unfounded.结尾To strengthen the argument,词语无说服力的：ineloquence变量：variable可能的出错对比结论和实验结果的细节不同（可能采取的方法不同）还有其他原因可以导致…结论没有考虑这项措施实施所带来的问题两件事没有关系没有告知具体数量/比例(提到增加减少时一定要考虑采访/实验谬误一方的增长不能说明另一方的消亡过去现在不同时间凑巧不代表有必然联系少数人（实验样本）无法代表全部，被调查者不具备代表性。

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argue英文作文万能模板Argue Essay Template。

Introduction。

Introduce the topic of arguing and its significance in communication.Define what it means to argue and the different forms it can take.Provide a brief overview of the points that will be discussed in the essay.Body Paragraph 1: The Purpose of Arguing。

Discuss the purpose of arguing in communication.Explain how arguing can be a productive tool for problem-solving and decision-making.Provide examples of situations where arguing can lead to positive outcomes.Body Paragraph 2: The Importance of Listening。

Emphasize the importance of active listening in arguing.Explain how listening to the other person's perspective can lead to a more effective and respectful argument.Provide tips for improving listening skills in arguing situations.Body Paragraph 3: Constructive vs. Destructive Arguing。

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下面cnfla小编为您收集整理了GRE满分写作开头段模板，希望对您有帮助GRE写作开头段模板一In this analysis, the arguer claims that P University should offer employment to the spouse of each new faculty member that they hire. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example of B College where professors prefer to have their spouse employed in the same geographical area. In addition, the arguer assumes that this offer of possible job for their spouse on the campus, no matter whether it will be accepted, is the only factor that new professors consider in deciding whether to accept a university position. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.GRE写作开头段模板二In this argument, the arguer advocates that the C Corporation should hire DF, a family owned local company that offers varied menu of fish and poultry, instead of GT Company, the present supplier of food in C’s employee cafeteria. The recommendation is based on the observation that the GT is expensive, that its prices have kept rising, that it does not servespecial diets, and that three employees complained about it. Meanwhile, the arguer assumes D to be a better choice for C because a sample lunch of this company that the arguer happened to taste was delicious. This argument is problematic for two reasons.GRE写作开头段模板三The conclusion in this argument is that F College can expect to increase enrollment by promising to find jobs for students after graduation. In support of this prediction, the arguer claims that college-bound students are increasingly concerned about job prospects after graduation. Moreover, the arguer assumes that this attempt has three benefits: (1) to enable F to compete with more famous schools; (2) to encourage students to start career preparation early; (3) to encourage students to complete their coursework. This argument is fraught with vague, oversimplified and unwarranted assumptions.GRE写作开头段模板四In this argument, the arguer concludes that sending the mechanics of GAA to a two-week QCS on proper maintenance procedures will automatically lead to improved maintenance and to greater customer satisfaction along with greater profits for the airline. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that the performance of the maintenance crews in the automobile racing industry improved markedly after their crews had attended the seminar. In addition, the arguer reasons that since the maintenance crews of the automobile racing industry and the mechanics of GAA perform many of the same functions, the airlines will gain similar benefits from the training program. This argument suffers from several critical fallacies.GRE写作开头段模板五In this argument, the arguer recommends that C should advise its citizens to install both air conditioners and fans for cooling in order to reduce the cost of electricity. T o justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that many citizens of C suffer from the rising costs of electricity. In addition, he cites the result of a recent study that using fans alone costs more than using air conditioners alone, and that using both fans and air conditioners costs less than either using fans or air conditioners alone. A careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless the conclusion is.。

GREargument模板

Argument 模板开头：In the statement above, the arguer put forth the idea that ……/a recommendation/ proposal on the strategy of ……，that is ……And the arguer cites/ quotes the ……as props for his statement/ in order to reinforce his statement, the speaker cites that ……. In addition, he claims that ^^, what’s more, he believes that……While it is tempting to agree with the speaker for the sake of several evidences provided by him, the conclusion is still a rather sweeping generalization and leading to its disputable.中间:Above everything else, although claiming that……, the arguer offers insufficient evidences to uphold his assertion./ the ……in the statement is lack of credibility because the author does not provide adequate/ sufficient information to uphold the reliability of the investigation. First, Second, Third. Lacking more specific information about the question mentioned above, it is impossible to make an informed conclusion based on such plausible evidences.In addition, given the fact that……, it doesn’t necessarily imply that ……in virtue of ……/ it is too vague /ambiguous to judge ……. What if , what if , and what if? Thus, the author unfairly assumes ……without any indisputable evidences to buttress it.What’s more, the arguer fails to establish a causal nexus between……the arguer assumes that since……is beneficial/ detrimental to ……, it must have a positive/ negative influence on ……However, this assumption is flawed because the arguer fails to identify some possible discrepancies between ……perhaps , perhaps, or perhaps……. Therefore, we could not hastily assume that ……is ……by virtue of the plausible statement of the arguer.最后In conclusion, after carefully scrutinizing the evidences provided by the arguer, we could only find they accomplish little towards supporting the statement. To undergird and clarify the conclusion, the arguer would have to provide us more evidence/ details concerning ……. What’s more, we would suspend out judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer could provide……. Otherwise, we could not approve ……considering ……。

GRE考试ARGUE模板

argue 模板The author tries to conclude, in this argument, that (main idea). But in fact, his standpoint is unwarranted and irrational for lacking of substantiated evidences and convincing data, although it seems to be quite reliable at first sight.In the discussion about (S1), the author means to indicate that(fancy 1). However, he fails to (possibility 1). It is quite possible that (sample 1), and that (sample 1). The conclusion made by the arguer would be flowed and unfounded unless (he settles the logical problems in his speculation).Besides, the author claims that (), since (). However, he fails to take () into consideration./the author overlooked the possibility that (). Perhaps () or (), or it is possible that (). So the assumption that the author has made would not be valid and believable unless ().Finally, even if the foregoing assumptions given out by the author turn out to be verifiable, his conclusion of the argument is still hasty and controversial. Actually, it is quite wrong that (). The author fails to consider that (). Actually, he ignores (). Then for this reason, (). Therefore, only if any other alternatives have been eliminated by a more convincing survey would the conclusion be considerable.To sum up, in order to draw a better conclusion, the assumptions raised by the author must be compensated by more accurate data and further investigation. Only after taking all-sided consideration and synthesizing diverse aspects, could the author conclude/make the current deductions tenable that ().◆The memo stated that (), which assumes that ();The author claims that (), since ();In his discussion about (), the author mean to indicate that ();◆However, he fails to take () into consideration;However, he fails to consider that ();However, he ignores that ();The author overlooked the possibility that ();Actually, it is quite wrong that ();However, we could not simply make such conclusion that ();However, there is no guarantee that it is necessary this case;When having a further consideration, there is an obvious error in his assumption;◆It is quite possible that ();Perhaps () or (), or it is possible that ();Then for this reason, ();。

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HEADIn this argument, the arguer concludes/recommends/advocates that will lead to . To support/justify the conclusion/claim, the arguer points out/claims that . In addition, the arguer reasons that . The argument suffers from several critical fallacies.BODY小推大An additional reasoning flaw in the argument is the arguer’s underlying assumptionthat are representative of all . However, only is rarely sufficient to establish a general conclusion that . Therefore, I cannot acce pt the arguer’s generalization about .大推小The arguer commits a fallacy of “misapplied generalization” in assuming that applies specifically to . Lacking the evidence that reflects the general , the arguer cannot justify his recommendation based on the nationwide survey.原因过简：The arguer commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification in assuming that . While A is an important element in deterring B, it is highly possible other fact may have contributed to B. For instance, .And the arguer neglects the fact , without ruling out these and other possible facts, the arguer could not safely draw any significant conclusion or prediction.相同或同时的关系误认为是因果关系：The arguer uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the fact that A coincide with B does not necessary prove that A caused. The arguer has not ruled out other possible causes for B, such as could be responsible for B.错误类比：Analogies draw between A and B are highly suspect because there are many serious differences. For instance, . Although there are points of comparison between A and B, but apparently, differences between A and B clearly outweigh the surface similarities. Thus, it is impossible to conclude that .忽略时间地点的不同：The arguer assumes without justification that the background conditions have remain the same at the different times and different locations. Thus, it is impossible to conclude that .非此即彼：The arguer’s recommendation rests on the unlikely assumption that A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives. However, the arguer overlooks the possibility that . Thus, to some extent, the recommendation is unwarranted.片面性：The arguer fails to consider the B side of might bring. For example, . Itmay turn out that B side far outweigh the A side, because the arguer’s argument lacks a complete analysis of the situation.The writer concludes that.... To support his conclusion, he provides evidence concerning.... Meanwhile, he reasons that....However, the argument is undermined by a series/ set of precarious assumptions.Though ____ seems to be a big number at first glance, without any information about the whole population of _____, this sample size may not be sufficient to represent the overall situation and thereby rendering the survey little persuasive power. (SAMPLE SIZE)As the selection procedure is unknown according to the argument, we can easily find good reasons to doubt if the sample is random and able to represent the general attitude. It is entirely possible that this survey is studied in a small scale, whereas a lot more_____have been excluded by the research. (SELECTION PROCEDURE)The arguer fails to provide any detailed information about_____. The existing data is far from sufficient to draw a reliable conclusion. First, both the percentages of 51% and 99% can be regarded as a "majority". However, common sense tells us that there are notable disparities between the two. The lower the percentage is, the less reliable the result of the survey will be.(AMBIGUOUS) Second,the use of average number is questionable. A growth on average could possibly result from a sharp increase of a small proportion of_____, while the rest may be left unchanged or even decrease. Without some other statistics such as median and standard deviation, it is hasty to conclude_____.(AVERAGE) Third, without providing any detail about the total of _____, it is unwarranted to make any sound conclusion based on a percentage. Perhaps there is only _____, which only takes up a small portion of the whole. Therefore, any sharp increase/decrease of _____may not bring about a significant change on the whole.(PERCENTAGE). What's more, the conclusion is solely based on an absolute number. But after a thorough observation, we can find out that even the number of _____ is big, it only constitutes a small part of ______. If absolute number can tell the whole truth, maybe what the scientist need to do is only to increase the sample size, which may make any nonexistent causal relationship justified. (ABSOLUTE NUMBER)The evidence that shows little report/ complaint/evidence concerning… does not necessarily guarantee that the (overall customer satisfaction) is good in general.It is entirely possible that (the majority of customers are unwilling to complain), or it may be because that (the customer service department refuses to present the actual report). If this is the case, the author’s recommendation that... may be too hasty to be credible. (NO DATA)Even assuming that the study is statistically reliable, by repeatedly emphasizing on the correlation between __A__ and __B__, the arguer arbitrarily equates the correlation with the cause-and-effect relationship. However, several other possible factors can also bring about __B__. For instance, it may be __A1__ that causes___B__; or perhaps other factors such as__A2____, which exert a significant impact upon __B___.Any of these factors, if true, would cast considerable doubts on the arguer’s conclusion.(假性因果)Even if______ does tremendously boost/hinder_____, it is unwarranted to presume the likewise effectiveness would once again emerge in _____. Very likely, the arguer ignores several fundamental disparities between _____ and_____. Unlike_____, perhaps ______; or it is possible that _____.Unless the author rules out any possible factors distinguishing _____ from ______, we could hardly be convinced by his conclusion.(错误类比)At the beginning, the arguer quotes a survey concerning _____, but when it comes to a conclusion, the arguer abruptly converts it into_____. However, common sense tells us that _____ has a much narrower scope than _____, which is composed of a multitude of other elements such as ______. The author's confusing ______with _____ would turn out to be irresponsible and mis leading.(小推大)The author's reasoning is undermined once again as it is based on a "nationwide" survey, which is impossible to indicate some specific characteristics that distinguish_____ from a majority of nation, Perhaps what characterizes this region is _____, or maybe _____. The argument would turn out to be more convincing if it is based on a more specific investigation relevant to ______.(大推小)Even assuming ______ is responsible for_______, there is no assurance that this situation will continue and remain completely unchanged in the anticipated future. Perhaps______ have been replaced by_______, and a turnaround has emerged in_______. As entirely based on an assumption that a static state will persist in a couple of years, the author's speculation requires further examinations.(过去现在和将来)The author poses a hypothesis that profit of ______ would boost immediately by implementing a strategy of _____.Yet common sense tells us that profit is tightly bound up with two key factors: revenue and cost. Perhaps the spendingon ______ is too huge, or maybe the consumers would show indifference to ______.Also possibly, it is some other factors-such as an improper investment (marketing strategy) or a cost-inflation on raw material-that offset the profit benefiting from ______.Without weighing thoroughly the revenue against the overall cost, the arguer’s conclusion is premature at best.(利润问题)In summary, the primary drawback in the argument is that it bases the conclusion solely on two assumptions, of which the credibility is still doubtful. In order to be more persuasive, the conclusion should provide more details-probably from a further/systematic survey or some respective interviews-to substantiate that_____ , Also I have to know____ .Moreover, it would be welcomed if the arguer could ______ .。

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弃我去者，昨日之日不可留乱我心者，今日之日多烦忧Argument Example调查1, Selective sample:样本选择，一部分被排除在外One major problem is about the sample the author studied in the survey. the author considers only...(selective sub-groups) although (the sub-groups the author studied) do constitute a significant part of (the whole general population), however, (many other sub-groups)are actually excluded from the survey. Perhaps...or...without ruling out all the possibilities above, the author could not make any general conclusion about...merely based on (selective sub-groups).4，14，16，45，63，65，67，80，84，88，90，97，123，146，154，156，168，179，185，193，196，207，227，231，232，236，238，2392, Quantity of the sample样本数量( pointing out that the current sample is too small in its size)(the fact cited by the author) could hardly illustrate the assumption that... because the author provides only N samples of (the general population),however, (the limited sample) might not be representative of the whole general group. thus we cannot accept the author’s conclusi on that...before he/she could provide more statistic data about (the situation of other sub-groups).10，14，33，40，53，69，95，115，123，132，139，150，154，158，167，179，180，188，191，2393, Do the statistics make any difference:调查只调查了部分情况，忽略了一部分The information provided by the author is insufficient for the author to reach the conclusion. the survey only studies the situation of ...(an(some) insignificant case(s)), however, many other more essential cases (related to the final conclusion) were ignored in the survey.(we need to know the condition of some other cases about which we care more/ the current case studied in the survey makes little sense on the final conclusion, the author should provide some more important information about the case he studied. )Lacking further studies on these important issues, the author could not hastily conclude that...merely based on the insignificant study.158，165，183，202，211，217 17，115，147，2205, Who conducted the survey:结果扭曲，调查者为了自己的利益The reliability of the survey is also open to doubt due to the organization who conducted the survey. (the organization)has vested interest in the final decision/conclusion which was based on the result of the survey, and thus might distort the actual answers of the respondents.(the institution/individuals may benefit greatly from the result if the result was interpreted as was currently ) Thus, the author should cite a survey which is conducted by an independent institution to convince us that (the assumption).115，1566, When was the survey conducted:时间变化The effectiveness of the result of the survey cited by the author as main evidence is also open to doubt. The survey was conduct (during a special period, or a long time ago), thus may not reflect the current situations accurately. It is true that ( the survey may reflect the opinions or situations of respondents at thetime when it was conducted), but people’s opinion toward (the subject surveyed)may have changed greatly during the past time (or, while this fact could not sufficiently illustrate that (the general group) will also...all the time)(many factors that could influence the validity of the survey will change in the future, or respondents may act differently during the period when the survey was conducted, thus the result of the survey could not represent the all-time situation. )Thus, a more recent survey, if a survey is needed at all, should be provided to sufficiently illustrate the author’s assumption that...7, Vague data:数据模糊—没有基数The information concerning ...is not accurate enough for us to evaluate the actual condition of ...The author only informs us that (the percentage/fraction of sub-groups which...but we do not know the base amount of (the general group) (if the base amount or corresponding fractions vary, the conclusion would be different. )For lack of detailed information about ( the base amount / fraction of) ... we can hardly assess ...4，5，8，9，11，12，14，16，20，22，23，25，27，31，32，39，42，44，49，52，55，68，70，71，73，77，79，87，89，100，103，120，122，124，130，133，134，135，141，143，144，145，155，159，165，175，177，182，183，189，194，196，199，200，203，204，206，211，212，214，216，222，223，231，236，238 8,Incomplete information:数据不完整The author does not provide complete information concerning ...in illustrating that ...The author only informs us that... but what we care more about is that... which is not provided by the author. (some other substantial information are needed for us to assess the soundness of the argument, and the conclusion would vary greatly when other conditions varied. ) For lack of detailed information about ... we can hardly evaluate ...6，7，8，10，14，15，17，18，20，21，24，27，29，30，32，35，36，38，39，42，43，44，46，49，52，54，64，65，66，68，70，71，73，77，79，81，82，83，84，85，87，88，89，90，91，92，94，95，96，97，98，99，100，103，104，105，107，108，116，117，119，120，127，130，135，137，141，143，144，145，147，150，152，155，161，165，166，167，168，169，170，171，172，174，175，179，180，181，183，184，185，191，192，193，198，199，200，203，205，206，211，212，213，214，215，216，217，218，219，221，222，224，225，226，228，229，231，232，233，235，237，238，239，240，241，2429, Are the respondents forthright when answering the questions:回答者不真实The reliability of the respondents...answers to the survey’s question is not sufficiently justified to support the conclusion...There is possibility that the respondents may not tell the truth about..(answering the questions honestly may lead to some undesirable consequences for the respondents, thus they may evade the crucial point, or even lie in their answers. ) Under such circumstances, it is almost impossible for us to expect the respondents to provide accurate information about their opinion toward...92，199，211，24210, Are the respondents representative:回答者没有代表性We should also notice that the respondents studied in the survey may not represent the general group of ...We all know that in many cases, people who are interested in ...might be generally more likely to respond to the survey than other people are, or are more willing to express their own opinions and positions on the issue of ...(other people who did not respond may hold a totally different position toward the issue studied, and the author should include those people in the study to present a more convincing result. )Without considering the situation of other groups of people, the result of the survey in itself could not justifiably illustrate that ...11，15，17，28，34，40，43，52，55，57，62，65，76，95，102，111，115，117，153，154，161，167，168，174，194，201，206，212，218，224，235比较11, False analogy:错误类比AB，A适合BIn the argument the author recommends A to carry out same (policies, actions, solutions on ... as B, but the analogy between them might be unsubstantiated. The author fails to illustrate that A and B are similar enough at every aspect and are indeed comparable. While it is true that A and B share some common ground on ...there are still some obvious differences between them. (many differences exist between A and B and these differences may well render the policies(actions, solutions, etc) proved to be effective for A might not have the same effectiveness for B )Before A decide to copy B’s experienc es, the author should take these differences into account and make careful study on the comparability of the two (cities, companies, schools, etc).2，4，9，12，13，16，18，20，25，26，28，29，31，35，38，39，41，42，43，44，55，56，67，72，89，91，92，94，97，99，102，108，109，110，116，119，124，125，131，132，133，149，152，155，160，162，169，177，180，182，186，187，192，198，204，205，209，210，211，212，218，226，230，232，235，236，237，238，23912, Incomplete comparison /selective comparison /ex parte information:错误对比AB，A不一定比B 好The author hastily implies that A is superior to B in ... but the comparison between A and B is incomplete. The author only compares ... however, there are myriad of factors which, if differ in these cases, would bring about totally different result for the comparison. (many other factors would influence the result while ignored by the author in the argument ) Without any further consideration about these factors, the author could not convince us that (A is better than B in certain aspect)merely based on an incomplete comparison.13, Confusing comparison and variation:只对比了一部分的变化or vice versa.In the argument the author provides the variation in ...to illustrate that ...Although the variation in ...could partly prove that ... however, we all know that to demonstrate ...the comparison between A and B is actually more convincing and necessary.:(the comparison between those entities could be more convincing in illustrating the conclusion ) Lacking comparison between ... we could not assess if ...23，48，63，85，106，132，135，168，173，179，180，186，188，206，216，224，240Incomplete comparison/exparte information:2，4，17，24，34，49，51，57，60，63，64，77，81，82，85，93，96，98，101，103，105，109，114，126，129，131，132，139，151，159，162，166，167，172，173，179，186，187，188，193，200，203，211，212，214，216，220，222，231，233，234，238，24114, Unrelated concepts:偷换概念In illustrating the assumption that ...the author commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.: The author cites A to prove B, however, A is not a good indication of B. (there are basic differences between A and B, thus A could not be properly used to illustrate B ) The author ought to make careful and clear differentiation between A and B before we could evaluate if the inference that ...is justified.1，3，4，10，11，16，20，23，29，31，34，35，36，38，40，44，48，49，53，55，58，63，67，68，72，77，80，81，85，87，88，89，91，93，96，101，105，106，107，114，120，121，124，130，132，133，134，139，140，143，146，153，155，156，160，161，166，167，172，173，175，181，183，187，188，190，193，194，196，198，199，200，201，Hasty generalization: 38，54，56，59，61，66，81，89，98，137，140，154 203，212，214，215，216，217，218，220，221，223，231，233，234，235，239，24115, Changing scopes:偷换范围The fact that ...could sufficiently substantiate the conclusion that...since the argument is based only on(some special cases) and the author does not differentiate between the ...of (different subjects) .Although the author’s inference that ...might be true for some cases, for example, ...Unfortunately, this is not true of every individual (in the general group).(other subjects may have totally different situation thus the author’s infere nce could not be properly applied to them. ) Unless the author can demonstrate that (the condition of other subjects is similar to that of the case studied), the general conclusion cannot be reached merely basing on these special and limited cases.3，6，8，10，19，22，23，28，29，40，41，44，45，49，51，60，70，80，83，84，87，90，91，93，94，95，96，97，98，113，115，116，117，118，119，121，126，129，130，131，134，135，145，147，148，150，154，156，158，165，171，172，175，176，180，185，187，188，193，194，195，203，205，206，207，211，213，217，218，220，223，230，233，234，24216, Inferring a future condition from a past condition:过去不能推未来In the argument the author suggests that we can (solve current problems or achieve current goals) through methods which have successfully solved the same kind of problems in the past.There is a hidden assumption assumed by the author that all conditions and factors upon which the effectiveness of (the method) depend have remained unchanged during the past (N years).However, many factors could have been changed during the past years. (many conditions and factors could have varied, which might render the solutions which were proved to be effective in the past might not have the same effectiveness in current days or in the future. )Without taking into account all these constantly changing factors, the author could not convince us that the proposed solution could be used to solve current problems successfully.1，2，4，5，8，11，13，15，18，20，21，22，23，25，30，32，36，37，48，52，61，62，65，67，68，73，78，85，87，93，94，95，100，116，119，130，134，136，138，140，146，151，158，161，167，168，171，183，190，201，204，208，209，213，216，218，219，225，226，230，237，240，24130, Lack of controlled experiment/ comparison:没考虑其他变量The author unfairly assumes that it is ...that resulted in ... The causal relationship is convincing only if the author could demonstrate that all other factors that might affect ...remained constant during the same period.(pointing out that corresponding controlled experiment is needed, or explaining how the experiment should be conducted.)Specifically, we need to know (the experiment result of one group of the subjects), Without appropriate comparison between A and B, the assumption that ...is unwarranted.18，23，41，59，75，76，85，103，122，128，153，167，168，175，176，180，206，207，224，236，237，241，242解决办法17, Sufficiency and necessity of a solution:解决办法不够有力The author assumes that the proposed actions are both sufficient and necessary for (achieving certain goal).To solve the problem successfully, many other fundamental requirements must be fulfilled. (many other important works must be done. ) Furthermore, many other available methods besides (the author’s proposal) could also be used to achieve the same purpose. (many other effective methods could also be adopted. )Before the author make a careful and thorough comparison between the effectiveness of his own proposal and other possible methods, the author’s proposal should not be hastily carried out.3，7，8，9，10，12，18，19，20，24，25，26，28，30，39，41，42，43，48，52，54，59，60，64，65，68，69，74，79，80，82，83，85，86，87，90，91，94，96，97，98，99，100，102，104，105，106，107，108，110，111，112，115，116，117，122，123，124，125，127，128，129，131，134，135，136，137，139，140，141，145，146，147，149，152，153，155，157，159，161，162，163，164，166，168，169，170，172，173，175，177，178，181，183，185，187，188，189，190，191，192，194，195，196，197，200，201，204，205，206，208，209，211，212，213，215，217，219，222，224，225，226，227，228，229，230，232，236，237，238，239，240，24218, Failing to consider the feasibility of the conclusion:解决办法没有可行性The feasibility of the arguer’s proposal can also be cast doubt on. The proposal relies on an assumption that (the proposal could be successfully carried out)however, the assumption might be unwarranted due to some critical obstacles. (possible obstacles to the effectiveness of the solution. )Unless the author could demonstrate that those obstacles could be effectively overcome, the proposal might be practically unfeasible.2，24，28，29，39，42，43，51，64，71，86，90，99，102，125，129，132，137，139，141，143，155，163，164，169，172，175，176，178，187，189，191，194，195，204，208，209，210，211，212，217，226，228，230，232，23319, Failing to weigh the advantage and disadvantage thoroughly:没考虑解决方法带来的坏处In claiming that ... the author needs to do more comprehensive research on both positive and negative effects of the proposal. Although the proposal could be adopted to (solve the problem) to a certain degree, however, carrying out the proposal may actually bring about more harmful effects.(possible harmful effects ignored by the author. )Under such scenario, adopting the author’s proposal would harm, rather than benefit, (the author’s purpose).Incomplete thought:1，10，11，15，17，24，27，29，31，32，34，35，37，47，49，50，51，52，53，54，58，59，66，69，71，73，78，84，86，87，90，95，97，98，100，104，107，108，110，111，120，123，124，125，126，128，130，134，136，142，143，144，145，147，151，169，177，193，202，236，239Failing to weigh the advantage and disadvantage thoroughly:1，2，5，9，13，14，21，22，23，24，38，39，40，43，44，52，55，60，62，63，65，67，69，71，72，76，80，82，84，86，89，92，94，96，98，101，102，104，105，107，108，111，112，114，118，119，122，124，125，127，128，129，133，136，151，152，157，160，163，164，168，169，170，172，173，174，176，178，180，181，182，184，185，186，188，189，191，192，193，200，201，204，206，208，210，213，215，217，218，221，224，226，227，228，229，230，231，232，234，237，24220, False dilemma:两者选一，没考虑其他解决办法In explaining ... the author is presenting a false dilemma. The author simply assumes that (the situation would be either A or B), while the two...are not necessarily mutually exclusive.(many other solutions/explanations could be more justifiable.) Before ruling out all the possibilities above, the author could not convince us that there are only those two possible explanations for us to accept.5，33，41，47，82，93，108，113，138，148，150，166，175，182，184，185，190，195，196，202，204，205，213，218，220，233因果关系21, Non-causal relationship:没有因果关系，其他因素的影响The author unfairly assumes that it is ...that resulted in ...:But we can find no concrete evidence to substantiate the inevitable relationship between ...and ...(many other factors could also lead to the result/the author should conduct controlled study to demonstrate the causal relationship )In short, the author could not hastily conclude that ...is the only possible reason for ...before taking above factors into account.1，3，4，6，7，9，12，15，18，19，20，22，26，27，28，33，35，38，39，42，43，44，45，47，48，49，54，55，56，62，63，64，69，70，74，76，77，78，79，80，81，85，88，90，94，96，97，98，106，109，110，112，113，116，119，120，121，122，124，125，131，132，133，135，136，137，139，141，144，145，147，149，150，156，158，159，160，162，167，168，169，171，172，176，181，187，190，192，193，194，199，201，207，209，212，218，220，221，222，223，224，225，228，231，232，235，236，24122, Confusing the cause and the effect:不是A导致B，而是B导致A(少见)In the process of reasoning the author assumes that A is the reason for B.However, the author may confuse the cause and the effect. (there is possibility that it is B that actually causes A )The author fails to rule out the possibility that (B results in A). Since the author has not adequately take this possibility into account, the assumption that ...is untenable.34，72，79，88，105，114，126，129，133，145，153，154，211，227，23223, Confusing concurrence with causality:同时发生不为因果The most important problem is the underlying assumption that it is ...that resulted in ... The author only points out that the two events occurred during the same period, however, we all know that merely a coincidence of two events could not sufficiently demonstrate a causal relationship between them. (many other factors could also lead to the result/the author should conduct controlled study to demonstrate the causal relationship )Many other factors could also lead to ... which might include ... Without ruling out such factors, we could not be convinced that ...is the actual cause of ...1，53，59，60，72，75，90，91，101，105，129，142，153，173，23824, Post hoc, ergo propter hoc:前后发生不为因果The author concludes that ...is responsible for ... the assumption is based on the mere fact that ...occurred after ...however, the sequence of the two events, in itself, does not sufficiently prove that the former caused the later one.(many other factors could also lead to the result/the author should conduct controlled study to demonstrate the causal relationship )...might has resulted from other factors, such as ...Without ruling out these possible scenarios, the author could not establish a causal relationship between ...and ...2，9，16，25，30，92，99，102，110，119，123，170，180，195，205，215，218，230，237，239，242证据25, Insufficient evidence:证据不足The author claims that...by showing that....however, but this piece of information in itself is far from sufficient to demonstrate the assumption that...Although (the information provided by the author) may has some relation with ... (we need more critical important information about the case studied. ) More solid evidence are needed before we could be convinced that ...5，6，7，14，18，23，24，27，29，31，33，36，37，40，44，46，47，52，54，56，57，58，61，67，69，70，73，74，81，93，94，110，111，115，117，130，131，136，138，143，148，150，155，157，165，171，179，190，193，198，201，202，204，211，213，223，231，236，237，238，241Failing to consider the credibility of the evidence:46，47，66，72，76，88，118，136，151，176，22626, Unwarranted assumption/credibility of the evidence:无证据假设，攻击背景The assumption that ...is open to doubt, since the author does not provide any single evidence to substantiate the assumption. (many other possibilities might render the assumption suspect. )Given other possibilities about... the author could not hastily assumes that...6，8，11，12，13，14，15，17，21，22，23，25，28，33，50，53，56，62，64，66，67，74，75，78，83，84，86，87，88，89，90，91，92，95，100，101，102，104，105，108，110，112，113，114，118，120，121，122，125，126，127，128，129，130，132，134，136，137，140，142，144，145，146，148，151，152，156，157，160，161，163，164，169，170，172，174，177，178，179，181，191，192，194，195，197，202，204，205，206，208，210，212，216，218，219，221，222，223，225，228，231，235，236，239，24227, Definition critique:对某一专用名词没有解释，比如药One problem involves the definition of ...The author fails to give a clear definition of ... thus we could not evaluate if...(the definition might be different from what we commonly consider the term to be )As we commonly accept, ually means ... Therefore, if ...is defined as ... then ... is irrelevant to (the author’sconclusion)In one word, without a clear definition of ... it is impossible to assess the strength of the argument.53，72，81，91，105，141，153，167，179，195，196，211，219，223，226，23928, Negative evidence:自相矛盾的证据The author cites the evidence that ...to convince us that ...(the information provided by the author could be used to refute the author’s conclusion.)However, this piece of evidence may well suggest that... and could serve to refute the author’s assumptionThe author should provide more convincing information to reconcile this apparent self-contradictory claim.6，21，62，100，138，139，145，158，173，178，183，189，190，192，200，203，210，216，217，218，225，234，240，241利润问题29, Profit-cost analysis:Even if the aut hor’s proposal could be carried out effectively, we still could not hastily assume that ...will necessarily earn a substantial profit, as the author predicted. To evaluate the profitability of ...we should consider the function of both revenue and expense. However, the author does not provide any single piece of information about the possible cost of (carrying out the author’s proposal).(many key steps of the proposal may involve great expense, if the cost of carrying out the proposal exceeds projected revenue, the institution would be profitless. )Without more information about production costs, it is impossible to assess whether (carrying out the author’s proposal will be profitable).经济因素30, Economical factors:通货膨胀+需求变化Also, some economical factors should be taken into account in the argument. First, we need to know how much did the price of ...actually increase after adjustment for inflation.(if the rate of inflation exceeds the increase in the price of the product, then the increase is reasonable.)Second, the author fails to consider the variation in the demand for ... during the same period. If the supply of ...falls short of demand, then there is good reason for the increased price of ... The soundness of the speaker’s claim is significantly weakened by the lack of above-mentioned economical consideration.。

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gre范文GRE Argument Essay Sample:The argument claims that the electronic games available today are lacking in educational value and are more of a distraction for children. The author suggests that children should instead engagein other activities such as reading or playing sports. This argument is flawed and fails to acknowledge the benefits of electronic games in children's development.Firstly, electronic games can be educational if chosen carefully. There are numerous educational video games available that teach children various subjects such as math, science, and language skills. These games incorporate interactive features and engaging storylines, making learning more enjoyable for children. For example, a study conducted by researchers at the University of Edinburgh found that children who played educational video games in their free time showed improvement in problem-solving skills and cognitive abilities.Secondly, electronic games can also enhance social skills and foster teamwork. Many electronic games today are multiplayer, allowing children to collaborate with others and work towards a common goal. By playing together, children learn to communicate effectively, negotiate, and compromise. This develops their social skills and teaches them valuable teamwork skills which can be useful in various aspects of their lives. In contrast, traditional activities such as reading or playing solo sports do not offer the same level of interaction and collaboration.Furthermore, electronic games can also stimulate creativity andimagination in children. Many games provide a platform for children to create and customize their characters, settings, and storylines. This encourages children to think creatively and use their imagination to build unique game elements. In addition, some games allow children to design and construct their virtual worlds, fostering their creativity and problem-solving skills. These creative abilities are valuable and can be transferred to other areas of life, such as art or problem-solving in real-world situations.In conclusion, the argument that electronic games lack educational value and are merely a distraction for children is not well-founded. Electronic games can offer educational benefits, enhance social skills, and stimulate creativity and imagination in children. However, it is important for parents and educators to carefully select and monitor the games children play to ensure they are appropriate and beneficial. With the right selection, electronic games can be a valuable tool in children's development.。

GRE ARGUE 模板改进版

GRE ARGUE 模板改进版HEADIn this argument, the arguer concludes/recommends/advocates that will lead to . To support/justify the conclusion/claim, the arguer points out/claims that. In addition, the arguer reasons that. The argument suffers from several critical fallacies.BODY小推大An additional reasoning flaw in the argument is the arguer’s underlying assumptionthat are representative of all . However, only is rarely sufficient to establish a general conclusion that . Therefore, I cannot accept the arguer’s generalization about .大推小The arguer commits a fallacy of“misapplied generalization” in assuming that applies specifically to . Lacking the evidence that reflects the general , the arguer cannot justify his recommendation based on the nationwide survey.原因过简：The arguer commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification in assuming that . While A is an important element in deterring B, it is highly possible other fact may have contributed to B. For instance, . And the arguer neglects the fact , without ruling out these and other possible facts, the arguer could not safely draw any significant conclusion or prediction.相同或同时的关系误认为是因果关系：The arguer uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the factthat A coincide with B does not necessary prove that A caused. The arguer has not ruled out other possible causes for B, such as could be responsible for B.错误类比：Analogies draw between A and B are highly suspect because there are many serious differences. For instance, . Although there are points of comparison between A and B, but apparently, differences between A and B clearly outweigh the surface similarities. Thus, it is impossible to conclude that .忽略时间地点的不同：The arguer assumes without justification that the background conditions have remain the same at the different times and different locations. Thus, it is impossible to conclude that .非此即彼：The arguer’s recommendation rests on the unlikely assumption that A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives. However, the arguer overlooks the possibility that. Thus, to some extent, the recommendation is unwarranted.片面性：The arguer fails to consider the B side of might bring. For example, . It may turn out that B side far outweigh the A side, because the arguer’s argument lacks a complete analysis of the situation.The writer concludes that.... To support his conclusion, he providesevidence concerning.... Meanwhile, he reasons that....However, the argument is undermined by a series/ set of precarious assumptions.Though ____ seems to be a big number at first glance, without any information about the whole population of _____, this sample size may not be sufficient to represent the overall situation and thereby rendering the survey little persuasive power. (SAMPLE SIZE)As the selection procedure is unknown according to the argument, we can easily find good reasons to doubt if the sample is random and able to represent the general attitude. It is entirely possible that this survey is studied in a small scale, whereas a lot more_____have been excludedby the research. (SELECTION PROCEDURE)The arguer fails to provide any detailed information about_____. The existing data is far from sufficient to draw a reliable conclusion. First, both the percentages of 51% and 99% can be regarded as a "majority". However, common sense tells us that there are notable disparities between the two. The lower the percentage is, the less reliable the result of the survey will be.(AMBIGUOUS) Second,the use of average number is questionable. A growth on average could possibly result from a sharp increase of a small proportion of_____, while the rest may be left unchanged or even decrease. Without some other statistics such as median andstandard deviation, it is hasty to conclude_____.(AVERAGE) Third, without providing any detail about the total of _____, it is unwarranted to make any sound conclusion based on a percentage. Perhaps there is only _____, which only takes up a small portion of the whole. Therefore, any sharp increase/decrease of _____may not bring about a significant change on the whole.(PERCENTAGE). What's more, the conclusion is solely based on an absolute number. But after a thorough observation, we can find out that even the number of _____ is big, it only constitutes a small part of ______. If absolute number can tell the whole truth, maybe what the scientist need to do is only to increase the sample size, which may make any nonexistent causalrelationship justified. (ABSOLUTE NUMBER)The evidence that shows little report/ complaint/evidence concerning… does not necessarily guarantee that the (overall customer satisfaction) is good in general. It is entirely possible that (the majority of customers are unwilling to complain), or it may be because that (the customer service department refuses to present the actual report). If this is the case, the author’s recommendation that... may be too hasty to be credible. (NO DATA)Even assuming that the study is statistically reliable, by repeatedly emphasizing on the correlation between __A__ and __B__, the arguer arbitrarily equates thecorrelation with the cause-and-effect relationship. However, several other possible factors can also bring about __B__. For instance, it may be __A1__ that causes___B__; or perhaps other factors such as__A2____, which exert a significant impact upon __B___.Any of these factors, if true, would cast considerable doubts on the arguer’s conclusion.(假性因果)Even if______ does tremendously boost/hinder_____, it is unwarranted to presume the likewise effectiveness would once again emerge in _____. Very likely, the arguer ignores several fundamental disparities between _____ and_____. Unlike_____, perhaps ______; or it is possible that _____.Unless the author rules out any possible factorsdistinguishing _____ from ______, we could hardly be convinced by his conclusion.(错误类比)At the beginning, the arguer quotes a survey concerning _____, but when it comes to a conclusion, the arguer abruptly converts it into_____. However, common sense tells us that _____ has a much narrower scope than _____, which is composed of a multitude of other elements such as ______. The author's confusing ______with _____ would turn out to be irresponsible and misleading.(小推大)The author's reasoning is undermined once again as it is based on a "nationwide" survey, which is impossible to indicate some specific characteristics thatdistinguish_____ from a majority of nation, Perhaps what characterizes this region is _____, or maybe _____. The argument would turn out to be more convincing if it is based on a more specific investigation relevant to ______.(大推小)Even assuming ______ is responsible for_______, there is no assurance that this situation will continue and remain completely unchanged in the anticipated future. Perhaps______ have been replaced by_______, and a turnaround has emerged in_______. As entirely based on an assumption that a static state will persist in a couple of years, the author's speculation requires further examinations.(过去现在和将来)The author poses a hypothesis thatprofit of ______ would boost immediately by implementing a strategy of _____.Yet common sense tells us that profit is tightly bound up with two key factors: revenue and cost. Perhaps the spending on ______ is too huge, or maybe the consumers would show indifference to ______.Also possibly, it is some other factors-such as an improper investment (marketing strategy) or a cost-inflation on raw material-that offset the profit benefiting from ______.Without weighing thoroughly the revenue against the overall cost, the arguer’s conclusion is premature at best.(利润问题)In summary, the primary drawback in the argument is that it bases the conclusion solely on two assumptions, of which the credibilityis still doubtful. In order to be more persuasive, the conclusion should provide more details-probably from a further/systematic survey or some respective interviews-to substantiate that_____ , Also I have to know____ .Moreover, it would be welcomed if the arguer could ______ .。

Argue 模版

要想在短期内快速提高GRE作文成绩，记一些作文模板无疑是最快捷，高效的一种方法，下面是GRE作文中开头，正文，结尾的一些经典句型模板。

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Argument句型开头In this analysis, the arguer claims that … should … To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example of … where … In addition, the arguer assumes that … This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.正文：For instance … since … what’s more … etc.and how well it represented the public opinions..The sample of the survey is not representative.(样本太小)the sample is too small to...(光数字没比例)the ratio of four to sixthere is only figures but no proportion of the survey 还是ratio?Insufficient SampleIf the [respondents] only stand for a tiny proportion of the whole [group], we should not be so sure about the conclusion that [the whole group…] The arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.It was only carried out in Sun City, but the arguer applies its result to all the company’s markets while doesn’t show us whether Sun City is a representative market of the whole markets.有的病人会对抗生素过敏the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. Even if the maintenance of the airline has been improved as a result of sending its mechanics to the Seminar, which is, of course, an unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that就算怎样，也不怎样The survey is based on two isolated examples. The arguer should survey more hospitals of both types.循环假设The arguer commits a fallacy of begging the question in assuming that …结尾：other possible causes of the …To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.以上即是GRE作文的一些经典模板，考生备考时可以借鉴，希望考生能加强记忆这些模板，在GRE作文部分定会有质的飞跃。

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Argument1.1) In this argument the speaker concludes that2) To justify this contusion the speaker cites a recent survey of3) The speaker also points out that4) This argument is unpersuasive for several reasons.2.1) First, the survey must be shown to be reliable before I can accept any contusions based upon it.2) Specifically, the responses must be accurate, and the respondents must be statistically significant in number and representative of the overall3) Without evidence of the survey's reliability, it is impossible to draw any firm conclusions about the current dietary habits of3.1) Second, the argument relies on the dubious assumption that following the government's nutrition recommendations2) It is entirely possible that3) Thus without evidence to substantiate this assumption the speaker cannot reasonably conclude that4) Third, the speaker assumes too hastily that…Without ruling out this possibility the speaker cannot reasonably conclude with any confidence that5) Lacking firm evidence that …, the speaker cannot justify any conclusions about the4.1) Finally, even if the …, the speaker overlooks the possibility that2) Unless all other habits affecting health have remained unchanged, the speaker cannot justifiably conclude that the overall5.1) In sum, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen it the speaker must show that the survey accurately reflects2) The speaker must also show that3) Finally, to better assess the argument I would need more information about the manner and extent to which。

高分学生自行整理：GRE Argument写作模板

The argument wrongly attributed A to BThe argument simply equates becoming famous and getting highly paid to attaining real musical achievements.A might pose a negative impact on B, as opposed to the benign consequences conceived by the author. Installing the software may actually pose negative effects on the employees ’morale, rather than the bett er work ethic which is conceived by the author.A is not a good indication of B.The sales of recorded music are not a good indication of the popularity of rock and roll.解释他因：1. The author oversimplifies the factors that could …2. The author fails to incorporate other possible causes that can also3. Any of these scenarios, if true would cast considerable doubt on the argument ’s conclusion that..想不出类型的时候可以这么说：1. We may well ask that is A a good indication of B?2. Another question that should be addressed is: can the consumers reliably distinguish products that aremade with CCC’s copper?3. 示例段落模板 :The author suggests that we should apply the same(A’s) method to B. To evaluate this recommendation, we may well ask that are A and B comparable? As we know, A and B might differ/divide in 。

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In this argument, the arguer advocates that [main idea].✓·in order to 好/boost (sagging) profits/improve the economic health✓·A should emulate B’s measures✓To bolster the conclusion,✓the arguer provides the evidence/statistics that...,✓points out that...✓cites the result of a resent survey that... indicated a preference for...✓cites data collected during a recent study, suggesting that ...✓along with the fact that .../ based on which he assumes that ...✓In addition/Furthermore/Meanwhile,✓he projects/predicts thatAlthough this argument might seem reasonable at first glance, it is in fact ill-conceived. The reasons are stated as follows.In the first place/In the second place/The last but not the least✓the threshold problem with this argument is that ……✓the argument depends on a dubious assumption that……✓the arguer assumes that no factor other than .... is responsible for/gives birth to……✓even if the evidence turns out to support the foregoing assumptions, the arguer just simply assumes that……✓Although this is entirely possible, the arguer offers no evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption.✓Nevertheless, there is no guarantee that it is necessarily the case, and the arguer does not supply any evidence to confirm this assumption.✓and neither any conclusive scientific evidence nor any anecdotal evidence is provided to affirm this assumption.✓It is very likely that✓It is possible that……✓It is reasonable to doubt that what the arguer assumes will not happen in reality. It is just as possible that……✓An appropriate example is not very far to seek.✓To illustrate this point clearly, let us take a look at the following representative example.✓The arguer's reasoning is flawed unless the arguer can convince me that these and other possible scenarios are unlikely.✓Without accounting for and ruling out these and other alternative explanations, the arguer cannot bolster the recommendation.✓Without patching these logical flaws /better evidence that the study/survey is statistically reliable the arguer cannot rely on it to draw any firm conclusions.✓To reach the cited conclusion, the arguer must explain either why none of these alternatives is available or why none of them is able to sustain.✓To reach the cited conclusion,the arguer should account for and rule out these possibilities. ✓the following deductions appear to be precarious since the most important premise proves to be unwarranted.To sum up, the conclusion reached by the arguer lacks credibility since the argument has several flaws which render it logically unpersuasive as it stands. In order to draw a better conclusion, the arguer should✓first further develop his argument by ……✓reason more convincingly, cite some evidence that is more persuasive to show the****.✓And also, he should eliminate the possible influences interrupting the analogy experiment.✓At last he should discreetly reconsider the proposal for ……✓Additionally, the author would provide more information to show that ……, and take every possible consideration into account.Therefore, if the author had considered the given factors discussed above, the argument would have been more through and acceptable.两个东西不相关From the outset,the author has failed to build a strong connection concerning the secondary infections and the problems faced by the two groups of patients. Considering the few information the author has provided me with, I am not sure the two groups of patients have even been infected for a second time.In addition, the doctors have limited the secondary infections on the severe muscle strain. It is somehow different form the normal muscle injuries and the author has also omitted the possible distinctions here. Since the secondary infections may not inflict the patients, the following deductions appear to be precarious since the most important premise proves to be unwarranted.Sample 不可信From the outset, what is the most fatal, the author's overall view is based on a precarious sample. /The arguer provides no evidence that survey’s respondents are representative of the overall group of ...Twenty five infants cannot well represent a truth generally for the relatively small number of individuals is dubious for scientific observation.This argument contains neither sign of random sampling nor the specific way how the study was conducted.Nor to mention the author has failed to convince me by providing with enough details focusing on the individual characteristics, necessarily including the personality of the parents, the circumstance they were facing since they were born and so on. Possibly, the twenty five infants all belong to a specific type of people; that is to say, their formation of the personalities cannot well illustrate a common truth withheld by all the infants.调查不可信Since the survey is a telephone survey, the reliability of its result is suspicious at many aspects, e.g. the size of the sample, who responded to the survey, if therespondents could exactly understand the questions, if the respondents were forthright when answering the questions, etc.没有对比，无法定义And also, the unfamiliar stimuli, as the author claims, can probably have the same effects on most of the infants. As we all know, it is the human instinct to be scared by the unknown; such characteristics may intensively appear on the infants. Maybe every infant tend to be distressful confronting the unfamiliar, somehow unpleasing stimuli as the infants in the group; therefore there is no reason to believe the distress only exist in the group. Since there is not a control group, which can eliminate such possibility, the author's evidence pointing out the special distress displayed by the group of infants has no strong bases. The comparison is deadly needed since the evidence presented here is a threshold process in verifying the effects of melatonin.还有其他的原因，不是就这一个Even if I admit, the group of the infants can accurately and precisely reflect the special signs of distress,is that to say the production of melatonin is the true reason leading to the result? As I have mentioned above, the genetic inheritance, the environment the infants have faced since the birth and many other factors can also contribute to the distress. Moreover, melatonin may not be the only hormone in effect; there can be a wide varieties of stimuli engendered by their mothers, correspondingly effect the infants; and thus there is no reason to believe a single hormone is the only effective factor, instead of a possible cooperative result. Still the author should provide some control teams eliminating the unrelated influences.错上加错In addition ，the follow-up studying doesn't help to explain and compensate for the fallacies mentioned above;on contrast it further aggravates the confusions made by the author. The author has mentioned a research made in the group of infants who are now teenagers. The relation is not accurate or strong enough to relate the signs to their condition as infants, while categorizing them into the shyness in strictly medical sense. The different conditions in growing up, can be more effective factor deciding what they are when they are teenagers; in fact, if an individual grows up without brother or sister, he can be a silent person since he never get used to talking to others. Such continuation cannot be truly verified, considering the murky information in observing the overall growing process of the infants.类比有错误Even if I admit that the two groups of patients are confronting the secondary infections as the author has stated, the author's analogy appears to be dubious.First and the foremost the author failed to illustrate with detailed information focusing on the patients. If the patients being to the first group treated by Dr. Newland are much stronger on average than that in the second group then the comparison is of little meaning.As a common sense in experiment the scientist should control unrelated factors as much as possible;besides the worries mentioned above, the factors say the age, the gender, or even the live style can also lead to a distinction in recovery. Secondly, if I omit the fallacies above, the author should illustrate his evidence, detailing the difference of two doctors and their treating method. Possibly, Dr. Newland is an expert in muscle injuries and Dr.Alton has a wider scope in his major and therefore, Dr. Alton doesn't have performance as excellent as Dr. Newland. And the treating condition and environment can also be divergent;a specifist may have better and more fitful medical utility dealing with the problem. Thus to blame the secondary infections for the delay in recovery is highly reckless while not ruling out all the alternative explanation all mentioned above.两个东西不能比，有差别In the ** place,Another trouble with the argument is that no clear evidence is provided to substantiate that the endemic/national statistics about the *** can be applied equally to other regions in the country. Adimittedly this might be possible that these town County embrace same characteristic to some extent,however,an inherent distinctions between every regions will inform us the exitence of another ability that……,which perhaps is very different from other regions in the country.逻辑错误调查错误·the sampling of the study is reliable.It is very likely that the experimental and the control groups of the study were not randomly chosen.For example, they are just ... which could not represent a diverse cross section of the population. 画蛇添足·it is necessary that过去·be responsible for/contribute to/ give birth to未来·this trend in... will continue in the future空间变化·the similar strategy will carry a similar result at ...另起炉灶·no course of action other than the proposed one will contribute to the problem.It is just as possible that other proposals might also solve the problem.For example, there are ...负面影响· there is no possible detrimental effect of...例子核心词汇such as/ especially if/人口因素·A has experienced a large growth in its population管理因素·imprudent (pricing and distribution) strategies or poor management偶然因素... was an aberration先天因素·... was more relatively healthy/relatively bright than average to begin with.For example, they exercise regularly and eat healthily司机因素... do not have enough security knowledge in mind or do not keep alert all the time.For example, a large portion of A, who enjoy the feeling of freedom and high speed, are bold and careless, which may be the lurking danger for accidents.时间因素were traveling during less safe times of the day, such as early in the morning, or during twilight地形因素the geographic features of ... are more conductive to cause accidents.For example, ... has many sharp turns天气因素poor weather价格因素the price of... has been cut down in order to tout consumers旅游因素A is a tour resort, so the customers who ... are mainly tourists instead of local residents.宴会因素most of th e consumption is from the big company’s invitation banquet品牌因素A has some special advantage thatB do not have - and that it cannot duplicate in any other types. 供求因素Property values are a function of supply and demand.It is at least likely that the demand for housing in the area happens to rocket dramatically due to an influx of major employers.In addition, it is possible that the supply of housing has decreased.竞争因素A’s competitive opponent firms and companies move to other cities. (go bankrupt)成本因素the cost for ... may has gone up rapidly, which will have to be included in the retail price of ...市场因素consumption of other similar products have also declined during that time,the amount of which might even exceed that of ...价格因素the earlier products are prohibitively expensive for most consumers改革因素the university built more laboratories in the past two years, and then, it is obvious that more money would spend on the new projects.教授因素there are too few professors of botany in the university and the students, although lack of interest, have no choice but to attend Thomas's class必修因素the classes she teaches are requirements for every science student.老师因素the school hired more effective teachers whose outstanding teaching methods contributed to theimprovement of……新旧因素... has to update its trucks, which are old and out of service, rather than add to its new...规模因素the size of the farms has shrinked.For example, a farm which has 30 cows producing more milk than two farms each of which has 10 cows.质量因素... is not so good, so people are unwilling to go to ... when they ...顾客因素many customers are indeed disgruntled about..., but too busy to take time and effort to formally complain.领导因素college career-planning staff provides students with little information about the current job market. 竞争因素·they have already attended a similar coursethere are cheaper but highly-qualified products from the formidable opponents/ the surrounding areas coming in the instant future insomuch as these products will tout more customers and make the future’s sales sharply down;习惯原因the consumer tastes and habits have become so well entrenched that consumers would not be glad to change.流行因素It is well known that the taste of the public especially when it comes to such vogue cases as ... shifts quicker than anyone can imagine. Today’s hot issue may well be in tomorrow’s landfill. Maybe at that time ... are in the fashion due to... other than...个人因素many unemployed residents are unwilling to go to work if offered the chance, for their handsome welfare can support their families。

如何argue拒信（优秀范文5篇）

如何argue拒信（优秀范文5篇）第一篇：如何argue拒信来嘛，姐姐教你argue拒信~2012-04-13 21:16 |(分类:默认分类) 不知道对今年申请的兄弟姐妹还有没有帮助，master结果偏晚的学校和专业或许可以参考。

非申请总结，仅转播74小时抢救AD行动。

/* Before Admission Committee Decision */该program的DDL是3.1，我在1月底submit完毕，2月初收到complete确认，但是小秘称要等到3.1才会开始审材料。

//不管官方声称的是不是rolling admission，个人认为master还是尽量早提交，我们都无从得知那帮committee到底会怎么搞，压线提交的话万一真是rolling就亏大了。

2月份试图套磁，给Program Director发了两封邮件，给Program Specialist发了一封，均未得到回复。

//PhD有prof可以套，但是master不好说，因为要找到愿意理你、愿意帮你、在committee里说话有分量的人抱大腿，可是收了你对他还没什么好处，至少对于这个career-oriented program而言，prof不会指望小硕能给伊做出神马research。

不过试一试总是应该的，只要邮件别写的太X…你的名字在他眼前晃一晃或许有意想不到的效果哦~ The exposure effect啊！熟悉的事物会让人产生莫名好感呐！之前只有一份实习，太过于单薄了，而且还傻了吧唧的就写了一份在CV上，事后无数人批评我真给中国人丢脸，连编都不会编一个。

于是顶着毕设、四门课、以及想出去旅游的冲动，我还是决定找实习，美国公司，并且在该program的几个concentration里面找一个去match一下。

//虽然我在这方面吃了大亏，造假也早已不是少见的事，得了便宜的人也不可能都遇到了什么报应，但我相信，人在做，天在看，Things will have a way of coming back to us in the end.哪怕仅仅是为了内心的安宁与坦荡，也还是傻一点吧。

GRE写作Argument范文1

6.开头：1. In this article, the author concludes that the decline in arctic deer population must be due to global warming, which has led to the melting of ice.2. Her conclusion is mainly based on the following evidence. (1)Local hunter reports that deer number is decreasing; (2) arctic deer needs to travel on ice from island to island in order to find food; (3) global warming has caused ice to melt.3. However, the above evidence is insufficient for the author to draw the conclusion, unless she provides more relevant information.正文：第一段：1. First of all, the author clearly assumes that the global warming trend is significant enough to impact the thickness of ice over the region where arctic deer live.2. However, granted that much ice is beginning to melt, it may happen in places relatively warmer than where the deer reside. In fact, this area may still be quite coldand the ice is frozen almost the entire year. Thus, the migration pattern of the deer has not been influenced at all, so global warming cannot have been the cause of the decline in deer population.3. Thus, the author should provide more specific information regarding the extent to which ice has melted around this region, or else her conclusion can only remain questionable.第二段：1. Furthermore, the author also assumes that the hunter s’ report is reliable.2. However, perhaps deer are the common prey for hunters. Because of many years of being chased around, nowadays deer have become more alert of danger from human and are thus better at hiding themselves. As a result, even if deer population has actually remained stable, the observed number is much smaller than before.3. Hence, the author had better draw evidence from more trustworthy sources, rather than simply rely on words from some random hunters. Otherwise, there may be nothing to explain in the first place.第三段：1. Last, even if ice has begun to melt where the deer travel, and even if the number of deer has drastically declined, it does not entail that the decrease results from the melting of ice. Clearly, the author assumes that no other causes can equally account for the phenomenon.2. However, perhaps a contagious and deadly disease has started spreading among the deer population. Or perhaps the local hunting activity has become much more intense than ever. Or maybe the number of other predators of deer has grown exponentially. All these possibilities, if true, would help explain such decline.3. Thus, the author needs to provide further information regarding the health status of the deer herd, the intensity of hunting around the region, and the change in number of deer’s predators.结尾：In conclusion, the author should offer all aforementioned evidence, so that she can legitimately conclude that the melting of ice is the villain for the decline of deer population.。

GRE 作文满分模板Arguement

GRE ARGUMENT 1On the other hand, Ii n the follow-up study the版权声明: 文书的刊登已经过顾客的授权许可, 详情请参见我们的隐私条款, 如果您的文书在经过我们的修改润色后成功帮助您申请到心仪的学校, 您也可以选择将您的申请文书授权给我们, 我们将把您的文书加入到此栏目中, 和更多的同学一起分享. 同时我们对愿意提供给我们做范文的客户会有一定的回馈活动, 具体活动请联系客服详询, 更多修改范文, 欢迎随时来电来函咨询！say. To fix this problem, use clearer words and write more directly with as few words as possible to get your meaning across.I think you can add more to your last 2 paragraphs. The second to last paragraph is only2 sentences, and your argument isn’t really developed (see my comment on the side). If you cannot think of anything else to add, maybe you could delete this paragraph. Your last paragraph, the conclusion, could be improved by going over the rest of yourarguments and summarizing them. Keep the last 2 sentences, though, because they are good for ending.版权声明这篇范文的刊登已经过顾客的授权许可，Best Writing 拥有此篇范文的版权。

GRE Argue 模板

Argument 1_ 杀虫公司In this memo the vice president of the food distribution company recommends selecting Buzzoff Company the best mean to save money. To support this recommendation, the vice president cites the fact that the worthy of the food destroyed in the warehouse which Fly-Away Pest Control Company is in charge of is higher last month. His account of this fact, however, reveals several absent of critical evidence needed to evaluate the judgment. Together, these problems serve to undermine the speaker’s argument.First, the vice president assumes that the result of this certain survey deserves enough credit and is representative of the future 水平of Fly-Away Pest Control Company. However, the president fails to provide any evidence to justify the 权威性of the method they adopted in the survey. Thus it is equally possible that the so-called “damaged” they defined as “caused by pest damage”is the ramification of other kind of causes, such as improper storage conditions. Besides, the data acquired merely in a month is not an adequate indicator of the ability of the Fly-Away Pest Control Company either. Maybe there has been a major 虫灾in the city last month. Since the memo fails to account for this alternative explanation, the president cannot convince me that the result of the food damage survey is capable of reflecting the Fly-Away Pest Control Company’s inferiority. Moreover, without ruling out the possibility that Fly-Away Pest Control Company is working on a more effective way to control pest and the company will be more 有效in the future, the validity of the president’s claim will be deminished.Secondly, even if the survey’s result is reliable, it is not fair to compare the two companies which protected food in two different cities. In order for the justifiability of this comparison, one must assume that all the other relevant circumstances involving the food protection are exactly the same. Unfortunately, this assumption is unwarranted. Perhaps, the Palm city where the Fly-Away Pest Control Company is in charge of has a more suitable environment for the pest’s prosperity. Or, perhaps the warehouse in Palm City is significantly larger than the one in the Wintervale and stores much larger amount of the food. Thus the 20,000 dollars loss does not necessarily demonstrate the Fly-Away Pest Control Company’s disability, if the warehouse in the Palm City is to be protected by Buzzoff Company, the loss might be even bigger.Thirdly, even though the Buzzoff Company is in fact more efficient to control the pest, without providing any information about the prices the two companies charge, the president cannot safely conclude that choosing Buzzoff Company can save more money. If the price they charge is so high that it exceeds the amount saved from food damage by abandoning Fly-Away Pest Control Company, this choice will be inadvisable and inexpedient.In sum, the fact that the recommendation lacks certain essential evidences renders it unconvincing as it stands. To bolster the recommendation the vice president must provide clear evidence that the result of the survey is correct and representative and that the relevant conditions in two cities is almost identical so that the superiority of the Buzzoff is explicit. To better assess the recommendation, I would also need to know the exact prices both companies charges as well as the estimated loss after the adopting of one of the companies.。