北师大版八年级英语下册课件：Unit 5 Memories Communication Workshop 第二课时

What happened in the end What he learned
A Perfect English Writing Wanted “My Most Unforgettable Experience
Self-check
□I wrote about only one event. □I followed logical order. □I used all Key Words, Key Expressions and vocabulary correctly. □I double-checked spelling, grammar and punctuation.
The second period
My most unforgettable experience
Opening When/ Where/What it happened Para 1 Body Para 2
What his mother did/said How he felt
Ending ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ara 3
Peer-review check
□Is the paper interesting? If not, how could it be interesting, for example, give more details? □Does it make sense? If not, what could the writer do to make it better, for example, better follow a more logical order? □Does it answer your questions about the student’s most unforgettable event? If not, what else would you like to know? □Did the student use Key Words, Key Expressions and vocabulary correctly? If not, circle any mistakes. □Is the spelling, grammar and punctuation correct? Circle where the student had problems. □Do you have any other suggestions?
I had the most unforgettable experience when I was 12 years old. One day in the afternoon, I was riding bike with my father near my home. I was excited. After a while, I saw a big stone. But I it from was the too late couldn’t stop take until away stone. So I fell off from my bike. My right arm was broken. And my father took me to the hospital as quickly as he could.
Polish your writing
A Perfect English Writing Wanted “My Most Unforgettable Experience
I learned how much my father loves me and cares about me. a And I know my father was proud of me because I am a top student in my class. I thought he is was the best father in the world. I told him I would be a university student to make him happy in the future.
In the hospital, the doctor told me that I needed to stay at home for a month. Then my dad took me to home. My grandparents was were very worried about me. They asked whether I was hurt. But I couldn’t answer them. From then on my dad looked after me every day. I felt thought I was the happiest girl most happy people all over the world. He helped me with my study, and helped me washed clothes. He often made lots of delicious food for me.
My Most Unforgettable Experience I had the most unforgettable experience when I was 12 years old. One day in the afternoon, I was riding bike with father near my home. I was excited. After a while, I saw a big stone. But I couldn’t take away from the stone. So I fell off from my bike. My right arm was broken. And my father took me to the hospital as quickly as he could. In the hospital, the doctor told me that I needed to stay at home for a month. Then my dad took me to home. My grandparents was very worried about me. They asked whether I was hurt. But I couldn’t answer them. From then on my dad looked after me every day. I felt I was the most happy people all over the world. He helped me with my study, and helped me washed clothes. He often made lots of delicious food for me. I learned how much my father loves me and cares about me. and I know my father was proud of me. I thought he is the best father in the world. I told him I would a university student to make him happy in the future.