高中英语应用文写作演示文稿

解释失约的原因(时态），安排下次活动
Yesterday afternoon, I
the
dormitory
I received my Chinese teacher’s
call,
I have to attend the essay contest
this Sunday afternoon. I hope the change won’t
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example,
that’s to say, in other words
表 总 结：
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
on the whole, as has been stated, all in all,
forgive/pardon sb.
if you are free…/if it’s convenient for you…
go for/on a picnic, go shopping……
I suggest doing sth/ I suggest that…
该部分内容可以适当拓展
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Supporting Paragraphs
(Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ...
SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition（另外）,
Furthermore（而且）,
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and…
）
Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.
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• As far as I'm concerned,
• I hold the idea that......
• As for me,
• As regards to me,
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解释失约的原因（时态），安排下次活动
be about to do sth. when…
be on the point of doing sth. when…
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The paragraph
What makes a good paragraph?
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后： first, then, later, in the end, eventually, 最后
since then, after a while
转折关系： but, however, on the contrary（相反地） nevertheless（然而）
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
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句式改写 e.g. 大家都知道，清明节是我国的传统节日。在这一
天，人们会去给亲人扫墓来寄托他们的哀思。 WPItee’soapklllenkhonowolwdnt/sheaidetahtahtat Tomb-sweeping Day is a
I’m looking forward to …
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结尾段
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
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Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句
General statement
• 开头段： • 四大内容：问候；自我介绍；写信背景；写 四大信内容目：的。
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• 开头段：
• 1、问候 • How are you doing?
• How is everything going?
• 2、自我介绍 • I am Lihua, a 17-year-old boy studying in
3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news
newspaper.(使用强调句型)
in the
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew
）
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 2. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用as倒装句)
Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
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The conclusion
What makes a good conclusioe… into consideration/account
I would appreciate it if you could… I would be grateful to you if you could…
4.
what had happened.
I passed the physics exam
because
of
your
help.(强调句）
It was because of your help that I passed the physics exam.
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5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去
XXX middle school.
• I am LiHua, who…
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• 3、写信背景（写信的缘由）
• I heard/learned that… • You said in your last letter that…
• 4、写信目的
• Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.
ecsause too much trouble for you.
Shall we go to have a meal together next Sunday
afternoon?
, let’s meet at
5:00 p.m. outside the school gate
.
When I received a call from my Chinese teacher who asked me to attend the essay contest……
receive one’s call
sb call me, saying that…/telling me that…
take part in/join in/attend the
contest
ethse test will be held on Sunday afternoon
the reason(why…) is that…
分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.
6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形
式)
Singing and laughing, they went back to school. 7.I won’t believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）
9．He had hardly come back from Beijing when he was sent abroad. (使
用倒装句)
Hardly had he come back from Beijing when he was sent abroad.
10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)
因果关系：
because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, due to, because of for the reason that, thus, therefore
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正确使用有关连接词
让步关系： though, although, even if, even though, as
高中英语应用文写作演示文稿
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高中英语应用文写作ppt课件
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The essay
What makes a good essay?
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Structure of a Good Composition
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph)
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因为失约，向对方道歉
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因为失约，向对方道歉
Dear Peter, I feel terribly sorry to have broken my
promise
. Please accept my sincere apology!
that 引导同位语从句
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to sum up,personally, in summary
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正确使用一些承上启下的连接词或短语
• Firstly Secondly Thirdly ...... • ①To begin with/ First of all
②In addition/ besides/ furthermore /moreover/ What's more /at the same time
traditional festival in China. On thiws dhaey,npeople will
clean the graves in honour of the dead.
It is on this day that people will clean……
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失分原因：
We all think highly of him .
11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)
It turned out to be that the plan was a failure.
12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more)
递进关系： what’s more/worse, to make matters worse in
addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand 条件关系： if, unless, as long as（只要）,
on condition that …(如果）
• 1.语言表达有错误，不地道 。
• 2.要点有所遗漏。
• 3.词汇量小，句子单一。
• 4.句子衔接不自然。 • 5.离题句太多。
• 6.书写差。
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③At Last/ in the end/ finally/eventually/ Last but not least
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用于陈述观点的词或短语
• Personally, • From my point of view, • In my opinion, • In my view,