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托福文章小结题

托福文章小结题
托福文章小结题是指对一篇托福阅读或听力文章进行总结，概括主要内容和观点。

在700字的篇幅内，我们可以按照以下结构进行文章的小结。

1.引言（约50字）：
首先，引言部分可以简要介绍文章的背景，包括文章类型（阅读或听力），文章主题以及作者观点。

2.主体部分（约600字）：
在主体部分，我们可以按照以下内容进行总结：
a.介绍文章主要内容（约200字）：
首先，我们可以描述文章的主要内容，包括事件、人物或理论等，我们要尽量全面地概括文章。

b.总结作者观点（约200字）：
其次，我们可以总结文章中作者的观点或立场。

这可能通过解释作者提供的证据或例子，来支持或反驳某个观点。

c.提出自己的观点（约200字）：
最后，我们可以根据文章的内容提出自己的观点。

我们可以提出自己的解释、态度或对文章的意义等。

3.结论（约50字）：
最后，在结论部分，我们可以简要总结文章，并强调我们的观点，并为读者提供进一步思考的空间。

总体上，这篇文章小结应该包含引言、主体部分和结论三个部分。

在主体部分，我们可以按照文章的内容、作者观点和自己的观点来逐一总结。

整篇文章应该逻辑清晰，条理清楚，并简明扼要地表达出文章的主旨和核心观点。

同时，要注意语言的准确性和流畅性，使小结能够清晰地传达给读者。

托福写作之重点总结归纳

托福写作之重点总结归纳
1.写作技巧
包括文章结构、段落展开、语言表达等方面的技巧。

2.论证方法
如何运用事实、数据和例子来支持自己的观点，如何进行有效的论证。

3.常用表达
积累一些常用的表达和句型，以便在写作中灵活运用。

4.语法知识
掌握基本的语法知识，如句子结构、动词时态、名词数等，避免常见的语法错误。

5.写作规范
了解写作规范，如拼写、标点、大小写等方面的规范，使文章更加规范和专业。

6.练习与修改
多进行写作练习，并注重修改和反思，不断提高自己的写作水平。

通过以上方面的重点总结归纳，可以提升托福写作能力和水平，取得更好的成绩。

【英语考试托福】托福写作总结（TONY老师）共（15页）

托福写作总结托福考试的介绍：综合写作（integrated）20分钟主要靠听力Write 理想字数150字/20分钟理想分数3~4分独立写作（independent）30分钟理想字数350字/25分钟理想分数4~5分算分方法：(integrated + independent)/2*6POOL:熟练掌握题库185道题目，最少读三遍，对题目进行分类（合并题目，掌握热点）EducationLearning托福考试热点EnvironmentLessons in lifeModern technologyMass media独立写作的框架：（开头50字，结尾50字，中间分三段，每段80个字。

）Definition1.1Hook HistoryImportance1. Introduction ControversyQuotation1.2 Bridge1.3 Main point1.1 Hook常用表达：1. Contrary to what most people believe, ( ) are not amodern concept.1.11 History2. ( ) have a venerable history, dating back to thousands ofyears ago.3. ( ) have a history nearly as long as human civilizationitself.4. Ancient Chinese/ ancient Egyptians/ ancient Indians/cavemen ( ).These activities can be seen as the earliestforms of ( ).1. ( ) be playing an increasingly important role in ( ).2. ( ) be an indispensable part in ( ).1.12Importance 3. ( ) has/ve had enormous (tremendous) impacts(influences/effects) on every aspect (fact) of ( ).4. ( ) has/ve evolved into a multi-billion dollar industry.1. Opinions about ( )’s effects on ( ) have varied.1.13Controversy2. Has created considerable controversy in/among ( ).本土化）1.14Quotation Explanation ( sb ), one of the greater and most influential(most brilliant, foremost) Chinese(philosophers, scholars, educators, thinkers,writers, artists, statesmen, military, leaders,scientists …)(of the 20th century) remarkedImagination (Mencius) history is a clear mirror, historyis a bright lamp, history is a wise teacher.（Confucius 子曰）具体内容见讲义附录Introduction 除了用hook 之外，还可以用question (bridge) 的格式来写。

托福写作总结

托福写作总结1.科技Thanks to modern technology, people nowadays get to enjoy various ways to keepcontact, such as Email and cell phone.With one click of mouse, the whole world is presented in front of them.Besides, communication technologies also enable students to have discussions or debate on forums or chatting room, where great experience can be shared and ideas exchanged.FacilitateAlthough, communication technologies enable us to have discussions or debates on chatting rooms at home, I realize that the traditional face to face communication can never be replaced by anything else.In contemporary society, with the development of technology, people have an increasing rely on high-tech products.2.任务meet the deadlineSkills on time management enable them to arrange their time rationally.We may be lazy and begin to put off the tasks. We may even lose the sense of day and night.When the deadline is approaching, we have to do the job in a hurry. In this case, the task would usually be finished in a low quality.3.交流skills on communication allow them to cooperate with their colleagues readily.During the discussion, we found ourselves running out of new ideas.A brilliant idea popped into his head4.朋友Thank to modern technology, keeping in touch with a friend across the ocean is nolonger beyond reach.Share laughter and tear with friends.Real friendship goes beyond distance.Point out your flaws and show you how to make up for them.5.搬家new social network, cultural experience and working opportunitiesChange one’s life path and point him in the right direction.Open up more life opportunities for us.6.钱face heavy financial burdenCut down the training expensesA has become a big burden forGovernment should focus its budget onAnd B can mainly rely on Non-government Organizations.Children have weak judgments about money issues.bring a huge sum of moneyProduce a far-reaching impact onBring huge profits to local residents.Provide a financial support7.创新A leaves room for innovation.To foster one’s sense ofIn Google, there is a twenty percent program, that the employees of Google will use twenty percent of their working time to innovation and to benefit their company. The well known projects such as Google sky and Google mail are all from this program.8.学习As known to all, there is no better time for study in our entire life than the early youth.Academic performance will suffer.Education has long been regarded as a life-long process.College Entrance ExamWhite collarsChildren from poor families used to miss out of school due to economic reasons, yet in contemporary China, the Nine-year compulsory Education Policy guarantees that every child is given equal right to learn.We have to study hard to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potential and to win our lives.go overseas to further our study and get master degrees.Nowadays students just tend to get used to the pattern of listening to what their teachers say and accept them without doubt.Develop in an all-around way9.成功The definition of success varies from person to person.Social circle, teamwork spirit and communicative skill attribute a successful life.Have a better interpersonal relationshipSuccess is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.不成功Guess what he is now? He just passed his 35-years’ birthday as a basic level employee in a small local company.10.团队show better teamwork performanceCollaboration plays a crucial role in a teamMichael Jordan rocked the world with his 3-point shoot at the last three seconds in the 1988 playoff. But without the pass from his teammates, he can hardly win the game.11.人脉People who know how to win popular tend to have more friends. Such social networkis essential to future success.12.工作It is a decent job that determines a good material life.With a decent salary, one gets to taste a rich variety of cuisines in fancy restaurants, afford highly equipped apartment with sound securities and go on trips all around the world.Self-improvementBy dealing with complaints, a receptionist learns how to improve his/her conversing techniques and comfort consumers with patience.By giving presentations to clients, a marketing director learns to overcome shyness and develop his ability to speak in public.By arranging daily business schedule, a secretary gets to train her organizing and communicating skills.Develop one’s interpersonal skill, which may put them in a favorable position in future job market.13.幸福Only when basic needs of life are fully satisfied can one feel relieved and focus onother aspect of life.With the development of people’s living condition.No matter how resourceful and connected he seems gratification coming from a happy family can never be replaced by anything else.14.时间A can hardly squeeze time for sth.15.快节奏the ever changing rapid developmentThe constant changing societyChange by each passing dayAnother trend of modern society makes my opinion even more solid.The society is developing in an amazing speed and dramatic change occurred in every single day.16.政府Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price.Take effective measures to solve the problem17.旅行Vocation gives us a chance to get away from all that familiar to us and see the worldfrom a new perspective. It lets you do nothing but play, the way you did when you was a little child. Even for a short period of time, it is absolutely necessary for everyone’s mental health.Broaden your knowledge and widen your horizon.18.坚持Our most glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.19.健康Using high-tech products will do harm to our health.。

托福考试心得(通用5篇)

托福考试心得(通用5篇)托福考试心得篇1探索自我：托福考试之旅在探索自我和世界的过程中，语言技能扮演着关键的角色。

我深知这一点，在我踏上托福考试之旅时，我决心全力以赴。

经过数月的准备，我以积极的态度和坚定的信心迎接了这场挑战。

托福考试是一项需要严谨准备和充分耐心的任务。

我了解到，托福考试并非简单地测试语言知识，而是考察学生在实际语言环境中的运用和理解能力。

因此，我在备考期间，不仅努力温习语法和词汇知识，还积极阅读、写作和口语练习，模拟真实考试环境。

在考试过程中，我深刻体会到托福考试的严谨性和公平性。

每一道题目都要求我在有限时间内做出迅速而准确的回答。

考试的压力和紧张感确实存在，但我努力保持冷静，按照计划和策略进行答题。

尤其是阅读和听力部分，我尽可能在每道题目上留下足够的时间，并对不确定的答案进行了反复推敲。

在口语和写作部分，我积极表达自己的观点，并在可能的情况下提供支持。

经过紧张的等待，我得知了考试结果。

虽然分数不尽如人意，但我并不沮丧。

相反，我将其视为一个学习和成长的机会。

我分析了错误，反思了自己的不足，并制定了相应的改进计划。

通过这次托福考试之旅，我收获了宝贵的经验教训。

我了解到，无论考试结果如何，重要的是在备考过程中不断提高自己，发掘自己的潜力。

此外，我还学会了如何在压力下保持冷静和专注，以及如何有效地管理时间。

总的来说，托福考试是一次宝贵的学习和成长经历。

它不仅测试了我的语言技能，还帮助我探索和了解了自己。

虽然结果不是完美的，但我从中获得了宝贵的经验，这些经验将帮助我在未来的学习和生活中取得更大的成功。

托福考试心得篇2我参加了____年的托福考试，总的来说，我对这次经历有一些深刻的感受和收获。

在考试前，我做了充分的准备。

我购买了相关的备考资料，并制定了详细的学习计划。

我花费大量时间在模拟考试上，以熟悉考试的形式和流程。

这不仅帮助我理解考试的形式，也帮助我建立了信心。

考试当天，我被安排在上午的考试。

新托福写作范文(热门4篇)

新托福写作范文第1篇Task：It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.托福写作模板范文参考：We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.新托福写作范文第2篇Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people saythat computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：Some universities require students to choose a variety of subjects; others only require students tospecialize in one subject. I deem the first one as the premier choice. Among countless factors,there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity that students should take classes in many subjects is that theycan make full use of the abundant resources that a university has to offer. A university has plentyof educational and research resources. It is a very good idea to make full use of these valuableassets while studying in the university. The best way to achieve this is to take a variety of subjectsas much as possible. Through learning these courses, a student can get access to knowledge andresources in different areas. On the contrary, if a student only specializes in one subject, he willnot have a chance to get access to other resources offered by the university.Another reason can be seen by every person is that by choosing many subjects students can broaden their knowledge and make a solid foundation for their future concentrated study. Whatever the student will concentrate on in his senior years in college, it is necessary that hechoose a wide range of subjects to build the knowledge foundation. Take the field of BusinessManagement for example, the student has to acquire knowledge in writing, accounting, economicsand human resource management before he can successfully start his major concentration argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because studentscan be more adaptable in their future career if they choose a variety of subjects during theiruniversity study. It is obvious that the development of modern society requires people with inter-disciplinary and comprehensive knowledge. If a student chooses a variety of subjects in hisuniversity study, and gained a breath and width of knowledge, he will be more adaptable to therequirement of the society, and be able to easily adjust to many kinds of jobs. This will benefit hisfuture career.In a word, taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that studentsshould take classes in many subjects in a university.新托福写作范文第3篇满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.新托福写作范文第4篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group ledby a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：There are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Differentpeople has different viewpoint. In my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. The argument for this view goes as follows:In the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. First, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. People can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. Second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. The people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. Third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.In the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. Thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. The traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. It will make the trip a little bit easy. Another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. With the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. I wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the Shanghai, China, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.In conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. Therefore, I stronglyagree that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.。

托福作文技巧总结

托福作文技巧总结托福作文技巧总结托福写作分成两部分。

第一部分：综合写作：要求在读完一段文章，听完一段讲座录音之后，概述讲座要点，并分析其与所读文章的关系。

综合写作其实是听写，不需要你自己的想法，重要的是概括反述能力。

还测试了听力，如果没听懂讲座录音内容，那后面写作也就没有材料了依据了。

第二部分：独立写作：要求针对一个题目提出自己的观点，并有论据和实例支持你的论点。

有时是进行描述，如一个你喜欢的人或城市等。

但更多的题是选择性，给你一个论点，问你是否同意。

或者给你两种观点，问你赞同哪一个。

托福考试是为检测不以英语为母语的人的英语水平的，那么它考察的唯一重点还是语言。

观点新颖与否，论据充分与否，论证结构怎样都不是最重要的。

如果在用词、语法、和逻辑上都没有明显的失误，分数一般不会低。

了解托福写作之后，就要开始思考怎样才能提高自己的成绩了。

首先是要打好语法基础。

如果把写作文比作盖房子，那么语法就是建筑的构造框架，建造框架都搭不好，那么房子怎么能盖得好。

其次是使用简单、熟悉的单词和短语，简洁、自然的句式。

简单熟悉的单词和句式一是不容易出错，二是让人一看便能明白其要表达的意思。

不要总认为难的单词、复杂的句式就是好的，能用简洁明了的句子清楚的`表达自己的意思不是那么容易做到的。

很多同学会去背诵复杂的句子模板，然后写作时套上去，一种可能是考试紧张还要出错，即使不出错，运用可能也很生硬，最终意思还没表达清楚，句子却冗长复杂，真是吃力不讨好。

还要注意的是使用熟悉的用法与保持句式的多样性并不矛盾。

可以换词语，换句型，但都以简洁明了为基础。

托福的经验教训总结(作文30)

托福的经验教训总结（作文30）总结一下我的复习经验和考试教训吧，不是牛人，但和大家分享一下总归能贡献出一点东西的。

先说说我自己的情况：英语一直是半吊子，说好也不好，说不好也还好。

3年前考过旧托，两次，当时上过新东方，按照套路准备的。

第一次时间卡的失败，考的巨烂，除了TWE5.0以外一无是处。

第二次好好总结了做题策略以后又赶上题目简单，于是人品爆发考了640（61/67/64）+5.0。

此后的英语主要就是看学术文章，没有正儿八经学过了，还靠这个成绩混去美国交换了一趟，于是在两年以后演变成reading,listening基本没有问题，speaking,writing却始终没有什么进展的状态。

我考IBT是逼上梁山的，从做这个决定，开始了解什么是IBT，到最后上考场，一共一个月不到一点，大概4周的样子。

但好在之前考过PBT，所以对ETS的出题做题套路还是有比较正确的判断，所以这点时间也算是充分利用了。

4周时间，我的复习大约是这样的：第一部分：熟悉IBT究竟是什么，读OG，搜集各种材料和考经，然后拿最简单的材料练手。

3天以后我发现根据版上的舆论，最简单的材料诸如OG和longman和现在的考试难度差距太大，于是决定迅速结束这一阶段。

事实证明这一决定很明智，因为对我这种英语基础尚可但时间紧迫的备考者，只有把复习难度尽快加到大于等于考试，进行长期练习，真实考场上才能够发挥出应有的水平。

第二部分：Reading和Listening。

整体耗时大约一周到一周半。

老实说我比较怵的也是writing,speaking这两项输出式的考试，所以想先解决Reading和listening以解除后顾之忧。

listening我用的是Barron和高分120（二），因为身在国外，都是用的版上热心网友提供的下载版。

一开始听长篇学术段子真的不适应，做很多笔记，但出题点却往往被我听漏掉。

后期我开始尝试精简笔记，就是先听懂，然后努力用大脑记住，实在需要记下的关键词和要点再写下来。

托福综合写作模板总结(完整版)

托福综合写作模板总结及词汇总结多样化表达：阅读：The reading, the passage, the author, the article听力：The listening, the lecture, the lecturer, the professor, the speaker认为：believe, hold, suggest, support, point out, advocate(提倡，主张，通常不用于反对意见), claim反驳：Criticize vt. 批评criticism n. （crisis n. 危机）Argue, challenge, doubt, disagree, refute,…. Is questionable.但是：However, although, on the other hand, in contrast, while,增加：Increase(n&vt), boost ( boost the economy )(n&vt使增长；推动；改进；使兴旺), maximize/maximization, add to sth (global warming)Improve/improvement, enhance/enhancement, heightenfortify/fortification(vt使强化，使振作), advance(vi&vt&n)expansion(used in size, number, amount), amplify(扩大声音、增强，加剧), enlarge （及物&不及物，扩大；～on sth 进一步说明，详述）thrive降低：Decline(vi&n), decrease, minimize/minimization, reduce/reduction, cut down, shrink(vi&vt)/shrinkageDamage, impair(vt, 损害，削弱), cause damage to, harm, hurtDestroy, destruction, do great damage to, do harm to, ruin, catastrophic damage，the disastrous consequence，endanger（vt危及，危害）影响：aftermath 后果，余波the ~ of (an important event)affect副词：definitely ，totally（disagree with），strongly（influenced by）其他：Utility 用途Alternative/ substitute：an alternative to sth 某事物的替代品；alternative sth 备用，可替代sthsb substitute one thing for another/ one thing substitute for another 取代，替换a substitute for sth 替代品生物生态类：物种数量骤降/骤增分析原因：假说分析Hypothesis, explanation, cause, theoryPredator, predation, pollution, climate change, habitat, insect, human actionat long-term environmental expense（It exposes the fallacy of short-term industrial gain at long-term environmental expense这暴露了以长久的环境破坏为代价换取短期工业利益的错误。

托福英文作文范文10篇

托福英文作文范文1. 教育话题题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics?I strongly agree with the statement that studying history and literature is more important for students than studying science and mathematics. While science and mathematics are undoubtedly valuable subjects, history and literature provide students with a well-rounded education that fosters critical thinking, cultural understanding, and communication skills.History allows students to learn from the past, understand the evolution of societies, and gain insights into the consequences of human actions. Literature, on the other hand, exposes students to diverse perspectives, fosters empathy, and enhances language skills.While science and mathematics are essential for technological advancements, history and literature provide the ethical and cultural context necessary for responsible innovation. Therefore, a balanced curriculum that includes history and literature is vital for developing informed and well-rounded individuals.2. 科技与社会题目：Some people believe that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that technology has made children less creative. While technology has introduced new forms of entertainment and learning, it has also provided opportunities for creativity and innovation.Technology enables children to engage in various creative activities. They can create digital art, compose music using software, and even design video games.Additionally, access to information and diverse perspectives through the internet can inspire creativity and expand their horizons.Moreover, technology often requires problem-solving and critical thinking skills, which are fundamental to creativity. Children who use technology to solve puzzles, code, or explore scientific concepts are actively engaging their creative minds.In conclusion, technology can serve as a powerful tool to foster creativity in children when used thoughtfully and in moderation. It opens up new avenues for expression and problem-solving, making it a valuable asset rather than a hindrance to creativity.3. 环境问题题目：Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, and that only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that individuals cannot make a difference in solving environmental problems. While government and large companies play significant roles, individual actions collectively have a substantial impact on the environment.Individuals can reduce their carbon footprint by conserving energy, using public transportation, and adopting sustainable practices in their daily lives. By making environmentally conscious choices, such as reducing plastic waste or conserving water, individuals contribute to positive environmental change.Furthermore, individual actions can influence governments and corporations. Grassroots movements and consumer demand for eco-friendly products have led to policy changes and increased corporate responsibility. For instance, the push for renewable energy sources and stricter environmental regulations has been driven, in part, by public awareness and advocacy.In conclusion, individuals have the power to make a difference in addressing environmental problems through their choices, actions, and influence on largerentities. While governments and corporations have a crucial role to play, individual efforts are integral to creating a sustainable future.4. 社会问题题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for governments to spend money on art such as music, painting, and dance?I strongly agree with the statement that it is important for governments to spend money on art. Art plays a vital role in society, fostering cultural enrichment, creativity, and social cohesion.Government investment in art supports cultural preservation and heritage. Museums, galleries, and cultural institutions receive funding to protect and showcase valuable artworks, preserving the cultural identity and history of a nation.Art also enhances creativity and innovation, benefiting society as a whole. Exposure to various forms of art, such as music, painting, and dance, stimulates creative thinking, problem-solving, and individual expression. This creativity can have positive impacts in fields beyond art, including science, technology, and business.Additionally, art contributes to social cohesion by providing a platform for shared experiences and expressions of diverse perspectives. Cultural events and artistic performances bring communities together, fostering a sense of unity and belonging.In conclusion, government investment in art is a wise allocation of resources that promotes cultural preservation, creativity, and social cohesion. It enriches society in ways that extend beyond the artistic realm.5. 移民与多元文化题目：Some people believe that immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country, while others think they should maintain their own cultural traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The question of whether immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country or maintain their own cultural traditions is a complex one, with valid arguments on both sides.Advocates for cultural assimilation argue that adopting the culture of the host country is essential for social cohesion and integration. They contend that shared values, language, and customs facilitate better communication and understanding among diverse communities. Cultural assimilation, they argue, helps immigrants become active and productive members of their new society.On the other hand, supporters of cultural preservation argue that maintaining one's cultural traditions is vital for preserving identity and diversity. They believe that a multicultural society is enriched by the contributions of various cultures and that immigrants should not be forced to abandon their heritage. Cultural preservation, they argue, can lead to a more vibrant and inclusive society.In my opinion, the ideal approach lies in a balance between assimilation and cultural preservation. Immigrants should have the freedom to choose which aspects of their cultural heritage they wish to maintain, while also respecting and adapting to the cultural norms and values of their new country. This balance allows for the coexistence of diverse cultures while fostering integration and understanding within the broader society.6. 健康与生活方式题目：Some people believe that the government should promote a vegetarian diet to improve public health, while others think it should be a personal choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The promotion of a vegetarian diet by the government to improve public health is a topic of debate. Some argue that it should be a personal choice, while others believe in government intervention.Proponents of government promotion of a vegetarian diet argue that it can lead to better public health outcomes by reducing the consumption of meat, which is associated with various health risks. They contend that government campaigns can educate the public about the benefits of a vegetarian diet and provide incentives for healthier eating.On the other hand, advocates for personal choice argue that individuals should have the freedom to make their dietary decisions based on their preferences and beliefs. They believe that government should not interfere in matters of personal choice, including what people choose to eat.In my view, the government should play a role in promoting healthy dietary choices, but it should not mandate a vegetarian diet. Education and awareness campaigns can provide information about the health benefits of reducing meat consumption, but the ultimate decision should rest with individuals. Encouraging a balanced and informed approach to diet is key to improving public health.7. 社会问题题目：Some people argue that the death penalty should be abolished because it is inhumane, while others believe it serves as an effective deterrent for serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The debate over the death penalty is a contentious one, with arguments on both sides regarding its humanity and effectiveness as a deterrent for serious crimes.Opponents of the death penalty argue that it is inhumane and violates the right to life. They contend that there is a risk of executing innocent individuals, and that the death penalty does not serve as an effective deterrent, as there is no conclusive evidence that it reduces serious crimes.On the other hand, proponents of the death penalty believe that it serves as a powerful deterrent for heinous crimes such as murder. They argue that it provides closure to victims' families and ensures that dangerous criminals do not have the opportunity to commit further crimes.In my opinion, the death penalty should be abolished. The potential for irreversible errors in judgment and the ethical concerns surrounding taking a human life outweigh any potential deterrent effect. Alternative forms of punishment, such as life imprisonment, can ensure public safety without resorting to state-sanctioned killing.8. 教育话题题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school.I strongly agree with the statement that all students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Art and music education offer numerous benefits that contribute to a well-rounded education and personal development.Firstly, art and music stimulate creativity and self-expression. They provide students with an outlet for their emotions and thoughts, fostering imagination and critical thinking. These skills are valuable in various aspects of life and can enhance problem-solving abilities.Secondly, art and music education promote cultural appreciation and awareness. They expose students to different artistic styles, historical periods, and culturaltraditions, fostering empathy and an understanding of diverse perspectives. This cultural awareness is essential in an increasingly globalized world.Furthermore, art and music can have a positive impact on emotional well-being. They provide avenues for stress relief and self-reflection, contributing to mental and emotional health.In conclusion, requiring students to study art and music in secondary school is essential for their holistic development. These subjects nurture creativity, cultural understanding, and emotional well-being, making them integral components of a comprehensive education.9. 科技与社会题目：Some people believe that advancements in technology, such as the internet and smartphones, have made people more isolated and less sociable. Do you agree or disagree?The impact of advancements in technology, including the internet and smartphones, on social interactions is a matter of debate. Some argue that these technologies have made people more isolated and less sociable, while others disagree.I agree with the view that advancements in technology have had a mixed impact on social interactions. While they have created new forms of communication and connection, they have also brought challenges related to isolation and reducedface-to-face interaction.Technology, such as social media and instant messaging, enables people to stay in touch with friends and family, even across great distances. It can also facilitate the formation of online communities and support networks. However, the overuse of technology can lead to reduced physical interactions, as people spend more time on screens and less time engaging with others in person.Moreover, technology has changed the nature of social interactions. It can lead to shallow, online-only relationships, making it essential for individuals to strike a balance between virtual and real-world connections.In conclusion, while technology has the potential to enhance social interactions and connections, it also carries the risk of isolation when used excessively. It is crucial for individuals to use technology mindfully and prioritize in-person interactions to maintain healthy social relationships.10. 环境问题题目：Some people believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are not sufficient to address environmental problems. They argue that governments and large corporations must take the lead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are important but not sufficient on their own to address environmental problems. Governments and large corporations must also take a proactive role in environmental conservation.Individual actions, such as reducing waste and adopting sustainable practices, play a crucial role in raising environmental awareness and setting an example for others. However, the scale of environmental issues, such as climate change and habitat destruction, requires coordinated efforts at a larger scale.Governments have the power to implement policies and regulations that can significantly impact environmental conservation. They can establish emissions standards, invest in renewable energy sources, and protect natural habitats. Government actions can create a conducive environment for sustainable practices.Large corporations are major contributors to environmental issues, but they also have the resources and influence to make substantial changes. When corporationsadopt sustainable practices, reduce emissions, and prioritize eco-friendly products, they can have a significant positive impact on the environment.In conclusion, addressing environmental problems requires a multi-pronged approach. While individual actions are important, governments and large corporations must also take responsibility and lead the way in implementing sustainable practices and policies.。

托福写作个人笔记总结

一、利弊分析I agree with this statement/proposal/belief/stance because it brings/incurs multiple benefits.E.g. 俞敏洪适合做男朋友<1>有上进心enterprising 永不言败unyielding spirit80后男人所缺少的rarely seen in the generation after 80s<2>踏实down-to-earth 稳重steady and calm不花心faithful 浮躁restless<3>长相普通ordinary looking 安全感sense of securityEg2. Teachers should be paid as much as doctors, layers, or business leaders.假设题目情况发生，就此推导下去<1>提高积极性Increase teacher’s enthusiasm and devotion<2>吸引更多人才Appeal to more brilliant talent to join teaching二、拆分1、举出抽象和宽泛概念在生活中的具体表现，把对象拆出来举例E.g. Movies and television have more negative effect than positive ones on young people’s behavior.电视电影中的暴力镜头太多，造成青少年犯罪，枪击案，校园暴力violence scenes , juvenile delinquency , shooting spree , bulling at school电视电影中的色情内容太多，造成未成年性行为，少女妈妈pornography , underage sexual behavior , teen mom电视电影中宣传流行文化，造成青少年过度追求个性表达，叛逆pop culture , pursue individually without restriction , become rebellious2、背后的原因拆出来，按照因果展开，举例E.g. Do you aggress or disagree with the following statement? It is easy for more people now than in the past to get an education.科技发展，互联网的普及使学校的渠道变多，远程监狱，国外大学的公开课Widespread of the Internet, distance learning , open university政府重视教育，颁布新政策，1977年恢复高考，九年制义务教育Put emphasis on education, put new polices in place , resume college entrance exam , 9-year compulsory education人权解放，人人有受教育的机会，现在女性和黑人都有受教育权，奥巴马Human emancipation, enjoy the same education opportunity, women and African Americans三、让步写法I disagree with the statement, though there is an element of truth in it.I disagree with the statement, though there is a considerable truth.Admittedly…However, to say that … is overstatement/exaggeration.It is, however, inappropriate to assert that…It is, however, arbitrary to say that…E.g. Do you aggress or disagree with the following statement? People should always tell the truth in all their relationship.I disagree although the statement has considerable truth.Admittedly, telling the truth plays an essential role in maintaining personal relationship. However, to say that people should always tell the truth in all their relationship is overstatement.四、逻辑批判1、反驳原因反驳因果关系（先承认因果中的合理性，原因推不出结果，结果可能是别的原因,也是一种让步写法）Eg1.Modern technology helps people to keep up with old friends even if they are not in the same city or country.Admittedly, it is true that when we move to a new city or country, some of old friends would be lost due to lack of communication. But it doesn’t follow that people should not move to a new country or city, because a new environment brings multiple benefits, better education, career, new friends.Eg2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is a waste of time and money because customers already know what they want.In many case, consumers are not aware of their needs. 拆分举例children, adults, old people.Even if consumers do know what they want, it doesn’t mean that advertisements are useless. Advertisements can influence consumers to buy certain product over others or encourage them to buy products more than they have planned.2、分别承认两个分句的合理性，反驳其中不合理的地方3、人物拆分(1)age①Children teenagerSensitive, subtle emotion, rebellious, disruptive, obedient②AdultsStressed, strained, under pressure, financial concern, interpersonal relationship, family commitment, healthy issue③Old peopleRetirement, rest of days, a wide range of healthy problem, special care(2)career①StudentAcquire, knowledge/experience, broaden horizon, communication skills problem-solving strategy, critical and creative thinking, prepare for career②BusinessmanSeek profit, credibility, charity, social responsibility③sportsmanIdol, role, model, reputation④ScientistInnovation, research and development, energy, alternative energy, medicine⑤ActorEntertainment, ethics, idol⑥WriterInspire, criticize, authority(3)disadvantage people①WomenRight to education, vote, feminism movement②AfricanCivil rights movement③The poor/disableLive standard/cost, charity, donation今昔对比(1)science & technologyThe widespread useThe presence/emergence of the internet(2)policy & authorityPut lots of emphasis onAttach paramount importanceThat has taken priorityGive priority toPut a premium on9-year compulsory education resume NEE in 1977(3)social progressFoodPure rawContaminatedMedicineVaccineH1N1 swine / bird flu(5)environmentVarious pollution(6)peopleSimple & naïveLess trickySophisticated开头写法1、世界大趋势现象陈述As communication technology leaps forward, an increasingly number of devices such as cell phone and email have emerged as daily necessities. People often turn to these electronic appliances whenever they are in need.As globalization accelerates, chances are that the exchange of scientific discoveries, such as H1N1 vaccine, solar energy, and even unclear technology, between different countries will grow steadily.Step. 找到题干的核心话题，指到核心话题的上位类别，然后among which balabala模板表达好的Which is well received as a whole.坏的However, this growing/new trend has aroused deep concerns among our society/scholars/academia.引起反响has received a huge response from the publicCreate much of a stirCause a sensationHas caused/triggered quite a stirCreate much of a stirCause a sensationGlobalizationIndustrializationScience and technologyEconomic integrationEconomic recession模板As science and technology grows rapidly, many new inventions have entered our daily life, among which computer games may be one of the most representative.With the rapid advance in science and technology, an increasing number of inventions appear and change our lifestyle, among which the invention of television may be one of then most obvious. Many people, if not most, are strong believers in the claim that such a machine is detrimental to interpersonal relationship. In fact, I can not agree with them.2、小事件A couple of weeks ago, the minute I turned on the local TV news, a shocking headline started to grabbed my attention immediately, it is a story/coverage/report about…I can’t help wondering why such a thing of this nature happened and finally I reached my conclusion that it is the…人们游行反对Against the backdrop of economic recession and soaring unemployment rate, thousands of angry people rally on the Wall Street holding signs and flags to protest/demonstrate before the greedy Wall Street bankers and financiers.枪击案A young armed boy rushed into an elementary school in Newtown, Connecticut, gunning down dozens of innocent people including teachers and students.自杀Just a few weeks ago, a bright young Chinese girl, a Harvard graduate with a great prospect ahead, committed suicide in her apartment due to mounting pressure both on her studies and career.莫言获奖By the end of 2012, a breaking news had swept across China and whole world that Mo Yan, a Chinese short story writer, is awarded the Nobel Prize in literature for his work.3、讲故事Last week I chatted on the phone with a high school friend of mine, who is currently living in U.S. about computer games. He mentioned that two mouths age, as he memorized so clearly, a 19-year-old boy robbed a middle-school student since he had no money for Counter Strike game. Obviously, events alike are taking place almost every day the world over. In my eyes, playing computer games is not beneficial to youngpeople.模板Last week I chatted online with a high school friend of mine, who is currently studying abroad, about…He mentioned that, as he memorized quite clearly, …Obviously, events/scenes/stories alike are taking place almost every second the world all over.Every weekend, when I came back from university sharing my parents with wonderful college life such as inspiring philosophy lectures and competing fiercely in baseball game, my dad would often make such a comment. “Son, I do envy your life back at the college.I wish I could join you there.” Undeniably, my generation enjoys more chances to receivea decent education than my parents.4、调查显示In contemporary society, according to recent survey that is conducted by a reputable international agency, an increasing number of people go to cinema and watch various movies, which has become a common occurrence. As to which genres of movie are worth watching, the answers vary from people to people. In my eyes, the entertaining and light-hearted ones are always my first choice.模板In contemporary society, according to recent survey conducted by a credible international, the number of … has reached the peak/fallen to the new depths during the past two decades.中间段论证1、因果In the first place, the increase in juvenile delinquency is the result of the rising divorce rate. With the decline of moral standards, a host of couples separate when they quarrel with each other. When they decide to separate, an overwhelming majority of them do not take into account the presence on their children. Children who are not properly taken care of feel that they have been abandoned by their parents and the whole society. Consequently, the minors are easily led astray by evildoers who will most likely to commit crimes by themselves.表示原因Since + sentenceDue to + noun phraseOwing to + noun phrase 归咎于Thanks to + noun phrase 归因于Be to blame e.g. Loud music might not be to blame just yet, according to the study.Is the culprit of e.g. Pizza is the biggest culprit of salt for teens according to data from the National Center Healthy Statistics.表示目的Therebye.g. The discovery was made when researchers deliberately broke open the X, thereby exposing its inside to reveal materials that balabala表示结果ThereforeHabitual exercise reduces stress, prevents weight gain and improves academic performance; therefore, exercise should be made a part of any school curriculum.So thatAs consequence/resultFor the sake ofe.g. Many elderly people prefer to live the countryside for the sake of their healthy.e.g. For the sake of our health, we should aim for a healthy diet and a healthy weight.By virtue ofe.g. She succeeded by virtue of her tenacity rather than her talente.g. The CEO has power by virtue of keeping the rules in the company.模板（利弊分析）First of all, X apparently brings visible benefits/advantages. For instance, balabala. If we can make sure X, then our lift will be made more convenient.Besides/In addition, X can also contribute to/lead to balabala, which is balabala. Since X can play a significant role in promoting balabala, it certainly make it easier to balabala Lastly/Furthermore, X can be the regarded as an integral/crucial part of balabala. Due to balabala, X will eventually bring about balabala, thus solving the problem such as balabala.模板（实事）In terms of balabala, X does make its presence. For example, balabalaWhat’s more, X also applies to the situation like balabala where balabalaFinally, if it’s balabala that we’re discussing/considering, X still make a difference. For example, balabala2、比较（1）对比①和别的东西比提出论点：我认为举例论证：在XX事件中，证明了我的观点，要有细节举出反例：在XX事件中，我不赞同的观点是错误的，要有细节得出结论：所以嘛，我认为的东西是对的Model. Compared with B, I prefer A, because balabala. For example, B is balabala(怎么怎么不好). By contrast , A is balabala(怎么怎么好). Therefore , my conclusion is that A is more advisable/recommendable.E.g. Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.Answer. The educational experience in a museum is quite different to that of reading or studying. In a museum, since we can see various items on display, learning experiences are direct and thrilling. For instance, reading books about dinosaurs might seem boring, but seeing the huge skeleton of terrifying dinosaur in person is an exciting experiences, which may provide us with a vivid impression.②自我对比提出论点：我认为XX很好举例论证：XX怎么怎么好举出反例：没有XX怎么怎么不好得出结论：所以XX很好E.g. Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.Answer. The most obviously important characteristic of playing sport is team work. It is hard for us to imagine the situation without teamwork in any match, such as foot ball game. Things can be totally different with the spirit of teamwork because each player will make full use of their advantages and achieve final triumph. The best example is the game between Argentina Team and Germany in the quarter final in South Africa World Cup in 2010. On Argentina side, the boasts Lionel Messi, a soccer genius, while in German’s formation, no one was particularly outstanding or bore an equal fame as Messi. However, the final outcome was 4-0, a whopping victory for Germany. This story has proven how essential collaborative teamwork mean.Model Sentence. We can not imagine the situation with X.Things would be completely different without X in our live.Otherwise, we would have trouble in balabala.Without X, it would be a completely different situation.In/by contractIn the contraryBy comparisonInsteadRatherAdversely e.g. I think everyone has something from their past that they're worried might adversely affect how they raise their childrenWhileHoweverNeverthelessYetButOtherwise e.g. Otherwise you will get the rest of days to regretting you decision.e.g. The weather won’t get any better. On the contrary, we’re in for a hurricane.e.g. Contrary on all the expert’s expectations, then American economy took a nosedive.e.g. It should be noted that not all school kids love to study. Instead, they love to explorethe world around them, paying little attention to their academic work.e.g. Many American tourists go to Africa these days to see wildlife in its natural environment rather than in cages or cement pools.e.g. Instead of making further requests, pessimistic customers tend to lodge complaints.e.g. Those recent graduate are not going to take a gap year. Rather, they will attend college soon.e.g. Many experts claim that the recent global warming is not something that we should be concerned about; rather, it just reflects a natural course of planetary events.（2）类比SimilarlyLikewiseBy the same tokenAs with balabalaThe same is turn of balabalaThe same also applies to balabala.e.g. Japanese students are struggling with language barrier on a daily basis. The same is true of Chinese ones.e.g. Some people have little power to do good, and likewise have little strengthen to resist evil.三、列举This point is best illustrated with the example of balbalaThis point can be confirmed by the case ofThis point can be confirmed by the case ofX is a case in point X 是一个恰当的例子e.g. Paper books have the costs of paper, printing and transportation while digital books completely dispense with these costs. The paper book version of Harry Potter sells for 60 yuans, about 10 dollars, while reader can download its PDF version to their iPads or Kindles for nearly half of the price.e.g. During their vacations, high school student work in supermarkets, or restaurants. For instance, I worked as a cashier in a local Wall-Mart during the summer vacation of my freshman year.。

托福写作高分结尾句总结

托福写作高分结尾句总结一篇作文，要有好的开头也要有好的结尾，文章结尾的收笔，对于整篇作文的水平也有着重要的影响。

因此同学们也不要小瞧了托福写作的结尾。

下面小编为大家汇总了部分经典的结尾内容，供大家参考。

托福写作高分结尾句总结1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that ...2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on ...3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of ..., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ..., but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.7) There is little doubt/denying that8) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of...require immediate attention9) As far as ... be concerned, I believe/think that ...10) In conclusion,...11) In my opinion, I am in favor of ...12) Personally, I prefer to...13) In short,... should learn to...; Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly14) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that..托福写作结尾段应该怎么写托福写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法：一、托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.二、提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果假设烤鸭们没有像编辑说的那样去做，在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果，帮助烤鸭们预见到令人忧虑的后果，进而令烤鸭们自然第接受小智的意见。

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1.时态要用对。

passage和lecture里面表示作者说一类含义的统统用一般现在时。

2.文章整体结构要完整并符合要求。

前面要有总起的introductory sentence，该句的主要是概括reading和lecture有观点冲突。

【The reading passage’s author is convinced there were several reasons why the rise of factories occurred in England, yet the professor disagrees that they were the main reason why factories became successful】3.中间的正文展开要按照lecture的顺序，一点一点逐一与reading对应地展开。

to begin with, in addition, as a final point, to conclude 先说reading的观点，再说原因；然后是转折，说lecture的观点，并说原因。

最后的结尾可要可不要。

开头和结尾段首尾呼应比如disagree ，后面有refutation段内一方有多个理由或者观点需要展开时，要有逻辑，比如在claim/declare 等词前面加上first/next/also等。

4.主要语言的丰富性，同一种意思用多种不同的表达方式，并且，千万不要照抄passage的原文。

比如，the rise of factories began = the rise of factoriesoccurredspread throughout the world = became successfulthose without any land = landless peoplehave the ability to do sth. = have the capability to do sth.= be able to do sth.5.表示认为的：the author claims/believes/notes / argues /points out/states/insists/mentions/asserts/maintains/declares/ is convinced that或者the point brought up 引用：cites that6.表示lecturer反对的用法：the lecturer counters by insisting that ……= the lecturercounters the points made by the reading, whose author thinksthat ……=the lecturer disagrees and claims that=To argueassertion that……= in contrast to the against the reading’sreading’s argument that……, the professor says= to respondto the reading’s claim that…，the professor says …on the contrary = in contrast7.一些比较好的用法：lay the foundation ofthe prevalence of sth.ascribe to 归因于enable 使得【比make要地道些】8.承认：the lecturer acknowledges that9.both the reading and the lecture mention that ……10.developed muscles in their stomach. To argue against thereading’s assertion that……11.sb. be responsible for sth.= blame sb. for sth. 模板：Introductio n While the reading asserts that _________________________________________, the lecturer provides evidence/reasons contrary to this assertion and believes _________________________________________________________________.Body 1 First, in response to the accusation that________________since_________________________________, the lecturer saysthat________________________________________________________________. [适用于解释比较少的正文段]She/He believes that _____________________________________________.Body 2 The reading also points outthat_____________________________________________________________, However, lecturer disagrees and first statesthat_______________________________________.He next declares that __________________________________________.Body 3 Finally, according to the reading _________________________.On the contrary, the lecturer is convinced that ________________________. Also he believes that _____________________________________________.Conclusion In short, while the reading brings up several reasons to______________, the lecturer provides refutations and his/her own theory about ______________________.ORIn short, the reading is skeptical/not approved of _______________; however, the professor fully believes ___________________________.对于一些两者都提到或者lecturer承认的事实，可以用：Both the reading and the professor mentions____________________.Although the reading mentions_____________, the lecturer still claims _______________. Although the lecturer acknowledges that _____________, he/she does regard _______________ as the reason of _________________________.常用的逻辑关系词组：【内容来自杜昶旭老师的托福阅读讲义】否定?明显的否定关系特色词汇：no, not, none, nor, neither, never, deny?隐含的否定关系特色词汇：fail to , lack (of), absent from, refuse, ignore, remove, few, little因果?明显的因果关系特色词汇：因为：because, because of, since, for ,as, due to ,owing to, in that,所以：so, so that, therefore, thereby, hence, thus, as a result, consequently ?隐含的因果关系特色词汇：导致[A★B：因为A所以B，前因后果]：cause, lead to, result in, give rise to, produce,render, engender, make, enable, support, stimulate, spark, spur, motivate, push,encourage, prompt, be responsible for,由…而来[C★D：C由D而来，前果后因]：come from, result from, originate from,initiate from, derive from, stem from, be attributed to, be responsible to反映，体现[E★F：E反映F，E是现象/结果,F 是本质/原因]：reflect，represent，demonstrate, suggest, imply, show, epitomize考虑到，依赖于[★G,H /H, ★G]: given, considering, in view of, on account of,according to, rely, depend on, resort to, thanks to比较?明显的比较关系特色词汇：比较级：er/more同级比较：as……as?隐含的比较关系特色词汇：表示变化：increase/decrease/decline/enlarge/swell/expand/widen/inflate/magnify/broadenshrink/reduce/deflate/narrow/diminishcreate/destroydevelop/improve/meliorate/ameliorate/progress/perfect/betterdegrade/debase/impair/worsen/deterioratecontinue/remain差异：same/different超越：exceed/better/cap/beyond/surpass/transcend/excel/overshadow最高级?明显的最高级特色词汇：-est/most?隐含的最高级特色词汇：自身含有最高级含义：maximum/minimum/outstanding/top/super/favorite否定+比较=最高级：few islands are more remote than these程度较深的词：surprising/amazing/extremely/beautiful[惊艳的]superior= greater/higher/betterinferior =subordinate/secondary/lower/worse/lesser。

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一、举实例思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。

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TOEFL托福写作范文赏析精选托福写作范文赏析1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person’s childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person’s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.I agree that a person’s childhood years, from birth until twelve years of age, are the most important. All the information I’ve read about that time of life states that these are the years that form us. These years determine what kind of a person the child will become. During these years we learn about relationships, begin our formal education and develop our moral sense of right and wrong.The early years are the time when we learn about relationships. First we learn about our parents and siblings, then about rest of the world. We learn how to respond to others based the treatment we’re given. If we’re loved, then we know how to love others. If we’re treated harshly, we may grow up to treat others harshly. We also form our ideas about our own self-worth from the way others treat us during these years. They can convince us we’re worthless, or they can teach us we deserve love and respect.There are the years when we begin our formal education. We acquire the basic skills - reading, writing, working with numbers - t hat we’ll use throughout our lives. We need a good foundation in these subjects. Otherwise, anything we try to do later will be undermined by our lack of skills. Perhaps the most important thing we can learn during these years is how to analyze information and use it. These are skills that will always be useful.Most important, from my point of view, these are the years when we develop our moral sense of what’s right and wrong. Others teach us about good and bad, but later in our early years we begin to decide for ourselves. It’s also during this time that we begin to develop the self-discipline to live according to our morals.托福写作范文赏析2PR Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.When we see photographs of starving children, it’s hard to say that we should spend billions of dollars on space exploration. But that’s just what we should do. Children don’t need to be starving, but we do need toexplore space. Right now, we have enough money to feed every person on Earth. Children are starving because of mismanagement of resources and simple human greed. Those are problems we can solve right here on earth. That shouldn’t stop our need to find out what’s beyond our own solar system.We may never make contact with whatever other species there may be out there in space. Even so, there are still two very practical and positive consequences of space exploration. One is a certainty and the other is a possibility. The certainty is medical research. Yes, we can conduct research here on earth. But much of the research done in space, for example, on the effects of gravity on bone marrow, is making a difference in medicine here on Earth. When we do research in space, we also learn more about space exploration. Also, many of the inventions that were developed for space travel have been adapted to good use on Earth.The possible consequence of space exploration is finding another planet human beings can colonize. Overpopulation is a huge problem on ou r planet. People are living longer, more healthful lives, and that’s a good thing. But it means there are fewer people dying and more people being born. Eventually we’ll have less space, fewer resources, and major distribution problems. If we can find another planet to live on, we can relieve the problems of overpopulation on our planet.托福写作范文赏析3A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment . Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Deciding between supporting the arts and protecting the environment is a difficult choice to make, but I think I would choose protecting the environment. Arts help to maintain our culture and serve as a source of entertainment. However, we need a healthy environment in order to survive so we must protect it. We need to protect the environment now to help prevent health problems, to maintain the ecosystem, and to preserve the Earth for our children.Pollution from factories and cars can cause damage to the environment. Moreover, pollution causes health problems particularly for children and the elderly who have weaker immune systems. We need to ensure that there are controls on the amount of pollution when possible so as to prevent health problems caused by breathing dirty air.We also need to pay attention to the ecosystem. Trees, plant life, and people all depend on each other. An unhealthy environment can have harmful effects on the ecosystem. For example, if a plant dies because of changes to the environment and that plant is food for a animal, that animal won't have any food. If humans use that animal as a food source, there could be big problems.If we do not respect our environment now, it will continue to getworse and our children will suffer the consequences. They would not have the same quality of air to breathe or natural beauty to admire. That would be sad.Without clean air to breathe, a healthy ecosystem, and a future for our children, the human race would not survive. That's why protecting our environment is important. If we have a healthy environment, we have healthy children who will be able to participate and appreciate the arts.托福写作范文赏析4AD Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Business should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.After I get my degree, I plan to start a business. My goal is to make money, a lot of money. However, I can’t forget that there are more important things in life than earning a profit. I must consider the people I work with, the customers I serve, and the community I live in.My colleagues are a very important part of my business. Without them, I would not have a business. I depend on them to help me carry on the day-to-day operations. I depend on them for their advice on what to sell and how to sell it. I must compensate them for their work. I can’t take large profits without sharing with the people who made it responsible.Similarly, I would not have a business without my customers. I can never forget that they could take their business elsewhere. I must givethem good value for their money. I can’t overcharge them. I must also remember that money is as important to them as it is to me. I want my customers to trust me and keep coming back.My employees and I all live in the same community as our customers. We are apart of the social life of our community. We can’t ignore it. We must play an active part in it. I feel it is important that some of the profits my business earns from the community be returned to the community. We need to support community programs like summer jobs for high school students, campaigns to clean up the parks, and efforts to make the shopping area more attractive.A business must make profits, but we all—workers, customers, community—must profit from a successful business.托福写作范文赏析5PR Some movies are serious designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Movies have the power to make you laugh, cry, or think about an issue that you might not otherwise think about. Although I sometime watch movies that are serious in nature, I prefer movies that amuse and entertain. When I see an amusing movie it makes me relax, laugh, and keeps me in good spirits.After a long day at school and work, I need a break and something to take my mind off of the troubles of the day. I can do that with an entertaining movie. When I watch an amusing movie, I don’t have to think.I just want to sit back and relax. After a movie, I then feel ready to get back to work on my studies.Amusing movies make people laugh. Laughing is important for the soul. Laughing not only makes people feel good, but also connects people. When people laugh together, they become friends.After watching an entertaining movie, which relaxes me and makes me laugh, I feel good. When I feel good I can focus more on other important things like my studies and work. Being in good spirits makes me feel better about myself and gives me a positive outlook on life.While I can appreciate serious movies that make you think, I prefer to be amused and entertained after a long day of work. Such movies allow me to take a break from the rigors of life by making me laugh and putting me in a good mood.。

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托福写作范文附思路解析182. Should pets be treated as family members?Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』与宠物特殊亲热，有好处，也有不好的地方。

好处：不孤独;每个人都有爱心;闲暇时间有心理寄予(spiritual/psychological sustenance);缺点：人会变得孤僻;脏;宠物可能传染病毒『范文』Throughout history, animals have always been great companions to man. In todays society, we frequently treat our pets as members of family, nursing them when they are sick, and playing with them when they are well. I believe that the relationships that people have with their pets are healthy for many reasons.Firstly, animals provide companionship for people who are too old to maintain regular friendships. It is most common for one spouse to outlive the other. Frequently, the surviving spouse does not remarry, and eventually, all his or her friends die. When one is elderly, it is difficult to make new friends. In this type of situation, having a pet as a companion is greatly preferable to spending all of ones time alone. While a pet cannot speak, it can understand its masters emotions, and usually responds accordingly.Secondly, animals have been proven to reduce their masters stress. This is probably because an animal is always happy to see its master, and gives the master unconditional love. As long as the master is kind to his/her pet, the pet will be devoted and faithful. A pet also provides a friendly face after a stressful day. For example, I have a pet dog. After taking an exam, the only thing I want to do is go home and play with my dog. He always brings me much needed cheer and happiness.Lastly, having an animal can prepare a young couple for having children. A young animal is very difficult to take care of. Let us take the example of a puppy. One can never leave a puppy by itself. A puppy must be constantly taken care of; he must be toilet-trained and disciplined. Raising an animal to be happy and sociable is very much like raising a child to possess the same attributes. While a puppy is obviously easier to take care of than a child, it can show the prospective parents where some of the difficulties will lie when raising a baby.In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy. Having a pet can reduce loneliness, stress, and prepare one for the huge experience of having a child. Pets are often referred to as mans best friend, and for good reason.托福写作范文附思路解析183. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.『分析』通过电影可以了解一个国家的经济、科技风俗、习惯历史、文化价值观念……相关题目：[82]、[180]『范文』One of the favorite pastimes of people today is watching movies. Movies can teach us a great amount about the world, especially if we watch movies from another culture. When watching a foreign movie, we can learn about the landscape and scenery of the country, the countrys ethics and customs, and its historical events.The world is a great and varied place, from the immense mountains of the Himalayas to the deserts of America. By watching movies, one can gain insight as to what these beautiful places are like. For example, I recently watched a number of movies filmed in America. I learned about the beautiful beaches of California, national parks such as Yellowstone and Niagara Falls, as well as man-made wonders such as the Statue of Liberty, Mount Rushmore, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Watching foreign movies is an excellent way to deduce where one wants to travel, if he/she has such an opportunity.Watching movies also teaches us about a countrys ethics and customs. For example, while watching American movies, I learned that children do not show as much respect to their parents as we do here in China. In some cases, children were very disrespectful of their elders, and ignored their wishes outright. I was shocked by this behavior. To give another example, I also learned about table manners in America, which are quite different from the rules we follow in China.Furthermore, one can learn about a countrys history by watching films. For instance, there are many movies that have been made about the wars in America, such as Gone With the Wind. Movies such as this show foreign viewers why America is the free and independent society that it is today. Hence, watching foreign movies is an excellent way to learn about faraway lands. One can learn about the landscape of a place, about its culture, as well as its history. Perhaps schools should consider watching foreign movies in classes to provoke interest from the students about such lands.托福写作范文附思路解析184. Study alone or with a group of students?Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』可以实行it depends的策略，要看学什么科目。

托福写作历次考试经验总结-智课教育旗下智课教育

智课网托福备考资料托福写作历次考试经验总结-智课教育旗下智课教育本文为大家介绍的是托福写作历次考试经验总结,大家可以参考一下,在平时备考时要参考这些备考经验,相信会有所收获。

托福写作到底如何复习,各种经验帖、方法技巧帖在网上漫天飞舞,当然面对各种托福作文经验贴要秉持保留的态度,有选择的借鉴。

今天智课教育小编为大家分享的是托福写作历次考试经验总结。

大家可以参考一下这些备考经验,看看自己应该如何攻克托福写作。

1.托福作文就是英文的“八股”,有套路,所以模板用得上。

2.在正确,易懂的基础上,力求句型的变化多端,插入语,从句,倒装,虚拟等。

3.词汇和固定短语要识记,主要是3 类:环境的,经济的,社会进步等题目经常涉及的名词或者名词短语;表示程度等的形容词和能够恰当修饰动词的副词;起承转合作用的连接词和短语。

4.不同的reason 不要糅合到一块去,每段中心要明确,且reason 段落,要用英文写作的方式,开门见山的在段落开头指出;既然要成段,那么你所选择的reason 一定要能扩展,也就是有东西好写,不要为赋新辞强说愁;所以虽然一个论点你可能有N 个理由,但那些很有道理,但是你用英文无法表达清楚的,就不用写了,这不是上万字的论文。

5.看清题目要求写什么,有比较的,要写出两者的不同,不要只说你支持的。

6.个人的观点:尽可能的避免单独使用he/she,考虑到性别歧视问题。

但是,如果你要顶字数的话,也请用he or she。

7.reason 一出就要有example,两三个case足以,并且事例逻辑上能够支持原因。

8.整篇文章不要出现第二人称you,your,这是enjoy life 等前辈的指点(指点了pumpkin,然后她又“数落”我的,多用people;你想,you 就是阅卷人,你凭什么张口就用人家的书面语言教导人家呢?9.口语化是初级者的大问题之一,写作文的时候往往是先想中文改怎么说,然后做个翻译工作;本来对非母语就很能驾驭,这样一来,说大白话,就直接导致句式的单一;所以还是要看看真题阅读文章的文法。

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作文1、Integrated writing写150-225 wordspassage （3mins，250-350）转述，改写，简洁（不用记，写作时会出现在屏幕上）listen to a lecture（2.5-3mins) 记录所有能记下来的，最好和原文一样names，numbers3对3，点对点对驳笔记总结（20mins，180-260）客观转述，不表达自己观点写法：列提纲四段：总结passage和lecture 观点（找出中心思想）；叙述3点（着重叙述lecture)tips: 首行空4个单词，写一段空一行模版：The passage asserts that… The author of the passage gives three reasons to illustrate this issue. However, the lecturer casts doubt on each point.Firstly, the reading passage’s author argues /the reading notes/ the first reason the reading ascribes to …is that…However, the lecturer/ the Professor thinks/claims/ believes/points out that…The reading passage’s author and professor clearly disagree on the reasons …2、Independent writing400字，30mins写作方法：换位思考，大概念分成小概念，因果推导，举例子，分情况展开论点：事例，理由，细节，来支持文章观点文章结构：两个观点之间运用过渡，紧扣中心思想语言运用：写作步骤：1.TS – GS – e.g.（可以是自己的例子）– CS（重述TS，可用被动句或说“相反的观点”不好）2.Opening statement(与观点相反，改写) – Thesis statement（陈述观点，改写）-- ConclusionPS：利用adj. adv. v. 的替换进行改写一．agree改写相反观点，或描述相反观点的现象Nevertheless, it is my opinion that ____.二．disagreeNumerous claims have been made lately that ____.However, I reject this notion and instead believe that ____. 三．ConclusionAll in all, due to above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to generate a comprehensive and thus more convincing conclusion, we are comfortable to say that ____.1.Case by Casei.The speaker asserts that ____. I stronglyagree/disagree with the statement. Two/threeaspects that aptly illustrate this point involve thefields of ____.2.Counter Part and Trade-offa means of doing somethingi.I agree with the speaker’s state that ____. However,____ is not the sole ____, nor be ____ the onlymeans of ____.3.Reconcilabilitya choice between two thingsi.Should ____ or ____？In my view the two are notmutually exclusive, ____.4.Almighty Templatei.____, as the speaker asserts? In response to thisissue, we have to analyze the propositioncomprehensively and systematically.1.Substantiate a PerspectiveA.ReasoningMode1: Cause & Effecti．because: result from, owing to, as a result of,in thatii．so: therefore, consequently, result in, accordingly, hence, thus, therebyiii．Linking techniques:a.in other words, which means, which lead to,b.by doing, by means ofc.for instance/exampleiv．Linking device:a.to begin with, first and foremostb.in addition, moreover, furthermore, besides,what’s morec.However, Nevertheless, on the other handd.Finally, Last but not leastMode2: DDD-P Detail – Detail – Detail – PositionB.ExemplificationSurvey/Experimenti.To substantiate the point more comprehensively andconvincingly, I would like to cite a recentsurvey/experiment conducted / issued by Daniel Leeand his coworkers, the most distinguished professorsin Department of humanity at Renmin University ofChina indicates/suggests that ____. The indisputableevidence point outs that ____.ii. A recent survey issued by Daniel Lee and his coworkers, the most distinguished professors inDepartment of humanity at Renmin University ofChina is about factors that influence the personality.It gives 6 options which include family, teachers,friends, media, books and idols. 85.3% of people investigated choose 5 or 6 options of the six. The indisputable evidence point outs that the society makes them form their think pattern and behavior. iii.Quotation:CQP: Celebrity – Quotation – Pointi.To illustrate it profoundly and comprehensively, Iwould like to cite what one of my favoritephilosopher ____ ever mentioned: __________.ii.As the Chinese old saying goes _____.CCP: Citation – Contradiction – Position Experiment:Result – C & EFact:Phenomenon – Pointi.Once in a newspaper I read of/that ____. As ____,____. The piece of news is not rare in newspaperand on TV, and the _____ problem has served as asphinx riddle of our nation.Example:Anecdote – Transition – Positioni．Point. Anecdote. Did XX who ____ ____? I think anyone who has ____ would answer the questionaffirmatively.I.ConclusionAll in all, due to above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to generate a comprehensive and thus more convincing conclusion, we are comfortable to say that ____, because ____.。