2017英语浙江卷读后续写学案

2017英语浙江卷读后续写学案
Continuation writing
2017 浙江卷
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. "Man, that’s a big dog!" he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantl y that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easily caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on
their way to Alaska. Th ey didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
Preparations for writing:
How the story begins: find the key words.
Who:
__________________________________________________________________ When:
__________________________________________________________________ What:
__________________________________________________________________ How the story develops: Use a sentence to describe the development.
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Action! Verbs!
Action 1: Mac ____________, red cloud _____ the wolf, but it _______ again, _____________his tent bag. Action 2: Mac __________________________, but the wolf ____________________________the chase. Action 3: Mac _______ hard, and _________________ the passing cars, fearing the wolf would be ________ into his flesh.
What did Mac do in the last minute?
He
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Where the story is heading:
Mac friends bicycle pedaled wolf jumped cars climb Paul
Tips: Who might appear in this paragraph ?
How might they feel ?
What action would they take ?
Will Mac’s friends be in time to help him or not ?
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
Expressions that might be helpful to your writing.
People’s behavior:
1.However, as the evidence began to accumulate, experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate.
2.Armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on..
3.The journalist immediately set out to obtain these important facts.
4.After gazing at the display for several minutes, Mr Taylor went back into his shop..
5.The silence was suddenly broken when a large car, with its headlights on and its horn blaring(blare),
roared down the arcade. It came to a stop outside the jeweler's. One man stayed at the wheel while two others with black stockings over their faces jumped out and smashed the window of the shop with iron bars.
6.One of the thieves was struck by a heavy statue, but he was too busy helping himself to diamonds to
notice any pain. A few minutes later, I was able to hurry away with precious chalk-marks on my
7.The man let out a cry and jumped back several paces. When Mrs Richards walked towards him, he fled,
slamming the door behind him. Children always appreciate small gifts of money.
8. A crowd of people gathered round him and a lady rubbed his arm with soap and butter, but George was
firmly stuck.
9.George was not too upset by his experience because the lady who owns the sweet shop heard about his
troubles and rewarded him with a large box of chocolates.
10.At first, she decided to go to the police, but fearing that she would never see Rastus again --the letter
had made that quite clear--she changed her mind. Latham made another attempt a week later and got within half a mile of Dover, but he was unlucky again.
11.To compensate for his unpleasant experiences in hospital, the man drank a little more than was good
for him.
12.Olive dashed into the room, grabbed her bag, and ran out again.
Animals’ behavior:
1.It immediately ran away when she saw it, and experts confirmed that a puma will not attack a human
being unless it is cornered.
2.Wherever it went, it left behind it a trail of dead deer and small animals like rabbits. Paw prints were
seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes.
3.As no pumas had been reported missing from any zoo in
the country, this one must have been in the
possession of a private collector and somehow managed to escape.
4.For hundreds of years, St Bernard dogs have saved the lives of travellers crossing the dangerous Pass.几
5.They stretch out their legs like flying squirrel.
6.It gave me the impression that it was about to leap out at me.
7.Day after day, month after month, finally, the tiger could also run, jump, roll, grasp, tear, and strike as
well as the cat.
Fear
1.Below, the captain realized to his horror that the Titanic was sinking rapidly, for five of her sixteen
water-tight compartments had already been flooded !
2.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
3.She was struck with horror when...
4.Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
5.Fear slowly creeps upon her.
6.Fear flooded over him.
7.Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.
Gratitude:
1.Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
2.Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
3.Will you let me take you out to dinner tomorrow in gratitude for what you've done?
4.She felt eternal gratitude to him for saving her life.
5.I owe you a debt of gratitude for what you've done.
6.I am very grateful to all those who took the trouble to write to me.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. ___________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
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