专题06 建议信-备战2022年新高考英语写作全攻略

新高考英语写作全攻略

专题06 建议信

建议信主要分两大类：(1)别人给你写封信，让你给他提供一些大方向上的帮助，比如说旅游方面，对方想去北京旅游，你提供一些旅游上的建议；或者学习方面，对方要进入一个新的学校学习，希望你提出一些建议。(2)别人给你写封信，向你表达了他遇到的问题并且比较苦恼，你给他提供解决问题的方法，并且要加入安慰的话。

Sample Model 01

假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友John被北京一所重点高校录取。他给你写信希望你能提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议，请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容主要包括：

1.合理安排时间；

2.课前、课上和课后注意事项；

3.注意劳逸结合。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

[1]我听说你已被北京某重点中学录取了。

I hear that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing.

[2]我很高兴能帮助你为即将到来的学校生活做准备。

I feel happy to oblige(帮忙，帮助) you with the preparations for your coming

school life. (用oblige替换help)

Sentence I.非谓语＋其他, SVO.

SVO, 非谓语＋其他. (S,非谓语＋其他,VO.)

[2014全国I]当我读到这条消息的时候，我发现了几个问题。

Reading this message, I find a great deal of trouble.

[2014全国II]当看到报纸上的这个消息时，我发现了几个问题。

Noticing the advertisement in the newspaper, I find many problems which confuse me.

[2011全国]面对多种多样的困难，我不得不向你求助。

Facing a variety of obstacles, I have to ask you a favor/turn to you for help.

[2010全国]我是李华，一名二年一班的学生，现就读于育才中学。

I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Senior Two, presently studying in Yucai High School.

[*同一个主语发出两个不同的动作，其中一个主要的动作要用谓语动词，而另外一个不那么主要的动作用成非谓语动词。]

[1]听说你已被北京某重点中学录取了，我很高兴能帮助你为即将到来的学校生活做准备。

Hearing that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing, I feel happy to oblige you with the preparations for your coming school life.

[2]首先，一个合理的时间表将会在时间安排和活动组织上给你很大的帮助。

First and foremost, a reasonable timetable will be of great assistance to you in managing time and organizing activities. (assistance无形容词形式)

Sentence VIII. It is +adj. +for sb to do/that从句

It is +of +n. to do

[2013全国]你能去机场接他，把他带去酒店真是太善良了。

It is so kind that you can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel.

[2008全国II]学习并且演唱中文歌是很重要的，因为你通过做这样的事，你会学习并且更容易记得中国汉字。

It is of great importance to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.

[3]此外，有一些学习的基本规律你需要去遵循，比如课前预习，上课认真听老师讲课以及课后复习笔记。*

In addition, there are quite a few basic rules of study you had better follow, including previewing lessons before classes, listening to your teachers attentively during classes as well as reviewing notes after classes.

Sentence IV. There + be +n., consisting of A, B as well as C.

There + be +n., including A, B as well as C.

[4]最后，在工作和休闲之间保持适当的平衡是非常重要的。

Last but not least, striking a proper balance between work and leisure is essential to keep you healthy.

[5]我的建议将大有益处，如果你能坚持去做的话。*

I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.

[6]我相信你在中国会度过一段美好的时光并取得成功的学习成果。

I am confident that you will have a good time in China and obtain successful learning achievements.

完整设计

Dear John,

Hearing that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing, I feel happy to oblige you with the preparations for your coming school life.

First and foremost, a reasonable timetable will be of great assistance to you in managing time and organizing activities. In addition, there are quite a few basic rules of study you had better follow, including previewing lessons before classes, listening to your teachers attentively during classes as well as reviewing notes after classes. Last but not least, striking a proper balance between work and leisure is essential to keep you healthy.

I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them. I am confident that you will have a good time in China and obtain successful learning achievements.