高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)

Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave proper when properly goes travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relax, while they are enjoying relaxation themselves, some of them behave rudely, that causes a big concern. which How to be a civilized tourist have become a heated topic. In my has opinion, it is necessary to watch our manner. First, we must respect manners and follow local customs; However, we’d better not talk loudly in Besides public places to avoiding disturbance to others, Also, be aware that avoid queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more important, we should bear in mind that we are representing our importantly country while abroad, but we need to be cautious about how we so act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
What is a good writing？
How to write a composition
Six steps to write a composition ① Analyzing the task ②Finding out the main points ③Thinking of key points/phrases ④Forming sentences ⑤Combining the sentences into a passage ⑥Copying normally
【造句】Every
第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】 【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。 【点拨】扩充要点, 使文章条理 【运用】 建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声
喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。
【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高声喧哗：talk loudly in public places
Content: * everything needed included which is related to your view.( 内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空 Dear Editor, to I’ve read your discussions on how1___behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for2___________(sightsee) and relaxation, while they are sightseeing rudely enjoying themselves, some of them behave3________(rude) ,which tourist causes a big concern. How to be a civilized 4________(tour) has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch 5_________(watch) our manners. First, we must respect and customs (custom）; Besides, we’d better not talk follow local6________ loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be unacceptable aware that queue jumping is7_______________(unaccept) in many countries, more importantly, we should bear8___mind that in we are representing our country while abroad, 9___we need to be so Only this way can we enjoy our cautious about how we act,10_____in trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】
【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客
【点拨】适度发挥, 以使文章符合逻辑 【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的 行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。
【遣词】 1.代表国家形象：represent our country 2.注意：be cautious about 3.只有这样：only in this way 【造句】 more importantly, we should bear in mind that
3.插队：queue jumping 【造句】 In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our
respect and follow local customs manners. First, we must____________________________, talk loudly in public places Besides, we’d better not __________________________to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping unacceptable in many countries。 ______________is
Step1 .Analyzing the task
【审题——抓准信息· 快速推断】
项目 体裁
结论
书信（给编辑一封信） __________
以 为主题 “文明出国旅游”
一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用 _______________
话题 时态
人称
第一人称为主 _____________
Step2. Finding out the main points and forming sentences
【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】
第1段：点明话题—出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】 【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起 了社会关注。 【遣词】1. 假日游客: holidaymaker 2.出国旅游观光: go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation 3.不文明行为: behave rudely 4.引起了社会关注: cause a big concern
representing our country abroad, so we we are ______________________while only in this we way need to_______________ how we act, _________can be cautious about enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
year, a great many holidaymakersgo abroad for sightseeing and relaxation ,while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big .concern
( 云南省第二次统测 ) 每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不
文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文
明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社 专栏编辑写一ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下： 1.尊重习俗； 2.不高声喧哗；
3.其它。
注意:词数100~120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
By Wang Yinghui March 15th,2016
Learning Aims
1.Learn to write an outline composition. 2.Develop a good writing habit — analyze — organize — polish. 3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing, the proof and the rational cloze.